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 Posted: Thu May 24, 2012 8:13 pm
Panthers7 I'm not going to deny it or anything. But I'd like to see just a tad bit more techniques from the Clan. You have the understanding of the Eight Gates... but what of the techniques that the Clan has? Put those into the sample. ^^^-----------------------------------
Lol, I actually remember this episode in Naruto XD Except Kakashi didn't... kill. o.O; Anyways, I can tell you can utilize the Clan correctly. Approved. XD wooooo!!! But...there's an episode of this??? O_o XD wow, had no idea. But yeah, Kakashi usually don't kill unless he has to. but wooo time to make profile!
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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 6:25 am
Name of the Bloodline: Hyouton - Ice
Name of Previous Bloodline: N/A
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: New
Name of RPC: Serene Ishii
Have You Had it Before: No, but I know the concept of it
What do you know about it?: The bloodline is manipulating the ice and freezing water to create their element in mind. Users of this bloodline can move their ice with simple hand motions or even just by the power of their intellect (mind). Not to mention, they can use any jutsu with just one hand. Ice is a devastating element as it has the potential to rival quite a few techniques in other elements.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline:
In the lingering moonlight, a fog hung heavy in the air as it mingled with the darkness. With a single full moon glaring down like an angry god's eye, the forest clearing was almost a glittering display of the dew and mist. Soiling the beauty were three dead shinobi, sprawled out at awkward angles with a single woman standing between them.
Her form was shadowed by the darkness, lit only by the shining moon from above. Yet the woman wasn't alone as other lingering figures crept through the forest, glints of steel occasionally seen. Shoulders shaking, quiet sobs escaped her slightly as the men slowly converged in with no hesitation.
Three men came in faster than the others, running in with swords drawn; one at her rear and two at the front. The woman unleashed an anguished cry, drawing her sword as ice started to form across the grass. The dew was freezing and the very sight to see would be too late for the three men.
She switched her grip to a reverse grip, stabbing backwards as it impaled the man's throat. Hearing the gasping of the dying man, she ripped the weapon out and parried one sword swipe with her sword. With it still in a reverse grip, she swept her weapon and grind it off the man's blade while stabbing the second man at the same time. His grip on his blade relinquished as he silently dropped just as the woman drew the blade back again, cutting it across the third man's neck.
Each flurry of attacks were done with precision, elegant yet her grief fueled her elements. The three men had fallen to the earth finally as the woman ended the fury of cuts in a wide footed stance, sword in hand and breathing heavy. No sound came as the other armed men stopped, watching this woman in the silver and red light as her sword flashed in the moonlight.
"Get away... You betrayed me!" She cried out as more ice crept along the grass now at an accelerated pace. It was evident that her grief, her fury, fueled the ice's power and growth as it shined a steely blue, glistening in the moon's angry gaze.
"Why...?" She asked as her shaking stopped, standing straight as she swiped her hand across the air. Chakra flew out as the fog froze, sending black shapes across the air. Steely blue ice shaped birds pelted several men, causing their line to crumple as their cries rang out from the snow swallows.
Tsubame Fubuki
The onslaught began as the men let out a battle cry, rushing in all at the same time towards the woman. Her bloodline, it was a fear. A curse, something that needed to be eradicated from the world. With her comrades dead, she was the last to go from their small town. She was a devil in disguise even as she still pelted down more men with her ice birds, wounding some and killing a few. It was a mob.
The woman quickly did hand seals with her single free hand just as she cut down two others who got too close. She immediately rose her hands as the ice all around rose up in thin stalagmites angling out forty five degrees. The icicles impaled several men as the woman stomped onto the ground, sending the dew and gathering the fog into the air. Hundreds of needles formed as they all pushed outwards and rained upon the mob surrounding her.
Sensatsu Suishou
She stood motionless as the slaughter took place in only a breath. Cries echoed out as the men she knew, she trusted, fell before her jutsu. Many wounded, few dead, they were still able to fight but it gave her a breather. She jumped onto one of the stalagmites she created and ran across it, using it as a boost to her jump over two bodies impaled on the ice. She ran.
Shouts followed behind as the girl kept a run, cutting the occasional branch or shrub that got in her way. Barking of tracking dogs followed as she ran and ran. It was enough as she did a string of seals, turning around, she faced her once beloved comrades. A black swirl of chakra pushed out from her hand for a dragon's head with red eyes to come out. Rushing wind followed the jutsu as it swirled between the trees, freezing the path it followed and knocking several others down.
Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu
She rushed through as her blade met the foe she once called ally. Ally turned against her from superstition and fear, fear of her. Not her, but the bloodline she possessed. All emotion drained from her eyes as she sought to survive, throwing more ice swallows into a trio of the warriors and cutting another across the chest. They weren't shinobi, simple men who were scared and turned on her and comrades. Death didn't come to all, but a good number as she danced and swept through the men as the ice formed more.
The Sasuga Soujuu allowed her to conjure mass amounts of ice, using it to barrel into another group of men as it froze them against a tree. A final cry came out as the woman let her fury through for the ice to expand outwards in large stalagmites. The ground flash frozen from the surge of chakra.
At once, it was like a god froze time itself. Everything was still, silent once again as the moon gazed down through the leaves. Sparkles of the ice glittered in the resulting moonlight as the remaining men began to back away, those that could anyway. Save for the few remains of the dead, she was alone finally in the steely blue wasteland.
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 4:33 am
The understanding of the technique is there and the sample was good! Approved!
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 11:07 am
Name of the Bloodline: Aburame Clan
Name of Previous Bloodline: - - - - -
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: New RPC
Name of RPC: Takeo Aburame
Have You Had it Before: The bloodline? I suppose I have.
What do you know about it?: You use bugs, sharing a bond between the bugs and the host. They're always breeding which helps to build up immunities through hundreds of generations in a day.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline: Takeo quietly monitored the area from his position through the use of his bugs which had been bred specifically for picking up the scent of his latest enemy.
It was all up to him at this point. The enemy was far too adapt at removing their traces that even the Inuzuka’s nose couldn’t follow.
Takeo waited patiently for several hours, only getting bugs back to him every ten minutes or so that would direct him in the right direction. Whoever he was chasing was quite the eluder. He’d already managed to make some distance between himself and Takeo without leaving much of a trace of where’s he’s been.
Every once in a while Takeo would move in closer to the enemy he was supposed to follow. He didn’t want to make any dramatic movements just in case he ran into a trap.
Eventually, after much tracking and following, Takeo found the man he’d been looking for. He was hunkered by a river stream and washing his face.
Takeo signaled for his bugs to prepare a surprise attack. He wanted to finish this quickly since the man didn’t exactly have a clue Takeo was there. Even though Takeo had a rapid respawn rate with his bugs, he’d rather not have to deal with the loss of any in a battle.
Sometimes though, Takeo had the tendency to underestimate his opponent. He quickly launched several hundred bugs from his body that took the form of himself. It was bunshin made of many of his own bugs.
The clone quietly walked toward the man with a kunai extended from its sleeve made of bugs as well. Just before it reached the man washing his face though, the bunshin exploded. Almost as though there were a trap. Takeo nodded to himself, slightly relieved that he’d held back from a quick offensive.
The man quickly stood up and laughed aloud. Clearly he thought that the clone was the real Takeo.
Now this was Takeo’s chance, while the man’s guard was down.
Hundreds of bugs began flooding forth from Takeo’s body. They swarmed the man and began to envelop his body in a sphere that would consume all his chakra. After a few seconds, the man fell over, dead and the bugs flew back to Takeo’s body.
Without another word Takeo had his bug destroy the body before anyone could find and steal that man’s jutsu.
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 11:20 am
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 1:06 pm
Name of the Bloodline: Hakemoto
Name of Previous Bloodline: N/A
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: Second RPC
Name of RPC: Aryana Surana
Have You Had it Before: Yes
What do you know about it?: It's one of the most flexable clans introduced to Naruto. It relies on States, which contribute to healing, allowing the use of more jutsu, increasing damage done, etc. Most of the Hakemoto melee techniques are spin offs of the Hyuuga's Gentle Palm style.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline: Her wounds were... healed. Her father had given her a handicap: time to recoperate before continuing. However, it seemed to be a grave mistake. Her inate control of chakra allowed her to mend her wounds, and now she used that same control to shift from a healing state to an offensive state as her eyes changed from green to yellow. Don't waste this chance, you're on borrowed time. she thought as she charged her father. He met her melee attacks with his own hands and arms, and blocked her kicks with his shins. However, her attacks were more powerful than before. She used a version of the Gentle Palm style that used bursts of chakra to not seal chakra gates, but overall dish out more damage. Her movements were fluid and percise. As she bounced off his knee and landed a good twenty feet back, she extended her arm and rushed him again. This time, a sphere of chakra formed in her hand as she grew near him, and it quickly grew into a disk. The disk was then thrown at her father as she followed up qickly with a flurry of palm thrusts. The disk was dodged, and the palms blocked by his own. Of course they were, he taught her every move, every technique she knew. And he was suppose to be something of a powerful shinobi, so him whooping her was not so unimagined. As her attack was defended, he rushed her. Quickly swapping to a third state, her eyes changed colors as she rose her hands to defend herself against his onslaught. packets of chakra were used to parry his attacks with her palms. Then she tried to attack again.
However, mid attack, exhaustion hit her like a train. Her State nulled as her eyes went from a dim glow to their normal gray color and she fell to a knee. Her father placed a hand on her shoulder. All in all, she stood against him through three State changes and half an hour of fighting. "You're ready."
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 1:36 am
A good sample but if you could, post the techniques or at least italicize/bold the techniques that are being utilized. Because from my read, I only saw two states. One, was the [State of Healing] the other, the [State of Power]. I can tell you have the grasp of the Clan, but if you can edit that in and make it smoother, there's no doubt you'll get an approval! ^-^
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 11:07 am
Expansion of Spiral and the penalty for using the States were also shown. However, went back and edited to add in a third State change and the parrying technique.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 12:52 am
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 4:56 pm
Name of the Bloodline: Mokuton
Name of Previous Bloodline: - - -
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: New
Name of RPC: Hisaki Senju
Have You Had it Before: In another guild
What do you know about it?: Mokuton users have inherited the ability to combine water and earth elements in order to create wood. They are powerful descendents of Hashirama and have augmented chakra pools.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline:
A dry wind swept across the vast, arid wasteland gathering dust and small fragments of rock and dirt and swirling it around before dropping it off in some distant place only to continue ahead and gather more. A setting sun on the horizon fell directly between the two soon to be combatants who stared each other down. One of the men stepped forward, a known weapon specialist with a knack for cutting his enemies down with swift powerful strikes. He went simpy by the name of Taki and wielded a single katana brandished between his left hand which choked up on the hilt of the blade and his right which relaxed down near the very end. His cold amber eyes stared at the Senju laced with hatred and a conflicting emotion of admiration. Hisaki stood relaxed, his arms folded across his chest and a bit of a slouch in his posture. His left foot tapped the ground rhythmically and he stared off into space with his pitch black eyes to match his long straight black hair. "You're pretty smart you know? Making me chase you all the way out here away from the forestation." Hisaki's arms fell to his sides and he stared at his opponent. "But you're still going to lose." Taki growled with anger at how smug the other ninja sounded. What did he know? He relied on wood and there was none to be found. His speed was incredible, he honed in on the Senju in a matter of seconds and made a quick horizontal slice towards the ninja's torso. Hisaki bent backwards demonstrating his flexibility to avoid the attack and once he felt his palms hit the rock below he swiftly kicked his right leg upward arching his back and disarming the man in the process. The moment his feet hit the ground and having time bought from Taki's shock his hands shot together and his fingers laced around one another to form the seal. "Hijutsu: Jukai Kotan!" The chakra expenditure was great, but the terraformation was worth the cost. A massive tree erupted from the ground before him, its branch narrowly missing Taki who had began to retreat, dodging and weaving through the rapidly emerging forest. Hisaki yelled as he came to the finale of his technique and forced one last tree to form that swept out one of its limbs to catch the fleeing Taki around the ankle sending him down to the ground with a hard thud.
Hisaki dashed forward leaping up onto one of the extended nearby branches and running along its surface towards the fallen ninja who was now desperately trying to free himself with a kunai. He could hear the sound of the projectiles as with a flick of his wrist Taki launched a few shuriken in his direction. The Senju brought his hands together and rapidly weaved a few seals. "Jukai Heki" Branched shot from the ground and entangled themselves in one another to form a thick wall that easily guarded against the incoming shuriken. Hisaki spun around the wall to see a now freed Taki clutching a kunai which he then launched in Hisaki's direction. Hisaki slid to a halt as he wove another set of seals. "Moku Shouheki no Jutsu!" The technique rose just in time, the sizzle that pierced Hisaki's ears just as the last beam locked into place confirmed his assumptions. The loud blast and strong vibrations of the explosive tag rigged kunai confirmed it. Taki was playign for keeps. The beams dropped and the moment seemed to freeze. Taki was in the air, he had recovered his katana somehow and he was descending with an intense look in his eyes. One that said this strike would decide the Senju's fate. Hisaki however was not one to panic and he weaved his final set of seals. Had it not have been for the extra chakra pool he possessed as a wielder of Mokuton he was sure he would have been dead at this point. He silently thanked Hashirama. "Daijurin no Jutsu!" He extended his right arm upward and it became a barrage of wooden branches that caught and ensnared Taki in the air much to his dismay. Hisaki then released the jutsu and the branches retracted as he leaped forward leaving Taki with no momentum and no way of defending himself from the powerful uppercut that lodged itself into his abdomen and robbed him of his consciousness. Hisaki landed on the ground with the rogue slung over his shoulder. "I called it, remember? Haha you lost."
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 6:17 pm
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 7:05 pm
Name of the Bloodline: Hoshigaki Clan
Name of Previous Bloodline: N/A (new to the guild)
New Rpc, or Second Rpc: New RPC
Name of RPC: Yamimoto Hoshigaki
Have You Had it Before: No.
What do you know about it?: Well, the Hoshigaki Clan is a Clan of shark-like creatures who are known for their beast-like nature and connection to the water. They can only have Suiton as an element and also learn Suiton techniques in two posts less. Due to their connection to water and basically being sharks, they are naturally weak to lightning. They are incredibly fast under water and can also breath there, too.
Give Example of Rp with bloodline: Yami roamed along the beachhead, his eyes plastered on the scenery. He felt so at home when close to where his people, his Clan, had come from. Whenever away from the water, he felt homesick. But now, he could finally relax. He dove into the water and couldn't help but feel safe in the midst of the ocean. However, Yamimoto couldn't help but feel... a disturbance. Where was it coming from, though? His shark eyes darted from side to side until it finally become noticable. There was someone near the shore, watching him. The Shinobi swam back to the beach and emerged out of the water just in time. He caught a glimpse of a man sticking his hand in the water, only to create an electrical field and kill tens of hundreds of fish. This was one of the worst offenses someone could perform against Yami's home and his fellow creatures. "What are you doing?!" The shady figure's face showed itself, the sun gleaming on the scars all over his face.
"It would have been best for you to stay in the water, my friend, and die with your kind. Now... you will die like a dog." Raiton chakra surrounded the man's body and he dashed forward at an incredible speed, a ball of pure chakra forming in his hand. Yami had a split-second to react before he would fry, and he took advantage of it. He ducked underneath the man's feeble attempt to shock him to death and countered with a bite to his arm. Once his teeth entered, the boy yanked and tore away a large amount of flesh away, rendering the foreigner's right arm useless. He dropped on his butt, screaming in pain. Performing a short string of handsigns, Yamimoto manipulated the water in the ocean and it formed a shark's head. It was the Water Shark Missle Technique. Ths ocean was all ready in the man's blind spot, he wouldn't see it coming. The shark made contact, further wounding the man. He deserved whatever he got in Yami's eyes. He had killed hundreds of fish.
The blood on the sand further contributed to Yamimoto's need to spill more. His primal instincts were kicking in. In an animalistic rage, he dove forward and found himself on top of his opponent. He rapidly bit the man repeatedly and allowed his teeth to bask in his blood. That was something every shark loved. Finally, clutching the man's left arm and right leg, the young Shinobi twisted his body and threw the man into the ocean. Flashing through even more handsigns, a shark dove out of the water, hitting the man right before he landed in the electric water. Then, out of the remains of the first water shark, multiple others formed and immitated the moves the original had just made. By the time the barrage was over, the man had numerous shark wounds and his body fell into the ocean, further shocking him. If the Hoshigaki boy and the sharks didn't kill the foreign Shinobi, his own lightning would.
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 11:25 pm
Very good bloody murder technique! But I'd rather see the actual techniques and bonus's of the Clan, over the aspect of it. blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:48 am
Panthers7 Very good bloody murder technique! But I'd rather see the actual techniques and bonus's of the Clan, over the aspect of it. blaugh Edited.
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:36 am
Panthers7 Very good bloody murder technique! But I'd rather see the actual techniques and bonus's of the Clan, over the aspect of it. blaugh Accepted. He edited it and add the jutsu of the clan :3 yum_puddi
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