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Include the Yuffie materia hunt in wutai?
  YES! i want to read how everyone chases after yuffie ((yay!))
  No, we can just pretend she never stole out materia.
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Suka Strife

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 2:46 pm


and i have recruited yet another ff writer! i do not know how, but somehow they are getting word of the project, and sending me PMs. wooot.
PostPosted: Sun May 14, 2006 4:47 pm


Alrighty, I added a random encounter to my bit. I tried to make it as exciting and funny as possible. Anyone remember those exploding house monsters in Sector 6?

Bit coming very, very soon.

[Edit] I am not a lazy b***h after all!!

Park Scene
... And just when he thought he got rid of her...

"You're up bright an early." Aeris said, arms crossed, and giving him a nasty look.

Cloud sighed. "How could I ask you to go along when I knew it would be dangerous?"

"Are you done?" she asked him cooly. He ran his fingers through his hair, looking towards the ground. She was still feeling quite offended. She huffed and turned to face the junkyard, looking over her shoulder at him.

"You have to go through the slum in Sector six to get to Tifa's Seventh Heaven. I'll take you there. Come on!" Aeris took off running before Cloud could say a word against it. He had no choice but to follow.

They made their way through a ruined highway, with various cranes and piping lying around. Aeris held the lead, running over boards to pass through tunnels underneath, seemingly going in circles. Likely to punish Cloud further for his comment the previous night.

They were almost through the junk yard when a monster crawled out of seemingly nowhere and stepped inbetween them, focused on Aeris. It let out a roar which made Aeris nearly stumble foreward in surprise, but she turned around and pulled out her metal staff to defend herself.

"Aeris, watch out!" Cloud shouted, swinging his Buster sword.

"I know what I'm doing!" she insisted.

The monster, which appeared to have brought it's home along with it, turned to face Cloud at his outburst. Aeris took this opportunity to hit it with her stick, and jumped back just before it's claws could reach her in a desperate counter attack. Cloud spun his sword in a circle, and briefly focused on the materia in it's blade, summoning an ice spell on the monster.

"Hmph, show off," Aeris mumbled.

"What was that?" Cloud shouted.

"I was just telling the monster to shove off!" she yelled back, hitting it fiercely with her staff. This time, though, the monster pulled it's body into it's house, much like a turtle would pull itself into it's shell.

She looked at it strangely. "Did it give up?" she wondered aloud, letting down her guard ever so slightly. From the roof of the house, missiles appeared, and they headed straight for her. She panicked and stumbled backwards, spinning her staff infront of her. The missiles hit just beside her.

"Aeris!"

Thankfully, this monster was no Shinra weapon. The missiles were pretty low yield, though Aeris now had second degree burns on her legs. She wasn't about to give up though, she still had something to prove. She got to her feet quickly and summoned a breeze to heal herself and Cloud. Cloud struck the monster with his sword, gaining it's attention. Aeris leapt in with her staff once more and finished it off, it's body exploding in red spirit energy. She dusted herself off, and walked over to Cloud as she put her staff away.

"Is it really so bad to accept help from a girl? Hmm?" She smiled slyly at him. He shook his head in defeat. She pointed to the large gate ahead of them. "The gate to Sector seven's over there."

"Thanks. I guess this is goodbye. You gunna be all right going home?"

Aeris cradled her face with both hands, pretending to be shocked. "Oh no! Whatever will I do!?" She paused, her hands moving to her hips. "... Isn't that what you want me to say? she continued condescendingly.

Elmyra was right. There was no winning with this girl. "... How about you come to Sector seven with me, instead?"

"I could do that. But won't I be in your way?"

"What do you mean in the way?" Cloud asked her curiously.

"Nothing!" she grinned innocently, and rushed off again.

She spied the playground and stopped, turning towards Cloud as he caught up with her. "Uhm, can we take a break?" she asked, turning to the moogle-shaped children's slide. "I can't believe it's still here..." Before he could garner a response, she was sitting on the top of the moogle head. "Cloud, get over here!"

He climbed up and sat down next to her, wondering what she could possibly want from him. Solemnly, she asked, "What rank were you?"

"Rank?"

"You know, in SOLDIER."

"Oh, I was... First Class."

"Just the same as him." She reaches foreward and clasps her hands around one knee.

"The same as who?" Cloud asked curiously.

She looks up towards the sky. "My first boyfriend."

Aeris had mentionned him before. "You were... Serious?"

She shakes her head slowly. "No. But I liked him for a while."

"I probably knew him. What was his name?" Cloud pried curiously, trying to think over the names of other SOLDIERS he fought with.

She closes her eyes, and forces out "It doesn't really matter."

The Sector seven gate swung open just then, and a cart carrying a fancily dressed brunette appears.

"Huh? Hey, back there..." Cloud leaps to his feet. "Tifa!?"

The cart passes on, ignorant of Cloud and Aeris, and enters Wall Market out of sight.

"That girl in the cart was Tifa? Where was she going? She looked kind of odd..." Aeris hops down from the slide and starts running after the cart.

"Wait! I'll go on alone! You go home!" Cloud barked, but Aeris ignores him. Cloud shakes his head and goes after her.


The end where they're talking about Zack briefly is kinda lacking, but I couldn't really figure out how to be descriptive about back and forth conversation like that.

Anatares


Suka Strife

PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:23 pm


yay anatares!!! i will edit that now.
PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 6:13 pm


Suka Strife
and i have recruited yet another ff writer! i do not know how, but somehow they are getting word of the project, and sending me PMs. wooot.

it's been a while since i've been in the forums, and when i come back all i see is that theres ff writters that'll help us?!? well mabye this little project will actually get completed! mabye it'll even get attention from square itself... *rants on some more as he walks around*

Floyd Hunter

Eternal Fatcat


Suka Strife

PostPosted: Fri May 19, 2006 3:49 pm


lol, getting the notice of square would take a lot of work ^^. and if we do get their notice i hope we do not hit any legal issues O.o. ((even if we did, i would finish this project over email alone then ^^)

but yes, you heard correctly, we have ff writers working for us, and i cannot wait to recieve their work. working nice and hard everybody, i hope ^^
PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 1:02 pm


Legal issues?!? i didn't even think of that!

oh well, i bet once they saw how it was coming along, i bet they wouldn't be too mad, and besides, with the ff writers, they might even like it!

Floyd Hunter

Eternal Fatcat


Suka Strife

PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 1:21 pm


well we can all only hope ^^.
PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2006 8:27 am


They might pull an Anne Rice (And more recently a George Lucas) and say that people can no longer write fiction about their fiction, no spinoffs, SI* fics, whatever. But you know, we can still hope. For all we know they might take one look at our hard work and add it to their Compilation of FF7 biggrin Multi-platform, and they have a movie, so why not a novelisation for the game? I know I would take into account the work put into this and the number of dedicated fans on the project, though I can't speak for Square's marketing tactics. It would truly be a testament to how Final Fantasy 7 will never die, not even ten years after it's original release.

In other news, the sleeping forest scene I'm set to do may be put off for a bit. I've recently gotten the inkling to do a SI fic with myself and Sephiroth, a light comedy to show contrast between myself and Aeris (Whom I have been compared to on many an occaision) and to reveal my opinions on his existence. Yes, I am a pathetic fangirl**, but he only kisses me once and I freak out in response.

*SI: Stands for self-insertion.

**Spoiler: Which is how I knew Kadaj would turn into Sephiroth, because they're both left-handed o.o;

Anatares


Suka Strife

PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 5:30 am


lol, or they could take the project right out of our fan hands and do it themselves. left handers are cool.
PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 12:37 pm


Suka Strife
lol, or they could take the project right out of our fan hands and do it themselves. left handers are cool.


"nooo... not our little project... and we've spent so long on it to..."

is wat i would say if that happened.lol

Floyd Hunter

Eternal Fatcat


Suka Strife

PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 3:34 pm


if they took it, i promise we would still continue ^^. even if square will not need it anymore.
PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 7:56 pm


Suka Strife
if they took it, i promise we would still continue ^^. even if square will not need it anymore.


cause thats what fans do, they ignore the law and push on anyways!lol

Floyd Hunter

Eternal Fatcat


Anatares

PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 9:10 am


Muhahaha. Fun tidbit from my new fanfic in progress:

Quote:
He held the teacup into his hands, staring straight at me, most of his hostility gone. "So, who is my mother then? Not Jenova, I take it?" He took a sip.

"Oh come on, you're a grown man, surely you know how babies are made." I raised one eyebrow.

The tea made it's way out of his nose. It took every ounce of willpower in my body to merely crack a grin.


And one I'm a little proud of writing, just because I think I captured the moment so well:

Quote:
I couldn't sleep that night. Or I did sleep, and I just forget that I did. But whether it was a dream or not, I couldn't help but hear a tiny nagging voice at the back of my mind. It 'felt' like it had something important to say, but it's message was confused and incomprehensible and too quiet. I climbed out of bed and sat on the cold concrete floor of my basement in my underwear. I don't know why, but I stayed there until the first signs of morning crept into that dark place. I was entranced in that moment, with the first light peering in through the small square window in the other room, my dad's former office, and the closeness to the earth. I remember a single word, the tiny voice finally managing enough volume and ungarbled itself to utter it with every sort of urgency about it. I heard it, and had a momentary revelation, a single concept that made sense of all things. Then I woke up in my bed and completely forgot what it was.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 10:15 am


Suka Strife
if they took it, i promise we would still continue ^^. even if square will not need it anymore.


Easiest way to avoid legal troubles (IF they ever happen) is to make a disclaimer for the story stating it's obviously not your story that Square came up with all the characters and what not. That way no-one can be fingered for trying to take credit for their stuff. I'd love to help write if you still need writers (though in actual game play I'm still on first disk).

Angel Darkchylde


Suka Strife

PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 4:55 pm


Omg everyone, please forgive your Founders absolute lack of work lately crying . sorry ana, i have not even started editing the piece you gave me, and when it fell out of my history text today i was quite shocked... i still have many PMs of work to read through and edit, right before i send it to evandre, and then i have to run back page by page through this thread and collect all of the writing AND yes i would absolutly love to have you in the novel project, just shortly ago i replied to your PM and ana, i really like that piece of writing, have anything else for me? please please >< AND just to top everything off, your Founder (myself) got herself grounded for sleeping in crying . hopefully i will be able to get back on track and fully involved in the project again. wow my dad is dumb... he just walked in the house and somehow did not see me on the computer or hear my music playing ><. well, sorry everyone, mini blog done, hope to get back on track reeeeal soon.
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