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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 8:22 pm

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Dave woke up lying on the ground and found himself sitting dead "what the F%#@, how did this happen, oh.... thats right, god that sucks" Dave said as he sood up and looked around and saw a few other of the genin that were from the chunin exam, "man that was insane, i got my head chopped off"

A mysterious dark figure was standing in front of him and it raised up a hand. As if like magic, Dave would rise to his feet as if under the man's control. "Ah... Another Shinobi from the Land of Wind I see." Said a voice that seemed to prolong the 's' to make a snake sound. The figure then started to walk towards Dave. "Boy, I see some promise within you so I will bestow you with power." Said the figure. As it stepped into the light, it was revealed that it was Orochimaru. Suddenly, the man bent down to the boy's ear. "Do not worry. Everything will be just fine." He whispered and then bit down into the boy's neck. A mysterious symbol appeared on the middle of his chest bone and then Orochimaru released his bite. The boy would soon pass out but he would still hear Orochimaru's final words, "Go and live under me. Never disobey me and know this: Once you have received a seal, your mine and hopefully you won't be one of the many others that lost theirs." Then, Orochimaru disappeared.

Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 8:40 pm

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Dave woke up lying on the ground and found himself sitting dead "what the F%#@, how did this happen, oh.... thats right, god that sucks" Dave said as he sood up and looked around and saw a few other of the genin that were from the chunin exam, "man that was insane, i got my head chopped off"

A mysterious dark figure was standing in front of him and it raised up a hand. As if like magic, Dave would rise to his feet as if under the man's control. "Ah... Another Shinobi from the Land of Wind I see." Said a voice that seemed to prolong the 's' to make a snake sound. The figure then started to walk towards Dave. "Boy, I see some promise within you so I will bestow you with power." Said the figure. As it stepped into the light, it was revealed that it was Orochimaru. Suddenly, the man bent down to the boy's ear. "Do not worry. Everything will be just fine." He whispered and then bit down into the boy's neck. A mysterious symbol appeared on the middle of his chest bone and then Orochimaru released his bite. The boy would soon pass out but he would still hear Orochimaru's final words, "Go and live under me. Never disobey me and know this: Once you have received a seal, your mine and hopefully you won't be one of the many others that lost theirs." Then, Orochimaru disappeared.

Dave looked at Orochimaru shocked to see the snake sanin then fell over and said "y...ye.....yes...ma...master" then Dave fainted later when he woke up he found himself in pain and a curse seal on his chest "is this the Earth seal?" Dave found himself asking then did a few handsigns and summoned his puppet to his side in the afterlife he saw that his personal puppet had come to his side was still in a good condition and also found himself in pain from using his chakra to summon it. Dave then looked at his puppet, "i need to learn some new techniques, maybe i should practice some snake style techniques, since Orochimaru has bestowed this to me" Dave said then started to practice the Object shuriken technique
(1&2:7)

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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 10:44 pm

Dave walked around the afterlife world checking out what was all there and grabbing his curse seal on his chest every now and then while walking about finding random items that were laying around and taking them and carrying them along with his puppet who was walking behind him because of the mokujin he did. Dave found enough items and began to practice the technique starting by using 1 item at a time launching them at his puppet for practice
(3:7)
Dave continued to practice the object shuriken technique but had to stop after each try at the technique because of the burning pain it created by the curse seal, and along with the pain every time Dave would use a jutsu he had the seal encroach over more and more of his body. slowly the the curse seal began to encroach over a big chunk of his body untill it hit half of his body and wouldn't go over any more of it.
(4:7)
as Dave practiced his old techniques at the same time as the object shuriken technique and as Dave practiced he tried to practice a bit of tijutsu at the same time so he could stay strong both in ninjutsu and tijutsu and Dave found that as he practiced he started to become faster and faster as he trained and practiced the object shuriken then Dave would find a place to rest after he had found that he would take small naps to recharg his chakra
(5:7)
when Dave woke up from one of his naps he looked down at his chest and saw the curse seal wass begining to glow and Dave could tell that it knew he was going to start his training again so Dave started to collect his chakra and set down his puppet "Mokujin" Dave sad as he started to do his handsigns and the puppet began to move and Dave continued to do his handsigns "Mas puppet clones technique" Dave said then walked a ways backwards and then started to do his technique once again doing more handsigns "object shuriken technique" he said then the pile of objects he had been using as projectiles began to lift up and flew straight to the puppet clones and very quickly they began to disipear as they were each hit by an item then disipeared and Dave then started to create more of them with the mas puppet clone technique, Dave then would finish attacking them with the object shuriken technique, "i think its done for now" Dave said then fell over after finishing destroying the last of the clones.
(6&7:7)

Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 3:03 pm

xavier started o get off the ground waking up, wow what happened, oh ya that's right my head was chopped off ouch, that must have hurt pretty bad, good thing i died quickly.Xavier looked around wondering where the other dead people were, xavier started to walk off into the distance seeing a blue light. After walking a couple of miles he saw some tree's and decide to make a tent made from sticks, after he created this tent made from sticks he layed under it and started to drift to sleep wondering what he shall do the next day and he closed his eye's lightly sound a sleep next to the fire.

1/9 Earth Flow River

xavier woke up the next morning bitten by a bunch of dead misqitoues, "ouch what the who are you?" he said as one bite him on the arm and saw a man sitting next to the fire he made from the other night, the man replied, "i'm a hokage and would like you to follow me to my village"? xavier wondered a hokage that can't be as he thought to himself a image flickered through his mind "your the one that does earth style moves a lot aren't you?" xavier asked with doubt in his mind, the hokage replied "yes would you like to try one once we get to the village" he asked.

2/9 Earth Flow River

xavier followed the hokage towards the blue light's, as they walked there he asked the hokage so the blue light's thats your village, i saw it in the distance the light's i was going to walk there this morning. the hokage looked at him and asked him "how did you die you look like a strong nin for your age and a smart one?" xavier told him about the chunnin exams and howhe was fighting a stronger opponent trying to pass the exams with flying colors" the hokage laughed and replied "i see ok lets hurrry up and get to the village" the hokage and xavier quickly ran through he forest quitely.

3/9 Earth Flow River

as they appeared entering in the village they saw a sign that had written on it *whomever enters this village must be in holy spirit*, xavier entered this village knowing many of his comrads from the exams that he had probably killed were here. the hokage told xavier "this village is for all strong and master nins go when they die it's a honor for a genin like yourself to be here". xavier smiled at the hokage with a sparkle in his eye "wow this place is awesome" xavier said bodly the village was made from the strongest material pearl white with a gold trim. the hokage smiled as they walked hrough the streets and told xavier "this material is called marblet"

4/9 Earth Flow River

as xavier and the hokage walked towards the huge place over looking the village he saw some his freinds he had killed and walked by them dissapointed that he didn't win the exams, xavier asked the hokage, "what technique am i going to try and learn??" the hokage looked at him and replied "the technique that goes by the name of Earth Flow River it creates a huge river of mud that the opponent can be trapped or drowned in if held under it's a very useful technique to learn and master at your point of time that's why you should learn it".

5/9 Earth Flow River

xavier heard this wise man that claimed the title of hokage and followed his foot steps all the way to the huge palace they were going to, xavier entered this building and dare not touch any of these objects and antiques, xavier yelled to the hokage "what are we doing here??" he looked at xavier as if he was crazy and then replied "don't yell in here and were here to meet the other hokages for your training", after knowing this xavier wandered into the next room with the hokages that had just came down the stair case and sat on a red velvet couch and listened to the wise men talk about all of these genin enter the afterlife.

6/9 Earth Flow River

xavier noticed that everything went dead silent after they were done talking and the hokage that he was following boldy stepped out and said, "well his young genin want's to learn one of my technique's so i guess i'll teach him one i'll be back in a little bit", he said this while dragging himself and xavier out of the palace doors xavier laughed, "no wonder you wander out of these walls of the village those guys are crazy, wise, and weird", the hokage looked at him with a evil blood lust eye "why do you think i drug you out of those doors so eager to teach you" the hokage laughed.

7/9 Earth Flow River

the hokage created water from his chakra and placed it on the ground, then told xavier to run it into the soil moving and changing the dirt to mud, xavier nodded his head in a agrement, the hokage ran off while saying "i'll be back i have to do some errands", xavier yelled to him "but wait i need to ask yo-....nevermind", xavier sat under a shady tree and started to flow his chakra and pour the water trough every crack in the soil making and forming it into mud, after this the hokage jumped out from the tree's saying "i'm back how are you doing??".

8/9 Earth Flow River

xavier replied to the old mans wise and crackly voice, "i made it very muddy now what do i need to do??" the hokage laughed, "easy just move all of the chakra and flow it with the mud and water in the postion you want it to go", xavier blushed in embarrasement "o ya i understand now!", he said very determined xavier, started to wave his hand side to side trying to push the chakra and mud to each side quicker and quicker trying to keep it still in the form of mud and with a huge surge of chakra strait infront of him, a huge river of mud flow went shooting strait out.

9/9 Earth Flow River {complete}

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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:21 am

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The Hokage motioned Kuma to follow him back to the village as he started to explain to his young student the specifics of his next technique.
“There is no doubt in my mind that you have learned how to summon? Is that correct?”
Kuma thought about it in his head and nodded, but realized that he was behind his teacher and he couldn’t see him, he pipped up.
“Yes sir, from my former clan I learned how to summon minor beasts. It was a simple palm slap on the ground and an underling appeared.”
The Third Hokage put his hands on his chin as he seemed to be rethinking something in his head but quickly shrugged it off.
“Ok then, so you’ve never actually entered into a blood contract with a animal god?” He said this as he stopped walking and turned around to look in his pupil’s eyes.

(King Enma Summon-1/30)

Kuma stopped short of his master’s serious face as he ran through the thoughts in his own mind. “No sir,” he began, “I’ve never heard of or participated in a blood contract with an animal god. How does it work?” The Hokage turned back around and continued walking. Kuma stepped up to catch up as his teacher spoke.
“A blood contract is exactly as its name implies. You are signing a contract with the ruler of an animal species to get them to fight with you when you summon them. Most ninja can summon one of 3 races: The snake, the toad, or the slug. Each of them has their own strengths and weaknesses and are very popular and accessible in our world.”
Kumas face lit at the prospect of riding high on a giant toad or commanding a giant slug to squash his enemies. He spoke up and interrupted.

(2/30)

“So who are you going to teach me to summon? The toads? Slugs?”
The Hokage shook his head and continued to walk.
“None of them.”
This response was lost on Kuma as he jogged up side to side with his teacher.
“So if not those three, then who.”
The Hokage smiled at his pupil’s curious face. “There are many kinds of animals in the world, and for each animal there is one who rules over their species. I am going to teach you how to summon Enma. He is the Monkey King.”
He watched Kumas face jump to pure enjoyment. If there was anything a boy wanted, no matter what his age was, it was to have a monkey to call his own. The Hokage quickly shattered his dream as he continued.
“He is a rare summon because he is very fickle about who he enters a contract with. First you must prove yourself competent enough in combat when you fight him. If you can prove that to him, then he will enter a contract with you. But if you lack any of the qualities he wants, he can destroy the contract and thus destroy your soul.”

(3/30)

Kuma involuntarily gulped as his voice quivered.
“My soul…which means I don’t come back here when I die?”
The Hokage shook his head in response. Kuma involuntarily yelled, “You mean all that you just laid a whole schpiel about live and loving it and what not… and NOW your going to try and enter me into a contract with a high strung monkey who could kill me in combat and then utterly destroy me if he doesn’t think I’m fit to summon him!?”
“That is about the gist of it.”
The pair stopped as Kuma was utterly fuming from his head in fear and anger. The Hokage merely smiled.
“I do this because I think you are strong enough to prove to have Enma’s allegiance. I wouldn’t trust his power to anyone else if they could not prove themselves to me.”

(4/30)

Kuma took some deep breaths as he slowly calmed himself down. The Hokage waited patiently because there really wasn’t anything else to do in this realm but wait.
He watched his student close his eyes and use his hands to imaginarily push down any aggression. Slowly, Kuma opened his eyes and looked straight into his teachers.
“…Ok…. lets do this…. I mean…I could lose my soul…. but what else is there to lose?”
“That’s the spirit of a true ninja” The hokage said as the resumed their walk.
Under his breath Kuma said, “Yes…the spirit of a dead ninja if this doesn’t work

As they made their way through the homely buildings and mixture of orbs and people, Kuma’s mind wandered as he realized something.

(5/30)

“My parents are dead!” He said as he slammed his fist into his other hand like a judges gavel.
The hokage and passers by stopped what they were doing as the all thought the obvious.
AND SO ARE WE! The hokage cleared his throat as he spoke.
“Yes, I remember you telling me so. Why are you bringing this up again?”
Kuma ran up to his teacher and jumped up and down like an enthusiastic kid who realized Christmas came early, he then proceeded to give the description of his parent to the Hokage in excruciating detail.
“Is there any chance at all that you would have happened to see two people like that anywhere here in the Afterlife?” Kuma seemed to please as the hokage searched his brain intently. Realizing he did not see anyone like that he shook his head and sighed heavily.
“I’m sorry. But I haven’t seen anyone like that in all of my time here in the Afterlife.”

(6/30)

Kuma hung his head low as he sulked for a moment.
“I thought so…. with all the people that possibly come here daily, I could see how its almost impossible to meet them….” His face suddenly became white as he realized something. He turned to his teacher in despair, “What if they are just orbs in this place? What if they weren’t as strong as I thought they were? That means that I would NEVER be able to meet them! Crap!”
The Hokage looked at his downtrodden student and tried to cheer him up.
“Think about it Kuma, there are almost 5 times as many people here in the Afterlife than you can begin to think of down in the real world. Yes, it’s possible that your parents are just orbs unable to keep their true forms…but who said that the form you saw them in is a their true form. You are a young soul while I am old. We age slowly here than back there. Here we show our true age.”

(7/30)

“It is entirely possible they might be still here in a way you never realized…but who knows Kuma. At the moment though, we have work to do in summoning Enma. You must steel your nerve and prepare for a quick but brutal fight ahead.”
With that, the Hokage continued to walk to his own cottage as his student followed along. Kuma tried his best to psyche himself out in order to prepare for this unorthodox summoning procedure.
This should be nothing… Kuma thought as he ran through the procedure in his mind. Ok, first we summon Enma for me to enter the blood contract with. If I can defeat of equal him in combat then I will be able to summon in his battle. At this point I can no longer slack off in any kind of training because if I show I cannot keep his trust…this monkey kind could destroy my..Soul…ok nothing big…just a soul…

(8/30)

As the pair rounded the corner, the Hokage waved hello to people that Kuma had never seen before. Their clothing made Kuma believe that they could be over 100 years old from the point when they died. He was lost in his own thought as he barely noticed his teacher stop. The young ninja hopped on one foot as he teetered, attempting to not run over his teacher, as he was about to show him one of the most rare summons a shinobi could pull off.
“Ok Kuma, welcome to my home here in the Afterlife.”
The hokage said happily as he slid open the door and let his apprentice inside first.
The interior looked like an ancient temple, littered with artifacts and remnants from other peoples exploits while on earth. As Hokage entered the house he waved to some people in the corner.
“Well hello First, Kazekage!” He said happily as Kuma dropped his jaw in surprise. Here he was in the same room with the Third Hokage, watching the First Hokage and one of the Kazekages playing shogi!

(9/30)

Kuma could barely speak as he heard the Kazekage speak aloud.
“So Third, who is the whelp you have with you?” He said as the first and another person who peered out the door way wondered the same thing. Kuma noticed it was the Second Hokage peering out the doorway. He gave him a quick nod and dissapered again through the wall as the Third spoke for him.
“This young one I have before me is Kuma. He came to us not to long ago, but I have the feeling he won’t be staying here too long. He came here from Konohagakure.” He said, seeming to boast about his new student. The Kazekage snorted in response.
“So many of your former village people have been coming to us lately, just like in the wars. Tell me young one, is there trouble brewing in the real world or are you Leaf Ninja becoming more and more pathetic?”
Kuma bowed to his elder and retorted back.

(10/30)

{someone else already knows this move you have exchange these skill points for different techniques....}

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:02 am

((because the other member has been inactive, ive been given enma. We had a whole talk about it in either OOC or Made up Skill. 3nodding ))

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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:18 am

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((because the other member has been inactive, ive been given enma. We had a whole talk about it in either OOC or Made up Skill. 3nodding ))

{ crying no fair i tried to get it before...}

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:33 pm

xavie saw a portal as he entered it he was back to life, "yay" he screamed!

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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:25 pm

Dave woke up after a long nap from training and saw a portal "what the hell is that" Dave said as he walked up to it then got sucked into it and found himself back alive "wow, i'm alive" Dave said then walked off

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:52 pm

Sano found himself laying face down on a black floor, completely dark. He looked around and thought he was in the Bringer of Darkness Jutsu. Shortly after, he had realized it. He was dead. "Ahhh, ********" Sano said softly as he pushed himself up. "I'm dead... again." He stood up and turned around. There Orochimaru stood right in front of him, his tounge swaying infront of him. "So, you're back, Sano of the Snow" Orochimaru said with a slight hiss. A bead of sweat started to condense on his forehead, an he began to feel like something unfortunate was going to happen.

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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:30 pm

Usagi blinked his eyes open and characteristically saw nothing.
But he realized that he was no longer alive as he felt his left brest and the dried blood that was on it.
there was no wound though....because you wouldnt need any wounds in the Afterlife. The atmosphere of the area he was in seemd enclosed, no moving wind, no chirping, no nothing. Usagi pulled his eye wrap down to his neck and blinked several times adjust himself to any light he had seen. The room was utterly and completely dark with only two flikering flames on a table to create an atmostpheric feeling. He was Sarutobi's room.

(Satetsu-1/9)

Usagi slowly got up as his eyes tried to adjust to the room. After a minute or two of standing still to get his surroundings good. He walked to the sliding door and squinted his eyes to prepare himself. He slid the door open slightly as sunlight raced into Sarutobi's room and exposed Usagi to the world outside and into the cramped hallway of where the hokages lived. Usagi hadn't actually seen anything in far too long as the added sense and chakra aura seemed to overwhelm him. He dropped to his feet and clenched his head, not from fear of UsaKi, but from everything that was happening around him.

(2/9)

The Afterlife was a crowded place and that many people in 25 ft of area meant alot of movement that Usagi wasnt prepared for. The ninja closed his tenketsu as all of the extra enhanced senses dulled to the point of normality. He stayed on the floor on his knees for several minutes as he gathered his thoughts and slowly picked himself up. He made his way down the hall and into the main room, feeling incredibly exposed and more 'blind' now with his tenketsu closed than he had ever been. It the main room was the Third Kaze Kage and another normal soul playing a game of shogi that seemed to have just ended.

(3/9)

Usagi stepped forward as the Sandiame got up and shook his opponents hand. He was slightly larger than the last Kazekage he met was and his voice had a slightly more soothing effect, but it was stern as well as he congratulated his opponent.
"That was a good match Akira, maybe we'll play again later?" He said as the man he played against nodded at made his way around the livingroom and into the hallway taht Usagi jsut came down from. Sandaime turned around and met Usagi's eyes as he spoke. "So you are finnally awake."

(4/9)

"Sarutobi asked me to come keep an eye on you and train you a bit before you make your way back to the real world....is that ok?" He said rhetorically. Usagi could tell it didn't matter what he said as Sandaime turned and walked out to the door that led them outside. He made a follow me notion as Usagi took the motion and followed him into the busy street.
As the pair made their way down the people packed walkways of the Afterlife he couldnt help but ask one simple question.
"Kazekage-sama." He began, trying to earn brownie points didnt really sit well with Usagi but he had very little choice he felt. "What are you going to teach me?"

(5/9)

Sandaime smirked but didn't didnt turn his head back to Usagi as he led the way through the crowd of people. "The only people I hear that still use that honorific with me have been the Hokages...youre respect is dually noted young one." He said as they made their way back out the way Usagi had seen frequently. They were heading back to the grassy feild that all three hokages had trained with him at. As the crowd of people began to slowly wither away the farther they god, Sandaime decided it was time for him to explain what he was going to learn. "I'm going to teach you a technique that I developed naturally. While I've spent my time here, I've learned out to refine it to the point where i could teach you as well....It's called Satetsu."

(6/9)

Usagi had never heard of the technique before and let his thoughts be known to his new teacher. "Sir.....I've never heard of your technique before." He said as the dirt alleyways gave themselves to grassy plains. They had entered the training grounds as Sandaime continued to talk.
"Satetsu is a technique known through most of the world....I was born with the ability to naturally manipulate and create ionized sand. With it I became Kazekage....But now im passing knowledge of the technique on to you. Sarutobi has told me you are a willing student whos shown promise to bring peace to the world...and I believe him enough to teach you this."

(7/9)

Usagi rememberd old text books mentioning the Kazekage and the sand and leafs fights in old wars. "Kazekage-sama. I remember reading that you and the leaf, under Sarutobi's guidance, had many altercations in the past." He said as the Kazekage ordered him to stand severl feet away, facing him.
"Yes, we did fight back then but we also had the unmost respect for each other. The time we spent here has also helped us gain more respect. We arent so much friends, just mutal aquaintences who earned the others trust." He said as he began the training with Usagi.

(8/9)

"This training will be long and it will be arrduous. But in the end you will have equiped yourself with a powerful tool to defend your ideals." Sandaime started to say as dark sand started to pull itself up from the ground to his hands. Usagi knew this had to be some kind of chakra manipulation but he waited for an explanation. "We'll go slow since it takes some good practice to fully get it. I was born with this ability, but the few others iv taught it to have had to get ingenious with its uses. Basically you are using your chakra to ionize and sand or dirt around you. When it is ionized you can the manipulate it."

(8/9)

'And that is the very first step to learning this technique." He said as a small baseball clump of dark sand materialized in his left hand. "Your turn."
Usaig nodded as he put a little bit of chakra inot his hand. He looked down asnd watched his hand in a slightly visible dark blue aura as he watched the sand and dirt mixed in with the grass move slightly. This tiny movement didnt got unnoticed by the Kazekage as he made a humming noise in curiosity and watched Usagi try to copy his own way of creating the sand. The younger ninja put a little more chakra into his right has as he slowly watched the sand left off the ground in a small spiral but didnt move farther than 6 inches from the ground.

(satetsu-Complete)

Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 2:23 pm

Usagi sighed as he let go of the chakra in his hands as the sand fell and sprinkled to the earth. Sandaimed let the ball in his hands crumble and flow with the guidance of chakra as he swirled around him and created a chair for him to sit back on as he watched his young apprentice try and complete the first step in his natural ability.
Sarutobi was right. Even though a shinobi has the ability to do anything that is only limited to his imagination, this child is strong enough mentally to try and tackle a technique such as this...

(Satetsu Kaihou-1/10)

He watched Usagi with an interesting quality in his eyes as the young ninja worked hard to pass this first test. He attemepted to put some chakra in his hands and feet to try and ionize the sand and dirt first, then manipulate it with his hands. He took some slow breaths as he watched the sand ebb back and forth until it went completely airborn. Usagi watch in excitment as he put some more chakra into the manipulatoin of the sand as more and more accumlated into a ball in mid air. He suddenly realized that using 4 different way points of highly concentrated chakra seemed too much as he cancelled the jutsu.

(2/10)

The sand fell harmlessly to the ground as the Kazekage perked up at his student, suddenly curious. "Now why did you disscontinue that method? It seemed to be working quite well." Usagi took a sight and wiped his forhead.
"It worked but it burned up a lot of unnesecary chakra. I put so much in my feet and hands that it started to block up and watse chakra in order to summon the sands...if that were a real battle it would take too long and put me in a serious dissadvantage." Usagi explained as the Kazekage nodded in agreement. He stood up and let the chair of dark sand crumble to the ground.

(3/10)

"You are indeed correct." The Sandaime said as the started to talk once more. "I can manipulate this chakra quite easily but i realized that it is because my body gives off a slightly ressonance of electro magnetic force. When I learned the technique it was unwieldy because i had no control of my chakra, but as time went on, i used this natural aura to my advantage and was able to use the sand much faster, more effieciantly, and with almost 90% less chakra." As the Sandaime finished his sentence, Usagi realized what method would work the best as he bowed to the Kazekage.

(4/10)

Usagi stood still as he mentally tried to let his body go limp. He was so used to this action in the real world that it came natuarl as the tenketsu began to open up one by one all over his body. As each tenketsu oppened up, an incredibly small amount of chakra flowed out. If you added the amount that each tenketsu released, it was the same amount as using a normal henge transformation...but something about it seemed different. It filled out to a 25 ft 'bubble' that surrounded Usagi and the surrounding area as he sighed in relief. Unlike he had been earlier, he didnt feel so closed off now.

(5/10)

While he was out in the 'city' where all of the souls presided, the massive amount of information overload hurt Usagi's head. Out here it felt like a relaxing message had just taken over his body. He felt like he used to, and the added bonus of sight made everything feel most heightened to the max. The Sandaime Kazekage looked on in intrest to see what kind of ingenuity this young ninja could accomplish to replicate his own jutsu. Usagi felt the subtlest wind changes and nearly every grain at his feet as he realized that it was possible this way. If he thought of the chakra aura like a mist, he could use a tiny bit of to ionize each dust in the air.

(6/10)

He set his plan into motion to see if it could work as he felt each grain of said at his feet. Kazekage looked on to see sand lifting off of the ground and swirl around Usagi like it does when the Kazekage himself summoned it. Usagi smiled as he realized his theory was correct. "You said you used your own aura right?" Usagi asked as the Sandaime nodded in agreement. "Well I basically did what you did, which was use my aura to manipulate the chakra inside my aura. instead of wasting chakra with my hands and feet, i could 'coat' the sand over time and ionize it."

(7/10)

Usagi continiued with his theory, "Then once is is coated with my chakra, i dont have to use anymore of it as i can now control the sand to my whim. Just like when I use my water affinity to control my staff....its a chakra saver...." The Sandaime nodded and seemed impressed with his students theory. "You are correct. and not even i realized that i only had to coat my chakra with the sand....I may have to try that myself later....But for now, you know how to alter the sand...but can you control it and form it into a simple shape like a baseball?" The Sandaime asked as Usagi realized the next step in his training started.

(8/10)

The sand swirled around Usagi as he tried to focus it with his and bend it to his will. He held out right hand as a small bit of sand rested on it like a leaf. Using taht hand as a focal point, the sand swriling around his aura like a lava lamp began to converge. It built on top of each other until it formed into a small dark baseball in his hand. Usagi smiled "I guess my clan traning paid off..." The Sandaime nodded as well.
"It looks like it...if you can combine the efforts of your extended chakra aura with Satetsu, you can be in constant control, just like a puppeteer is with his puppet."

(9/10)

Usagi realized what his new teacher was saying as he stared at the baseball in his hand. "Meaning that intead of just throwing the sand blindly. I can becaume a force of nature with this attack." He said, realizing what consequences it could have if he ever lost his pysche to his darker self. Sandaime nodded to his student as he kept speaking.
"Yes taht is a theory...But if you mold the sand into a weapon longer than your arm, it will take more chakra to mold. The bigger the weapon the more chakra needed. And that needs to be kept in mind with our next exercise."

(Satetsu Kaihou-Complete)

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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:55 pm

"Satetsu in its initial form is perfect for short range or hand to hand combat. Mainly because you can form it into any weapon you can desire it to be. The ions in the sand wil bond together, meaning that once the weapon is formed, you dont have to have use charka to keep it together, just to form the weapon or change it." As the Sandaime Kazekage began to explain more about his technique, the sand around him bega to solidify.
It wrapped its self ito a ball about 2 1/2, 3 feet in diameter as it hovered at waist level. Usagi eyed it cautiously. "This ball of sand will be used in the next technique."

(Satetsu Shigure-1/11)

"Let me guess....this ball of sand will shoot our sand lazer beams to hurt the target?" Usagi couldnt help but joke at the ball of dark sand, it gave off so many sci fi references it wasnt funny. The Sandaime Kazekage apparently didn't read sci fi or watch a tv before so he shook it off and contined with his training.
"Well you actually arent very far off. This next attack is called Satetsu Kaihou. Wish this ball, you can launch it in the air and break it apart, the resulting explosion of sand will branch out like a spiderweb of sorts that cand peirce nearly everything. One thing you need to realize thought....Is that magnetized sand is a poison to the human body."

(2/11)

"Meaning that if it were to scratch someone it could hurt them immenesly?" Usagi wondered as Saindaime Kazekage explained. Usagi knew where this was going but he didnt quite like it...it wasnt that he detested killing...but he tried his best to avoide killing someone if it were possible.
"It would do more than just hurt someone really badly if you were scratched by a satetsu attack. The iron poisoning from satetsu is incredibly hard to counter act. If a person were struck with it, in 3 days they would succumb to the poisoning if they didnt recieve medical treatment..."

(3/11)

"So I guess thats what helped you become the Kazekage I take it?" Usagi asked as he tossed his baseball out into the air and attempted to detonate it. "Satetsu Kaihou!" He said as the ball of dark sand cracked and pilled out like a web of spikes in the air. Its ends were as sharp as swords as the drilled into ground and started to uproot patches of earth. Usagi stood in wonder as he watched the attack the crumble into dark sand. He turned to the Sandaime as he spoke.
"And that was the strenght equivelent to a baseball...imagaine what this ball could do."

(4/11)

Usagi stared as he finnaly saw the Sandaime Kazekage finnaly smile. "How could you be happy with a technique that kills like that?" Usagi asked as he watched the dark sand back rocket over to the area Usagi set his own attack off at.
"Satetsu Shigure!" He yelled as the ball disintegrated into a rain of sharp chunks of metal. It pierced the ground like a party pinata being broken up as the pair looked on as the attack decimated the grassy area it was unleashed in. Now it looked like a feild of dark brown as the Sandaime looked on.

(5/11)

"Everything a person does has the potential to be deadly. If you think you are foolish enough to believe you can go through life in your Occupation without drawing blood to survive, then you have no right to be standing next to me." the Kazekage said to Usagi as the field of brown reverted back to a fine dust. Usagi looked at the floor as he spoke in his defense.
"I know that things happen and a shinbi might be forced to take a life...I've done it. And i know ill do it again.....but because of my upbringing with two very different clan leaders...i think i may have repressed a normal emotion to the effect of it mutating..."

(6/11)

"You mean like a split personality?" Sandaime Kazekage asked out loud realizing the answer withouth having to speak. Usagi nodded as he kept his head low. The Kazekage stared at the destruction in front of them. He raised his arm to chest height and put his palm up to the air, summoning the sand to come to his aid. As the sand pulled towards its master the Sandaime Kazekage spoke.
"A split personality is normally thought of as being a weak characteristic for someone." He began, Usagi felt a mental stab, thinking the Kazekage was insulting them.

(7/11)

"It really means that because certain things were denied by that persons existance and theyve developed something to counter those impluses...." The Kazekage said as the sand made its way to the pair of ninjas. As it got a foot away the Sandaime Kazekage, it started to form a blur about as high as he was. Soon enough there was a human body and not long after that the sand looked like an exact clone of the Sandaime Kazekage, only it was dark brown in its appearance. The Kazekage and the clone went into the same exact stance as it mimicked its master commands flawlessly.

(8/11)

"If a person were to have a split personality, it is there own fault for letting their emotions get the better of them. For a shinobi to work as well as he can he must seperate his emotions from the moment. If the emotions over took him he will never be as powerful as could be. The seperate personality isn't real no matter how you believe it to be...its a matter of letting yourself become who you really are...then these notions of menta illness will cease to exist." The Kazekage said. As he spoke, the sand clone began to disintegrate, symbolically showing a deteriorating peronsality. "But if you let that emotion grow stronger than you, you will die and that emotion will take over."

(9/11)

"The human mind is a very fragile thing and at the same time it is the most powerful tool ever created. It can elevate you to new levels or it can destroy you....Sarutobi has faith in you... dont let him down." The Sandaime Kazekage said as the heap of sand dropped harmlessly to the ground. Usagi took his words to heart but they slightly confused him....none the less he got the message as the Kazekage's imposing stature seemed to make him look like he was towering over Usagi.
"I think that you grasp my technique quite well enough to use it. We're done here, Sarutobi should be back from whereever he went."

(10/11)

Usagi nodded as he tried to absent mindedly manipulate the sand as the walked away from the serenity of the grass field and went back to the loud, overcrowded and bustling 'city'. As the got closer and closer to inhabitants, Usagis sense slowly began to overload as he started to close off his tenkentsu, making him feel blinder that he ever did before. The sand he was manipulating dropped to the floor as he stopped controlling it. The pair weaved their way around the crowds, Usagi following the Kazekage becuase he had no clue how he....or anyone....could get through this sea of people.

(Satetsu Shigure-Complete)

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:58 pm

i died from the exam so this is where i am. i will be learning more techniques soon...

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Sano found himself laying face down on a black floor, completely dark. He looked around and thought he was in the Bringer of Darkness Jutsu. Shortly after, he had realized it. He was dead. "Ahhh, ********" Sano said softly as he pushed himself up. "I'm dead... again." He stood up and turned around. There Orochimaru stood right in front of him, his tounge swaying infront of him. "So, you're back, Sano of the Snow" Orochimaru said with a slight hiss. A bead of sweat started to condense on his forehead, an he began to feel like something unfortunate was going to happen.

"Come here boy." Hissed Orochimaru as he held out a hand for him. No matter how hard Sano would try to fight against it, his body would move him towards Orochimaru. As he did, Orochimaru would then brush a hand across a cheek and then placed the hand on the back of Sano's shoulder. "Boy, you have eluded my grasp once before, but I will not allow you to leave without me leaving you a gift." Said Orochimaru in the most perverted way that it would seem sad to anyone around watching it. Suddenly, Orochimaru leaned forwards and then bit Sano into the neck, creating the Water Curse Seal upon the side of his victim. Sano would then start to sway in pain as Orochimaru would say something to him. "Live and thrive in the real world boy. Live knowing me and the power I have bestowed upon you and be sure to know... That you will have to find the first to ever receive the curse seal. Bone Akasun." Said Orochimaru as he then disappeared into the darkness.

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