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 Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:52 pm
Jin Orochi
Orochi: Swords Punishment
Genjutsu
The user performs swift crescent movement with a sword and infuses it with a special chakra. If the opponent is to look at this swift movement, whether it be by distraction or ect., they will be trapped in a genjutsu. The user will visualise themselves being constricted by a giant snake and then several swords levitate and slowly lunge into them. If the user believes that this is real, they suffer several small, but deep stab wounds.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:53 am
Kekkaishi soshi
wall of air level one
a ninjutsu that requires one to know elemental bond. the heaven marking on the right forearm of a Soshi glows as the person uses the air around him to stop or lessen the blow of physical attacks. the grater the blow to more you will get hurt.
Kekkai level one
a skill passed down in the Soshi family they must first know elemental bond. this jutsu makes a small invisible box of air the box can be place on any spot that can be seen. the closer to the target the stronger the strength of the box. mostly used to trip apponents since at this level it is still just hardly solidified air. re quires one to make the hand sing for snake
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 5:26 pm
Kikyo Soshi
Hidden Heaven
Elemental Dance: (need Elemental bond) Elemental dance is where you chose an element in which you wish to use. Your arms and legs are surrounded by the elment of your choice and you move in a dance-like movement or spin in order to attack. It's good for long distance attacks, but can be most effective if up close.
Examples of how this could work: If you use fire as your element, then if you swing your fist, then it will spread out in a thin "ribbon" like way. With wind, you could kick in the direction of your enemy and send them back away from you.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:02 pm
Gabriell Archangel
holy Triad: Heavenly Assembly- using the three holy objects he has obtained Gabriell can focus the holy strength of each into his own body. Each of the three objects will merge with his body as he uses this, first the Lance of Longinus will merge with his spirit and become possible to move in and out of his arm at will. second the Shroud of Turren will begin its merge with his body, it will cause his skin to seem pail and scared but will make him unnable to be cut on any part of his body. and last of all the Holy Grail will merge with his mind giving him the ability to cure any ailments(broken bones, poisons, etc.) in his body, and giving him higher senses, and strength. This combination basically causes his body to undergo a stress that could kill anything evil, but if used by a holy innocent it can(suchas Gabe) it can do as said. This ability can be used for 10 posts at a time, then it will become disastrous if continued.(It can be used for 10 posts then Gabe will loose the 3 holy objects for 2 posts. after waiting out the 2 posts they will emerge from his body safely, the technique can then be used once more.)
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:13 pm
Descartes, Than
Hidden Twilight
Jutsu Idea::
Ghastly Wings-
A large mass of demonic and angelic wings surround his form. They possess the ability to form a defensive perimeter around his form, and at the touch of even one of the wings, chakra is taken the judgment for such an act.
When Than reaches a higher level of chakra. Consisting of 30,000 Chakra points. The wings gain a new feature, to which causes those that touch them to enter a state of repentance. Causing them to go through all their sins in a rapid flash of visions to which may cause the opponent to collapse at longer durations of contact.
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Second Jutsu Idea::
Ethereal Chains-
A series of chains, to which emerge from a variety of substances including Than's form itself, they may even form from the air, though small pockets of a dark substance show where they are forming, when forming in the air only. They are intangible, which allows them to form and pass through most objects. [I.E. Trees, earth, walls, normal weaponry.] Though when they touch the opponent, they become tangible. as their hooks would connect to the opponent's flesh, which would then drain the chakra from the user until they are freed, or free themselves. The chakra drained form the opponent, only goes into keeping the chains at work. The chains may also wrap around the opponent, restricting their movement for another attack. Although, the amount of chakra drained is cut in half when the hooks are not connected. The chain double for every 10,000 chakra points of the user's possession.
Meaning::
At 10,000 CP He has Two.
At 20,000 CP He has Four.
At 30,000 CP He has Six.
And so on.
There's my two techniques, lets see what happens with them 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 10:53 pm
Gaia Name: GoldDragon1188
Character Name: Immolatus
Village: Hidden Cloud - Enkou
Starter Made-Up Technique: Immolate - Blinded at an early age due to severe nervous system damage; the poison also made chemical alterations to his hair and skin; the latter of which keeps his skin at a constant tan. Though this would seem like nothing at first; his skin is also much thicker than most; and while it will be cut normally; it can store water and resist outside heat easier; thus allowing him to resist damage, heatstroke and exhaustion due to his own fire-based attacks.
Opponents' fire-based attacks will still do normal damage; this technique merely prevents Immolatus suffering effects of heatstroke and injury from his own fire-based attacks.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:05 pm
Jin Orochi
Creature Orochi: ShedThe user acts as a snake does when it sheds its skin. Th user quickly removes the outer most layer of the epidermis and reveals a fresh, stronger flesh. This technique can be used to evade attacks, both ninjutsu and taijutsu if the user flees in time.(Can only use twice in battle)Orochi: Corpse CloneAfter using the Orochi: Shed skill. The user can apply chakra to the shed and make it a solid clone. This clone is physically hollow, but is filled with chakra. The chakra contains all the users techniques, moods, tones, and knowledge. Since the clone is a shed of skin, that is hardened to the extent of a flexible concrete( flexible so it can move), it is extremely difficult for the clone to be destroyed. Mainly, piercing techniques and burning techniques are the weaknesses of the clones. The stronger the user the more life like the clone shall become.(Also depends on chakra put into it.) Depending on the users chakra, they can control more than one.(Only can e used once per battle, otherwise, once every five post)
25,000- One-Fourth of the users jutsu and physical skill.
50,000- Half of the users jutsu and physical skill.Can control up to two clones.
100,00- Three fourths of the users total chakra level. All users jutsu and physical skill. Can control up to four clones at once.
Must label each clone with a number when posting.
Orochi(1) leave original blank.Orochi: GrowthThe user gains the muscle like that of a snake in a single portion at a time. That body part can stretch up to great lengths, and with extreme force. This jutsu can only be used on main parts of the body as a whole. Such as: Right arm, left arm, neck, torso, neck+torso, right leg, left leg, both legs, and tongue.
Orochi: Potent FangThe users canine teeth extend to up to two inches and hollow. The gum above the teeth are filled with a potent acid. Once the acid is injected into a victim, the acid attacks the users nervous system and muscle cells. Destroying most of them within the time period of 15 minutes.(3 post for the victim) Once the users cells have been destroyed they are completely vulnerable and bound to die unless the venom is extracted. The user will die in a total of six post, all muscle cells are extremely damaged, including heart and lungs, which causes them to come to a stop.
Orochi: Regenerating TailThe user can have a body part removed and replaced. Almost like a lizard does to its tail, it can remove it, or if it gets removed it can replace it. (If the user were to be decapitated, they can only regenerate it once per battle. This technique can be used twice in battle. Cannot be used on organs except the tongue and eyes.)
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 5:19 pm
Kikyo Soshi
Hidden Heaven
Ice wall: (Requires elemental bond) In the course of an emergancy, use one of the Soshi clan's water attacks. Then, all you have to do is make it freeze in a way simular to the adament fist. You can use the wall to block an enemy attack. If used too long, who ever is inside the ice could be frozen to death. Only way to release it is to either have the person doing the attack to release it or it can be melted, but it has t be at high temperatures.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:29 pm
Devoker | Air Trek: The Hurricane Road - There are moves similar to this one already but approved. Air Trek: The Bloody Road - Denied. I don't like the last part. Air Trek: The Sonia Road - Um, approved. Air Trek: The Fire Road - Approved. Air Trek: The Jade Road - Denied. You need to apply a limit to this. Air Trek: The Wing Road - Approved if you take off the jumping part.
Bounds | Denied. Too powerful.
Assassin | Orochi: Swords Punishment - Take out the "If they don't fall for it, then they are fatigued." and it is approved. Orochi: Shed - It needs a limit. How many times can you do that? How exactly can it protect against genjutsu? You can do it without a time limit if it can only fend against low level ninjutsu and taijutsu. Orochi: Corpse Clone - Uh, Approved. Orochi: Growth - Er, approved. Orochi: Potent Fang - Take out the last sentence and approved. Orochi: Regenerating Tail - Approved.
Hades | Wall of Air Level One - Does it reflect the blunt attacks? If it only does that then approved. Though there are jutsu similar to this one already. There are a good number of moves that can deflect blunt damage and/or defend against blunt damage. Kekkai Level One - Um, approved.
KiKi | Elemental Dance - Approved. Ice Wall - For defensive purposes approved but for offensive no. Too powerful for your level.
Metal | Holy Triad - Five posts able to use with a three post cool down and approved.
Reaver | Ghastly Wings - It needs a limit. A time limit would be nice. Ethereal Chains | How far can they travel? How long can they last without draining chakra? How much chakra can they drain? It needs to be limited a bit more. The power of the move is too great. Depending on how much chakra they drain and their distance I will tell you how many and when you can get more chains. Either by the amount you specified or by an amount I see fit.
Dragon | Immolate - Erm... approved I suppose.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:38 pm
Hyuuga Devoker
Hidden Leaf Quote: Air Trek: The Sonia Road Ninjutsu. The user uses a pair of skates and then focuses chakra through the wheels causing them to accelerate giving them a great amount of speed and the ability to jump about twenty five feet in the air. It also doesn't use much chakra at since the user is simply focusing chakra into the sole of their feet or in this case, skates. The Sonia Road allows the user to see the Sonia Road which gives them the possibility to create thorns that move around and can create a battle field that can be condensed or can be used as a weapon. Approved already. Quote: Air Trek: The Fire Road Genjutsu. The user uses a pair of skates and then focuses chakra through the wheels causing them to accelerate giving them a great amount of speed and the ability to jump about twenty five feet in the air. It also doesn't use much chakra at since the user is simply focusing chakra into the sole of their feet or in this case, skates. The Fire Road allows the user to see the Fire Road which gives them the possibility to create an illusion that they are manipulating time. Approved already. Quote: Air Trek: The Jade Road Ninjutsu. The user uses a pair of skates and then focuses chakra through the wheels causing them to accelerate giving them a great amount of speed and the ability to jump about twenty five feet in the air. It also doesn't use much chakra at since the user is simply focusing chakra into the sole of their feet or in this case, skates. The Jade Road allows the user to see the Jade Road which gives them the possibility to nullify damage. This move can only be used if the user does not move at all and uses a massive amount of chakra. Changed. Quote: Air Trek: The Wing Road Ninjutsu. The user uses a pair of skates and then focuses chakra through the wheels causing them to accelerate giving them a great amount of speed and the ability to jump about twenty five feet in the air. It also doesn't use much chakra at since the user is simply focusing chakra into the sole of their feet or in this case, skates. The Wing Road allows the user to see the Wing Road which gives them the possibility to glide in the air for long periods of time. Approved already (Took off jumping part.) Quote: Air Trek: The Smell Road Ninjutsu. The user uses a pair of skates and then focuses chakra through the wheels causing them to accelerate giving them a great amount of speed and the ability to jump about twenty five feet in the air. It also doesn't use much chakra at since the user is simply focusing chakra into the sole of their feet or in this case, skates. The Smell Road allows the user to see the Smell Road which gives them the possibility to send out very smelly smells that can get through any object. Just added now.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:42 pm
Reaver Darkside Descartes, Than Hidden Twilight Jutsu Idea:: Ghastly Wings- A large mass of demonic and angelic wings surround his form. They possess the ability to form a defensive perimeter around his form, and at the touch of even one of the wings, chakra is taken the judgment for such an act. When Than reaches a higher level of chakra. Consisting of 30,000 Chakra points. The wings gain a new feature, to which causes those that touch them to enter a state of repentance. Causing them to go through all their sins in a rapid flash of visions to which may cause the opponent to collapse at longer durations of contact. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Second Jutsu Idea:: Ethereal Chains- A series of chains, to which emerge from a variety of substances including Than's form itself, they may even form from the air, though small pockets of a dark substance show where they are forming, when forming in the air only. They are intangible, which allows them to form and pass through most objects. [I.E. Trees, earth, walls, normal weaponry.] Though when they touch the opponent, they become tangible. as their hooks would connect to the opponent's flesh, which would then drain the chakra from the user until they are freed, or free themselves. The chakra drained form the opponent, only goes into keeping the chains at work. The chains may also wrap around the opponent, restricting their movement for another attack. Although, the amount of chakra drained is cut in half when the hooks are not connected. The chain double for every 10,000 chakra points of the user's possession. Meaning:: At 10,000 CP He has Two. At 20,000 CP He has Four. At 30,000 CP He has Six. And so on. There's my two techniques, lets see what happens with them 3nodding Ghastly Wings:: Limiters:: Naturally. It's not an instant drain of chakra. More like a small percentage drained as long as they are within the wing's range. I cant estimate the length of the wings.. The time limit you ask for, can be the range of between 1 post, to 2. Depending on how long the one who collapsed is willing to waste for time. Ethereal Chains:: Limiters:: They're a length of 20 ft. And can only be used 10 feet from his form. Any that do not make contact, simply vanish when they reach their total range. The amount of chakra they drain, consists with the amount needed to use them only. Basically, it's enough to keep the chakra from being drained from Than, since they are supplying the source. Basically, the chains are a form of stopping movement of the opponent. Since they become solid once contact is made, breaking out of them would be fairly simple, if they are not wrapped around. [since when wrapped around, no chakra is drained. It would last until Than releases them from exhaustion] Which is why I figured, then 10k for two chains, was a decent limiter towards their numbers. Don't underestimate the thought I put into my made-ups.. I have all school day to think of them xD
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:49 pm
The power without a name. "Awakening"
As zat draws first blood on his first victim, the sword wakes from it's deep, forgotten slumber. The kanji seal located on the hilt of the sword begins to dim lightly, allowing the so quiet whispering in the boy's head to become louder and more clearer. Zat becomes a little faster, and the potential of the sword allows his muscles to increase their stretch limits thus allowing him to avoid some attacks that are concidered unaviodable, however his chakra is constantly drained at the rate of 200 CP and at the end of his first use of the seal the boy passes out and is not able to fight properly for exactly (real) 24 hours. this effect lessens over freqent use of the seal. If the chakra is drained, zat begins to lose his life force, and after exactly 5 posts after his chakra is lost his life is lost forever to the will of the steel.
Percisely, zat gains half of his actual speed and is able to stretch 40 percent farther then he actually could.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 6:57 pm
Wow, that was fast. Let's see.
Devoker | Air Trek: The Jade Road - Approved. Air Trek: The Smell Road - Like walls and doors? Be a little more specific. And is the smell harmless or have the potential to be harmful?
Reaver | Ghastly Wings - As long as the wings can only drain through contact they can last for about ten posts with a cool down of two posts and then you can use them again. Ethereal Chains - That moves is fine then. Your amount is approved as well as the move as a whole.
Bounds | Erm, approved.
Assassin | Good. Your stuff if fine now.
Metal | Hmmm. Sure. Re-post and approved.
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:07 pm
Obscure- would 6 use and 3 cool down work?
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:14 pm
(repost)
Gabriell Archangel
holy Triad: Heavenly Assembly- using the three holy objects he has obtained Gabriell can focus the holy strength of each into his own body. Each of the three objects will merge with his body as he uses this, first the Lance of Longinus will merge with his spirit and become possible to move in and out of his arm at will. second the Shroud of Turren will begin its merge with his body, it will cause his skin to seem pail and scared but will make him unnable to be cut on any part of his body. and last of all the Holy Grail will merge with his mind giving him the ability to cure any ailments(broken bones, poisons, etc.) in his body, and giving him higher senses, and strength. This combination basically causes his body to undergo a stress that could kill anything evil, but if used by a holy innocent it can(suchas Gabe) it can do as said. This ability can be used for 6 posts at a time, then it will become disastrous if continued.(It can be used for 6 posts then Gabe will loose the 3 holy objects for 3 posts. after waiting out the 3 posts they will emerge from his body safely, the technique can then be used once more.)
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