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 Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:05 pm
Shokan now sent it out and had the right distance and as soon as it had enough to wrap around the small trunk he did and he began to squeeze they heard a high pictched squeeling sound from the young bark being under pressure and then he pulled away. There was about a centimeter indent all around the tree, which was very deatailed considering the size fo the tree. Shokan took a deep breath, he was finally getting the hang of it. I only need a few more techniques from here and I can leave to a new village and learn even mre techniques. He smiled to himself, he would not only get revenge on kimmimario but as well he was getting a better chance to pass the chuunen exams.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:08 pm
Summaru had got an idea in his head, "Now I have another idea on how to test your skills besides for the final one." he cleared his throat, "We will both choke eachothers feathers, but we must use control so that they are both attacking but also useing enough power to weaking the other ones so theres is not totally stopped and is disintegrated." Shokan nodded becuase it sounded like a good idea. So they both activated their Kujaku Myouhou and sent one feather against one fo the others. They both wrapped around eachother and began to squeeze, no noises were made becuase it was used to being under pressure and it was chakra.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:11 pm
As they squeezed, the spot where the others chakra squeezed became thin so did the other, this fight continued for serveral minutes until they both finally dissipated. Summaru laughed as he disengaged his Kujaku Myouhou and then Shokan also disengadged his. "Good exersize you seem to be ready for the final test. SHokan awaited his last order for this justsu. "You are to," he paused shortly, "You are to choke me like I did you when we started." Shokan nodded nervously and activated his Kujaku Myouhou and instantly sent out a feather and began to squeeze Summaru, but let go in time to not leave any real damage. As he gasped for air he said, "Congradulation you learned that technique as well."
10/10
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:14 pm
Shokan began to turn to go to the last teacher when Summaru spoke up, "Wait there is one more technique to show you. I will teach you the fire ball." Shokan looked confused, "But this is useing chakra not fire.." Summaru laughed, "I know, but it looks like a fire ball you launch your chakra at an opponent liek a fire ball" Shokan nodded feeling stupid yet again. "All right sounds good to me." Shokan said cheerily. Summaru nodded and activated his Kujaku Myouhou and all of the feathers combined into a giant ball and the were launched at Shokan, he naturally flew to avoid it and it kept going and destroyed alot of trees.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:17 pm
Summaru looked to the sky and pointed down to signal Shokan to land. As Shokan slowly decended Summaru Began to speak again, "That is the fireball, it is an offensive, obviously and is used by fusing all of your wings together and launching it in a direction." Shokan nodded and activated his Kujaku Myouhou, and as before when he tried to fuse them it made a squggled mess out of the chakra. Summaru laughed, "You might want to wait a little while before doing that, it is more advanced." Shokan looked at him, "If it is so advanced why are you teaching it to me?"Summaru shook his head, "Not the technique the fusing once you've called out the feathers."
2/8
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:20 pm
Shokan shook his head, "All right I'll take yuor word for it, he called them all out into one ball, the only problem is that it was punny. "What the heck..." Shokan looked behind him. Summaru spoke up, "It's a control thing again, you just don't like to be in control or try to control things do you?" Shokan looked at him, "It's not that I jsut don't want to over do it." Summru pinched the skin between his nose, "You won't over do it have you nto noticed every time you do it you can control it but before oyu're afriad of over doing it?" Shokan looked up to ponder.
3/8
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:23 pm
Shokan smiled, "So what you're saying is, I have good control?" He snikered to himself. And Summaru grew irritated, "No, what I'm saying is stop being afriad of everything and do the technique!" Shokan smiled nervously he didn't mean to upset him but what's done is done. So he tried again and it became huge and dissipated quickly, "I sai-" Shokan interupted him, "Yeah I know control." Shokan closed his eyes and opened them again he activated his Kujaku Myouhou once again and made the ball. he attempted to launch it but it dissipated instantly. what did I do wrong that time, I did everything he told me, why can't I do anything right on the 7th try instead of the 12th?!
4/8
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:27 pm
Summaru looked at Shokan already being over what he said earlier. "You sucked up the chakra instead of throwing it, that is a hard part to get used to. You have to let go and get rid of the chakra to use it in a manner where it moves away from you." Shokan nodded and thought about it, "But I don't remember sucking it back up." Summaru shook his head, "It's a natural instinct. Normally you dont' want your chakra going awyay from you body so your body automatically takes it back in when you stop useing it or stop telling it to stay out. What you need to do it after you throw it have feathers behind it coming out as it launchs."
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:30 pm
Shokan shook his head, "So what you are saying is that in order for the technique to work I have to untrain what my body has been trained to do sence it was created?" Summaru shook his head slowly, "That exactly what you need to do, that's how you learn how to fight and counter things instead of runnning, and how to feel battle instead of analyzing it." Shokan shook his head and he understood what he needed to do, it was just going to be hard. BUt eh, he always like a challenge. Shokan began to deepluy breath in a pattern,. He then again activated his Kujaku Myouhou and had to stop and and start it again to have it come out in a ball.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:34 pm
Shokan concentrated and threw the ball but it disipated just before it hit the trees. "How in the....What did...How..Why did that happen?! It launched and it didn't dicipate automatically so I must have did it right, and if I did it right how can it possibly dissipate once I do it correctly?!" Summaru looked at him, "It is quite a simple answqer my friend, you didn't put enough 'umph' into it." Shokan looked at him quizilingly. Summaru was amazed, "You didn't put enough chakra into it." Shokan nodded with a fake smile again. "Okay one last time I had better get it!"
7/8
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:40 pm
After Shokan created the energy ball he launched it and as he launched it he had feathers come up instantly,as the ball went away the feathers cam up just as fast and it sped across the feild and destroyed alot of trees . Shokan did his little vicotry dance of jumping up and down and spinning and of course the, "I DID IT!" Toji woke up and celebrated with him. Summaru looked at him, "Congradulations you learned it! It has been a pleasure teaching you even if you are an idiot." He smiled and waved as he went down to the house with the meteor. Shokan smiled, "One guy left to go to the back to Konoha so I can go to another village."
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:46 pm
Shokan began to look around the village for his final teacher. After looking for about fifteen minutes of looking a man jumped infront of him, "I am Hokuto I will be your last teacher." Shokan jumped from the startle but bowed, "Nice to meet you." He bowed himself, "The first technique I will teach you is called control, for obvious reasons, it lets you control an enemy's body with your Kujaku Myouhou by making the feathers into chakra ropes." Shokan nodded, "awesome so...how do you do it?" Hokuto smiled, "Glad you asked." He activated the Kujaku Myouhou and sent his feathers to a random person and he began to dance. "Like so."
1/6
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:48 pm
Shokan laughed, "okay, so basically you send your feathers out and wrap them around the body of someone and then make you feathers move in the way you want the person to move?" Hokuto nodded, "Correct, the thing is no one can see if you activate it from behind. So it is a good collecting information jutsu." Shokan nodded, "Okay so I only have a few more to learn then I'm outa here." Hokuto looked at him with a surprised look, "Have you not learned much here?" Shokan shook his head rapidly, "No no no I have learned much here." "Then I'd appreciate if you didn't talk about it like that then."
2/6
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:51 pm
Shokan launched it at a random person but missed and smashed into a building sending a few people running. Hokuto spoke up, "Speed and precision is important for this jutsu, you need to make it before the opponent has time to react or it will fail." Shokan nodded and tried another person and got it wrapped around them but he remained in the air and couldn't move and he began to yell. Shokan let him go, "This might be a bit more difficult then I thoght." Hokuto nodded, "It also takes...well even more precision to make it look normal, but that comes with practice."
3/6
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:54 pm
Shokan took a deep breath and sent out another one, this one however just stood there not moving and thought he was goig to be assasinated so he began to cry and beg for mercy. Shokan let go again, "Okay so now I have it so he's standing, I'm getting closer slowly but surely." Hokuto nodded, "But it takes time to achieve everything so you must remain pacient and vigilant to not lose faith in yourself to keep going." Shokan nodded in agreement. Now there were only a few more steps that needed ot be dealt with. He need to make it mroe fluid, and be able to make sure he did just about perfectly.
4/6
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