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Dice walked into the towns area. He looked around a studied his surrounding. He was sent on a covert mission and had to scope out any odd activities. He then noticed two ninja creeping down a dark alley. He decided to trail them. As he went to jump to another building two ninja ambushed him. He flip and dodged the two attacks.
"Whoa. Now that was a close one" said Dice. "How did you guys know I was here.''
The ninja did not answer. Dice then glared them down as he safely landed on a nearby roof. He tossed two fuma surikens. The ninja jumped out of the way. As Dice performed handseals and the surikens suddenly made a U-turn at the ninjas. They jumped out of the way but was distracted and Dice was underneath them. He jumped into the air after them. The ninja shot fireballs.
The firball hit Dice and he slammed into the roof of a building when the ninja went into pursuitto finish him off they noticed that he had perform a subsitution jutsu and and that a strange gas was being given off. They looked up and the sky was dark. They were caputured in a genjutsu. The ninja began to hear a very loud screeching noise until they fainted. Dice smirked but he had lost his main target. He had to go back to his village and tell them that he had failed.

Your writing is good, but could you make it a little longer? biggrin

Good, very solid. The only ting I noticed was "thru" which should be "through". "thru" qualifies as text speak, and that's generally frowned upon in an rp. Regardless, Approved biggrin

Tenshi looked at the ceiling above him, his eyes sore from lack of sleep throughout the night. Who could blame him? He had been waiting for this day for as long as he could remember, Graduation day... There was a knock at his door as his mother cracked it open, "Tenshi dear, time to get up. You don't want to be late for the big day. Breakfast is on the table..." She smiled as she closed the door behind her.

Tenshi didn't move for a few minutes until he got the strength to peel himself out from under the covers. He put on his graduation clothes that took him half an hour to pick out. He had decided on a white kimono, embroidered with multiple black dragons. He opened the door of his bedroom rubbing his eyes to the bright sunlight. Walking past the bathroom he stopped, stepped back, and looked into the mirror to see his ridiculous bed ridden hair. He took his hands and ran it through several times until it was decent enough.

Sitting at the table he noticed his father was gone. "As usual..."

"Now darling, you know he would be here if he could..." He was always out on missions. Tenshi couldn't think of one that he would turn down. His mother gave him a bowl of rice, scrambled eggs, bacon, and sausage. "Eat up... we need you nice and strong as you receive your headband." Tenshi's face lit up as he quickly ate his food and ran out the door waving good bye to his mother, "They grow up so fast...."

I like it. A few grammar mistakes but nothing that detracts from readability.. approved razz

Yes. Just make up one on the fly. smile

Today was a beautiful day.....
there were few clouds in the skies today.
Saito had been walking all morning in the forest,he spotted a clearing up ahead. He put his head down to better help him contemplate his moves. He looked up again and he spotted the same clearing.
He thought to himself for a second. `The distance is the same, even though i know time has not stopped. Now that i think about it that clearing has been the same distance for along time now.` Just then a figure emerged from the ground. It took the form of a strange creature resembling that of a demon. Saito eye's widened as he stepped back. The demon let out a blood curdling scream an launched at him with amazing speed,becoming a blur. Saito jumped back a few times then high into the air. The demon was gone but Saito knew better, he looked to the skies above him. There the demon was in place of the sun, fallin toward him rapidly. `Something is defintely wrong with this picture

Saito swung the shield from his back to his front puttin his right arm through the straps. The demon met Saito's shield with a mighty KLANG!. `Shi--`. Saito rocketed toward the ground. He flipped before the impact, his legs hitting the ground. The momentum transfered caused the ground to crack from the pressure. Saito shook his head,and tightened his body. He dropped the angle of the shield downward abit and there was a loud scraping noise. Saito was launched back into the air spiraling fast. He opened his body up to slow down, he held his shield tight and the demon was infront of him again. `Now that i really ,really think about it...I was in a mountain area. `Sudden change in scenery, random monster, unbeleivable physical strength....all out of nowhere......`. Saito managed to block again but was heading straight for the ground. `This is...Genjutsu!!`. Saito clasped his hands together and formed the handseal for genjutsu release. The demon immdeately disintegrates,then his enviornment disentagrates.

The blue skies vanish and are replaced with grey skies and thunderous clouds. Twister speed type winds traversing an entier mountain. `And to top it off...im falling back first off the side of the mountain`.Saito look at the used to be forest shift into a dangerous mountain side. Saito smirked abit and clapped his hands. He continued to descend at a fast rate.

"I applaud you mysterious one, your genjutsu is very powerful", torted Saito.`To think i was going to jump off this mountain side`. In the blink of an eye Saito performed an earth jutsu. An earth clone formed out of the mountain side a few yards below him. It tensed up and sprung upward diagonally zooming through the air. The earth clone neared Saito and with His right arm extended he managed to catch Saito's ankle. `Hehehe...good save me`. Saito's fallin speed was shaved by this interception but now both Saito and his clone were falling. The clone gathered all its uper body strength and swung Saito back towards the mountain. He neared the mountain and a single kunai came to greet him. He deflected it with ease,but his keen eye sight spotted a tag on it. Saito moved his right arm in the direction of the kunai. Simultaneously the clone yelled out, "It's a--".

~BOOM~

The explosion served as a boost for Saito. He landed on a jagged rock protruding from the mountain side. The clone fist pumped and crumbled. The rain beat down hard,making difficult to see. Saito performed an earth jutsu with one hand and touched the ground. He felt movement higher up, and it kept moving. Saito gripped his shield tightly and blazed up the mountain side running faster and faster. He became a blur within a few steps and seemed to phase in and out before long. Saito was pushing it, he didn't slow down. Not even for the plateau that was coming up. He placed his right foot on the edge of the plateau and :flew into the air. Just as he reached the top, the mysterious ninja also reached the top. Saito just kept sailing higher and higher. He soon touched the clouds themselves. The mysterious ninja looked up and stared. Saito stopped and hit the arc of his jump. He descend with his shield first putting his shoulder into it. As he neared the plateau he picked up tremendous speed. Before long his momentum made him a human rock. Another earth jutsu was performed and his body turned hard and black. `Steel body with this speed, lets see you deal with this`. Saito's body was now making a wailing noise as it raced toward the plateau. Saito closed his eye's and hit the plateau like a comet......


Find out what happens next on Saito's Adventures: Episode 2..conclusion...lol Sorry didnt have time to touch it up the way i wanted to plus th original version was much better...

The forest was quiet, save for the barely noticeable passage of a lone figure. It carefully made its way between the mighty tree like one of the animals of the forest, its careful, but steady and strong movements and attitude reminiscent of a great wolf of the forest.

Travis sighed, taking in the quiet of the forest. He had been walking for hours, away from the village. He didn't particularity like it there, all the people and their bustle. All of it was far too much for him to understand at his age, so he retreated into the woods whenever he had the chance.

He was at home in the wilderness, never getting lost and often staying the night in a secluded spot, a practice that drop the instructors at the Academy crazy. however he always made it back in time for classes.

Travis stopped on a great boulder, which broke the sea of the seemingly endless forest and allowed light through the canopy. One side sloped down, while the other three where almost sheer up to the height of 14 feet. Travis choose the left, and steepest side. With a jump he swiftly climbed had over hand up onto the rock, using his metal shod boots to push himself up. As he broke the crest of the rock he froze.

A large, VERY large Wolf with dark grey fur was looking right at him as it reclined on the rock. It regarded him with a almost amused expression, as if to say "There is a easier way up, you know..."
Travis carefully raised him self up and eased on the edge of the rock, all the while looking at the wolf carefully. It watched him back, before turning away to survey the forest around them.

Travis Also looked out over the forest, glaceing every now and again at the huge wolf. The wolf also looked at him every few minutes, still with a slightly amused look as if to say "Well, you didn't run off screaming, you really are a odd fellow aren't you. " Together they kept watch over the forest for a few hours, each enjoying the others company in silence.

Then the Wolf rose, and Travis followed suite. It gracefully moved down the steep incline and to the edge of the forest, however it paused before vanishing into the tree line. It looks back at Travis and seemed to wink at him before turning away with what almost looked like a smile into the woods and vanishing from sight.

Travis didn't waste any time in making his way back to the village, however this strange event would linger in his mind for the rest of his life....

(There we got, nice and short story about a boy in the woods. Sorry for the lack of blood and carnage, but i don't see a 11-12 year old doing the kind of killing i am used to writing.)