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 Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:06 pm
Alright, you are approved!
I suspect that you can handle this bloodline well... just make sure you are always feeling the pain and reacting to it! Good work!
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:07 pm
b]Name: Kuri blood art manipulation.
RPC's name:Renkai
Bloodline Applying for: Kuri clan
Why do you want it: Because I am a big sai fan and like his stule
What will you do with it: To get strong and get even more powerful
What you know about it: Sai created his jutsus by using a pen and scroll paper. Then clan's weakness is water.
RP Sample:Renkai was travailing in the forest for his first mission of jonin in his village. His assignment was to hunt and kill anyone who was an enemy of the village. Luckily for him, the village he was attacking, was the sound village. Ok here it goes Renkai said to himself as he got ready for the attack. Renkai took in a couple of deep breathes. Suddenly, he charged in the speed of light. His abilities were faster than the sound put together. Renkai traveled far and wide. He then stopped near a odd looking castle. He crouched down and turned his head around twice to see if the cost was clear, then he took out a scroll and began to draw on it. His imagination led him to draw a bird. Once he was finished, he calmly took his fingers and placed them together.
Troku Ena(Beast Art Imitation Technique) He said quietly as he watched his drawing come to life. The art was a giant bird with spiked like feathers and a long beak. Renkai jumped on the bird and flew into the night sky. He scouted the People in the village and found some of his targets. Hmmm Renkai said quietly My mission starts now. Renkai took out another scroll and then continued to draw. His drawings were rats and these rats, were his was to succeed in this mission.
Troku Ena(Beast Art Imitation Technique) he said quietly, as the rats fell and scanned the whole perimeter. The rats were successful, as they found his main target. Renkai swooped down and took out his sword. Suddenly, a sword went though hand pierced his heart. Sorry but you loose The enemy said smiling at the corpse of Renkai. Suddenly, the corpse turned to ink and the enemy was stabbed by Renkai. The enemy fell dead and Renkai was victorious. One down. Thirty more to go Renkai said smiling as he walked off. Hours past, as Renkai was doing his mission. Many people were killed by the hands of Renkai or their shinobi. With all of this attention, Renkai left in search of a plan
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:58 pm
Jenpachi:Alright, well I have ZERO complaints about your use of the bloodline, but your RP sample could be a bit more polished. Seeing as this thread has nothing to do with grammar however, and everything to do with how you use the bloodline...
YOU ARE APPROVED
...however, please do be careful when in the RP. We are a literate RP here, and we want to see people using proper grammar and spelling. thanks!
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:15 pm
Name: Little Mintchan
RPC's name:Crystal Mays
Bloodline Applying for: Onigari clan[paper clan]
Why do you want it:well i wanted to try something new and i never really thought of getting this blooline till now xD
What will you do with it: make me fly!!!! lol xD just kidding hmmmm make me a better strategist
What you know about it:not much except you can turn your body into paper and can use some paper as spys shaped as differnt objects
RP Sample:
Crystal stood close to the gates of Kiri watching the guards her mission was to spy, infiltraite and grab what was needed for the Otokage. She kept hesitating to spy as she jumped into the tree to get a better view to get into Kiri or Cloud village. Her shyness always activated at the wrong time she put her hands together after calming down a bit to turn her right hand or dispatch it into paper as the pieces of paper folded up and flew away to look for a better way to enter without suspicion. One piece of paper went to the front gates and watched the ANBU's route back and forth in quick pace steps. "It's impossible to go through the front unless your a shadow walekr or fast in taijustu! Hmm." She got a idea as the dispatched paper came back she put her hands together once again and dispatched her whole body into paper and flew high above since it was a bright sunny day it's hard to see small white pieces of paper in the sky. She flew right over the guards of ANBU and gates landing in a ally between the ramen shop and training grounds putting herself together. "Now how do I walk out? Oh ya..." She hid her headband in her white fuzzy hooded jacket making sure to look like a normal Kiri[cloud] ninja. She slowely paced herself to the Cloud kage's office and sent a piece of paper above no one was in the office so she started to climb up the wall between another builden so no one could see her. She looked in the office knowing the door was locked cause of the dial on it was turned east and west and not north and south. She punched in the glass with her foot hanging on the edge in a backstroke swimming style on the ledge. Crystal climbed cutting her arm from the sharp glass frame since not all glss was on the floor. She slowely nelt down behind the kage's desk opening drawer filled with headbands she took one and got up and walked over to a shelf full of scrolls and knocked most of them on the floor to find in the way back a small door entrance possibly a way to get to the vault as she opened it and stuck in her hand it was merely a hole ont he other side of the vault room was a button to push by throwing a kunai in the hole only the kage could do with such a small hole her hand barely fit! Crystal dispatched herself piece by piece into the hole re-collecting herself inside the vault then ebgan her second search. A couple minutes later she found the forbidden scroll for the Otokage and Dispatched herself and going through the hole again only to collect herself right infront of the kage. "Eh...Hi! Bye!' She said quickly running past him to be grabbed by the shirt she turned into paper once again and fluttered out the window. Crystal was in such a panic she collected herself in mid-air landing in a pile of trash she got up running out of the ally towards the gates looking behind her once in awhile to see two ANBU and two Chuunin after her. "RUN DAMMIT RUN!" She thought to herself pushing people outa' her way everytime. The gates were closed shut she put the little forbidden scroll and headbans in her shoulder bag and sealed to create paper wings. Crystal used them to fly over the gates and to the other side.
good anough?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:26 pm
It's ENOUGH ... Enough. Not 'A'nough...
...but yes, this is Good!
YOU ARE APPROVED!
However, I will tell you what I disturbingly have to tell everyone. Every time you perform a jutsu, such as dispatching into paper, or growing wings... you NEED to do the hand seals. You can't just 'do it' and have the jutsu completed.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:35 pm
check the demon application cobra
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:36 pm
do i put a link to here for the bloodline or to the page to show what it is?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:38 pm
little mintchan do i put a link to here for the bloodline or to the page to show what it is? the page
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:19 pm
Yessum, there is one possible slot.
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:26 am
Miss Whoopie Name:Miss Whoopie RPC's name:Aika Hakatui Bloodline Applying for:Ranmaru Bloodline Why do you want it: I've never had it before, so that would be a new experience for me, also by the explanations given here it makes the Bloodline more interesting than in the Anime. What will you do with it: I would say that I would protect my Village, because I really will, but since it isn't allowed, I'll say just Have Fun and fight with it. What you know about it: That the Bloodline, when activated, will increase the sight of the user, and so the user can see through Solid stuff. Like shown in the Anime, when the bloodline is activated, the user's eyes glow in a light red.I also know other things that you may notice while reading the RP Sample. RP Sample:Aika could hear her heart beats, her sight was starting to get dense as she was nearly loosing. She took a deep breath, and closed her eyes. She opened them, and they glowed a bright red. She turned her head at her sides, looking for the enemy's hiding spot, it wasn't that the nemy was scared, but he was planning another jutsu. She analyzed the man as calmly as she could, then understood what jutsu he was planning to use next. She looked down at the ground beneath her feet and then flashed a series of Hand signs, signifying clearly what jutsu she was going to use, a Raiton Jutsu. "Heki no Jutsu (Burst Technique)"she whispered in a low and soft voice to herself. Her eyes moved again and looked at the former hiding spot of the man, he was gone. The man was originally in the ground sailing through it to move beneath Aika. When the man was beneath her, his hands rose up and broke through the ground,catching the feet of Aika, but he soon let go as the Eletricity went through her body. She used Reddo Ichimei Kyouyou Bakemon (Red Life Force Phantom) , a Technique of her Bloodline. She created the Phantom's which held the man's hands before he was able to escape, the phantoms pulled the man, aiming to throw him towards the tree's. Even though with some difficultness, they threw him towards a tree, and Aika performed hand seals. She used Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt Technique), and threw a lightning bolt towards the man, while he was still in mid-air, it didn't hit him. But Aika ran in front of the tree, as the man fell on the ground, she used Dendou Kariyou no Jutsu (Electric Overdose Technique) and touched the man's chest, he got paralyzed. Aika sighed and walked away, not wanting to kill the man.
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:12 pm
((I'm tempted to actually write the stuff we were told not to write in the code. xD
Also... my "R" button seems to want to get stuck, so if I misspell something due to the lack of an "R", and don't catch it, forgive me! >.< ))
Name:LadyShirahime93
RPC's name:Shirahime
Bloodline Applying for:Hyuuga (Or Hyuga, however you want to spell it) main branch.
Why do you want it:((It's awesome! Jkjk! Sorry! Couldn't resist myself! >.<)) Because I've always enjoyed the Byakugan, even after hearing the terrible history of the Hyuuga clan. I think it's interesting.
What will you do with it: Use it to spy on people, by looking though the walls of baths, when they are in them, of course. (:
What you know about it: EVERYTHING! (*Get's ready to be shot*) The Hyuuga clan has a main branch, consisting of the leaders, or head of the clan. Then there are branches to this clan, consisting of the "lower" Hyuugans, which are branded with the "Caged Bird Seal"; which when activated by the heads of the Hyuuga clan, will force a specific branch member into extreme pain and submission. The Hyuuga trademark is pupil-less, pure white eyes, which is the source of their power; the Byakugan. The Byakugan allows the user, when activated, to see the Chaka Pathway System, in which the Hyuuga uses a fighting style (Gentle Fist) to block the chakra's pathway, and stop most, if not all attacks. Because the Gentle Fist also attacks the inner body, organs are damaged when attacked. There is no defense against this, since as Rock Lee (or was it Gai or Kakashi?)put it, you can build up you external body, but there is no possible way to train your internal body (organs and such) The Byakugan also gives near perfect 360 degree vision, except for a small blind spot on the back of the neck. The Byakugan can see though almost anything, but it has been known to be thwarted before. (Like Neji couldn't see inside that barrel that the four Sound ninja had placed Sasuke in, while he was dying of the curse mark. I forget what that jutsu is called though. o_o )
RP Sample:
Soft pink lips frowned, against delicate pale skin. Of all the days.... she sighed in frustration. It wasn't as if she was going around picking fight with people, but honestly, there was only so much that she could with stand before she kicked somebody where the sun doesn't shine. Unless you're outside naked, in which case.... she mused silently, a small smirk of a smile twitching the sides of her lips. The next second it was gone, as somebody decided they were power hungry, and place a hand on her f*ckin' a**!
She closed her eyes, breathing in deeply. It's was okay... call down Shirahime. The poor b*****d didn't know that you were a ninja, and could kill him. She paused, before thinking again, unless it was Toji, in which case, he's going down.
She turned around slowly, already regretting taking a mission in the worst part of town. Her eyes blazed with fury that swept over the crowd of perverted, drunks, before landing on the culprit; a smiling man whose smug look showed he clearly didn't know who he was messing with. He caught her glare, before her fist collided with his jaw and sent him flying into a table which cracked and splintered, collapsing under his weight. She sighed, exiting the bar she thought she saw her target go into, before she got lost amongst the hooting, drunken, unshaven men.
Maybe if she donned the disguise of a man, and reentered, she would be able to find her target better. She smiled, satisfied with that plan, and exited around the back of the bar, into an alley that smelled of fresh urine, and must. There were three men standing in the back. They looked up at her, and she stiffened, as perverted grins spread across their faces. She turned around, and found her way blocked by four more men. Well...five... if you counted the one nursing a broken jaw. (With a "Sh-," she realized with a clenching chest, that it was the man she hit earlier.)
They took a step toward her, and she backed up, only to remember the men behind her. Her muscled flexed, and she readied herself to make a mad dash to the back door of the bar. Her eyes quickly found said door, and with a dropping heart, she realized that the three men were standing between her and the door.
She weighed her odds, looking the men over as they moved slowly toward her, their intentions obvious by the perverted, drunken grins, and lust filled eyes. She took a step back towards the wall, hoping to shrink against it, and hope that they weren't looking at her, but rather each other. No such luck. They formed a half circle around her, blocking her against the wall. Good going Shirahime, make it easier for them to do... stuff, to you.
"You about nearly broke my jaw," A ruff voice, slurred with the effects of alcohol, spoke to her. Her head snapped towards the voice, though she couldn't see the faces of the men, because the shadows of the night were casting blackness over their faces.
"You shouldn't have grabbed my a** then," Shirahime retorted, her voice strangely clear, despite the fact that she was facing seven non-injured men. A lanky hand reached out and grabbed her shoulder. The force of it, was enough to send her back into the wall, and her head banged against it, causing stars to burst in front of her eyes.
She reached out to his wrist and pulled it up above her head, shoving her foot into the guy's chin. There was a crunch, and then a scream of pain, before she realized she had kicked the guy whom she had already punched. Somebody grabbed her, and she was twisted, thrown into the wall again. She couldn't fight in the dark, like this. Her mouth twitched into a sadistic grin, before she formed hand seals, "Byakugan!"
The world around her faded into something light, and she could see the men around her, including their features. The one who grabbed her, reached toward her again, and she frowned, ducking underneath his arm, and shoving her pointer finger into his chest, before flattening her palm and pushing it back into his chest, sending a shock wave of chakra into his body.
He fell, his body twitching and shaking under the strain of his chakra being blocked. Off to the side, somebody threw a punch towards her head. She ducked that again, sweeping her feet underneath of him, and poking her fingers into his temple, blocking that flow of chakra. She smiled; his hang over would be worse in the morning.
Three down, five to go.
Two men lunged at her, and she stepped backwards, a sickening crack resounding the small alley, as they crashed into each other.
So, three to go.
Something collided with the back of her neck, and she fell to the ground; clutching her neck, as waves of fresh pain rolled across her body. She musta been hit in her blind spot. But before she could figure out, how, somebody grabbed the scruff of her neck and picked her up; throwing a punch into her face. She fell to the ground again, feeling her lips split; the taste of blood mixing with saliva.
He was coming at her again, and she pushed herself up with her hands, catching his arm with her sanduru, twisting her ankle, so his arm was forced to twist. There was another snap, and he cried out in agony. She let his arm drop, before she landed on the balls of her feet and pushed off, and into him, pushing her palm into his chest, chakra aggravating his organs and Chakra System.
Two more...
She turned, and found only one, already passed out due to the effects of the alcohol. Her frown increased. Where was the... Oh! There he was.
The was down the other side of the alley; sneaking away. She ran at him, and he jumped, taking off down the alley and out into the open. She ran after him, her kunoichi skills, coming in handy, and caught up to him in a matter of seconds. She smiled, realizing it was his target, as he shouted in surprise, seeing her.
She grabbed the back of his neck, "Howdy there," she smiled, a vein in her face throbbing in annoyance, as she wiped away the blood flowing down her chin with her other hand. She blocked the chakra points in his neck. His eyes rolled in the back of his head, and he collapsed. She smiled, and grabbed the back of his shirt and dragged him to the Hokage's office.
Once she got there, she threw open the door, and stepped inside; knowing for a fact that he was in a meeting, due to her seeing through the door. The Hokage stood up, feeling killing intent radiating off her person.
She threw the man into the Hokage's desk, glaring at him, "A ranked mission my A-S-S!" She glared at everybody in the room, before turning around and exiting the room, slamming the door shut behind her with enough force to rattle the walls.
"Hell hath no fury," she heard somebody say inside the room, before she disappeared and went to the hospital to get the cut looked at.
((Was the best I could do. Not sure how well I did... I could've done better. Also... I think I'm missing something in "How well do you know the clan" part.... but I can't put my finger on it. =/ ))
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:59 pm
Name:Ayame Mizuko
RPC's name:Aqua Shione
Bloodline Applying for: Byakugan
Why do you want it: I have never roleplayed with it adn I think it would be a great experience.Plus my RPC will have Taijutsu so really there are limited choices for my bloodline options. Plus its my favorite xD
What will you do with it: It will help me find hidden enemies who may be stalking me. xD lol jk. It will allow me to find hidden enemies who may be trying to hurt my RPC.
What you know about it:The Byakugan can see almost 360 degrees.It does have a blind spot which is on the back of the neck.Most of the techniques are either Taijutsu or Ninjutsu.The technique,gentle Fist,Can see chakra pathways.The Byakugan ,also known as the white eye, are pupiless when unactivated.When activated veins around your eyes bulge and it has been activated giving them their great eye sight.
RP Sample:
Aqua was jumping through the trees heading back to the village after a simple mission.She stopped and made a handsign activating her Byakugan.She continued jumping through the trees.Seconds later Aqua stopped again.She sensed somebody nearby.She looked out of the corner of her eye to realize she was being tailed by a worthless bandit.She sighed and turned to face him."I can see you."She said folding her arms across her chest."Come out or die."She said simply.She wasn't in the mood to deal with bandits.The bandit froze."Fine."She said jumping down.She ran towards the bandit her hands by her sides.The bandit ran out holding a kunai.He was a poor old bandit.Hardly worth killing.She side stepped him and hit him with her palm in the back hardly.He groaned and she gave an emotionless expression.She walked forward."Give up you worthless bandit."She said harshly.The bandit whirled around looking at her.She spread her legs apart and put one hand closer to the ground and one hand in the air."Eight divination signs, one-hundred and twenty-eight palms of the hand."She muttered.Her pinkie and ring finger,on the hand that was in the air, folded to her palm while her index and middle finger stayed up.The yin/yang symbol that appeared on the ground signified she was using sixty-four palms.She ran forward.She hit him.She was using her left hand then her right."Two palms."She said hitting him twice with her index and middle finger."Four palms."She said hitting him four times."......sixteen palms..."She said hitting him again sixteen times."....thirty-two palms.....sixty-four palms!"She said.She had hit him sixty-four times and finished by hitting him with both palms blocking his chakra pathways.She breathed a little heavier than usual.She sighed.The bandit looked barely alive.She walked over to him and finished him with another sixteen palms.Her index and middle finger stayed up again as she started hitting him sixteen times alterating hands.When she finished him she carried the body to a nearby bush and stuck it under there."Eventually someone will find you."She said.She smirked slightly and jumped back into the tree not botheing to deactivate her Byakugan.
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 8:28 pm
Whoopi:You didn't use all of the abilities your bloodline grants you, but I believe you know what you are doing with it.You are approved!
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 8:37 pm
Shira:What?... no Heavenly spin? BLASPHEMY!
...But yeah, you are approved. I'm sure you'll use it just fine though, I'm happy with what I see here. Just remember it's tracking abilities and such as well.You are approved!
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