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 Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:45 pm
/obligatorygenericcongratulationsforthepurewinandawesomenessofthestory
I'm loving the pacing and direction this story is taking, the characters all fit perfectly with the time and instantly make you want to either love or hate them.
As for the romance question I'm thinking ol' TK with the lovely Miss Sinatra is working well...until the next readily available love interest shows up mrgreen But seriously, Davey boy there needs to paired with someone, though I'm guessing by his quick defensive reaction he already has someone in mind... ninja
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:09 am
3nodding I pretty much agree with everyone else. if you feel that you can make it work, go for it.
biggrin I do always like seeing who other people would pair me up with, so I say go right ahead and pair me up with someone. xd it'll definitely be interesting.
also, awesome chapters. and I do agree on Drakam being pretty one-dimensional. It'll be interesting to see how you decide to flesh his character out.
also ... scream I SHOULD have been able to help them fight! stare who knows? I could've kicked a**!
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:38 pm
Thanks for the comments everyone.
There are more chapters on the way very soon.
Thanks for your comments on the romance element of the story, I still need to consider who would make suitable partners, but I'll try and make any romance I include plausable.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:57 pm
Nice work Forsaken, I like hearing about the past of characters, and that one seems to fit the character to me. Glad you updated today. Can we expect chapter fourteen tonight or no?
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:59 pm
Seaphron Nice work Forsaken, I like hearing about the past of characters, and that one seems to fit the character to me. Glad you updated today. Can we expect chapter fourteen tonight or no? I'm not sure, it all depends on if I get if finished or not. btw, I heard you used me on your latest story, I'm going to go have a read in a minute, so I'll add a comment.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:04 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Seaphron Nice work Forsaken, I like hearing about the past of characters, and that one seems to fit the character to me. Glad you updated today. Can we expect chapter fourteen tonight or no? I'm not sure, it all depends on if I get if finished or not. btw, I heard you used me on your latest story, I'm going to go have a read in a minute, so I'll add a comment. Aite sounds, yeah you and your brother are the main chararcters in my new story.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:55 pm
Chapter 14 online. That's all for today
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:06 pm
O:
Awesome.
I found it
And lost my hand. Sweet.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:46 pm
surprised hmmmm. this raises alot of questions about Drakam. what kind of job was it that he took? what did he do to make me leave him? hmmmmm. questions, questions.
o.o eep. glad it wasn't me that stuck my hand in there. did it actually fall off? or is it just crushed? crushed might still be somewhat salvageable, depending on how bad it is.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:27 pm
Drakam I swear has to be one of my favorite characters. Nice work on the chapter btw.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:53 pm
" A sacrifice " must have meant bloodshed or a limb. At least it wasn't his whole arm.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:51 pm
Seaphron Drakam I swear has to be one of my favorite characters. Nice work on the chapter btw. And Foxly?
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:54 pm
Lifeless-Fox Seaphron Drakam I swear has to be one of my favorite characters. Nice work on the chapter btw. And Foxly? How about that bulky bandit? wink
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