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 Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:29 pm
Either name works, though this one is growing on me more than the other.
See, change can be good! n_n
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:57 am
Chapter 14 Added
Allright as you can all tell the name is different and there is a new poll please leave your feedback on both! And thnk you to those who already have.
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:59 am
Ha, Birdo got pwn'd! =D
Too bad about the other culties, though. o_O
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 11:19 am
~kinda sad he didn't get to go fight xd ~ But awesome none the less o.o and wah death D=<
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:37 pm
Haha, Birdo is such a gender-confused loser. XD
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:54 pm
xd those fans OWN! thanks for the awesome weapon!
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 7:43 pm
@Betman - Glad you liked it!
@Draken - Sorry, I intended for you to be there but then i realized i was actually slighting a few characters. So yeah.
@Wayne - rofl Man that was great!
@Koosei - Glad you like them!
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:40 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:58 pm
Great stuff. I like how it all just flowed after the battle, with the patching up and talkin', gettin' ready to go home stuff. =D
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:58 pm
Let me be the first to say: Awwwww, forsaken and Koosei are soooo cute together 4laugh rofl Nice addition, as usual. I am now proof that only a real bad-a** gets knocked unconscious in a battle, the rest of you get off easy xd
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 11:07 pm
Aw, someone died. So much drama and suspense!
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Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 11:16 pm
Haha, Forsaken and Koosei~! It's cute. I think more Cultie love should go around. Also, just a bit of constructive critisizm, but you should add more emotion. Like after the battle and we find out Rubina had died, it could be quite touching.
But I totally love it! I had it all set up in my mind and everything.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:54 am
@Betman - Thanks!
@Allwing - rofl Oh that was great and so true!
@FMB - I tried sweatdrop
@Meta_Fish - Yeah, I do see what you are sayin, I thought the same thing once i posted it and reread a few times. I'm going to keep that in mind in upcoming chapters.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 9:57 am
Sweet. Now just update! scream
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:38 am
Awww, FS and Koosei.
I really like the pacing of this story.
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