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 Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 4:14 am
kiska166 Ariana slept silently. Her breathing was steady. She has been waiting all Summer for this day. Today was her first day at the Academy. When her alarm clock woke, she slammed her fist down on top of it to shut it up. She despised the sound it made: Beep. Beep. Beep. It was the most obnoxious noise in the world. She then sat up straight in her bed, wiping her messy and tangled hair out of her face. "I thought I'd be more excited," she murmured, feeling unseay and nervous. She dragged her butt out of bed, and she slowly walked down the stairs to go make breakfast. She took her time eating, brushing her hair and teeth, and getting changed. When she was finally ready to leave, she ran out her door, forgetting to lock it. On the way to the Academy, she was trying to get her mind off of her nervousness. She tried looking at leaves, at trees, at grass, at rocks, at anything, but the only thoughts that would go through her mind were 'What if I was the worst student they'd ever had?' and 'What if I was the only girl, and all the boys made fun of me?' She wanted to turn back, but at the same time, she wanted to become the ggreatest ninja of all time! Hehehe, this is good. Pass.  (Picture added by Gideon Commando for use by all crew)
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 8:42 am
Hello, my character's name is probably going to be Ishikawa Kamui, umm i don't know what village i'll be going to yet sweatdrop .
As Kamui walked down the street bathed in red, dusk, sunlight, he wondered about his future; his days at the academy were almost over, he himself started to notice the changes in his body as he blew past his "second" puberty, compared to last year he had sprouted four inches taller, his voice had deepened a lot more, he noticed a sudden, albeit convenient increase in is strength, and his skin had started to get darker, just like his grandfather's; he knew that pretty soon he'd be a full-fledged ninja ready to take on the world and assume his own responsibilities, but he wondered, had he studied enough? had he practiced his basic jutsus enough? was he in condition for fighting? all of these doubts started to creep into the back of his mind, he started to wonder if he would have to repeat a year, that maybe that would be for the best. he started to feel anxious, so he strayed from the street and onto a bench on the sidewalk, with his head hanging from his neck he questioned wether he'd actually learned and trained enough to be any good out there, they say that the academy prepares you for being genin, but...
At that moment he'd remembered the words of his grandfather, "ya might feel a li'l weak in tha knees, and your heart's a-racin', but rest assured that when tha time comes for ya to get in tha game, you'll be ready ta face whatever life throws at ya". Suddenly he felt better, his grandfather's words had always come as a comfort to him, a type of reassurance that no other could instill within him, as if the voice of 1000 years of ancestry was calling to him, letting him know that they would be there for him, to be his very strength so that he could conquer all that lie ahead of him.
"oh well, i guess all i have to do is wait and see"
With that last thought, he springed from his seat and started again towards the academy a little faster than before.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:06 am
still awaiting judgment... second post on page 154.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 8:17 pm
"No! Leave me alone! Laram help!" Laram's eyes snapped open, almost as fast as he stood up. He snatched his katana from the floor and threw the room's door open. For a split second, Laram thought that he might have broken it, but that thought passed from his mind as he dashed out the doorway. I told her she needed to stick close to me tonight. I told her. That didn't matter to Laram now. What mattered was getting to Jetta. Laram reached the steps and descended them as quickly as he could. The sight of the four men pushing around Nurse Joy and Jetta forced Laram into a rage. He roared and leaped into the air. In mid-air he thrust his right leg around and kicked the first attacker on the side of his head. The impact jarred Laram's body, but he was accustomed to such forces from his physical training. Stopping long enough to regain his footing, Laram began formulating a battle strategy in his mind. This was what he was born for, and he was exceedingly efficient in battle.
There's four of them, and from what I can tell they aren't carrying firearms. Good, that would make this more difficult. None of them are in shape, and they are obviously not fighters. I won't use my katana unless they start using weapons. I have to be careful, they have superior size and numbers on their side. I can't get cocky. Here we go, first one, baldy. Laram burst forward, and uppercutted the bald man just underneath his rib cage. The resulting force caused the man to keel over, just what Laram expected. He forced his left knee upward hitting the bald man square in the nose. The man fell backward onto the ground and writhed in pain, clutching his, now bleeding, swollen nose. Three more, though I doubt the one I kicked will be up for much more punishment. Your turn vestie. Laram heard the man with the vest trying to rush him from behind. He wheeled around and ducked under the man's fist. The poor man couldn't stop himself, and his momentum carried him beyond Laram who elbowed him in the middle of his back, causing him to crash into one of the waiting room couches.
Laram faced his new opponent, the one he had kicked. The man seemed a bit disoriented, but still wanted to fight. He held his fists close to his face, like a boxer would, and slowly stepped towards Laram. It was plain to see that the man was squaring off with him and Laram smirked. He let the man get within range and superman punched him on the top of his head. The man staggered backward, shook his head, and came in again. This time he he began swinging punches before he got close. Laram crouched and threw his leg around, tripping his attacker. He stood up and stomped on the man's chest hard, knocking the wind out of him. Laram then jerked around and grabbed vestie, who was once again charging him from behind, and threw him into the man who had a hold on Jetta's wrist. They fell backward onto the ground, and Jetta was able to break free from the man's hold. She ran over and her and Nurse Joy ran into the back room. Laram pulled his katana from its' sheath, slowly. He hoped that it would make the gang of men back off and leave. "This place and its' people are under my protection. You keep this up and I'll kill you all. Leave now, and don't come back. If I hear about you bothering Nurse Joy, or anyone for that matter, again; I will hunt each and every one of you down." The men tripped over themselves in their attempt to escape Laram's wrath. The fear in their eyes told Laram that they wouldn't bother the Pokemon center again. He was glad for that. Sighing, he sheathed his katana.
"It's alright, they're gone, and I don't think they will give you any more trouble." Laram saw Nurse Joy gingerly peek her head around a doorway, and then nod back into the room's direction. She and Jetta walked out and approached Laram. "Thank you sir, those men have been harassing me for weeks now. I didn't know what I was going to do." "It's quite alright, are either of you hurt?" Both women shook their heads no, calming Laram's nerves a bit. His exhaustion caught up with him and he yawned. "I think we need to go back and get some more sleep Jetta. We'll head out in the morning." "Huh? Oh, okay." Jetta seemed a little too shook up for sleep, but compliant. Laram gently placed his hand between her shoulder blades and pushed, letting her know to start walking. With Laram's gentle guidance, he and Jetta made their way back to their room. Once they were inside Laram closed the door behind him. Jetta gingerly slid onto the bed, and Laram took his place once again on the floor. He closed his eyes, ready to sleep when Jetta's voice broke the silence. "Laram, I want you to teach me how to use a knife. I don't care what it takes, but I want to learn." "Okay, we'll start your training tomorrow then. Goodnight Jetta." Laram smiled before he caught himself. He wished that the world was different, but it wasn't. It was a cruel world, and the best a person can do is be prepared for it. He wished that Jetta's innocence hadn't been shattered, but he was also glad he wasn't the one that had to do it. After he thought all these things, he wept inwardly. He wept for his soul.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:16 pm
@Novaru: Pass! @Space Cadet: Pass! @J3susfr3ak: Pass!
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:49 pm
Brushing his hair back behind his ear Adonis closed his eyes, the image of his fiancee coming to his mind immediately as he tried to slow his heart-rate. Sitting on the tree branch, high above the forest floor, it was impossible not to remember the day she had been taken from him. They had been out here training as they had done a thousand times before. With a sigh Adonis began to form the hand signs he had been taught as a child; snake, rooster, goat, dragon, snake, boar, dog. On and on in lighting fast movements he completed the Yin Seal technique and a black glow surrounded him as he forced his Chakra into a small tribal pattern on his forehead. As the glow ebbed on he slowly opened his eyes, remembering what the seal had been used for in the past. His father had taught him to use the seal, taught him that it seals away unused Chakra while you slept, and that he could push Chakra into it to store it. He had also taught him the Yin Seal: Release technique, a technique that allowed him to access all that stored Chakra, pulsing it through his body to heal wounds nearly instantly and increasing his strength and speed far enough to match most Taijutsu masters with released seals, though it came at a great price. He had watched his father battle with the seal released only once, the effects where instantaneous, his father's battle capabilities increased ten fold, but the moment he replaced the seal he collapsed, the process having drained him into unconsciousness. Finishing the process he stood up, stretching his muscles as watched the ground bellow. Closing his eyes once more he focused on the point deep within himself, the point that controlled his Kekkei Genkai, the Chi Hebi Metsuki, the Blood Snake Eyes. As his pupils constricted to vertical slits, his iris expanding as they changed to blood red and began to glow, the world seeming to slow down around him. Hitting the tree he drew the short sword strapped to his back before jumping into the air, spinning as he swung, his sword slicing through the leaves without any resistance. Falling to the ground he realized far to late that he had forgotten how high he really had been, and that jumping probably hadn't been the best way to get down. Reaching into his pouch he drew out the kyoketsu shoge his fiancee had given him. Throwing the knife at the tree he held onto the ball, the momentum swinging him to land on the tree.
Closing his eyes he smiled as he remembered the day she had given him the blade, "Thank you Karia.."
Pulling the chain to yank the knife out of the tree Adonis dropped silently to the forest floor as he gazed around. Collecting the chain he rewrapped it as he thought of all that he could do, and all that he couldn't. He knew relatively little ninjutsu, only one fuuijutsu and kuchiyoso, but was a decent taijutsu user. His greatest weakness was genjutsu, though he could recognize it, he had never been able to master even the simplest of genjutsu, he just couldn't fit himself into anothers shoes. Taking a length of cord he tied his hair back into a ponytail as he let his Kekkei Genkai release and the world returned to its normal speed.
Checking the time he suddenly bolted as he yelled, "I can't be late today!!"
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:59 pm
Cursed by the heartache and troubles that would make the most strong willed of men breakdown. Eiichiro had endured some of the most painful experiences one could possibly withstand in a life time. To be forced to watch your best friend, family, and neighbors all slaughtered in one night was quite a burden to bare, but Eiichiro kept his head up like his father told him. As Eiichiro sat in the mental ward of the Kumogakure hospital he thought to himself.
What am I to do now? My mother, father and sister are all dead. I'm only eight, why me?
But Eiichiro was never told why, he knew all the nurses knew why it all happened. Nothing but rage filled his emotions when he thought about it.
I must be strong like father said.
He thought to himself over and over again, but that didn't stop the tears.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:56 am
~~~~Roleplay Sample~~~~
Gasping with every heavy breathe, Julie found herself hiding behind a long row of swaying tree's. She took a peek every second to make sure her enemy was nowhere near her. "Ugh, this guy won't give up!" She thought sighing of boredom. Hearing a large sound, she took that chance to swiftly move around to the next tree. Seconds more and the blast would have blown away both her and the tree. Getting ready for her next attack, she rose her sword up and stood quiet, listening to every movement. "If this fails, I am so dead." She whispered to herself as she slowly walked out, carefully watching her surroundings. "Heh he's gone. I win." Smiling of happyness, the minute she twisted her body around, her smile faded into a scared face. "Hello there. Not giving up?"
"Don't scare me like that!" Julie shouted in a loud tone, which only annoyed her enemy even more.
"Your done." The guy had swung his large sword at Julie as fast as he could.
"Don't think so. I'm not dumb!" Turning her sword around, she caught onto the enemy sword. Both clanging in the darkness of the moon which lit across the starry sky.
"AHH." Julie rose up in a deep slumber realizing it was only a dream. "Ahh. Just a dream. And I was winning too.." Standing up, she stretched, letting out a deep yawn of relief. "Or was it?" She asked herself as her eyes gleemed out the window, the enemy's face appearing in the glass windows. Smiling happily, she ran fast out the door to live her life.
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Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:58 pm
slain: who decides whether i live or die??
Slain stood blood dripping off the hilt of his sword. he stared at the man standing in front of him.
lazeris: you ignnortant fool! I DO!!
lazeris dashed at slain. ducked under his chin and back kicked to send slain flying into the air. he watched as the battered man slammed into the ceiling and hung from that spot. he raised his hand toward the limp slain, closing his hand and dropping his fist to the ground he sent slain slamming to the floor.
Slain stood using the blade of his sword as leverage.barely standing he glanced at lazeris.
Slain: no matter how much power you have i wont be defeated, i shall win.
slain with what little power he had left in him teleported behind the man. he lefted his sword as high as possible and put all his power into one swift cut. as the sword hit the ground his head dropped and he saw the blood splatter.
slain whispered to himself: ive done it.....its over
he saw lazeris' body split then hit the ground as the blood covered the floor. he closed his eyes as his grip around his sword weakened and he dropped in the middle of the two pieces of lazeris.
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Slain wakes covered by a ragged blanket. as he threw it off and stood up he looked around fast. reached to his side to notice his sword wasnt there.
Slain to self:where the hell is my sword, let alone where the hell am i ??
a little man in a robe walks into the room and handed the sword to slain, the sword was cleaned and sharpened. slain looked at himself to realize his wounds were healed and his ripped clothing was fixed.
slain: i dont know who you are but thank you
slain bowed and then exited the room
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Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:25 am
Umeko watched the academy teacher closely as he spoke. Something about their duty to the village, what it meant to be a ninja... she had memorized it all before. Weren't those the same words that had convinced her to do this? To become a ninja despite her disability? She gritted her teeth together her eyes sliding to the table where all the new forehead protectors sat, Kanoha's leaf emblem shining on their brightly polished surfice. She wanted one so bad! As her eyes moved back to the teacher she could feel herself start to sweat. What would the graduation test be? Please don't be tai-jutsu... Please don't be tai-jutsu... What was that? Replacement technique? A blissful feeling of relief fell over the girl. Replacement, she could do that! Teruko grined turning back to stare at the headbands. You're mine!
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:06 am
I still haven't entirely finished my character profile yet but c:
Kotomi sighed, prodding the tip of her kunai idly with her index finger. There was absolutely nothing to do, even training didn't excite her interests at that particular moment. However, it was hard for her to decide which was better; doing nothing at home, or doing nothing at training.
She was weak, she knew it, she hated it. Her impulsive nature made it hard for her to stick to a single thing at any one time, and so, as a result, she usually gave up whilst trying to learn a new skill.
"Ugh," she grumbled herself. Well, that Kotomi was no more! Starting from today, Kotomi would train and work herself sore at the end of every day until she could learn just as easily and efficiently as her fellow students. And that was something she was determined to stick to!
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:15 am
@ Deaden Takai Buke
@ Gashadokuro Eiichiro
@ KateIyn
@ Konako_Akari
@ Pokey Means Business
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:20 am
kaatisu shishiza slain: who decides whether i live or die??Slain stood blood dripping off the hilt of his sword. he stared at the man standing in front of him. lazeris: you ignnortant fool! I DO!!lazeris dashed at slain. ducked under his chin and back kicked to send slain flying into the air. he watched as the battered man slammed into the ceiling and hung from that spot. he raised his hand toward the limp slain, closing his hand and dropping his fist to the ground he sent slain slamming to the floor. Slain stood using the blade of his sword as leverage.barely standing he glanced at lazeris. Slain: no matter how much power you have i wont be defeated, i shall win.slain with what little power he had left in him teleported behind the man. he lefted his sword as high as possible and put all his power into one swift cut. as the sword hit the ground his head dropped and he saw the blood splatter. slain whispered to himself: ive done it.....its overhe saw lazeris' body split then hit the ground as the blood covered the floor. he closed his eyes as his grip around his sword weakened and he dropped in the middle of the two pieces of lazeris. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Slain wakes covered by a ragged blanket. as he threw it off and stood up he looked around fast. reached to his side to notice his sword wasnt there. Slain to self:where the hell is my sword, let alone where the hell am i ??a little man in a robe walks into the room and handed the sword to slain, the sword was cleaned and sharpened. slain looked at himself to realize his wounds were healed and his ripped clothing was fixed. slain: i dont know who you are but thank youslain bowed and then exited the room Read the other Rp samples I just passed, and see how they did paragraphs, capitalization, etc... Do you have spell check? You had one error, which is pretty good, so your spelling is good. But uh, just improve your grammar a little, and you will be ready to RP with everyone! You are halfway there!
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:11 pm
Qyp @ Deaden Takai Buke
@ Gashadokuro Eiichiro
@ KateIyn
@ Konako_Akari
@ Pokey Means Business
Did this mean we all passed? Because it doesn't actually say whether we did or not..
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:46 pm
Deaden Takai Buke Qyp @ Deaden Takai Buke
@ Gashadokuro Eiichiro
@ KateIyn
@ Konako_Akari
@ Pokey Means Business Did this mean we all passed? Because it doesn't actually say whether we did or not.. You all did.
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