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After it hits S rank it should start doing fatal damage to the user. Mabye they can only use Katon: Doukakyuu Oodama Rasengan twice in battle before their hand is reduced to ash and nothingness, leaving them unable to use the jutsu again.

You see the reason your thing is soo OP'd is usage of two elements at the same time. Only bloodline that allow you to simultaneously generate, manipulate, control, and stabilize that force can use the jutsu. In addition the damage to the user should be pretty fatal after SS rank. I personally all those jutsu should be at least S rank because they require elemental chakra in addition to Chakra Control and Shape Control. The drain should be enourmous and the damage to the users body, especially their inner body because of the heat, should only be repaired by an Kage/Sannin level medic.

Because to tell you the truth Narure could only manage the first and mabye(after complete control of the Kyuubi and it's chakra) the second one. This isn't considering the fact he can't manipulate two elements at once.

TO EVERYONE SUBMITTING CUSTOMS: Realize that maximum amount of customs you can EVER have is 8

All of mine are for the Fuinjutsu technique list Zane wants me to make @_@

I can't auto learn them anyway but I can learn a few in like, one post.

Your Rank: Genin

Name of Jutsu: Grinding Palm
Rank of Jutsu: Ichibi Only
Description: The user creates a gauntlet of sand on his/her arm. Once the gauntlet has made contact with it’s target, small sections on the hand begin to spin rapidly. Once the sections start to spin the user is able to clench their hand and shred whatever is within. It can be used flat handed, but the effect will be much slower due to the lack of pressure from all sides. When used on stone or any form of earth this will create sand which can then be used for other techniques. Useless on metal unless it is very weak or rusted. It would make a good polisher though. The spinning points are located one to each segment of the user’s fingers, and three large points in the palm of the hand.

RP Sample: David grinned as he faced his latest victim, no, ‘opponent’. The man had charged him from the shadows, fought him with sneaking and dirty tricks, but now, the man was pinned. He had forced the man against a handy cliff wall where he could no longer run and hide. David chuckled lightly as sand rose from the earth, wrapping itself around his right hand, forming a rather unimpressive gauntlet. The boy was under the influence of the Ichibi at the moment, having given in to the cries of bloodlust back when his attacker decided to throw fire around like party favors. His eyes sparkled with the hints of insanity as his hand slowly rose to the man’s neck, a slight blurring effect visible on the inside of the hand, as if the sand wasn’t quite still.

Suddenly, he drove his hand forward, but luck was with the unfortunate soul. Instead of grasping flesh, David put his palm on the cliff, directly beside the man’s head. A horrible grating sound arose, as if the stone was being ground against itself, and out of the corner of his eye the man would be able to see David’s hand slowly sinking into the solid rock. The noise stopped as he pulled back his hand, revealing a smooth indent, perfectly shaped to his palm. It wouldn’t be so pretty once applied to the man before him. Panicked blubbering could be heard seconds later, the man’s final respects to the world paid with tears and incomprehensible mumblings as the boy’s palm made it’s way to his face.

And I will leave the rest to your sick twisted imagination.

what do you mean it can be charged? Also, how far can the ball be thrown before it comes undone?

How much bigger could the ball get by increasing the rank, and what additional effects would it have?

Denied, because the clan these jutsu are meant for was denied. You would have to be in the Hyoton clan to apply for these.