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| it is to advanced for my little mind......... |
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| its the best RP eva! |
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| i cannot comprehend this question or my answer....... |
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 Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 4:07 pm
durand picked up his wife as soon as he saw her. he spun her around and around. he then laid one on her lips. the most passinate kii anyone had ever seen and/or drempt of. a single tear left durands eye as he was back with his wife. he looked deep into her dark blue eyes, and she had done the one thing that hed rememberd most about her.
she smiled.
durand didnt let go of his wife for the longest time. then the first words he said to her was, I Love You. he didnt just say them. he ment them.
"wheres chavix? wheres my son?" durand asked inqizitivly. while scanning the vast expanses of white. then turning his head back to his beloved.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 4:17 pm
"i believe he is in that prison of yours at the moment..." she said, a little flustered by his entrance, "he is being a guardian angel for the girl that needs it most... Aubry... she is very injured, and he felt sorry for her, and thought that she shouldn't die just yet..." she looked at his face, and smiled.
Aubry blacked out again, but right before she did, she thought a thought. im going to die... and then she was taken by blackness... she had a dream. and in the dream, a boy several years younger than she was walked up to her.
"hi..." he said friendly like. "im Chavix, Leila's son. im here to help you see that things are worth living for, even if it doesn't look too good..." he smiled a cute smile, and took her hand, leading her to show her her destiny...
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 4:37 pm
durands face lowerd. he was embarresed, more or less hating himself. he didnt want his wife to see him like this, but, he wouldnt let go of her, and stop giving her pecks.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 4:49 pm
"now," Leila said, "should i show you hell first, or heaven?" she beamed. she had been wating for this ever since she had died.
Aubry followed the boy. he took her to her past, in this part of her life, she was only 10 years old. she was talking to Leila, her next door neighbor. they had been best friends ever since Leila had moved in. they were talking about what they were going to do for the 4th of July.
"you two look inseperable." Chavix said. he looked at her.
"yeah, we were..." she said sadly. "and you say you are her son? how did you die then?" she asked.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 5:45 pm
chavix looked at her with sorrowful eyes.
"i was going to be the ruler of a entire planet. i was set up for dictatorship for life. my mom was so proud. she was just getting my royal cape. and my father, durand hailfire, was so proud. he had just inherited three difrent moons from his father. that put me in the line for dictatorship , then the dictator died, of a stroke. but yeah, my da was proud. he face was alway beaming with pride. they were about to have a little girl, so my mum was pregnant. my mum and da loved each other more than life itself. my da or mum would of given up there life for each other, or me. then, as we were in a royal hotel sevral hundred flights up, a bandit crud runner came crashiing through the walls. my mum saw this , and jumped infront of me. but there bullets were 50 cals, they periced her, and then went into me. my dad was turned around talking when all of this happend. he turend around when the windows crashed and saw the horror of his lover, and me, his son get murderd in front of him. when the crap runner turend around to fly way, he jumped on the back, once they landed, he beat them all to death. cept for lucain. "
"you should know him."
he finished when looking to another door across the street at bay durand.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 12:37 pm
((...i dont know why...and i dont know how...
but for some reason...this reminds me of Bleach...
well, its probably cuz everything reminds me of Bleach now o.o ))
Jessica was able to get to around where Aubry fell from hanging from clinging to the wall.
The hounds still weren't giving in.
"Well, that girl saved me, I might as well go see what happened."
She thought as she looked down to where she fell.
It was far down. She took a pebble and threw it down.
A distant thud was heard.
Thanks to her earlier trainning, she climbed down half way and then leapt.
There was Aubry. Lying in a jail cell with the gate half closed so hounds couldn't get in.
Luckily, the hounds werent there so she quickly slipped in, closing the door.
She knelt down beside the unconscious girl.
"Aubry?"
She mumbled quietly.
"Can u hear me?"
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:25 pm
all of a sudden five three diffrent men came over to the cell, when the hounds were above on the higher board walk. the opend up the cell and steped in. they all had the look of lust in there eyes. they started to advance on the two helpless girls.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:57 pm
((wait o3o what? so what u said was,
'five three different men'
so erm..what? xD))
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:29 pm
Aubry woke up to the girl talking to her. she also saw that some guys were walking over. she picked up a rock, and with expert aim, threw it, and it hit one in the head, knocking him out.
"anybody else want to mess with me? i have a huge headache, and im pissed, so don't you even think about coming near us...." her eyes flashed angerly. the guys backed off, with fear in their eyes.
"you have to know how to talk to men in here." she said laughing, only to bend over in pain. her whole body hurt so much.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:56 pm
((yay o.o ur not dead yet :'D
so...erm...ima make up the rest now e..e ))
Jessica gave her more of a curious look than concerened.
"How'd you...Nevermind..."
She said with a sigh.
"Come on. We need to get you some help."
She said as she tried to help Aubry up, unsuccessfully.
She muttered under her breathe in another language.
"Damn. Sorry. I'm not very strong."
She said with a nervous giggle.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:12 pm
((yay! someone cares!! mrgreen thank you!!))
"don't bother... there is no help... it is just us, the guards, and the hell hounds... and nobody is going to be willing to help... it is everybody for themselves......" she thought about what she had just said, "with a few exceptions...." she smiled painfully. "thank you by the way... your voice is what woke me up... so yeah, thanks..." she blushed. she might actually have some hope for surviving.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:19 pm
Jessica smiled at Aubry a bit.
"Oh, don't be silly. I'm sure they won't allow anyone to get so hurt in this place."
She said as she tried again to sit her against a wall before getting help.
Turning, she looked at the guys that just came in.
"So, can you guys help?"
There was somewhat of a helpless young girl in her voice.
((so Tamith gets to rp as random five three diffrent men? xDD ))
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:50 pm
Aubry laughed painfully.
"you really think that they would help us? really? i thought that you would be smarter than that... most people go insane here... there are few are who are sane.... but you won't find any help here. i have been here for five years, and i have seen people fallen like i did, and ended up dead, which is probably what will happen to me..." she smiled softly.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:51 pm
((sorry to ask, but what did i miss?))
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:03 pm
((erm...o.O since ive arrived, basically nothing o.o
Aubry got hurt while escaping from the hounds, i arrived at the jail, and um...
oh yeah. Tamith's character (whoever it is xD) shot himself and is now seeing Leila again, his dead wife o.o'' so now, Aubry n Jessica are in this jail cell thingy away from the dogs with 'five three diffrent men' here played by Tamith XD sry if that was sorta confuzzling x3))
Jessica looked at Aubry with a funny look.
"Nu uh. No one else is dying beside me."
She muttered as she finally was able to pull Aubry to a sitting position, leaning on the wall.
With that, she sighed and plopped down on the ground beside her.
She once again turned to look at the guys with a pleading stare.
"PLease help? We need to get her to the one of the guards or the captain!"
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