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 Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 9:02 am
my char. is akako_ryuu a ninja assassin born of the shadows takes the side of who paids him more
akako stayin in the shadows, watching his prey, the boundy on this one is over 500k. this one was a fat man who has lost his last gamble. this time his soul is up for take. akako stalkin stayin in the shadows. the fat man reach for his keys. akako reach for his demon winds. the fat man slowly put the keys in the door. but he didnt walk in tht night.
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:09 pm
my character is Shou Univ 15. i already have a post on here from 2009 but this is my first day back in 2 years lol after the guild died down.
Shou was always a mischievous young child, being raised by his sick mother alone was very tough for him. The only thing he knew of his father was that he was tempted by the dark side of ninjutsu, and ran away from the village when shou was a mere two years old, he couldn’t remember his face. He only knew that his family was looked down upon which forced his mother to cry herself to sleep every night. He had no one to look up to and no friends. His only wish was to become a great ninja and track down his father and finally get some answers. One day shou came home from the market to find his mother in bed, he prepared her medicine and sat next to her spaced out thinking of his father. He then asked her one question. "Mother can you tell me about father again” but he received no answer. He moved closer to his mother and found that she was cold as ice. His mother had passed, and now he had no one. He slowly began to slip into a sad and dark world, the room is all of a sudden covered in darkness, no sound no light, as if he had left room he was just in. Only his mother lay in front of him suspended in the air. Falling to his knees he raised his head and began to cry, then shouting to the dark empty sky "MOTHEEEEER!" After settling down shou opened his eyes only to find that he had returned to his room, but his mother’s bed was empty, only a cold empty groove had remained.......
dun dun duuuun!!! hope you like it. thats going to be my intro i have some spice to bring back to this guild.
you better pass me kouri_chan!!! scream
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:54 pm
My character is called Shinji Mashiro, 12 years old.
‘You’re good enough to do this, you’re good enough to do anything.’ Shinji looks at his blanks reflection. He had always lacked confidence but now it was worse than ever. ‘You can do this, you’re not going to be left behind.’ Shinji’s bright blue eyes are bloodshot, bags have formed underneath. All that he had once known had to be left behind, it had to die with her. His mother’s face smiles up at him from the frame. Shinji places the frame flat down on his table and exits the room.
The cold air of outside blew against his face, it was cool, refreshing. Shinji closed his eyes and took a deep breath. With a bend of the knee he takes a leap into the air.
Landing smoothly on the ground Shinji runs. Smoothly he dodges through the crowded streets, avoiding the objectionable shouts from the people behind him. Turning a corner he slams his left heel into the ground, cancelling out a great deal of his momentum. He then pushes with the tip of his right toe, and propels his body forwards. His speed and reactions had always been his best quality, but there is still much he needs to learn.
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 11:09 am
Character Name: Tobi D. Yagami
OOC: This is an example from a battle that has already started
Now is my chance Tobi thought to himself as the rain of shuriken and kunai had finally ended and his opponent was now descending from her jump. He only had one shot at this since his opponent was already a genin and was far more experienced than himself. He started his dash toward his falling opponent coming in on an arced path towards his opponents right side charging the one and only technique he had been taught so far being that he was so young. He pulled his right arm back now flowing with unseen chakra as he reach arm's distance from his opponent who had now just landed on the ground in front of him. He let loose a furious punch into the mid section of his opponent already knowing his opponents plan. The female genin poofed revealing that it was nothing but a clone and his opponent was hidden further in the forest most likely preparing another attack. Luckily Tobi was the smart genius type who had noticed his opponents plan long ago and purposely charged in on a path aligning his punch with his real opponent hidden in the forest. Just seconds after his opponents clone had disappeared his true technique came out as his overflowing chakra in his right arm stretched forward forcefully at his opponent. Being the young ninja that he was this technique was not very powerful in true combat but against his genin level opponent it would be enough to win him the battle. Just as planned the attack landed and sent Anoko flying back into a tree just as Tobi would fall down from exhaustion. Both fighters pass out immediately and the proctor declared the fight over in a draw.
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 11:11 am
TurboTobi Character Name: Tobi D. Yagami
OOC: This is an example from a battle that has already started
Now is my chance Tobi thought to himself as the rain of shuriken and kunai had finally ended and his opponent was now descending from her jump. He only had one shot at this since his opponent was already a genin and was far more experienced than himself. He started his dash toward his falling opponent coming in on an arced path towards his opponents right side charging the one and only technique he had been taught so far being that he was so young. He pulled his right arm back now flowing with unseen chakra as he reach arm's distance from his opponent who had now just landed on the ground in front of him. He let loose a furious punch into the mid section of his opponent already knowing his opponents plan. The female genin poofed revealing that it was nothing but a clone and his opponent was hidden further in the forest most likely preparing another attack. Luckily Tobi was the smart genius type who had noticed his opponents plan long ago and purposely charged in on a path aligning his punch with his real opponent hidden in the forest. Just seconds after his opponents clone had disappeared his true technique came out as his overflowing chakra in his right arm stretched forward forcefully at his opponent. Being the young ninja that he was this technique was not very powerful in true combat but against his genin level opponent it would be enough to win him the battle. Just as planned the attack landed and sent Anoko flying back into a tree just as Tobi would fall down from exhaustion. Both fighters pass out immediately and the proctor declared the fight over in a draw.
I'm not sure if the technique i used in the post would be allowed but being that it was just an example i just went with it. If the chakra extension thing is allowed could someone tell me, thank you
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 12:33 pm
Character Name: Seth Kajiba
Rp Sample: By the time Seth reached Konoha, The Village Hidden In The Leaves, he fell to his knees and thought to himself if this would be a a turn for greatness in his life, or a turn for the worst. "This must be it... but I still have to go to the academy. I haven't even graduated from a school." Seth sees a man with a headband with the Leaf Village Symbol on it and the man was wearing a blue outfit patrolling the streets. "Hey kid what are you doing out here it's past curfew hours."
"Curfew hours?"
"Yes don't you know Konoha is going through a civil war, go home and don't let me catch you again" The man jumped out of sight. Seth had nowhere to go so he decided to sleep outside the village right beside a tree...waiting to see what wold happen in the morning.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:49 pm
Ok here goes nothing. My characters name is sinjoki akimon. I haven't decided on a village yet.
Sinjoki was looking down from his high perch at his target, a rogue ninja from the sunagakure village with info on techniques that could raise the most feared villain in all of the villages history, sasuke uchiha. Sinjoki was to reclaim the intel and destroy all evidence that the ninja ever existed. It was a ruthless job, but it promised a fun challenge. "ok, time to get this over with." sinjoki muttered preparing to pounce.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:19 pm
This is Uchiyama Hirokuma II first entrance to the Academy.
RP sample:
Walking into the hollow halls of the silent academy wasn't new to him. He frequently comes here on the weekends practicing his throwing accuracy. Making his way down the hall he reaches into his pack getting the necessary tools. Holding the kunai rather loosely in his palm he touches the point of the kunai seeing if its dull or not. Hirokuma II smirked as he stayed up all last night sharping every weapon he had for the training in the morning. Spinning the kunai on his index finger he finally enters the academy training room and no one was in sight. Training solo is better for Hiro because he likes to peace and quiet of it all. But that silence never lasts long as he hears an incoming conversation two students are having about the recent "civil war". Hirokuma haven't been in the Konohagakure long enough to know the full details going around but it does sound interesting. Back in the Mist, civil wars were common there but here their is a little bit more authority and order.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:21 pm
Apologies for delay. Pass. Pass. Pass. The others have another chance. I want to see longer RP samples, and/or better grammar.
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:23 pm
iDizzy Da Kidd This is Uchiyama Hirokuma II first entrance to the Academy.
RP sample:
Walking into the hollow halls of the silent academy wasn't new to him. He frequently comes here on the weekends practicing his throwing accuracy. Making his way down the hall he reaches into his pack getting the necessary tools. Holding the kunai rather loosely in his palm he touches the point of the kunai seeing if its dull or not. Hirokuma II smirked as he stayed up all last night sharping every weapon he had for the training in the morning. Spinning the kunai on his index finger he finally enters the academy training room and no one was in sight. Training solo is better for Hiro because he likes to peace and quiet of it all. But that silence never lasts long as he hears an incoming conversation two students are having about the recent "civil war". Hirokuma haven't been in the Konohagakure long enough to know the full details going around but it does sound interesting. Back in the Mist, civil wars were common there but here their is a little bit more authority and order. You just posted this... I do not think you really need to worry about doing this, because you have RPed here already, so you can pass automatically. I did skim it for mistakes, but there was none, nice.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 1:50 pm
Ok, second try. Still haven't decided on a village. My names still sinjoki akimon.
"OH,YEAH!!!!!!!" Sinjoki Akimon screamed into the air as he walked towards the gate. He had just received his newest mission, to track and destroy a otonin that was a known supporter of the long dead orochimaru. All of the village leaders were worried that he would try to resurect orochimaru, so they went to sinjoki.
It was already dark when sinjoki thought he heard his first signs of another ninja in his vicinity. He slowed his leaps to a stop and took his perch on a sturdy oak limb. "Ok, come out come out wherever you are," sinjoki said under his breath.
"Here I am! RIGHT UNDER YOUR NOSE!" sinjoki's target screamed as he hurled himself out of sinjoki's shadow in an attempt to hurl a kunai through sinjoki's skull. *poof* "damn a shadow clone. Now, where's the real one?"
Sinjoki had noticed the ninjas presence a long time ago and had decided to secretly slip out of the main path and leave a shadow clone in his place. Sinjoki decided he'd have some fun, so he used ground hog style: head hunter jutsu. Leaving the target hanging by his neck through an oak branch. "now what should I do with you. I think I'll just get it over with fast." and it was all over as the targets body fell to the ground whene his skull was crushed by sinjoki's heavy boot. He then leaped to the ground and destroyed the rest of the evidence of the ninjas existence.
I know I controlled a second character and I know it was very long,but I just wanted to be thorough and not have to do it again
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 8:35 pm
Shinji Ikari36_8 Ok, second try. Still haven't decided on a village. My names still sinjoki akimon. "OH,YEAH!!!!!!!" Sinjoki Akimon screamed into the air as he walked towards the gate. He had just received his newest mission, to track and destroy a otonin that was a known supporter of the long dead orochimaru. All of the village leaders were worried that he would try to resurect orochimaru, so they went to sinjoki. It was already dark when sinjoki thought he heard his first signs of another ninja in his vicinity. He slowed his leaps to a stop and took his perch on a sturdy oak limb. "Ok, come out come out wherever you are," sinjoki said under his breath. "Here I am! RIGHT UNDER YOUR NOSE!" sinjoki's target screamed as he hurled himself out of sinjoki's shadow in an attempt to hurl a kunai through sinjoki's skull. *poof* "damn a shadow clone. Now, where's the real one?" Sinjoki had noticed the ninjas presence a long time ago and had decided to secretly slip out of the main path and leave a shadow clone in his place. Sinjoki decided he'd have some fun, so he used ground hog style: head hunter jutsu. Leaving the target hanging by his neck through an oak branch. "now what should I do with you. I think I'll just get it over with fast." and it was all over as the targets body fell to the ground whene his skull was crushed by sinjoki's heavy boot. He then leaped to the ground and destroyed the rest of the evidence of the ninjas existence. I know I controlled a second character and I know it was very long,but I just wanted to be thorough and not have to do it again This looks good to me, though there are a few places when capitalization should be at the beginning of a sentence, as well as when it comes to names. Correct that real quick and I'll pass you.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 8:46 pm
Rin Kairiu Shinji Ikari36_8 Ok, second try. Still haven't decided on a village. My names still sinjoki akimon. "OH,YEAH!!!!!!!" Sinjoki Akimon screamed into the air as he walked towards the gate. He had just received his newest mission, to track and destroy a otonin that was a known supporter of the long dead orochimaru. All of the village leaders were worried that he would try to resurect orochimaru, so they went to sinjoki. It was already dark when sinjoki thought he heard his first signs of another ninja in his vicinity. He slowed his leaps to a stop and took his perch on a sturdy oak limb. "Ok, come out come out wherever you are," sinjoki said under his breath. "Here I am! RIGHT UNDER YOUR NOSE!" sinjoki's target screamed as he hurled himself out of sinjoki's shadow in an attempt to hurl a kunai through sinjoki's skull. *poof* "damn a shadow clone. Now, where's the real one?" Sinjoki had noticed the ninjas presence a long time ago and had decided to secretly slip out of the main path and leave a shadow clone in his place. Sinjoki decided he'd have some fun, so he used ground hog style: head hunter jutsu. Leaving the target hanging by his neck through an oak branch. "now what should I do with you. I think I'll just get it over with fast." and it was all over as the targets body fell to the ground whene his skull was crushed by sinjoki's heavy boot. He then leaped to the ground and destroyed the rest of the evidence of the ninjas existence. I know I controlled a second character and I know it was very long,but I just wanted to be thorough and not have to do it again This looks good to me, though there are a few places when capitalization should be at the beginning of a sentence, as well as when it comes to names. Correct that real quick and I'll pass you. "OH,YEAH!!!!!!!" Sinjoki Akimon screamed into the air as he walked towards the gate. He had just received his newest mission, to track and destroy an Otonin that was a known supporter of the long dead Orochimaru. All of the village leaders were worried that he would try to resurect Orochimaru, so they went to Sinjoki. It was already dark when Sinjoki thought he heard his first signs of another ninja in his vicinity. He slowed his leaps to a stop and took his perch on a sturdy oak limb. "Ok, come out come out wherever you are," Sinjoki said under his breath. "Here I am! RIGHT UNDER YOUR NOSE!" Sinjoki's target screamed as he hurled himself out of Sinjoki's shadow in an attempt to hurl a kunai through Sinjoki's skull. *Poof* "Damn a shadow clone. Now, where's the real one?" Sinjoki had noticed the ninjas presence a long time ago and had decided to secretly slip out of the main path and leave a shadow clone in his place. Sinjoki decided he'd have some fun, so he used ground hog style: head hunter jutsu. Leaving the target hanging by his neck through an oak branch. "Now what should I do with you. I think I'll just get it over with fast." And it was all over as the targets body fell to the ground whene his skull was crushed by Sinjoki's heavy boot. He then leaped to the ground and destroyed the rest of the evidence of the ninjas pitiful existence.
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Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 8:55 pm
Shinji Ikari36_8 Rin Kairiu Shinji Ikari36_8 Ok, second try. Still haven't decided on a village. My names still sinjoki akimon. "OH,YEAH!!!!!!!" Sinjoki Akimon screamed into the air as he walked towards the gate. He had just received his newest mission, to track and destroy a otonin that was a known supporter of the long dead orochimaru. All of the village leaders were worried that he would try to resurect orochimaru, so they went to sinjoki. It was already dark when sinjoki thought he heard his first signs of another ninja in his vicinity. He slowed his leaps to a stop and took his perch on a sturdy oak limb. "Ok, come out come out wherever you are," sinjoki said under his breath. "Here I am! RIGHT UNDER YOUR NOSE!" sinjoki's target screamed as he hurled himself out of sinjoki's shadow in an attempt to hurl a kunai through sinjoki's skull. *poof* "damn a shadow clone. Now, where's the real one?" Sinjoki had noticed the ninjas presence a long time ago and had decided to secretly slip out of the main path and leave a shadow clone in his place. Sinjoki decided he'd have some fun, so he used ground hog style: head hunter jutsu. Leaving the target hanging by his neck through an oak branch. "now what should I do with you. I think I'll just get it over with fast." and it was all over as the targets body fell to the ground whene his skull was crushed by sinjoki's heavy boot. He then leaped to the ground and destroyed the rest of the evidence of the ninjas existence. I know I controlled a second character and I know it was very long,but I just wanted to be thorough and not have to do it again This looks good to me, though there are a few places when capitalization should be at the beginning of a sentence, as well as when it comes to names. Correct that real quick and I'll pass you. "OH,YEAH!!!!!!!" Sinjoki Akimon screamed into the air as he walked towards the gate. He had just received his newest mission, to track and destroy an Otonin that was a known supporter of the long dead Orochimaru. All of the village leaders were worried that he would try to resurect Orochimaru, so they went to Sinjoki. It was already dark when Sinjoki thought he heard his first signs of another ninja in his vicinity. He slowed his leaps to a stop and took his perch on a sturdy oak limb. "Ok, come out come out wherever you are," Sinjoki said under his breath. "Here I am! RIGHT UNDER YOUR NOSE!" Sinjoki's target screamed as he hurled himself out of Sinjoki's shadow in an attempt to hurl a kunai through Sinjoki's skull. *Poof* "Damn a shadow clone. Now, where's the real one?" Sinjoki had noticed the ninjas presence a long time ago and had decided to secretly slip out of the main path and leave a shadow clone in his place. Sinjoki decided he'd have some fun, so he used ground hog style: head hunter jutsu. Leaving the target hanging by his neck through an oak branch. "Now what should I do with you. I think I'll just get it over with fast." And it was all over as the targets body fell to the ground whene his skull was crushed by Sinjoki's heavy boot. He then leaped to the ground and destroyed the rest of the evidence of the ninjas pitiful existence. Excellent ^_^ You pass
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 10:56 pm
Ariana slept silently. Her breathing was steady. She has been waiting all Summer for this day. Today was her first day at the Academy. When her alarm clock woke, she slammed her fist down on top of it to shut it up. She despised the sound it made: Beep. Beep. Beep. It was the most obnoxious noise in the world. She then sat up straight in her bed, wiping her messy and tangled hair out of her face. "I thought I'd be more excited," she murmured, feeling unseay and nervous. She dragged her butt out of bed, and she slowly walked down the stairs to go make breakfast.
She took her time eating, brushing her hair and teeth, and getting changed. When she was finally ready to leave, she ran out her door, forgetting to lock it. On the way to the Academy, she was trying to get her mind off of her nervousness. She tried looking at leaves, at trees, at grass, at rocks, at anything, but the only thoughts that would go through her mind were 'What if I was the worst student they'd ever had?' and 'What if I was the only girl, and all the boys made fun of me?' She wanted to turn back, but at the same time, she wanted to become the ggreatest ninja of all time!
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