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 Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:51 am
Metaphorically Insane Deil Grist Ok then, that sounds good. Make it 2 posts of concentration to make it worth killing themselves, and someone without a GF/BF/Wife/Husband gets the full effects of the jutsu. A person with a lover will, however, find you attractive enough to let their guard down somewhat, but they won't spill their guts because of the jutsu. It will be a choice made by themselves. Does this sound good? Mmm... forgot about that. Indeed, someone with a significant other will be tamed to a certain degree, but why not lower the bar some bit? Take it to a situation much like Romeo & Juliet in the ballroom, dismissing the future knowledge of suicide. That would never happen. Um, let my see if I got it right People without lovers: Will do anything for you except die, but 2 posts of concentration will make them willing to kill themselves. People with lovers: If it is only a simple infatuation where the target barely knows the person they like and the other has not returned their affection, then the target is treated like someone without a lover. People that ACTUALLY love someone are simply attracted to the user, and will only give info by their own free will. Is this what you had in mind?
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:54 am
Deil Grist Narkosa2512 Deil Grist Put that in there, then approved. I'll add it to the clan 4 you after you put that in there. *Edit just realize that if you miss that is a huge waste of chakra. If the opponent falls in in that ink while it is on the ground, will it still work? If so, the ink is only alive for 5 posts once made, so if the opponent's skin touches it 3 posts later, they are only affected for 2 posts.Okay, The first question would be yes. If a person come in contact with the colored ink than the person will become subjected to the jutsu. Okay as for the second question I wanna say that it is giving a two post delay before it dies out like you said So you're saying it has 7 posts to live if it does not hit the opponent directly? yesbut it is only seven if it doesn't hit the opponent
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:56 am
Yep, that's basically all I am saying.
Attraction can have odd effects, so I'm content with that.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:59 am
@ Meta and Nark: Incorporate what we have discussed into the jutsu description/specs and repost them.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:00 pm
Deil Grist @ Meta and Nark: Incorporate what we have discussed into the jutsu description/specs and repost them. That will be done at a later date. Time is short and I must attend to the Taijutsu application.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:23 pm
Deil Grist little mintchan then can it be my clan's justu? since we are made of paper we can trasnform and shape? Because frankly, its a over-glorified transformation jutsu. The difference is it allows you to move while in that form. but can i put it in my clan as a paper substitution?
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:27 pm
little mintchan Deil Grist little mintchan then can it be my clan's justu? since we are made of paper we can trasnform and shape? Because frankly, its a over-glorified transformation jutsu. The difference is it allows you to move while in that form. but can i put it in my clan as a paper substitution? If you find a way, let me know and repost it. Also, I checked with Cobra, and only sharingan and people that can see chakra patterns can memorize your handsigns and learn your jutsu, so not as many people will be able to copy as I thought.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:30 pm
i already knew only sharigun could do that and a clan or bloodline like that rolleyes
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:35 pm
|Y|our |R|ank:Genin
|N|ame |O|f |J|utsu: Kami Buki hensou(Paper Weapon Disguise)
|R|ank |O|f |J|utsu: Genin+
|R|ange |O|f |J|utsu:(only if your jutsu is like an explosion)
|J|utsu's |E|lement:non-elemental
|J|utsu |T|ype:Ninjustu
D|escription: This allows any user of the Oragami Paper clan to form thier entire body quickly and faster then into pieces and can form them into a sword or one of those big shuriken on a person's back, Though it's temporary it's quite useful to hide from a hunter or escape easily. You may transform into any type of weapon even a rock your size is a weapon as long as it can kill and it's your EXACT size. Anything 1 foot lower or 2 feet higher is a failure and will not do a single thing, but waste chakra. It uses not alot of chakra only if coated if with chakra to form a rock in a pond and have the user waterproof. You cannot form into any weapon near or is fire you will be killed instantly.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:38 pm
Could you please make some grammatical corrections to that? Its hard to understand some patches of it.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:39 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:41 pm
Jutsu name: Living ink Color me Crazy
Rank: B
Use: Restricted, Brashugan only.
Range: Same range as shurikens.
Type: Genjutsu.
Element: Ink
Description: This adds a new element for Brashugan users. Color. The Brashugan user draws up a ball ink forcing a single emotion into it. The emotion turns the ink into a certain color. Now here is the kicker the color ball must hit it's intended target the target must act in the fashion of that color. This is due to the ink being alive when the ink comes into contact with the target the ink begins to corrupt the target's chakra flow. This jutsu only last for five post, if the target is hit. If the jutsu fails the ink is only alive for seven post. The user begins a post countdown if the user is able to land any of the ink on the opponent. If the ink came in contact with the target after the initial post, the user keeps going from the number he/she is on, and then that is how long the effect will last.
IE: If I was on post 4 and hit the target they are affected for 3 post.
Red= Anger
Blue= Sad
Yellow= Scared
Green= Jealous
Orange= Goofy
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:07 pm
little mintchan
It uses not alot of chakra only if coated if with chakra to form a rock in a pond and have the user waterproof. You cannot form into any weapon near or is fire you will be killed instantly.That right there, I can't understand it. Now don't get smart with me or I'll just deny it.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:11 pm
Narkosa2512 Jutsu name: Living ink Color me Crazy Rank: B Use: Restricted, Brashugan only. Range: Same range as shurikens. Type: Genjutsu. Element: Ink Description: This adds a new element for Brashugan users. Color. The Brashugan user draws up a ball ink forcing a single emotion into it. The emotion turns the ink into a certain color. Now here is the kicker the color ball must hit it's intended target the target must act in the fashion of that color. This is due to the ink being alive when the ink comes into contact with the target the ink begins to corrupt the target's chakra flow. This jutsu only last for five post, if the target is hit. If the jutsu fails the ink is only alive for seven post. The user begins a post countdown if the user is able to land any of the ink on the opponent. If the ink came in contact with the target after the initial post, the user keeps going from the number he/she is on, and then that is how long the effect will last. IE: If I was on post 4 and hit the target they are affected for 3 post. Red= AngerBlue= SadYellow= ScaredGreen= JealousOrange= GoofyI fixed some of the grammar, but now it is approved. Good work. I'll post it on your bloodline.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:20 pm
Deil Grist little mintchan
It uses not alot of chakra only if coated if with chakra to form a rock in a pond and have the user waterproof. You cannot form into any weapon near or is fire you will be killed instantly.That right there, I can't understand it. Now don't get smart with me or I'll just deny it. it doesen't use a lot of chakra only a little bit about 1% and if you wana disguise as a rock in water you have to coat yourself with chakra which depends on how big the rock is.... and you can't become a weapon too close to fire since you will appear 2 feet at random left right front or back when transforming into it only when the justu is gone you ONLY go 2 feet back
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