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Wrendraith

PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 7:52 pm


WHEW! Mine is up! :3

Got a chance to post it despite my weekend job. xd heart

SOO. >.>; It's kinda hella-long. But if you'd like to take the time reading it, I'd really love some honest opinions.~
PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 9:13 am


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Airaka, I've revised mine a bit-- if you don't mind, after you've done everyone else's... could you go over it again? <3

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Anagove


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 3:59 pm


    I feel like applying but have no inspiration.
    And I want to read competition for some.
    But..I want to make mine from scratch.
    So...yeah?

    I read the first 2 pages of this thread.
    Haven't touched the GM thread.
    LAWL. *tries to write*

Estellio Estel
PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 8:17 pm


I revised my Snipe~ biggrin

How is this, fellow GCSGers?

Quote:
-After Jailing Sakura-

Bullet Rift closed the door to his room and headed downstairs to the massive congregation in the lobby. Chatter was loud, and the guests were all still in shock of the latest kills.

"Do you think we caught the right one?"
"I think she deserved to go to Jail, killer or not."
"Why am I here in my bathrobe?"
"NIFI AND LANZER = <3"
"Why does the caged bird sing?"

The noise was too much. If only there was some way to silence them, even if it was just for a minute... Bullet thought to himself. He headed over to the indoor gazebo and proceded to ask the Bartender for a drink. A large glass of Dr.Zaeyde would do him well. He took a few sips and headed to a couch near the pool tables.

"So... much... noise..." Bullet complained, sitting down next to Jeff Jarret.

"Oh hush. Do you want some cheese with your whine?" Jeff sneered.

"Why do you always have to be so...? Forget it."

"Yeah yeah... Sorry."

Bullet stared toward the ceiling, reflecting. The kill yesterday was a shock to everyone. Nobody expected Hirun to die that way. Granted, it was random, but nobody expected a Murder at the Snipeton, besides the fact of the horribly cliched name. At that moment, everything seemed to slow down and be peaceful.

"You know... there may be a killer out there, but there are over (x) people in this hotel. It'd be completely rare that one of us 2 would be killed. If you want quiet, just head to your room, take a nap or something..." Jeff interrupted, rotating the glass of Diet IHD in his hand.

The noise of the crowded lobby returned and Bullet gazed toward the hotel restaurant. Something was off to him... Like an ominous feeling was comming from that direction. A cloaked figure stood near the breakfast buffet, pointing a black rod in their direction...

"...What's up with that man over there?" he asked quickly.

"I don't know. Hotel staff? An old man with a cane?..." Jeff said slyly, "...A sniper? Hah, you're so paranoi--"

Suddenly, a shot rang out. People scrambled, looking for where it shot. Bullet didn't. The quiet returned, but only for him. Horror. He knew where it came from, and sat there horrified, dropping his soda. Murder. Jeff slumped over, bleeding slowly down his arm. The only thing he could hear was the words of the sniper as he walked by slowly... "Cast in the name of God. Ye not Guilty."

"AAAAAAAUGH!"

"Aww damn. He ruined the shirt I lent him..." Shoy said from the other side of the room.

---

Hirun Hikari


Parking Lot

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 2:55 am


Rawr. That be good, Hroon. I think I sense a tad bit ASOUE reference there?
PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 3:41 pm


Will someone PLEASE comment on mine?! gonk

Vlad D. Tepes


Hirun Hikari

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 4:01 pm


Parking Lot
Rawr. That be good, Hroon. I think I sense a tad bit ASOUE reference there?


Asoue? XD It's Big O. "Cast in the Name of God, Ye not Guilty! We have come to terms."

On another note, MY APPICATION IS COMPLETELY REVISED. I've taken Airika's suggestions into account and cranked up the volume. <3 I added more refrences.

Meru's Head in Dukes's Bed. xD
Game VII + Maya Angelou - "Why does the Caged Bird Sing?"
Nifi's siggy - "NIFI AND LANZER IN A CARROT SUIT = <3"
Pop Stars - "Bjork"
Dr. Pepper - "Dr. Zaeyde Soda"
PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 4:03 pm


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Blech, references. *wrinkles nose*

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Anagove


Hirun Hikari

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 4:05 pm


Anagove
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Blech, references. *wrinkles nose*

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It's not like educated books. It's more like fun references to daily life. Modern stuff. XD

It's not like I'll be doing it constantly. ... It's like salt. "Use Sparringly".
PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 4:11 pm


HirunHikari
Anagove
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Blech, references. *wrinkles nose*

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It's not like educated books. It's more like fun references to daily life. Modern stuff. XD

It's not like I'll be doing it constantly. ... It's like salt. "Use Sparringly".


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Yeah... I mean I think references are okay once in a while, but I'd like to see/write something different. It's easy to take half your lines from other media, but I want to see something I haven't seen in a thousand other places.

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Anagove


Bellecat

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 4:38 pm


HirunHikari
Parking Lot
Rawr. That be good, Hroon. I think I sense a tad bit ASOUE reference there?


Asoue? XD It's Big O. "Cast in the Name of God, Ye not Guilty! We have come to terms."

On another note, MY APPICATION IS COMPLETELY REVISED. I've taken Airika's suggestions into account and cranked up the volume. <3 I added more refrences.

Meru's Head in Dukes's Bed. xD
Game VII + Maya Angelou - "Why does the Caged Bird Sing?"
Nifi's siggy - "NIFI AND LANZER IN A CARROT SUIT = <3"
Pop Stars - "Bjork"
Dr. Pepper - "Dr. Zaeyde Soda"

Nooo. The Bathrobe + Massive Congregation in the Lobby + "Do you think we caught the right one" = Teh Penultimate Peril fo' sho'. xD
PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 5:13 pm


I'd just like to say that recently my friend Kataraa posted in the GM applications saying pretty much just "hi." Before anyone decides to flame and / or tear her apart, I'd just like to say that she probably went to the wrong thread since I told her to send in her application for the guild. I didn't mean GM application, and she probably just got a little confused, so I'll set her right and tell her to delete her post. Thanks. stressed

Egotistical Moose


Hirun Hikari

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 5:32 pm


Bellecat
HirunHikari
Parking Lot
Rawr. That be good, Hroon. I think I sense a tad bit ASOUE reference there?


Asoue? XD It's Big O. "Cast in the Name of God, Ye not Guilty! We have come to terms."

On another note, MY APPICATION IS COMPLETELY REVISED. I've taken Airika's suggestions into account and cranked up the volume. <3 I added more refrences.

Meru's Head in Dukes's Bed. xD
Game VII + Maya Angelou - "Why does the Caged Bird Sing?"
Nifi's siggy - "NIFI AND LANZER IN A CARROT SUIT = <3"
Pop Stars - "Bjork"
Dr. Pepper - "Dr. Zaeyde Soda"

Nooo. The Bathrobe + Massive Congregation in the Lobby + "Do you think we caught the right one" = Teh Penultimate Peril fo' sho'. xD


@w@ I have no idea what that ment.

When PL said it, I guessed she was refering to the other thing. >_>;;;
PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 5:33 pm


Wrendraith
WHEW! Mine is up! :3

Got a chance to post it despite my weekend job. xd heart

SOO. >.>; It's kinda hella-long. But if you'd like to take the time reading it, I'd really love some honest opinions.~


You think yours is long? @w@ I made mine 3 pages in word.

... Wasn't there 1 last time that was... like... 5?

Hirun Hikari


InternalHardDrive

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 5:45 pm


I always liked doing references, but I tried to have more than just references in my update. That they wouldn't be the key factor. I was focusing a lot on "why does the caged bird sing" but I had my own ideas and applied it in its own way to the game. XD

...But now people are going to start copying me. ;-; Oh vell.


And...Diet IHD? XDD
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