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Dcme | Denied. Drago has a move similar to that one, dear. : ) How about you use Walpurgis Night from Hidden Twilight and then combine that with another move? Or, maybe, nay. I will keep that little bit to myself. But, if you use that move and combine it with the right move(s) then you could do what you are attempting and far more.

((Thank you obe, never thought of that lol))

Shun Uchiha
Hidden Leaf

Unforgiving Blades (Gravity Blade): Shun carries with him three blades constantly, each blade is a symbol of some tragedy in his life. Each one also has a element of power. His golden one has something to do with cosmic force, every time Shun swings this blade it brings forth a large cosmic push downward upon whatever it touches. This power can be used in battle whenever Shun likes, but it only happens when Shun hits something. He may not fire off force from his blade at will, this is simply the attribute of this one blade. The blade itself pushes down at 3x times his weight. This ability is passive, building up as the battle goes on, it first has no type of gravity besides it's usual weight but as the battle continues on(( after 5 posts from Shun)) the ability begins to activate slowly becoming heavier()But not to Shun))

((this is the blade he uses, this is the only one with that power)0

No, the blade applies force down on it's opponent, not making the opponent weigh a bit more lol...but yea I shoulda thought of adding how much weight the blade pushes down with..

Made-Up Tech 15,000 CPS: Swords of Revealing Light: Six golden swords, forged of light and chakra, spin around the target opponent's waist and stab inward; rooting into the opponent's spinal column. While these swords cannot draw blood or deal damage to the opponent; they will bind the opponent in place, unable to move or attack, for a single turn.
If the opponent has Less Skill Points than Eluamous then this ability will not fail; but if attempting this on an opponent with an equal or greater Skill Point Level, Eluamous must roll a 20-sided Die. If the number rolled is over 10, the opponent will be bound. But if the number rolled is Under 10, then the swords will shatter on contact with the opponent instead of binding them.
This ability cannot be used again after a Successful Binding until 5 turns have passed, and for 3 turns if the binding fails

Tory-

1. I'd like to contest the issue, I had thought made-ups were supposed to be approved or denied based on if they were overpowered or broken or anything of the sort, not just because someone doesn't like it. That notwithstanding, going back to the same issue you raised earlier, 'it defeats the purpose of a role play guild. Forcing someone to do something they don't want.' Is that really what you mean? If that was true, then the Yamanaka clan wouldn't be here anymore. The Descartes clan would never have been allowed to be created. Even your vaunted puppeteers wouldn't be allowed. Even killing people wouldn't be allowed. All of those things can force someone to do something they don't want to do. If Hedoro was a Yamanaka, she could just possess the person, make them do it anyway. The same for a Descartes. A puppeteer takes someone's body, so they couldn't come back to it if they wanted to. And yet you try to rationalize a Geas as being worse than any of those? At least with a Geas, there's flexibility! Notice how I never said a time involved with my made-up, meaning that it'll last until fulfilled, but it doesn't have to be done there and then. That is not nearly as bad as some of the other ways to gain control of someone, and I'd like to think that is obvious to all.

2. Please tell me you were joking. First off, if you really think that 'these abilities can be anything', I think you missed the point. Even if Tamao were to use the Nine-tails as a basis, it wouldn't do much. These abilities are weak, remember? So even if you did fight predominantly with the Nine-tails, enough that that is the major element of you she remembers from the fight, it wouldn't be even remotely close to the actual Nine-tails in power. Again, it's not necessarily what I'm interested in, it's what her opponent shows their fighting style to be.

Wait, someone who goes out to harvest puppets, where they get someone's entire skill list, thinks a sword with one minor ability is too much? Interesting.

Yes, it is sort of a made-up within a made-up. That's been done many times in this guild already, technically any made-up that has levels is more than one made-up. And how many dozens of those are there?
As for where to keep track of them, it seems you're overreacting a little much. Who said anything about needing my own thread or anything like that? Considering how simple each blade's ability is, a single sentence will do. And in that case, what's wrong with tacking it on the end of the made-ups description in the Compendium?
-Number 1 sword: it's ability.
-Number 2 sword: it's ability.
And so on. That is not very much to have to add, there was no call for you thinking I was demanding a whole thread all to myself for a single made-up.
And I really don't see the point in having a limit. I mean, does a puppeteer only get one puppet per made-up? No, they get one every time they kill someone and make it! And those puppets are a LOT stronger than her swords, and I'm not just talking about physical usefulness, I'm talking about technique lists, too. You yourself have how many clan's abilities as a result of a single made-up, from gathering puppets? Yet even then, you think it's unfair that someone else can create swords based on their opponents? Seems like you have a bit of a double-standard there.

Now, these two made-ups had already been approved by two seperate mods before I had even posted it in this thread, Obscure was one, Drago was the other. If nothing else, I could probably ask to have it put to a vote, because I frankly feel you're cracking down on my made-ups harder than other peoples. I'd like to try to convince you, first, rather than go with that method, though.

(I mean, honestly, you approved Yuan's Genshisho technique! That one seems way worse than either of mine.)

Dattoyumiru,Ken
Hidden Leaf

Drunken Fury: After initating the drunken fist, ken becomes very moody. Once his mood is turned to anger or joy he becomes incredibly mobile, creating an offencive assault on the opponent, following by punches and kicks the seem to come out from most unobvious places. Ken does not stop the fury until he passes out from overuse of muscles or if he is counterattacked and sent back, thus resulting in the failure of his rush. If uninterrupted, the fury lasts exactly FIVE posts

Hell Invocation - Breathless Rush - Onslaught.
Drawing in large amounts of air mixed with chakra from the environment around him, Adonis prepares to attack an opponent, spending one whole turn to do so. Using the increased capacity of his lungs to store and pull oxygen into his bloodstream on the second turn Adonis begins this furious attack. Adonis will then begin to an attack with a seemingly random staccato of attacks, if one watches closely they can pick up a rhythm to the attacks as if he was performing a strange form of dance, the attack is too heavy for even the most impressive standard eyes to find the exact pattern of this attack. The speed of this attack is unbelievable, often coming with the use of a heavy attack blade like a zanbatou. Normal materials stand no chance of stopping the progress of this attack, even metal weapons are cleaved in two by the force. This attack seems like a combo attack, but after most combination attacks, there is a slight lull while the attacker regains their breath. But by controlling his breath, this attack seems to go on and on and on, never halting, never slowing down, keeping most forced down on the defensive if not fleeing in fear. Of course once this attack comes to end some heavy costs must be paid. He suffers heavy internal bleeding from the attack and he can't move nearly as fast as when he started the attack for the same amount of turns that it was used. This attack last one turn for every 10k of CP he possesses.


I said to tone down the speed!

God's Devotion - Breathless Rush - Bombardment
A tangent of the Breathless rush attack, with increased oxygen and chakra flow, along with a furious onslaught of attacks comes Adonis's ability to use jutsu without stopping for normal handseals, with the mass amounts of chakra he releases during this attack he is able to use more in a rapid sucession then normal people, instead of the average two, during this period Adonis can use three a turn. For every turn that Breathless Rush was active, an equal amount of time must be spent where Adonis can only use one jutsu per turn after the technique ends.


I'll have to discuss this with a few mods b/c I'm unsure.

Enter Sandman
Another one of the jutsus that Adonis used during his time as a hunter nin. This jutsu releases a colorless woodsmoke smelling gas into the air around him. Inhaling this gas not only confuses ones sense of smell, making it harder to track Adonis through the use of the sense of smell, but it also slows down reaction time, the gas working as a depressant lulling them into sluggish state. If Adonis has 2x chakra then the targets reaction speed drops by about 50%, if Adonis doesn't have two times as much chakra as the target, then the attack only slows them down by 25%. Strangely this is classified as a taijutsu attack as it comes from Adonis's body itself with no real chakra required to activate.