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 Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:08 pm
Reaver428 Kojineko Posted finally. It's small post, but it'll get us going.
I also think it's cute that Koto's going through all these emotions. It's really interesting to read. I'm trying to find that balance between "emotionally stunted" and "16 year old boy alone in a forest with two pretty girls" So far it's be fun to write...I only hope things get more awkward for him...part of me likes his reactions to new stimuli... I'm still trying to decide if he's just confused because he's "at that age" or if he's developing a crush. Thoughts? Well you gotta remember the psychological establishment of the sixteen year old and the first pretty girl to show them personal attention. I bet you still remember your first crush from that age, it is almost emblazoned into your mind whether you realize it or not ya know? So I would say it's a combination more leaning towards crush but that's up the writer. but either way i enjoy it immensly ^.^
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 11:17 pm
Vinycent11 Kojineko Posted finally. It's small post, but it'll get us going.
I also think it's cute that Koto's going through all these emotions. It's really interesting to read. Only Koto? What of Senri amd her newly found passiveness towards tbhe opposite sex? I personally like the combination of the three of you together. Senri who prefers little positive emotions, Serene who seems to have extremely cultured emotions and Koto who until recently tried to remain devoid of emotion. I think it's rather fortuitous they are together for this mission it's a fantastic read! ^.^ @Vinycent:: Senri never hated the opposite sex. Just Haruki. sweatdrop
Nothing about her has changed, unfortunately. Raking in genuine feelings from her is like pulling teeth from a sharks mouth. You're not getting them, not without having to go through the other five rows of teeth first.
However, I won't deny that she has taken a liking to Koto. He found her soft spot. Though Senri's a bit tricky to place as far as feelings go....she's extremely unpredictable. One day she gives you a nice hug and gives you a sweet compliment, the next day she's beating your face in with a blunt object because the very thought of you even breathing bothers her. Anybody that actually does end up romancing her, deserves to be commended for all the s**t they had to go through to get to that point. xd
@Reaver:: Since the season is just starting out, you've got time to experiment with both. If he's emotionally stunted, I could definitely see him going through bits and pieces of those sort of emotions at a time; like he is now. Koto is at a good pace. It's good to have your character experience some things they haven't felt before, but giving them too much at once will sometimes kick them in a direction you really didn't want them to go in. That's when you'll realize...WHOA. STOP THE FUN BUS. THIS ISN'T WHAT I WANTED!
Uh....basically what I'm saying is. Make sure you don't spoil the character with all these new-found emotions. Give it to them piece by piece. Give them a bit of time to experiment and find out what's really going on in their head. xd
You're doing fine right now though. I can really tell you're taking your time with him. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 11:28 pm
Yay the epic Rivalry is still there!
Hebi: 3?
Crow:1
... He's working on a come back... any time now lol.
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 11:40 pm
Hey~! A little rivalry never hurt anybody. Especially a friendly one...
.......Actually....
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 12:20 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:54 am
Kojineko Hey~! A little rivalry never hurt anybody. Especially a friendly one...
.......Actually.... That depends on little, a little of Senri's poison could do quite a bit to Haruki, rofl! Is it friendly, have he left despised/hated category? Actually.....? That sounds like you got an idea, a possibly detrimental to a certain avian lover idea. Should I worry?
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 5:05 am
Kojineko Vinycent11 Kojineko Posted finally. It's small post, but it'll get us going.
I also think it's cute that Koto's going through all these emotions. It's really interesting to read. Only Koto? What of Senri amd her newly found passiveness towards tbhe opposite sex? I personally like the combination of the three of you together. Senri who prefers little positive emotions, Serene who seems to have extremely cultured emotions and Koto who until recently tried to remain devoid of emotion. I think it's rather fortuitous they are together for this mission it's a fantastic read! ^.^ @Vinycent:: Senri never hated the opposite sex. Just Haruki. sweatdrop
Nothing about her has changed, unfortunately. Raking in genuine feelings from her is like pulling teeth from a sharks mouth. You're not getting them, not without having to go through the other five rows of teeth first.
However, I won't deny that she has taken a liking to Koto. He found her soft spot. Though Senri's a bit tricky to place as far as feelings go....she's extremely unpredictable. One day she gives you a nice hug and gives you a sweet compliment, the next day she's beating your face in with a blunt object because the very thought of you even breathing bothers her. Anybody that actually does end up romancing her, deserves to be commended for all the s**t they had to go through to get to that point. xd
@Reaver:: Since the season is just starting out, you've got time to experiment with both. If he's emotionally stunted, I could definitely see him going through bits and pieces of those sort of emotions at a time; like he is now. Koto is at a good pace. It's good to have your character experience some things they haven't felt before, but giving them too much at once will sometimes kick them in a direction you really didn't want them to go in. That's when you'll realize...WHOA. STOP THE FUN BUS. THIS ISN'T WHAT I WANTED!
Uh....basically what I'm saying is. Make sure you don't spoil the character with all these new-found emotions. Give it to them piece by piece. Give them a bit of time to experiment and find out what's really going on in their head. xd
You're doing fine right now though. I can really tell you're taking your time with him. 3nodding
Thank you both for the awesome input. I'll be sure to keep it all in mind. Pacing has always been a challenge for me when I write so I'm trying hard to keep his emotional and mental development from progressing too fast. I'm glad to know I'm heading in the right direction so far.
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 10:50 am
Unlike me where I kinda jumped right into it. Totally not planned sweatdrop . But I'm glad I've been able to slow down his mental instability.
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 12:27 pm
Man, I've missed so much. I wish someone would have PMed me or something, I hate keeping people waiting.
I've currently got less time because of work and I'm in the middle of making a DBZ RP, so I've been so mentally preoccupied that I forgot about the guilds tab... Thats why I kept getting that feeling I was forgetting something... sweatdrop
Anyway I'll post as Serene right away!
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 12:48 pm
Assaulted Peanut
Man, I've missed so much. I wish someone would have PMed me or something, I hate keeping people waiting.
I've currently got less time because of work and I'm in the middle of making a DBZ RP, so I've been so mentally preoccupied that I forgot about the guilds tab... Thats why I kept getting that feeling I was forgetting something... sweatdrop
Anyway I'll post as Serene right away!
Yay! The gangs all here.
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 2:38 pm
Assaulted Peanut
Man, I've missed so much. I wish someone would have PMed me or something, I hate keeping people waiting.
I've currently got less time because of work and I'm in the middle of making a DBZ RP, so I've been so mentally preoccupied that I forgot about the guilds tab... Thats why I kept getting that feeling I was forgetting something... sweatdrop
Anyway I'll post as Serene right away!
First off nice post. Second, as soon as I get back from dinner I am gonna have so much fun with Koto's response to that one! rofl
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:32 pm
I hope Serene gets a chance to use some techniques soon. I want her to use her machinegun and grenade launcher versopns of the fireball technique...
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:33 pm
Chicken consumed 3nodding check Kool-aid drank 3nodding check Stereotype confirmed 3nodding check Post made 3nodding check and next on the list.... learn to "dougie" LEARNED IT! Sorry for that "Needless" joke...don't PUNish me for it later....
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:58 pm
All of Senri's hatred.
That's all I'm gonna say. xD
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Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:14 pm
Kojineko All of Senri's hatred.
That's all I'm gonna say. xD Aw, is it that bad..? burning_eyes <-- Senri's hatred through the computer.*
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