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 Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 9:31 am
Awesome! The more the merrier they say (that phrase has been overused).
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 9:35 am
Aqua is what got me and Jeff together, so I like forcing him to come back and RP. smile
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 11:42 am
Guys, I locked the mission grading board for now 'cause we only got one person grading atm it seems and we're getting backed up. Hold on to your missions for now, Brian will be able to lock and unlock it to post your grades (although at this point I'm gonna start grading too). Then, when all the current missions are done with, I'm gonna archive the current mission board and start a fresh new one for the revamp so we don't have pre-revamp missions stuck with post-revamp missions. Just bear with it for now. I'm gonna find my red pen!
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 11:47 am
MaddyMage Guys, I locked the mission grading board for now 'cause we only got one person grading atm it seems and we're getting backed up. Hold on to your missions for now, Brian will be able to lock and unlock it to post your grades (although at this point I'm gonna start grading too). Then, when all the current missions are done with, I'm gonna archive the current mission board and start a fresh new one for the revamp so we don't have pre-revamp missions stuck with post-revamp missions. Just bear with it for now. I'm gonna find my red pen! (Grading thread reopens- I post 50 missions, insert evil laughter) Anyway, it's good to hear about your changes.
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 12:49 pm
Kinda multi-tasking, but I got your birch's break-in mission graded. Gonna go back through a couple pages and see if anything went un-graded previously before continuing. It's gonna take me a while, so please be patient. smile
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 1:08 pm
MaddyMage This was a fun read. You made breaking into the lab seem a little more complicated than it probably really is, but you made it work, and it made the mission really interesting. It was very creative, but there were a few spelling and grammar errors. It was technically a level 1 mission, so I'll let those errors pass, but re-read a little more carefully for the higher up missions, 'cause the standards are set higher for them. Pass. Keep the money and the Pokemon you caught. Wow, I thought I had spell checked and grammar checked all my rp's, I am normally pretty good about that, but after going over it again, I was able to fix a number of mistakes, lol. I keep copies of my rp's in my profiles page, so that's where I made the corrections. I hope I didn't mess up on the other rp's too. I'll look them over again, just in case, on my profiles page. Thanks for the compliments, though. MaddyMage Kinda multi-tasking, but I got your birch's break-in mission graded. Gonna go back through a couple pages and see if anything went un-graded previously before continuing. It's gonna take me a while, so please be patient. smile I can be patient. cool
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 1:28 pm
Decided I'm not gonna bother grading any of the missions that were posted before the revamp.
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 3:05 pm
MaddyMage Well done! Good length for a level 1 mission. Only hiccup I found really was the fact that you stated each of your character's had six Pokemon on them and then you had your seventh Pokemon (the ones that were released from the magical coins) appear on your person as well. You didn't attempt to use these newly acquired Pokemon, so I won't give you any flak for it, but next time, I would either keep five Pokemon on you, allowing for newly acquired Pokemon to appear to you right away, or have these magical coin Pokemon mysteriously appear in your PC storage. Keep the money and the Pokemon! Dooooooooooh. (Facepalms) lol, yup, I messed that up, sorry. I totally didn't think of that, but I'm glad that apart from that one oversight you enjoyed it MaddyMage I don't think the Chef class will be returning (according to Jeff), unless we find a better use for it with Pokeblocks or something. ANYWAYS, the mission brief calls for you and your Pokemon to serve the meal, so I'm not completely sure what to grade this mission. I never researched the classes, so I don't know what part Pokemon are ultimately supposed to play in the Chef class. You can re-write the mission to incorporate your Pokemon, or accept half reward money. I guess I'll go ahead and tweak this mission and incorporate a couple Pokemon somehow, since I would want to do that anyway for my personal profile page. I guess I overlooked that particular instruction, lol. Anyway, if I am going to edit it anyway, I may as well get the extra pokebucks for it, right?
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:05 pm
Almost done. I think I got like two more left to grade.
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:49 pm
Yeah, edit it and then come tell me. I'll read it over and such. If you want, bold or make the edited parts red so I don't have to fully re-read. If I approve, you can accept the full reward. On the last mission now, so I'll leave the mission room unlocked, but once it's graded I'm gonna archive the current room (lock it again) and make a brand new one.
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:57 pm
MaddyMage Yeah, edit it and then come tell me. I'll read it over and such. If you want, bold or make the edited parts red so I don't have to fully re-read. If I approve, you can accept the full reward. On the last mission now, so I'll leave the mission room unlocked, but once it's graded I'm gonna archive the current room (lock it again) and make a brand new one. Cool, well, I just about have another rp finished, so should I post that too, or should I just edit this one and let you create the new thread before I post it?
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 5:03 pm
MaddyMage Pass, but only just that. Blizzard is an inaccurate attack, but I'll let the constant hitting slide since you did have two Pokemon focusing the attack instead of just one. Also, you did give yourself an advantage by forgetting that Hyper Beam requires a recharge (you could've gotten several free hits in at a few points of the battle) and that Slakings have to "laze about" every two or three turns, I believe. AP doesn't exist anymore, but you can take 300 PD as a reward. I did remember that Slakings laze about, that was why I made a point to attack twice for every time that the Slaking's attacked, though I could have been clearer, I suppose. Hyper beam is a good move for Slaking, though, since it 'recharges' on the same turn that Slaking is a lazy couch, basically, so every time it does attack it can use Hyper Beam. That was just a cool combo I decided to have the wicked chef use, with choice specs.
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 5:12 pm
Wait 'til I post the new thread. You can be the first one to post in it! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 5:19 pm
MaddyMage Wait 'til I post the new thread. You can be the first one to post in it! biggrin Okay. I can guarantee you'll laugh your a** off at the ending of this one, lol. At least, I believe you will. It gave me the chuckles.
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Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2013 5:35 pm
WOOO RP soon and I can't access Archie's account!! YAY!
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