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 Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:13 pm
Nice chapter FS, as for the romance question.
I would say try matching all of the female characters, as in 3 for real and maybe one for an insane comic relief, thats what I do in writing.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:51 pm
Good work on chapter 11.
Romance is all up to you, it depends on how you want the story to go.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:56 pm
Chapter 12 is online.
Next: Foxley and Drakam
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:03 pm
Wow. Drakam's an a**. But he reminds me of Kaiba from "Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series". "I don't like being touched by people with no money" -Kaiba. Keep up the good work, FS.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:16 pm
Good chapter FS. I'm really starting to see variety in the characters' personalities.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:21 pm
Lavableman Wow. Drakam's an a**. But he reminds me of Kaiba from "Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series". "I don't like being touched by people with no money" -Kaiba. Keep up the good work, FS. Drakam is a little bit one dimensional as a character at the moment, but I will be fleshing him out as the story develops. Incidently, I think that about 40 chapters should be enough to complete the story in full. Finally, a question from the last page: I'm including a little romance in the story, but I'd like to know who you (all of you) think would make good couples (based on what you all know so far).
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:26 pm
Waynebrizzle Good chapter FS. I'm really starting to see variety in the characters' personalities. Agreed. @FS - Seaphron Romance is all up to you, it depends on how you want the story to go.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:29 pm
Seaphron Waynebrizzle Good chapter FS. I'm really starting to see variety in the characters' personalities. Agreed. @FS - Seaphron Romance is all up to you, it depends on how you want the story to go. Yeah, I know. But I want to know who you think would make good couples. I have Alyssa and Daniel kinda set up, and Christina and Paul are also obvious ones. What about Luo and Justina, should they have any romance? I can decide all of this for myself, but I'd like to hear other peoples opinions first. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:32 pm
Alyssa Benedict and James Tyler? xd
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:32 pm
I don't like choosing things for other peoples stories sweatdrop I am gonna just stay outta this one then.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:38 pm
Lavableman Alyssa Benedict and James Tyler? xd Rofl, I hope BC isn't online.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:42 pm
in all seriousness what are the odds that the fact is all of the females in your story are either Canadian, or live in canada(which is true)....saying that...I am Canadian xd
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:53 pm
omg, Christina and Fisher heart heart heart
But really, I don't know who else. Just let if flow.
Edit: I really do love the slight hints of love that you drop, like Christina being thrown around by Paul's willingness to give his own life for hers.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 6:52 pm
Joseph and Justina? wink
Just kidding.
I don't really care who goes with who, as long as it still turns out good.
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 11:00 pm
Huzza for me being awesome!
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