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Gaia Name: Mythic229
Rp Name: Zatochi Miyanari
Name: Art of the Blind
Due to the fact that Zatoichi has been blind from birth he has learned that his handicap can also be his boost. Being blind puts him in a permanent state like the heavenly blade technique does. Increasing all of his other senses as well as doubling his speed and strength to cope with his inability to see.

Hedoro Koutai
Hidden Rain

Fides et Aqua (Promise of Water)- This ability is only able to be used during a narrow window of time. It must be after Hedoro has defeated someone, but before she has killed them. During that time, she can make one demand of them, and they must carry it out. This demand survives reincarnations, until it is completed. It cannot be anything that is especially harmful to the other person, nor something that will kill them or cause a vast change to their character. Aside from that, most things are alright to demand.

Ones that would not be allowed:
-Change clans
-Learn a harmful technique (Generally Ninjutsu Mode Downgrade)
-Go get killed intentionally
-Fight someone with no chance of winning
and so on.

Ones that would be allowed:
-Fight me again
-Give me an item
-Next time you kill someone, give me the body
-In your next fight, don't use a certain jutsu (Like telling a Nara to not use Shadow Possession.)

The effects would generally only take place for a single occurrence, but the vow will remain until satisfied. So if Hedoro demands of Tin to fight her again, no matter how many times he dies and gets reborn, he'd still eventually have to fight her.

(I thought of it before I had even heard of Code Geass, but the similarity is pretty close regardless.)


Tamao Suzumi
Hidden Nano
(She doesn't have an open slot yet, but she's close.)

Imperial Edict: Art of the Sword: Mein Körper als ein Schild (My Body as a Shield)- Using the time she spent in Hidden Craftsman, she put it to good use and studied the art of smithing. This ability lets her craft a weapon after she fights with someone. The weapon will be based on them, and will have a single ability based on their fighting style. This ability can not be an actual clan ability. The weapon will be of superior quality, but will not be a Special Item.

Examples:
Drago Blade: While wielding, Tamao is 5% faster.
Hedoro Blade: The size of the sword's blade can change at will, from a dagger to a longsword.
Generic Byakugan Blade: The blade glows if she is getting attacked from behind.

Generally nothing extremely powerful, just an ability based on how her opponent fought her. The ability can not change her, like a Ryuugan Blade would not make her immune to Genjutsu. A Yakushi Blade would probably help her recover, though.

Alice (Akasune)
Doll of Return- one of Alices last defense moves, it allows her to switch her body at will with any dolls she has layed among the battle field. she will use this to escape a trap of any sort.


Add a limitation please

Doll of Porcelain- used with Doll of return this technique causes Alice's skin to become like porcelain, although it cannot break anywhere near as easily. infact this seems to be more like a refined steel more then porcelain, but it still has high durability to withstand hits and heat and keep from cracking and breaking.


How long can you keep this active for?

Sam Sara-
The world is gray- Sams own technique to force others into his own state of colorblindness. it causes them to enter a depressed state and become slower reacting to everything. because this technique is made from Sam's hatred of colors it takes a much higher cp strength then his to break it.


I suppose though Tragedy Mask from Hidden mask does the same thing. I'll be eyeing this technique since I can see its possibility to be abused.

@Yuan - -claps- impressive... I'm not approving it, but still cool idea. I'm not disproving it either.

Celestial Edict - Hamurabi's Code - An Eye For A Eye.

Passed down from the gods themselves, these laws were what ruled the world hundreds of years before the coming of ninja nations. Adonis has brought back the laws of this long forgotten king, mixing various powers much like Destiny Bond and God's Judgment. Once activated whenever the user is injured in the next post by their opponent or if they inflict a non lethal wound upon themselves, the opponent shall suffer the same wound. This law can only be invoked once every five posts. One thing of note, this law only applies to damage to the opponent and user, not healing.


Take out "or if they inflict a non lethal wound upon themselves"

Hell Invocation - Breathless Rush - Onslaught.

Drawing in large amounts of air mixed with chakra from the environment around him, Adonis prepares to attack an opponent, spending one whole turn to do so. Using the increased capacity of his lungs to store and pull oxygen into his bloodstream on the second turn Adonis begins this furious attack. Adonis will then begin to an attack with a seemingly random staccato of attacks, if one watches closely they can pick up a rhythm to the attacks as if he was performing a strange form of dance, the attack is too heavy for even the most impressive analytical eyes to find the exact pattern of this attack. The speed of this attack is unbelievable, often coming with the use of a heavy attack blade like a zanbatou. Normal materials stand no chance of stopping the progress of this attack, even metal weapons are cleaved in two by the force. This attack seems like a combo attack, but after most combination attacks, there is a slight lull while the attacker regains their breath. But by controlling his breath, this attack seems to go on and on and on, never halting, never slowing down, keeping most forced down on the defensive if not fleeing in fear. With increased oxygen and chakra flow, along with a furious onslaught of attacks comes the ability to use even more jutsu then normal people, instead of the average two, during this period Adonis can use three a turn. Of course once this attack comes to end some heavy costs must be paid. For every turn that Breathless Rush was active, an equal amount of time must be spent where Adonis can only use one jutsu per turn. He suffers heavy internal bleeding from the attack and he can't move nearly as fast as when he started the attack. This attack last one turn for every 10k of CP he possesses.


Your not going to get away with overpowered made ups again xD Okay where to start...Well I'll first say a very well thought out made up. The only thing that bother's me is the whole 3 attacks per turn. it does enough as it is without that. My suggestion would be to break this into two techniques. One to activate the onslaught, the next for the 3 techs per turn thing. Also tone down the speed. Seems like too fast of an attack. Maby if it seems like a sort of constant but toned down body flicker. As it is your getting a good speed boost so allow analytical eyes [aka sharingan] to be able to perceive it a great deal. Do all that and I'll approve.

Tory:
For the first, I had thought something like that fit in decently enough with an RP guild. After all, since it got it's start in old tales like Beowulf, weren't old fables and fairy tales the base ancestor of RP? I had thought that a single command wouldn't be something too bad, not much different from a Nara's unspoken command to stab yourself in the chest if they do it too. I had even dropped the original penalty of 'if you don't do it, you die' because I knew that much wasn't fair. I figure a single action command isn't anything that'd mess with a character too much, especially since she could just make the stuff happen anyways. So rather than giving her a weapon, she takes it from their corpse. Rather than making them fight her again, she hunts them down and randomly attacks. I figure, with a command out and in the open like this, it actually gives them something more to react to, as well as gives them fair warning in the latter case.

But it is your call, so if it's not open for negotiations, very well.


For the second, hmm. Since I wanted Tamao to be a sword-collector, that had been my goal. And most of the weapons aren't too powerful, I'd even be willing to drop their abilities if I needed. Otherwise, if it is stuck at the just one per 10K rather than one per opponent, I might re-write it back to it's original version, see if that one sounds better. It had strayed a little close to that whole 'copying people' fad from last year, so I thought just a weapon form was enough. What do you think?

I really hadn't thought these were that broken, were they really that bad?