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 Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:13 pm
I liked what you did there. Very touching crying
But looking back you have been some fluffing. Such as Sabe pulling Waffle into his lap and her curling up in a ball. the mentioning of hurting Pen if she tried to hurt Sabe in anyway. Sabe becoming rather depressed when Waffle was in the hospital. I think you just haven't noticed that you have a knack for it. wink
Your couple is just subtle. Not everyone can be Luciano and Michelle mrgreen
I have to admit I have been writing a lot more fluff as you call it lately. Mostly without realizing why. It just takes a good amount of time thinking things through before writing when you start a relationship but as a rhythm starts you do it without much thought.
If guys saw what I was before I started writing; Romance was the least of my concerns and worries. I would just brush it off thinking it was just silly razz
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:24 pm
I originally imagined it as one-sided, mostly Sabe toward Waffle, but I guess it could be morphed into something else. smile
(And I totally did not expect to get good at writing subtle romance either, let alone hear someone say I got good at it. Most of what I think never reaches written format. sweatdrop )
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:45 pm
That is normal for a one-sided love thing morph. Its actually a very common romantic theme. One falls for the other but the other is so dense or indifferent they can't see past the inner motive of the love struck individual.
Man if my younger self could see me now. O well i grew out of that stage in to a rather more random one xd
Well if you need help getting those thoughts organized I'm here to help. For the Pen is mightier than the sword.
Da DA Cink!
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:04 pm
Oh yeah...I forgot about that for a second. sweatdrop
I think my younger self would run and hide from me twisted
Nah, it's fine, Pen. My stories don't reach a written format for a very good reason. lol
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:26 pm
Waffle, it is pretty yummy, your subtle romance. I'm actually hoping Sabe confesses his love.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:30 pm
I don't know what we can do right now without Allison
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:58 am
if you guys get on before me, try not to encounter me till i get on, k? i had Twi go back to the HQ and try to settle his thoughts. ((which won't work. xd ))
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 3:15 pm
@ Styk: I should probably start thinking up different situations.
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I Sinistro I Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:07 pm
@ Skotti: I made Alison promise to be more active. I really want her to participate more. She just likes to browse the GCD, y'know?
@ Waffle: You SO should! You, Alison, and myself should write an Arc together or something.
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:11 pm
I wonder what they would come up with eek
Twi just hold on we will find you but there is a portal that needs fixing of course only if Waffle agrees.
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:13 pm
Maybe so. ninja
...although I don't know what to write at the moment (pesky gnomes at it again) xp
EDIT and @ Pen: What are you referring to?
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:16 pm
aww, i thought i was going to fix the portal. ;-;
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:19 pm
I meant the portal that you and Sabe failed to fix if in your room. Since Twi is all alone he could fix it.
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:21 pm
@ Waffle: Well, one of these days all three of us should sit down and plan something. I'm thinking on killing off one of my characters that I made- Maybe Luciano's 507 year old Uncle.
@ Pen: By the way, thanks for the Fuseling! My Gumball is trying to devour it, though 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 6:24 pm
i was gonna make Twi's big thing that he has the hardest time remembering, so he can't remember until everyone's there, and th epressure is on him to repair the portal home. it's kind of dynamic after all.
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