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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:36 am
((Thanks for the post noting my existence biggrin Let the games begin!))
Ryn's wings twitched to his back, unravelling quickly. "So... This is where you went!", Ryn said, rather louder than he had meant to. He stretched, his wings swinging out to there full length before folding neatly at his back.
"First off", Ryn said, his eyes narrowed at the inconsiderate questions, before answering them in his own way,"I was looking for you because I spotted your portal, and the Gods seem to have killed the President. I was also wondering who killed that Purifier in the forest, because the scent was human, and you are quite obviously not human, Elf."
His wings twitched in agitation, his left hand rubbing against his swords hilt, watching the Elf, who quite obviously thought he might be threat, before saying,"Do you mind, but I am rather exhausted from flying all the way here, and was wondering if you might do the polite thing and invite me inside...."
Ryn pointed to the door, his wings drooping slightly, unable to keep them up from his exhaustion.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:40 am
(( No problem. I'm just waiting for Pen to post so I can have my turn XD
And duckie, make sure the new guy knows about the fighting system, and yeah, i think you did start the first fight, that wa s supposed to be my job j/k j/k))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:48 am
Izzy could faintly Nendir talking to... someone outside. She stood up, still holding the blanket around herself. She walked over to the window and lifted one of the blind's pannel things ((i don't know what they're called..)) just enough to see the elf, and a person with wings talking. They didn't seem to be having the most.. pleasant conversation, and she decieded it would be best to stay out of it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:51 am
He listened intently as the stranger spoke. Killed the President? Of this country? I have to get Izzy out of here, she can't get caught up in the turmoil that follow. He thought to himself, while keeping his gaze fixed on the defender. From the looks of things the Defender didn't seem to be threatening, but of course, Nendir had to make sure.
"You can rest yourself inside, but on one condition. You didn't think I would let you in toting that blade, would you?" He raised an eyebrow and walked over to the creature. How on Earth did he know he was an Elf, to everyone else they had thought he was a simple Mortal. "Give me the blade, it will prove I can trust you enough to let into my place."
The Defender wouldn't be able to get in without Nendirs help anyway. Though he was standing on the front porch, it was impossible to step through the door without being permitted before hand. "And you can rest as much as you like, but only after you give me your sword...and tell me your name."he added quickly. "I am Nendir Tâldaugion, and you are?"
His eyes widened a bit when he saw the pleasant shape of Izzy's face appear in the window. As long as she stayed inside she was safe. Besides, no one could fight in the home either. Spell, spells and more spells had been cast on his home by the Seven. A group of elite Alchemists and Magicians who served Her High Majesty's court. "Well, will you give me your sword, stranger?"
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:56 am
Ryn began to laugh, pulling his sheathed sword free of his belt and handing it over, saying," Well fine... Take my Dreggan but don't damage it.... And anyways why would I need the sword with claws like these?"
Ryn could tell, quite easily that Nendir didn't trust him, but then again no one did the first time they met him. Ryn grinned, holding his hand out and saying,"I'm Ryn. Pleased to meet you Nendir."
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:59 am
Izzy hoped that what she saw was that they had made peace. She drew herself away from the window and resumed her seat on the couch.
((gosh, that was so short! but there wasn't much else to post. stare ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:04 am
(( omg i cant see the dice lol its not showing up ><))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:06 am
Nendir took the sword in his hands. But because he had not decided it was a pleasure to meet Ryn, he didn't say so. He opened the door, sitting the heavy piece of metal against the wall and walked through the threshold, and giving one last look at Ryn invited him in. He didn't care that Ryn had claws and fangs, it was nothing new, and Nendir was surely not afraid of the mass of a man. "Izzy, this is Ryn, he needs a place to stay, I guess you could say he helped with that little row back at the village, right before I had you follow me into the forest." He looked at Izzy apologetically, but assured her with that gaze that she would be safe, he wasn't going to allow her to be harmed, even if it meant a fight to the death.
He took the seat he had earlier and found his water bottle, drinking the rest of the clear liquid and letting it quench the back of his throat. "Ryn, you'll have to stay in the living room I think. Izzy has the only spare room. Not that any of us will be staying here any longer if what you said outside was true."
((It's ok. But I left a lot out of my post so each of you would have more to write. Don't worry about putting me on the back burner for a bit.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:07 am
[[I can see it...it's at the very top, above the www and stuff. It's a six if I remember correctly, but you might not want to take my word for it, since I'm your opponent. XP]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:10 am
((Roflmao i can see that but theres nothing to like respond to it ><, I read the first posts like 5 times and its either its not showing up or im missing something entirely gonk gonk gonk ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:13 am
((Do you know how to roll dice in your post Iori?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:14 am
((i thought that was obvious and also my comptuer is being really stupid right now))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:17 am
(( >.> When your posting theres drop down menus. Pick "Post Action" then "Roll Dice" Pick the dice number and number of times to roll it according to the rules of this thread. And then post your message.))
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