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 Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2005 11:12 pm
Gaia Name: Xanatos11 Character Name: Xanatos Malar Alias: The Winged Jedi. This name was given to him by his fellow Shi'ido, who called him that for the reasons of him traveling the galaxy and not staying on his home planet. Most other people know him at The Winged Jedi because of his piloting skills and the golden feather in his insignia. Gender: Male Age: 337 Race: Shi'ido Character Description: Apparently human, A little taller than average, in his usual form he appears to be not very strong and muscular, but this is defied through shi'ido disguise (able to shape-shift and transform). Home Planet: Shu' shuun Starting Planet: TBA Relations: Deceased Character History: Will try to find time for this as soon as possible Alignment: Republic Occupation: Jedi Skills: Saber (singual, dual, double) Combat, Unarmed Combat, Piloting, Strategy, computers and AI Weapons: Lightsaber x2 (can be joined into Double-bladed saber), Blaster/ Slugthrower Pistol x2 (can be joined into rifle and equiped qith numerious accessories), Combat Knife x2 Lightsaber Combat Form: AkatsukiA fast, powerful and deadly form of combat created by Xanatos Malar. It consists mainly of swift strikes to vital areas of the body or whatever else is required. A large majority of it used in combination with force speed and incorperates multiple ariel-based attacks. The form and style of combat changes slightly with the use of single, dual, or double bladed lightsabers seperately or together in combat. Ship:JeganFlarePersonal Belongings: Whatever is stored on ship, may include: tent/survival gear, various changes of different clothes, various equipment. Roleplay Sample:The Jedi walked into a crowded cantina and swiftly got into an open table. Though he didnt uaually wear his jedi robes, he still got many glares from the various people around him. "Umm, sir... sir, SIR!"Xanaos finally took notice of the waiter and looked over to him "Yeah, sorry but that. Ill have Correlian Whiskey-""No, those men over there wish for you to come and sot with them" The waiter's stubby arm pointed over to a table across the room. There was a cloud of smoke above it and a pair of Trandosians(sp?) sat there along with a few twi'lek dancers off duty. "Ok, thanks""I live to serve sir" the waiter said groaning as he walked away. Xanatos walked over to the group "Yeah, what do you want?""Thats no way to be greeting a people like us, sit down sit down. Have a drink!""No thanks, not from you, is there a particular reason why you asked for me"The second Trandosian slammed his palms onto his table, "Do not speak to him like that! He has more kills under his belt than a jedi like yourself!"With this the music stopped and many people looked over to the source of the commotion, while other just walked away. The music started up again, but people looked on still. "Hey, Im just here for a drink. No need for the ruckus""Yes, well, Mr. Jedi. Prhaps you can do me a favor. I have this certain Hutt who is ufortunately taking away all my business. A well trained killer like ourself-""Jedi arent killers!"This time the second trandosian stood up and held his hand on a large vibroblade's hilt. "Do not raise youre voice to-""You shut-up, "he ponted to the angry one "and you just forget about any deals you might have planned to make" he looked over to the other Trandosian, who also started to look angry now "Why you!" The standing trandosian lunged across the table at Xanatos, vibroblade drawn. "Teh-" the jedi ducked a bit and caught the armed hand. Sending a slight tremor of the force though the arm he broke the bone, releasing the hands grip on the blade. As it clattered to the ground the opponent nealt to the ground and cradled his broken wrist. "Dont attack in anger, or youll drop your gaurd" as he said this the other Trandosian stood up and pulled out a blaster pistol and fired a pair of shots at Xan. Sensing the attack moments before he pulled out his saber and activated it, the crimson blade activated from the back of Xanatos's wrist and deflected the first bolt directly back into the gun, while the second was deflected past the Trandosian's forehead. a line of blood appeared and trickled down his cheek. He glanced over his shoulder at the one who fired the blasts, one of his icy blue eyes peircing him. "Jedi aren't killers. Im not a killer"The saber deactivated and he dropped a 50 credit note onto the table, walking away and out of the cantina. "I only wanted a drink"Previously I had an app, but I sorta was gone for a while and so I thought I should make a new one I did this app based on my being a Jedi Counsoular(sp), which I was accepted as Welcome back Xan
-MrM
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 7:34 am
((Is Seffi ever gonna check the applications?))
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 3:57 pm
Gaia Name: Darth_Ravage Character Name: Darth Ravage ((Imperial Officer of undetermined rank) Kintos) Gender: Male Age: Around fifty Race: Unknown, but definitly not human Character Description: Short Black Hair, creamy brown skin, One vibrant green eye, one cybernetic eye with laser sight with multiple modes of viewing the world, Storm Commando armor (black) flightsuit underneath armor, commando helmet (black of the Old Sith Empire, Ysalamari bone amulet to prevent close range Force attacks, and a black cape. Face is usually obscured. Cool, calculating, fierce fighter, and rather anti-social. Unforgiving. Fond of castrating opponents. Home Planet: Unknown Starting Planet: Bastion Relations: None Character History Darth Ravage is Sith hopeful and Imperial loyalist. He admires many of Lord Vader's teachings and is dedicated to the dead Dark Lord's memory. Ravage first appeared after the defeat of the Yuuzhan Vong, and the creation of the Intergalactic Alliance. He served loyally in the IMperial Navy and was a star destroyer commander at the time of the IMperial Reinsurgence and the subsequent conflict with the Jedi and Dark Jedi. When the Force-sensitives began to be hunted down by the Empire, Ravage was spared as a result of his exceptional loyalty to and service for the Empire. He has continued to serve in the Imperial Navy despite not getting a promotion in twenty years. Alignment: Sith (Empire) Occupation Imperial Officer, Sith hopeful Skills: Heavy weapons use and unintended force bodily enhancement Weapons: two variable length lightsabers implanted in forarms, dual wristblades in armor on arms, glove with force enhancing crystals in it, spare lightsaber with built in blaster, heavy stake gun. Ship Modified TIE Predator Space Superiority Fighter Personal Belongings: Nothing notable Roleplay SampleDarth Ravage sat in a chair in the Transfers wing of the Imperial Navy Headquarters on Bastion. He had waited for thirteen hours for a ship to be chosen for his next tour of duty and there had been no decision. How he hated yoda-spawned buerocrats! Under Palpatine, things had gone so much more quickly. If he didn't get a answer soon, he would reach the end of his short supply of patience. the clerk called his name. Finally. Ravage stalked up to the counter. The clerk spoke. "It appears that you have been assigned to command the Naga Sadow, a new Imperial Mark III Star Destroyer. However..." Ravage stared at her "Yes?" "IT was destroyed by a freak cargo accident and a freighter malfunction. Your new orders will arrive in about eight days." Ravage felt the rage flowing through him and turned and walked to the slums. He needed to release some energy. As he entered the slums, he saw several shady looking characters start closing off his exit. Ravage smiled. Perfect. He turned to face the figures. One of them stepped forward. As he began to speak Ravage cut him off. "You will be the first." Ravage fired four durasteel stakes out of his heavy stake gun. they pierced the leader's arms and legs and impaled him into the wall, where he hung, shrieking in pain. Ravage felt the man's pain flow through him, and he relished it. As the man died, he felt his passing and savored it. Death was like a an addictive drug, and only the followers of the sith ideals consumed its forbidden fruits. As the power of man's death flowed through Ravage, he grinned at the horrified figures before him, and sprung. Could someone review this? WTF? Did you delete my comment?! I already said, this isn't our application form. Do our form or you won't be accepted. Oh yeah, delete my comment again and you'll never have an app accepted ~ Seffi It contains the same stuff as the form, do you just want it in the correct order? And I apologize about the comment, I was just trying to clean the post up. I think you're aware not to use lightsabers until you trained?
Also, the time setting is wrong, you weren't around during vader, daala or the vong, this is long after that....Yes! Of course we want it in our friggin' order, otherwise we wouldt have bothered to make a damn form, would we? ~ Seffi This has been corrected, can it be rereviewed?when you change that history to our time setting rather then vader and daala...He is just hundreds of years old. modified no, he isn't. the mods decided everyone living in the known galaxy has to be less then 100 years old, so that they can't have lived trough movie happenings. This to support originality and creativity in apps rather then everyone being a son of luke skywalker or student of darth vader. Only the Teiravans are older then 100, because they can't have possibly met any movie characters or happenings. So, change it.
-MI didn't know that, I apologize for my obstinence. modified. I guess that's a while after the vong, then... accepted ^^ -M
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 3:36 pm
ArkTri-Heart Gain name: ArkTri-Heart( changing to Ark_Tti-Heart) Character Name:Arkunum(Jedi) Arkanus or Darth Malice(Sith) or Commander Ark(neuteral) Gender:Male Age:23 years old. Race:Unkown(humanoid with pointed ears) Character Description: 6"1'. Silver or Red hair depending on alliangment.Gray eyes. skin color pale white for sith healthy tan for jedi and neuteral Tatoos or Markings: Tribal Sith war tatoos and a scar stecthing from my left temple to left cheek Home Planet:Korriban Starting Planet:Korriban Relations:Hk 47model assasin droid T3-M4 astromech droid. (Both found deactivated but intact in a secret chamber on Korriban .) Character History: Raised on Korriban. Killed more sentient beings in the galxy than can be recorded. Has three way split personaility. Was one of the two non clone commanders in the Grand Army of the Republic. Alignment:Jedi and Sith Occupation: leader of clone freedom fighters Skills biggrin roid builder and restorer, force sensitive, and mandolorian combat training Weapons:Blood red bladed lightsaber, silver bladed lightsaber,(both inherited from parents, both of which he doesn't know how to use) and a multitude of other weapons from fallen foes Ship: one of the old jedi starfighters painted black and yellow named the StalkerVI Personal Belongings:custom sith war armor Roleplay Sample: The computer hummed. On it seventeen digits counted down. Arkanus moved like a shadow. The Mobile Defense Turrets followed they're preset path. This factory's defense's are so weak a child could make it in unscathed, he thought. His mind reached out, like tendils of energy, into one of the defense turrets CPU. The dual six barreled laser cannon started to gain speed as the prdetermined course was rewritten. The M.D.T. made an about face and headed towards the main hanger doors. It started to open fire on the door setting of the silent alarm. The other M.D.T. quickly changed its rout and released a barage of E.M.P. blasts into the M.D.T. that Arkanus had control over. This in turn activated Arkanus's M.D.T.'s self defense protocol. The two blasted away at each other eventually overloading thier systems and leaving them piles of smoldering rubble. Two easy, he thought, as he moved to the doors of the old Hk assasin droid factory. A sudden blast from behind sent Arkanus reeling forward and crashing into the door. From Behin him he heard a metallic voice he knew al to well. "Mocking Statement: Oh Arkanus, are you dead yet Arkanus?" (note: this only a sample I know I have to get my rank and be trained and all that to be able to use the force)
This is my application I changed my screen name to Ark_Tri-Heart
It's ok now, go ahead
-MrM
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 8:47 am
Gaia Name: baby_buu Character Name: Neara Doragan Gender: Female Age: 31Standard Years ((Our years, to make understanding things easier, Idon't think I remember how long a year on Corellia is.)) Race: Human Character Description: Height: 5' 6" Weight: 135lbs Hair: Auburn Eyes: Grey Mentality: Live in the moment and for yourself. Home Planet: Corellia Starting Planet: In orbit around Ylesia Relations: Dead, caught in the crossfires between Rebel and Imperial forces on Tatooine (They were on holiday, they had a small mosture farm there.). Character History: Born into an Middle-Upperclass family, took towards a life of crime at an early age, shortly after her parents were killed. Started working for a smuggler/bounty hunter/all around scoundrel and eventualy saved up for a ship of her own. Alignment: Chaotic Fringe, she has no code of conduct as some others in her proffession do, this gets her a lot of work. Occupation: Smuggler/Bounty Hunter and other odd jobs, she goes where the money is. Skills: Excellent piloting and markmanship, pretty good in close quarter combat and neccesarry knoledge of poisons, antidotes, hacking and most things needed for a Bounty Hunter. Weapons: Security S-5 Blaster Pistol with dartshooter and other accessories, DC17m with accessories and a Trandoshan Repeater. Personal Belongings: Clone Commando armor and a necklace made of all her targets 5th vertibrates. Ship: A Jumpmaster 10000((The latest model of the ship that Dengar had.)) christened The Reaper. It has a standard heavy weapons loadout and can reach speeds of up to 75X the speed of light. ((Are we still working on classic Star Wars physics saying that you can go faster than the speed of light?)) Roleplay Samplebaby_buu@Kyakta
Maximum Security Prison "I may get Court Marshalled but I will not let you die, sir!" She crawled prone hoping that he was still alive. She ripped of a few pieces of fabric from her pants and bound up his wounds. With her Luger in one hand she pulled out her radio. "This is Lt. Laurier GDI armored. We have a man down on the south wall, GDI, I can't tell you what his name is because his name tag was blown off. Requesting a medic stat. Over." "This GDI HQ. Can you get him outside? We can get a medivac if you can get him out. Over." "Roger that. Over and out." She put her radio back in it's thing bot radio holding thing. She holstered her side arm, ripped another piece of clothe of her pants and tied her flash light to the under side of the barrel of her M16, then she turned the flash light on giving her an advantage and a disadvantage, illuminate the target better but the target can trace the light straight back to the shooter. She then peeked around the corner and seeing no friendlies lobbed a frag' grenade, with the pin still in it. The small group of soldiers ran for cover, as they were doing so Laurier popped out from behind the corner and mowed down a couple of the enemy soldiers before she heard the click of an empty magizine. She ducked back behind the wall and popped a fresh mag in. The enemy soldiers realizing that that grenade was not going off the started peeking out from behind cover and when the did lead was the welcoming party. She only hit one of the soldiers but the knew they were pinned down she threw a live grenade towards the cluster of soldiers and the were no more.
-MrM
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Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 3:29 pm
Gaia Name: O.S.I.R.I.S.
Character Name: Osiris
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Race: Human
Character Description: Osiris is 5'8" and about 21 or so years old.He has Black eyes and Horns on his head (Like Darth Maul).He has his left ear pierced once.He has a Black Goatee.He wears an all Black Cloak that covers everything.Looking at him straight on makes it look like you are looking at Death.Osiris is a loner and is not seen very often in groups unless he is forced to..He doesnt grow too fond of anyone often because of his travels and such.
Home Planet: Arom
Starting Planet: Space
Relations: Nobody
Character History: Osiris fell to the dark side when he was a young child.Visions and intent to hurt people, became a habit, an addiction.He lied as much as he breathed the air and learned to do so very well.He gained a persuasivness that eventually, led to the death of his family,and his master,and soon spread through his small town.He would kill unregretably sp? and did so with a smile on his face.He became an assassin soon before leaving his home world.He always did his job well.Quickly,silently unless otherwise requested.News of the unknown assassin came when he began leaving a mark at the scene of his killings.A Raven.Somehow somewhere at every person's last breath a symbol was left acknowledging his work.His reknown grew quickly, nobody ever knowing what he looked like except the victims who fell at his hands.
Alignment: Sith
Occupation: Assasssin for hire
Skills: Evasivness,Stealthiness,Fighting.
Weapons: Black Double-Bladed Lightsaber,and Red Single-Bladed lightsaber taken from his master.
Ship: Black Raven.Fast as "Ship".Fully loade with weapons and security precautions.Not gigantic so no need of crew.Operated and maintained by Osiris
Personal Belongings: His Weapons and Pendant.Most beloved is his Black lightsaber givin to him by his father as he died by his son's hands.
Roleplay Sample: (I'll use his history to make a sample of my roleplay)
Osiris knew that the final day of his training would be eventful.True, he was estatic that he had finally completed his hard journey, but proved to adapt quickly to almost any environment of stress.He overcame his challenges givin to him by his master.
He walked up to the temple in which he trained for what seemed forever, although it ad only been a few years.His master was waiting for him inside and next to him on a table was a lightsaber, no doubt his own, ready to pass it own to his young padawan.Osiris walked forward to his master and dropped to his knees bowing."Stand young one" said the master.Osiris did as he was instructed to do and stood straight with his arms at his side, as if in formation in an army.His master reached to the side and retrievd the saber bringing it in front of him."Now I know there is no one her to see me present you this mighty weapon, but be proud in passing your years of training and surpassing me in power.Your studies have proved to be worth the hardship, no?"he stated.
He soon went on,"You have earned this weapon as a form of completing this course, and you shall go on to be a powerful warrior, both mentally and psyhically."He said handing the lightsaber over."Thank you my master."he said bowing.
"I'm sorry"He said his eyes darting forward still in his bow."For what my young one."he asked with a confused face."For ending your life in such a peaceful moment"he said lurching upward igniting the saber.A wooshing sound followed by a faint scream, would be the last thing heard and projected by the now fallen man who had trained the "Demon" that killed him.
A dark look appeared in Osiris' eyes.He quickly turned his Cloak following him.He let the crystal of the saber rest as he exited the temple, the civilians out side knowing nothing of his tretchorous deed, or of the one that followed.Darkness fell over the small town of his home planet.He entered his home swiftly and quietly, abilites he would learn to master.He entered his parents room and stood at the bedside."Goodbye dear loved ones"he said with a malicious grin spread across his face, like the fox in modern day fairy tales.He ignited the newly aquired weapon and,..................(ooohh right when it was getting good, no? How's that??)
I'll accept you but do note you need jedi/dark jedi training IN the guild before using sabers/powers
Also, some colors and enters in the sample won't hurt
Keep that in mind and you're accepted
-MrM
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:00 pm
Gaia Name:The 13th Disciple
Character Name:Strotan Kahn
Gender:Male
Age:35
Race:Human
Character Description: Much like Han Solo, but with more muscles and scars, but not as much of a space pirate.
Home Planet:Correlia
Starting Planet:Tatooine
Relations:Grandfather Kahn and Mother Kahn lives
Character History I was born three years into the Galactic Civil War. My father died in the battle of Endor. I followed in my father's footsteps and helped to fight the Yuuzhan Vong 33 years later. 1 year after the final victory, I searched the galaxy for any remaining Yuuzhan Vong. Upon entering an unknown planet, my ship just disintegrated around me as my head began to spin. I woke up to find that I had been frozen in time for 150 years. I still can't believe what happened. Luckily, I was on a planet I knew when I woke up. Tatooine was that planet, and so I first found a ship to get me off the floating desert and am now looking for crew to work with me.
Alignment:Jedi
OccupationJedi Follower
Skills:pilot, keen eyes, agile, excellent marksman
Weapons:blaster rifle, blaster pistol, vibroblade, echani staff
ShipThe Pride and Joy, an out of date Correlian freighter with an ancient X-Wing on board
Personal Belongings:Father's hero medallion, Great Grandfather's flexible transparisteel whip, an R2 unit
Roleplay Sample
Two days in the heat of Tatooine and my temper is starting flare. I got a crap heap of a ship, but luckily, it's Correlian and contains an old T-35 X-Wing. I'm now at the old Cantina in Mos Eisley, looking for a crew. I see a Trandoshan in the far, right corner of the cantina. The cantina is quite full, so i have squeeze my way through. On the way, I bump into a rather disgusting Gammorean.
"Watch it!" I scould.
Next thing I knew, half the cantina was sitting on my lap.
"You okay?" a kid around 10 years old asked.
"Where am I?" I pondered, paying no heed to the boy.
"You're at my house mister," the boy replied, "Dad! He's awake!"
"Coming son," a voice in the back replied.
"Where am I?" I said again, "And who are you?"
"Name's Kari Tohn!"
NoNoNo! We have a rule stating you cannot be frozen or anything, your character has to be born during our timeline, which means between 80 years back (when the last movie characters were send down to the retired-demented jedi resthouse) and now, no exeption. Saying you are frozen is unoriginal, being born in the movie timeline shows your incapability to create an original character even more.
change it
-MRM
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Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:29 pm
b]Gaia Name: 1st_goth-vampire
Character Name: seth jarr
Gender: male
Age: 31
Race: gungar
Character Description: seth is a 6ft tall gungar with a blue and grey complextion, he wears a long black robe and an intangible belt
Home Planet: otoh gunga
Starting Planet: taboo
Relations: none
Character History:seth was a young gungar when he noticed the sucsess by jar jar binx and thought if a fool could become a senitor then what was he capible of, so he left gunga and went taboo in search of a jedi
Alignment: neutral
Occupation: young jedi
Skills: sabor skills
Weapons: light sabor and intangalbe belt
Ship: non specified
Personal Belongings: a necklace
Roleplay Sample: As the enemy ship grew closer, seth grew un easy as he took cover in the 3rd exscape pod. it was only a matter of minutes before the ship docked, seth began to steady his breathing and placed his hand on the hilt of his sabor. he sat and waited as the droids began to check the escape pods, the droids worked fast and then they came to the 3rd escape pod. seth grabed both sabors tightly and kicked out the door thrusting out feet first spining, his fingures mashed against the buttons of his sabor's, the light flicered and shot out with a buzzing sinsation. As seth landed upon the ground he slid with one sabor horizontal with the ground and the other behind his back. his hood was draped over his face, he looked up at the droids and be gan to run down the hall.
The rp sample ain't bad, but can you put some speech in it perhaps, to see how you do that?
Anyway, I take it you noticed the succes of jarjar trough documents, regarding jar jar was dead by the time you were born?
FInally, It's GungaN, and SabEr...
Anyway, just do that speech thing and I think I'll accept you, if you answer the question that is ^^
-M
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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:56 pm
Gaia Name: Lord vador
Character Name: Darth ravine
Gender: male
Age: 20
Race: human
Character Description: 6 foot 2 with dull yellow eyes ascar that starts an inch above the brow to a 4th of an inch down his cheek with dark black hair
Home Planet: kasshykk
Starting Planet:kasshykk
Relations: he is in the skywalker blood line
Character History trained by the greatest jedi hell bent on getting revenge for the death of his wife he was turned sith by that emotion
Alignment: sith
Occupation sith
Skills: tech.,weapon mastery
Weapons: a duel sided gold light saber
Ship The Milleniem Ravine
Personal Belongings: a locket with his wife pic,his great grandfathers lightsaber
Roleplay Samplejedi master windu we meet atlast...*draws saber and activates it and uses force lighting i stop after a few seconds*Tell me the truth why did you have my wife assassinated you slime i shoulld kill you now but theres no fun in that now is there?*he walks up to the jedi and looks him in the eyes and says*goto hell you b*****d...
To rate it 'lord vador' like...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *emotion-spastical-attack*
No way in hell I will even think about accepting this. You weren't trained by jedi yet, you haven't been in the guild before. Besides, since you say you were trained by the greatest jedi master, you would have been trained by me (smell meh ego), I never trained you. Since there's a rule saying you cannot use powers/sabers before you really had training, you won't be able to use them anyway.
The worst has to come....
9. No relations to movie characters in any way. So crush your skywalker bloodline, it ain't yours!
Finally, your RP sample sucks. It's short, it is badly typed, I see no , where they should be, you describe something your character cannot have been trough, and it smells, badly.
Look at other, accepted, applications, and change yours. You got a lot of work to do. If you need aid in RP skills, you can ask around in the guild. But first, get some aid in reading skills, because surely reading the guidelines can't be too hard, and apperantly, you didn't even try
-MrM
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 12:10 pm
Gaia Name: Bob_In_Black!
Character Name: Kraven
Gender: male
Age: 29
Race: human
Character Description: a 5 foot 3 male with long dark hair. wheres his fathers armer and a single jetpack. his crimson red eyes make his oppnants shiver as he stares them out.
Home Planet: aseraff
Starting Planet: talus
Relations: brought himself up after killing his own family
Character History terribly evil and injoyes to seee death and suffering. at a young age learned hw to make blasters and was found and trainded by the sith are the age of 20
Alignment: sith
Occupation assasin/bounty hunter
Skills: double sided light saber and technoigy(blaster making, space ship fixing)
Weapons: blaster and double light saber
Ship: personaly updated falcan
Personal Belongings: a small toy robot
Roleplay Sample *As Kraven sat meditating he heard the scurring of small mice Kraved activated his light saber and dystored the mouse with one foul swoop.*
"That will teach it to disteb me,"
"master Kraven the ship is ready for you to board,"
"good you are no longer needed now,"
"but who will fly the ship,"*said the captain begining to get a bit nervios*
"me" *Kraven said this with a slight laugh and with that Kraven killed the ships captin and strolled of towords his new ship*
You can leave the *'s as you already use " for speech... confusing eh? ^^
Anyway, the sample is a bit short, but you can improve... just try to use colors to clearify who's speaking. For example, red for you and green for the captain.
This isn't the best sample around, but you should be able to improve ^^
Accepted -M
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 7:55 pm
Gaia Name: SA_Edward_Elric
Character Name: Azrael Sting
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Human
Character Description: He has long silver hair extendign all the way to his waist. His eyes are a tealish green with a cat like pupil. Hes about 5'10'', averagly built with light taned skin.
Home Planet: N/A
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: all family deceased.
Character History
Azrael was born at not the best of times, his mothers cruiser had just been raided and the passangers were being taken prisoner. His mother was thrown into a cell with 5 other women. Know one realized she was pregnant. On the 2 months of traveling after auction after auction no one whold buy her for her weight size kept gaining. On one really thinking about it until one day she went into labor. Azrael was born healthy which was a rare thing on such a crude ship.
Azrael was raised and nurtured by his mother for his first two years on board this ship. Never ever seeing anythign other then the darkness of space and the interior of this ship and many stations. Once he turned 3 the captain took him and began to educate him and raise him not as a son but to be ready to be sold into slavery. When Azrael was 12 years old and the captain had tought him all he could it was Azraels turn to go to an auction.
Azrael was sold to a wealthy man named Joshua Edwen. He continued Azrael trainign and education takeing Azrael on more liek his own son then a slave. 4 years went by and the connection between Azrael and Edwen only grew stronger, yet there was something in Azraels heart that was calling him, his mother. Azrael asked permission to leave Edwens custody and to be freed so he could find his mother. Edwen cared for Azrael enough to do this and give azrael a three seated fighter to find his mother with.
So azrael left at age 16 to track down his mother. He first found the slave ship he was sold off of and foudn she was no longer here, also that the captain said she was sold before he became in charge so only the old captain whould have records on it. So Azrael left to track him done and after 8 months found him hideing on Naboo. He told Azrael his mother was sold on Tatoine to one of the growing gangs. So Azrael left again to find his mother and after two months on Azraels 17th birthday he was finaly able to get inside of the gangsters hideout to find his mother.
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation Bounty Hunter
Skills: Piloting, Marksmenship, and Diplomacy
Weapons: Three blaster pistols, one blaster rifle, and a sniper rifle.
Ship arc-170 fighter (specialy modified so the main cockpit controls both piloting and the weapons system.)
Personal Belongings: A strange cross like necklace his mother gave him before being sold.
Roleplay Sample
"Welcome Azrael Sting, my master has been waiting for you a droid said as he began to lead the way. "Sorry for being so late, it was a mess getting here, there was another Space Battle blocking the fastes route here" Azrael Replied. "Im sure my master will understand" "Thank you" they then entered a large hall liek chamber with a throne at the end. Gaurds with some type of spear weapon some with blasters lined the wall. Master, This is Azrael Sting, he wishes to discuss your lead dancer and a possible purchase of her"
"Hmmm.....i see, shes a might fine dancer, have you seen her dance before boy" The Leader said "No sir i have not" "Then why do you wish to purchase her" "Well you see....she's my mother" The room went silent just as she was brought out. Azrael turned to her "mother?" she nodded and his atnetion quickly returned to the gangs leader. "I see, well im sorry to disapoint you boy but i have no interest selling her" "No but i must get her" "Sorry boy, gaurds remove him" "no!!!" Azrael yelled as the gaurds came to escourt him.
Azrael quickly withdrew his pistol and shot the two gaurds dead in the head. He quickyl turned Shooting the two at the door which carried blaster pistols. The Speared gaurds quickly moved in. Azrael managed to shoot one before they all stabed at him. He quickly jumped to the side rolling away but was grazed on the side. The back end of one of the spears hit him in the chest as he fell back his blaster slideing across the floor. Azael managed to get up as he picked up the fallen speard gaurds spear. He then engaged the last 3.
He blocked, parried, and stab another gaurd was down. He swung his spear horizonetl takeing off one of the gaurds head. But then was stabed in the back of his left leg. He fell onto his knee and quickly pulled his second blaster shooting the gaurd in the head. He then spun back to the leader and blasted the droid. "Now to Discuss my mothers release" Azrael said. "As i said boy, shes not for sale" The leader then released a grenade into the room and ran for a secret exit. Azrael stook cover quickly but the gaurds and his mother failed to as the grenade went off the xplosion threw the 3 onto the floor as the roof above them colapsed.
Azrael slowly got to his feet in shock and fear. He aproached the pile to find his mother dead with the other two gaurds. He fell onto his knees again screaming in anger. As he paused he heard voices comeing from the main entrance. Azrael stood back up and shot the control pad, he then turned and slowly limped out of the room collecting his other blaster plus the two main gaurds weapons which consited of one pistol, one blaster rifle, and a sniper rifle. He followed the secret path out which led to the hanger bay. The place was to much in a fuss to notice him, the grenade seemed to his a major power line which now damaged was causieng the place to slowly blow up from the inside.
Azrael limped quickly to his fighter, he climbed the lader and climbed into the cockpit. He quickly started the ship and flew out of the hanger out of tatooines atmosphere. "I swear I will become the best Bounty Hunter ever, I will find you, Hunt you, Kill you, and avenmge my mothers death." He said quietly as he plotted a coarse for Naboo.
Congrats, you made me a very happy mod ^^
Accepted, see you around
-MrM
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:06 am
Gaia Name: Grey goth the cursebearer
Character Name: Grey
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Race: human
Character Description: Brown hair that hangs in his eyes,his eyes are a bright green. He's about 5'16",averagly built with somewhat pale skin.
Home Planet:Coruscant
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: None
Character History: He has never known his family,he was raised by his grandparents on Courascant.At age four,he was taken to be trained in the jedi temple.Since he became a padawan,he has never found a master.
Alignment: Republic.
Occupation: Jedi.
Skills:Healing,piloting.
Weapons: A blue lightsaber
Ship :A beat up x-wing
Personal Belongings: None
Roleplay Sample:
Grey stood in suprise.They still hadn't found him a master jedi?What kind of work were they doing?!?He stormed out of the council room thinking:Perhaps I was meant to be a padawan all my life.He remembered one of the masters telling him to not dwell on things,it lead to the darkside.He took a few breaths and ran a hand through his brown hair and sighed.
the RP sample isn't bad but too short, can you extend it a bit?
MrM
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Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 4:31 pm
Gaia Name: Hapkaido
Character Name: Sly Kamui
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Race: Human
Character Description: (this may not be very creative)Look at my avi.
Home Planet: Bespin
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: All deceased
Character History Born in Bespin, Sly lived a difficult life. Imperial Troops raided his house when he was seven years old in search for his father. They captured and killed his mother in front of him and took his father away. During the raid, Sly ran and hid behind some bushes and never was found. He then found an old man named Toruga Mondrack, who took him in and taught him everything he knows. They worked day and night on his accuracy, his melee skills and at his temper. Being an orphan now, Sly hated the Empire so bad and wanted to kill every evil he saw. Of course, Toruga saw great potential in him and wanted to calm him down and teach him how to change that anger into energy and to not take revenge.He continued hi studies until he was 15 years of age because he walked into his master's house one night and found him dead. He then took his knowledge, weapons, and his memories and left.
Now on his own, Sly wanted to use what he was taught to make his father and master proud. He enrolled into the Republic Army where they used his skills wisely. They sent him up ahead to search the land and take out any possible threats. This went on until he was 17, where he wanted out, so he left to start his life. Amonth went by and he heard rumors that the Republic forces were being massacred and always were ambushed. For this reason he returned to the army and continued his job. He was officially able to leave at 18 years old or he would stay and be promoted to a higher rank. It was two months before his 18th birthday when he heard news of his father's capturing and that he was still alive. On his 18th birthday, he decided to leave and start his search for his father and to discover the reason he was taken in the first place. He then got in his aircraft and left. Over a planet that was kind of familiar to him, but not that familiar, his craft had a malfuntion due to the overheating of his R2-Unit. He was plummeting down to the ground and things got a little more familiar. He saw the jedi temple in the distance and pulled up in time to land it. Was it a coincedence that he crashed here? Or was it fate that he crashed here in his search for jedi training? He didn't know what to expect so he just walked on to the jedi temple.
Alignment: Jedi
Occupation Scout
Skills: quick with the blade, great sharpshooter, and great agility
Weapons: Disruptor Pistol, Sonic Pistol, Blaster Pistol, Blaster Rifle, (x2)Vibroswords
Ship The Cloud Cruiser(not to be mistaken with a cloud car)an old, beat up X-Wing
Personal Belongings: Father's Blade, Mother's necklace, and Master's knowledge.
Roleplay Sample Sly walks to the city and asks around for any jedi or emperial. He finally walks into a bar and right there are two Emperial Pilots, just drinking from their filthy mugs. Sly walks up to them and begins to pull out his vibrosword. He asks the first pilot," Hey, have you ever heard of a man by the name of Devunta Kamaui?" He turns and pulls out his pistol, obviously rcognizing the name."Yah ive heard of him. So what." He begins laughing and keeps drinking. "That man was my father." The pilot spits out his drink and starts choking. The second pilot began to talk. "You mean he was your father? Well then that makes you an enemy of the Empire as well!" He pulled out his pistol and pointed it at Sly's face.
"You don't know who your messing with. I am Sly Kamaui, son of Devunta Kamaui." he pulled out his sword andcut the pilot's arm off. "Get him..." was the last thing Sly heard before all went dark.
He woke up in the Jedi Temple's Hospital room with a large gash across the back of his head. He got up and a jedi came walking through the door. "Wh..Who are you," Sly asks. "You will know in time. But right now I need to ask you what you are doing in a place like this. You arent even a jedi." " How can you tell that of me?" " Ah that's easy, you may have a great deal of power within you, but you do not carry a lightsaber. Also, I watched in the bar. Your stance was that of a soldier, and a mighty one at that." "Thanks and do you know where I could find a Master. I want to learn the ways of the jedi." "Right this way my boy. You see, im a jedi knight here and i am also on my way to a jedi master. you need a jedi to help you, and i will help later, but know, you need a person who can bring out the best and worst in you. I am not that person. Ah here we are. You should ask around to see who is willing to help. Oh and Sly. I know you will suceed just as your faher did." " My father was a jedi. How could that be. Ok thanks for the help. Wait one more thing. What is your name?" "As I said, you will learn in time." He dissapeared down the hall. And Sly was one step closer to finding his father.
Can you cut down on the skills a bit? We want 3 at max, not 6 or 7... (so 3 real advantages, it doesn't say you're bad at the rest, but you ain't special at those either, just moderate)
Other then that you're certainly accepted
-MrM
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 1:46 pm
Gaia Name: dacsander
Character Name: Dac'ruta Hett
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Tusken Raider
Character Description:
Height: 1.8 meters
Weight: 180 lbs
Facial characteristics: Unknown.
Only Known Appearance: 
Home Planet: Tatooine
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: Sharad Hett(jedi)- Ancestor/Father of A'sharad Hett, A'sharad Hett(jedi)- Father of T'lina Hett, T'lina Hett & U'knahr - Parents of G'ruta Hett, G'ruta Hett & A'suun - Parents of G'rnahr Hett, G'rnahr Hett & So'lrah - Parents of Dac'ruta Hett
Character History The Great great great grandson of an exiled jedi master, Dac'ruta was born in to the same sandpeople tribe that had welcomed Sharad Hett. Sharad Hett, also known as the "Howl-runner" and the "Hound of worlds" was a great jedi warrior and hero, whom crashlanded deep in the Dune Sea of Tatooine. After months of surviving in the harsh desert, the sandpeople took Hett in and eventually made him a full warrior of the tribe. Later Hett married a trible female by the name of K'sheek, whom gave birth to a son, A'shard. Fifteen cycles after his birth, A'shard met with jedi master Ki-Adi-mundi. Upon the death of Sharad Hett, A'shard became padawan to Master Mundi. Trained in the ways of the force, A'shard rose through the ranks of the jedi swiftly, easly making knight. During his training A'shard sparred with such jedi greats as the Dark Lady and a Young Anakin Skywalker. A'shard even battled against the evil Aurra sing. Returning to Tatooine, A'shard became the jedi protector of that outerrim world. After a few years, during the time of the great jedi massacure, A'shard rejoined his tribe and took a wife, by the name of S'kana. The result of their marrage was a daughter named T'lia. Displaying no extraordinary force ability, T'lia was married off to the warrior U'knahr. They had a unextrordinary son by the name of G'ruta. When he was grown G'ruta took a mate by the name of A'suun. The result of that mating was a son by the name of G'rnahr Hett. After a life of Amazing suprises, G'rnahr married So'lrah, a great female warrior. Their son was Dac'ruta, who was raised the way of the tuskens, but one day, the storyteller of the tribe told of the finding of Sharad Hett, in the dune sea, And how the tribe watched him for months before addopting him. Realizing that the strange feelings he had learned to trust all his life were twinges of potental "Magical" abilities, Dac'ruta set out from the tribe on his own towards Anchorhead. He hoped to find a way to learn to control this "magic", and perhaps find out more about his Ancestor.
Alignment: Good but hovering right on the razors edge.
Occupation Potental Padawan, Tusken Raider, Scavanger
Skills: force sensitivity, Survival skills, Warfare tactics, Knowledge of the Jedi Code
Weapons: gaderffii, known commonly as a gaffi stick, Ancestral Lightsaber(Heirloom from Sharad Hett), Slug thrower
Ship None
Personal Belongings: gaffi stick, Bantha (named: C'rell'akt), Sharad Hett's lightsaber
Roleplay Sample
The harsh twin suns of Tatooine beat down on the Enormous expanse of the dune sea. The heat rippled up from the ground, causing in some species dementia and eventually death. The Sand Dunes and troughs appeared deserted but then a snorting sound was heard. Over the heighest dune a lone bantha trudged, its solitary rider urgeing it onward. The Tusken and his mount were on a mission, one that to his knowledge had never been attempted by a tusken before. As the bantha paused, the tusken spoke, his voice echoing across the empty expanses of the dune sea. "Kr'ragt Ha'kko C'rll'Ghgt!"*, he said in a strong sure voice. With a cry, He urdged his bantha in to movement again, still heading for the distant city of Anchorhead.
*Which Translated from the tusken toungue Means
<I go to seek my destiny!>
Sorry, but rule 9 forbids any relations to movie/E.U. characters, that includes hett. So you need to think of another history/relations. Other then that, it's pretty good.
Note, if you do want to be a tusken, remember the Hetts weren't real tuskens, they were human. It is genetically impossible to cross a tusken and a human
-MRM
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