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 Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:33 pm
I sent the class to Cory for review a while ago.
...I'm not sure what has been done with it, but I can send you the original draft i created so that you can be the puppet class with the appropriate strengths/weaknesses and with elemental abilities known, and then we can go from there once the class is actually posted.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:33 pm
§_Scrapples_§
Awesome. Ok, cool.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:42 pm
Deil:
You are Approved! ...as a Taijutsu user, I suggest you find a Taijutsu style, or create one to your own liking.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:44 pm
Um, just to inform you, I changed my body weight to 650lbs since I am made of metal.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:51 pm
Cobra_X Angel:1. does your character actually look like that? ...because they aren't an assassin, so the caption beneath the picture is a bit misleading.
2. How is your biography unknown? Are you saying that you don't know it because you have no concept of your character?...or does your character simply not know anything about his past?
3. If you are part of the Genjutsu class, you need to take your Strengths and Weaknesses from the lists provided in that class. You will see what strengths and weaknesses are allowed within the Genjutsu Ninja Class post... please choose from those lists.
4. Your chakra element info is fine as of now, but remember that as a Genjutsu user, you dont have access to your second element until you are a Chuunin. 1> yes except the things on his arms the picture was already with the words but i'll edit it to only show shoulder and up 2>yes he does not know his past 3>wha!?!?!?!?!..... 4>ya i know i actually read it ya know!
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:19 pm
Deil Grist Um, just to inform you, I changed my body weight to 650lbs since I am made of metal.
...I would imagine that even though your character is made of metal, that it's not SOLID metal. I'm thinking this is along the lines of wolverine...
650 lbs seems a bit much.
Why not say something like 350 lbs. That is sufficiently weighty for someone of your size and plausible for you to still be able to move and act normally.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:23 pm
Nicknames: ClayFace
Age: 15
Birthdate: 2/5
Gender: male
Ethnicity: African
Nindo: always go out with a bang
Personality: Calm bored always tired
Behavior: always calm
Biography: (Back Story)
Village: sound
Rank: academy student
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning:
Bloodline: chrakra mouths
Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class: weapons
Strengths:
● Speed
● Agility
● Cunning
Weaknesses:
●Low Attack Power [without weapon] (required)
● Weak bodied - Frailty
● A weakness regarding your specific character
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Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
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Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: earth
- Secondary: _wind_____ (learned at : Genin/Chuunin/Jounin)
Chakra Color: yellow
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Element - Japanese Element Name
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Element - Japanese Element Name
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Genjutsu
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Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline Chakra mouths
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: sythe________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type: hand type
Weapon Range: close
Weapon Description: Long stand with a long blade connected
Special Properties: none
Weapon Location: on back
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Style l hood color l black
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: none
Kunai Holster Location | Color: hip l black
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: thigh l black
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: none
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Exploding Smoke Grenade:
Makibishi:10
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 5 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 6ft
Weight: 170
Body Build: (dont fill out yet)
Eye Color: black
Hair Color: black
Family: none
Theme song: dnt have one ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:25 pm
The 3 bladed scythe is a uh special weapon, so you can't have that. And since you picked the weapons class, you need to fill your strengths and weaknesses according to them alright?
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:25 pm
Nicknames: "Kin" or "Maru"
Age: 15
Birthdate: 9/3
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White
Nindo: Never trust a guy in a tunic
Personality: Calm and Secluded/Ussually quiet, but gets angry easily
Behavior: Ussually nice, but can get mean when he gets serious
Biography: (Back Story) As a child, Kinmaru only knew his father. His father was a great warrior and shinobi. He was the one who taught Kinmaru the basics of being a shinobi. But one day, Kinmaru's father left to fight in a war. Kinmaru waited weeks for his father to come home, but no word came. Finnally, one day a Leaf shinobi came to their house. He handed Kinmaru his father's headband and katana. The shinobi told Kinmaru that his father had died in the war. Kinmaru couldn't talk to anyone for a week, he was to busy crying. Then one day, Kinmaru made a resolution. He would become a shinobi and become better than his father. He wouldn't die, he would fight on until there was nothing else to fight for.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Kaguya Bone Manipulation
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice: Katana
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
● Stealth
● Cunning
● Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
● Weak-Bodied
● Elemental Vulnerability
● Quick Temper
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
● Stealth [Class]
● Increased Bone Density [Clan]
● Wounds quickly clot [From the increased production of platlets in bones/Clan]
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Fire
- Secondary: Wind [At chunin]
Chakra Color: High
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
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Kaguya Bone Manipulation Jutsu
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style:
Maneuvers
Abilities
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
Custom Weapon 1: N/A
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
Maneuvers
Techniques
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________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Stomach/Long Straps/Black
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: Normal/Black
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh/Black
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Thigh/Tan
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: On Jacket/Black
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 25
Makibishi: 25
Shuriken: 25
Flash Bombs: 25 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 180 lbs
Body Build:
Eye Color: Deep Green
Hair Color: White
Family: Deceased
Theme song: Riot by Three Days Grace ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:27 pm
You start off with the first 4 jutsu , transformation, clone, and substitution and kai, thats it. And you need to apply for the bloodline as well.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:27 pm
Mints_Angel 1> yes except the things on his arms the picture was already with the words but i'll edit it to only show shoulder and up. Mints_Angel 2>yes he does not know his past
Strengths :
Primary Strength:
• Intelligence
• Great Chakra Control
Secondary Strength:
• Intelligence
• Great Chakra Control
• Stealth
• Cunning
Tertiary Strength:
• Intelligence
• Great Chakra Control
• Stealth
• Agility
Weaknesses:
Primary Weakness:
• Weak Body / Frail physique {Required}
Secondary Weakness:
• Low physical power {Required}
Custom Weakness:
• A weakness regarding your specific character.Mints_Angel 4>ya i know i actually read it ya know!
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:27 pm
Jaded_Propaganda The 3 bladed scythe is a uh special weapon, so you can't have that. And since you picked the weapons class, you need to fill your strengths and weaknesses according to them alright? and he starts as genin=3 when can i have ym scythe back jade? heart [edit] cobra don't mess with angel she has a low temper=_=" i should know i have to deal with her everyday....
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:32 pm
little mintchan [edit] cobra don't mess with angel she has a low temper=_=" i should know i have to deal with her everyday....
...not sure where the warning is coming from, since neither of us have "messed" with the other, but thanks for the warning I guess?
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:32 pm
I did apply for the bloodline. And Shruikan approved it.
and ok, I'll edit the other stuff. I wasnt sure sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:33 pm
Cobra_X little mintchan [edit] cobra don't mess with angel she has a low temper=_=" i should know i have to deal with her everyday....
...not sure where the warning is coming from, since neither of us have "messed" with the other, but thanks for the warning I guess?ya..she has the worst temper ever.....i had to drag her away to get on for awhile sweatdrop
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