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 Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:32 pm
The Kazekage would simply shake his head as he witnessed Velar’s actions. From here he could tell that Velar was a dark soul, though this was none of his concern. At this the Kazekage would face Velar before speaking.
"The next jutsu I will teach you is also quite powerful...watch."
The Kazekage would then form a few hand seals as his chakra began to swirl about his body. At this, the iron from the ground would swiftly be extracted before. Suddenly, the iron would become nothing more than large shards that began to jettison from the earth. These shards would be ten feet tall and wide that circled to a small sharp point at the end. Velar would do nothing but watch in awe as he witnessed this.
1/10 Satetsu Kaiho
Velar would smirk as he extended both his arms outwards. With this, he let his chakra assume their magnetic properties. Soon iron would slowly secrete from the ground and take the form of several small needles, similar to that of the ball of shards Velar had performed earlier. He hadn't quit mastered the form of the iron or fully understood the potential of the Satetsu. Velar would release his hold he had on the small needles of iron and let the reside back within the earth. Velar started yawning a little bit he found this kind of boring.
2/10 Satetsu Kaiho
Closing his eyes, the child would begin to meditate yet again. He let his own anger fill his body, taking form in a much stronger supply of chakra. His dark chakra would swirl about his body before assuming magnetic properties yet again. The iron within the earth would surface yet again as Velar attempted the jutsu.
"Come on..."
3/10 Satetsu Kaiho
Suddenly the iron would take the form of several small tendrills that extended from the earth, whipping the air furiously. Soon these whips would halt remaining in the air in an upright position. Velar had performed the technique, though it was not quite to its full potential. Velar knew he must make the iron take a more defined shape in order to perfect the jutsu.
4/10 Satetsu Kaiho
Focusing his chakra yet again, Velar would let the chakra turn magnetic. As the iron formed around the surface of the ground, Velar would make them shoot upwards, though with not enough chakra. Because of this the iron only formed small shards but it was much tougher due to the condensed chakra Velar had applied to it. He would mutter underneath his breath as he sighed.
5/10 Satetsu Kaiho
The Kazekage would simply shake his head as he watched the child attempt at performing the technique. With this, the man would raise his hands upright before speaking in a very dignified tone yet again.
"Watch..."
At this word, the ground would rumble suddenly as several large spike-like structures of iron would form from the ground. They would tower several feet into the air and would surely impale anyone who would be foolish enough to step over the ground.
6/10 Satetsu Kaiho
As this ended, the Kazekage let the structures collapse into the ground, leaving only but a few cracks in the earth as he faced Velar he would speak coldly.
"You must control the structures completely and let them take the form of your will..."
At these words, Velar would simply nod as he once again placed his arms extending from his body.
7/10 Satetsu Kaiho
Velar would let his charka circulate around his body, taking a visible form. As the streaks of black chakra formed around his body they would spiral about before halting at the edge of Velar’s fingertips, giving them a slightly metallic glow. As Velar’s fingers began to move about before shooting upwards, several small shards would jettison from the ground, breaking the earth and providing minimum damage to whomsoever decides to walk across it. This still wouldn't be the full effects of the technique, though Velar was willing to give it another go.
8/10 Satetsu Kaiho
The child's' body began to glow a dark aura. At this, small tendrils of chakra would escape Velar’s body before blowing softly in the wind. Soon the ground would begin to rumble as Velar’s chakra began to take a more defined shape. The entire area began to shake as Velar continued to focus more on his chakra. The magnetic properties caused Velar’s sound amps to ring off in a violent wave of sound and air pressure. The entire area would seem to suck inwards along with Velar’s chakra as if becoming in a vacuum. At this point, all objects that fell would fall at the same rate, showing the true power of sound manipulation as Velar continued to focus his energy.
9/10 Satetsu Kaiho
With this, the charka would spiral about Velar’s arms and then his entire body. The ground began to rumble as Velar’s chakra began to become much more focused, lessening the vacuum effect of the air. With this, large structures of iron would surface from the earth and tower several feet above the air. Velar had created a forest of tall tree-like structures of iron that overlooked the nearby area. Velar simply turned towards the Kazekage as he smirked.
10/10 Satetsu Kaiho
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:39 pm
The Kazekage would smirk as he watched Velar’s drastic improvements with his Iron sand jutsu’s. In fact, the improvement reminded him of his own son, who now is the Kazekage. Velar simply would smirk as he awaited his next lesson.
"Now I will teach you Satetsu Shigure. This too is a very powerful technique and requires more concentration than ever."
At his words, the Kazekage would clasp his hand together as he formed a few hand seals. With this, his chakra began to swirl about his body in a sudden and rapid pace.
1/11 Satetsu Shigure
As the Kazekage's magnetic chakra began to swirl about his body, Velar would stand and watch in awe. The several clumps of iron ore would suddenly shoot from the sky, darkening the entire outlook of the surrounding area. It was as if black clouds formed in the air. After a few moments of concentration, the Kazekage would perform yet another hand seal and released the hold he had on the clumps of iron ore. With this, the iron ore began to rain down upon the area, the Kazekage simply raised his umbrella as they fell across the entire area. But these drops of iron were sharper than steel and could pierce anyone within range, including Velar.
2/11 Satetsu Shigure
But Velar wouldn't hesitate even for a moment. As these shards of iron came towards his area, he would swiftly thrust his palms into the sky. His dark chakra began to swirl about his body and as he maneuvered his arms about, the child manipulated the shards to fall at all sides of his body. It would seem as it Velar had placed a barrier around his body as the shards fell downwards.
The Kazekage would simply laugh as he watched Velar, though he was rather impressed. At this, the Kazekage spoke harshly.
"If you can do this move...I have taught you all that you need to know."
3/11 Satetsu Shigure
As Velar’s chakra subsided he turned to face the Kazekage, smirking. Velar turned his head to look at all the shards of iron that had fallen to the ground. Raising his hands would allow these shards to clump together once again. This jutsu seemed rather simple, for Velar had previously done a technique similar to this. Velar would begin to manipulate his magnetic chakra yet again, smirking at how simple the technique was.
4/11 Satetsu Shigure
But Velar wanted to create a smaller version of this jutsu. Instead of letting the large clumps of iron settle in the skies, Velar would create a small baseball shaped clump levitate before his hand. With this, Velar would open his palm and extended his fingers. With this motion, the iron began to shoot forth from it at an alarming rate. This was as if a machine gun began to shoot our large shards of iron. The speed at each of the shards was amazing.
5/11 Satetsu Shigure
Velar would smirk as he stopped the shards movements. With this he clumped the iron ore together and let them settle high into the sky. Velar would then place his hands inside his pockets and casually made his way over towards the Kazekage. With this, he took the umbrella and then returned to his original spot. Smiling one last time, Velar would simply snap his fingers, letting the iron ore fall to the ground in the form of sharp rain. Velar wanted to see what the Kazekage himself would do in such a situation.
6/11 Satetsu Shigure
The Kazekage would then raise but one hand and as the iron came towards him, they would suddenly halt. The shards would then stick together forming a semi-circle barrier that covered only a portion of his body in a crescent shape. As the iron ore continued to fall they would soon stick to this barrier, leaving the Kazekage unharmed. Velar would simply smirk as he held the umbrella over his head.
7/11 Satetsu Shigure
The Kazekage would laugh as the rain subsided. As he turned to Velar, his face would turn strict as he spoke harshly. With this, he would raise both hands out in front of him, letting his chakra circulate around his body. Suddenly the clumps of iron ore would shoot from the ground, creating an almost river-like pile of iron ore around their feet and the surrounding area. The entire area was blackened from this and the smell of metal was overwhelming, but not to the Kazekage.
"Let's see how you use these techniques in a battle..."
At this, the Kazekage would simply place both arms extending from his body as he looked in Velar’s direction.
8/11 Satetsu Shigure
Velar would smirk as he folded his arms across his chest, similar to that of Gaara. With this, Velar would create a menacing smirk as large sharp pillars of iron would shoot towards the Kazekage at an alarming rate.
The Kazekage would simply laugh as he extended his fingers, letting the pillars stop as if suspended in time. With this, a large wave of iron would suddenly move towards Velar in an attempt to crush his body. The wave would tower several hundred feet into the air.
9/11 Satetsu Shigure
Lets' try something...
Momentarily thinking in his head, Velar walked towards this wave. With a slight gesture of his arms he would separate it and walk through. With this he extended his right arm forwards, letting the wave return towards the Kazekage with impressive speed. Upon moving closer, the wave would shoot out several large shards of iron which would easily pierce through flesh.
10/11 Satetsu Shigure
The Kazekage would laugh as he placed his palms onto the ground. At this movement, the ground would soon rumble. The wave of iron and the shards would then succeed into the ground. The Kazekage had placed his magnetic chakra into the ground, redirecting the current of iron back into its' original resting place. As he stood he would smile in Velar’s direction.
"Good job."
11/11 Satetsu Shigure
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:54 pm
Velar awoke from his sleep after his fight with Neos. The second hokage said" Wow that was on heck of a plan but you used too much chakra so you passed out. I have no more techniques to teach you so I suggest you go find the third hokage he has a whole bunch of techniques to offer. Come on follow me I'll take you to him." The second hokage pulled Velar up to his feet taking him to garden fields. Velar and the second hokage arrived at the gardens with the third hokage insight. The second hokage said" Greetings Sarutobi this is Velar he would like to learn some of your techniques." The third hokage nodded and greeted Velar politely.
1/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
The third hokage said" Greetings my name is Sarutobi or the third hokage which ever one you can remember the best." Velar nodded and said" Ok as you know I'm here to learn a few techniques so do you have any I can learn?" The third hokage said" Yep most of my techniques help manipulate mud if you're interested." Velar said" Sure I'll learn mud jutsu’s in fact I'll learn any and all the techniques you have to offer." The third hokage said" Well then.... You're going to be here awhile learning the jutsu’s I have to offer." Velar said" Well, Ok let's get started I've trained with the first hokage and the second hokage so I'm used to It."
2/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
The third hokage said" Ok, this first technique is called the Earth Dragon Projectile it Fires mud projectiles at the opponent from the mouth of a dragon created from mud. But first in order to do that we're going to need mud." Velar nodded. The third hokage said" Watch this.” He formed a few hand seals and used Earth Flow River then the dirt around them was turned into mud. The third hokage said" Now watch the mud dragon projectile it's pretty useful." The third formed the necessary hand seals and created a big glob sort of dragon from the mud that shot a long array of mud missiles.
3/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
Velar had memorized the hand seals and what the jutsu did. The third said" You keep practicing the jutsu while I find an opponent for you. The second hokage said that's how you usually learn jutsu’s. Velar nodded and began forming all of the hand seals for the earth dragon projectile jutsu. Velar continuously formed the hand seals until he had mastered the jutsu. This took longer then usual because he had no experience with mud or earth jutsu’s.
A few minutes after Velar had mastered the jutsu the third hokage came back to Velar with a new found opponent. But this opponent wasn't new it was Deo again.
4/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
The third hokage said" Velar this is Deo he is the fourth Hokage’s student he volunteered to fight you." Deo said" Hey Velar Are you ready for our rematch?" Velar said" Yea I've been training for it. So let's go right here and right now." The third hokage stood in the middle of them ready to announce the battle. Velar and Deo stood the average length apart from each other waiting for the third hokage to announce the battle.
The third hokage said" This battle is between Velar and Deo. This battle will begin when both fighters are ready." Velar and Deo both nodded signaling that they were ready for the battle.
5/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
Deo started off by throwing four shuriken in completely different directions and threw a single kunai at Velar. Velar quickly dodged the kunai knowing that he was planning to use the flying thunder god technique to transport himself from place to place. Deo then formed a hand seal and appeared behind Velar from the kunai he had thrown earlier. He then formed another hand seal and said" Thunder god current!" Deo then shot a large amount of electricity from the tips of his fingers going in to zap Velar. Velar used ashura senku as that was the only defense he could think of within two seconds.
6/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
Velar quickly turned around and did an upward diagonal slash to the left. Deo then vanished again and threw two shuriken at Velar’s back. Velar quickly went between the two shuriken and formed the hand seals for tree world construction and created an abnormal amount of trees and roots growing from the ground very fast with the ground still being mud. Velar then formed a few simple hand seals and created four earth dragon projectile dragons ready to fire around him. So now where ever Deo showed up he would still be vulnerable to Velar's mud cannon blasts.
7/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
Deo then charged straight head in towards Velar. Velar then commanded the earth dragon to shoot many earth projectiles at Deo. With every blast that was about to hit Deo he continuously used flying thunder god technique to disappear and reappear for his next attempt. After a few minutes of teleporting and mud firing Deo had reached Velar and clashed his sword against Velar’s sword. They both were short on chakra so the blade pushing wasn't that intense. Velar and continuously clashed until them both jumped back catching their breath.
8/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
Deo said" As you remember the last time we fought I said the flying thunder god technique allowed me to teleport to something that belonged to me. But my master has taught me the full extent of this jutsu now where ever I step I can teleport to it immediately or anything else I come in contact with. Watch this. This match isn't going to be a draw again." Velar quickly used water collision destruction and created a water encampment wall around himself expecting Deo's next move. Velar was right Deo appeared behind Velar and slashed him in the back of his barrier. Velar was safe for the moment.
9/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
But now Velar was out of chakra so he fell to his knees tired once again. Deo also collapsed from using too much chakra once again. Deo said" I guess we can't have a winner we're always going to get too tired because neither of us will give up. So I guess it's another draw." Velar said" Yea but looks like I still need a lot more training before I can challenge you to a rematch again." Deo nodded and formed a hand seal with the last of his chakra using the flying thunder god technique to appear back next to his sensei. The third hokage took Velar to some dry land and healing him. The third hokage was proud of Velar after one technique of training he had gotten a lot better.
10/10 Earth Dragon Projectile
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:01 pm
When Velar woke up from his healing by the third hokage he said “Wait, where I am? The third hokage said" You're in a meadow next to me being healed. You just came back from fighting Deo." Velar asked" Cool, did I win?" The third hokage said" Not exactly. It was another draw. Now we're going to move on to learning the next technique I have to offer. It's called Earth Style Wall. Now I know what you've been thinking. All my students think this exact statement. When will I ever need mud in a battle? That's what this next jutsu does. The user spits out mud in a line that shoots up in a strong barrier to protect the user from incoming attacks.
1/13 Earth Style Wall
"As always I will do an example for the attack." The third hokage formed a few hand seals and opened his mouth wide open. After completing the hand seals the third hokage began spewing mud out of his mouth Then quickly before you knew it there was a large mud wall there in fornt of the third hokage. The third hokage said" Now you tire and do the earth wall jutsu." Velar formed the necessary hand seals and spewed mud out of his mouth and built up a wall of mud but after a few minutes the mud wall slipped off. The third hokage said" You keep trying the jutsu until you can do it perfectly. I'll be here watching."
2/13 Earth Style Wall
Velar retried the jutsu continuously until it felt like his mouth tasted like a mud pie. Velar used water collision destruction and bended the water in his mouth gargled and rinsed. Velar then screamed"Blakh!" The third hokage said" Let's go find you an opponent." The third hokage and Velar left the area looking for a new opponent for Velar to spar.
The third hokage went to go ask Orichimaru if he found a new apprentice for Velar to beat down. Orichimaru shook his head saying" No". Velar went to go check on the second hokage but he said" There hasn't been any new people here since you stopped training with me."
3/13 Earth Style Wall
The only place Velar and the third hokage didn't look was the first hokage. Velar and the third hokage made their way to the forests to find the first hokage. When they arrived they saw two people bending wood. Velar thought to himself two people! Yes an opponent. Velar and the third hokage greeted the first hokage and Makia. Velar said" Hey Makia I haven't seen you in a bit." Makia said" I know I've made a few personalized techniques in the past few days that's why I wasn't coming here to train lately." Velar nodded wondering what his new techniques did and how they worked.
4/13 Earth Style Wall
Makia said" I assume you're here to spar with me. Am I correct?" Velar said" You're as sharp as knife Makia, and yes I am here to spar with you. The third hokage insisted on this." Makia nodded and asked the first hokage to announce the battle. Velar and Makia stood in place both staring into one another's eyes. The first hokage stood in the middle of them saying" This match is between Velar, the third Hokage’s apprentice and Makia, my apprentice. The match will begin when both shinobi are ready. Velar and Makia nodded showing they were ready for combat.
5/13 Earth Style Wall
The first said" OK now that both shinobi are ready the match will commence on my call! Let the match begin!" The first hokage jumped up to the closest tree and watched from one of the branches.
Velar and Makia both started out with plenty of hand seals. Velar saw that Makia was forming the same hand seals as Velar. They both simultaneously said" Tree world construction!" Then trees began growing from everywhere within two seconds because two were used at once. Makia formed some more hand seals and so did Velar. Velar used Earth Style Wall and created a mud wall in front of him knowing that Makia's next attack was an attack.
6/13 Earth Style Wall
Velar was correct. Makia finished forming his set of hand seals and said" Tree dragon projectile. He then began bending a large amount of trees around him and formed a long wooden dragon. The dragon immediately thrashed into Velar’s mud shield easily breaking through. Velar was severely hurt. Velar then said" Oh you want to play with dragons do ya?" Velar formed some hand seals and used Takitsubo no Jutsu to create a large amount of water. He quickly formed some more hand seals. While doing so all the water was continuously being bended upwards into the form of a Dragon projectile.
7/13 Earth Style Wall
Velar then commanded the dragon to thrust towards Makia. Makia was forming some hand seals and was scraped just as bad as Velar. Velar quickly formed some more hand seals while he was down he then said" Bringer of Darkness!" Velar then put Makia in Genjutsu the second he opened his eyes. Makia became freaked out and said" Ahh I can't see!" Obviously Makia had never experienced Genjutsu before. Velar quickly formed some more hand seals saying" Birth of Dense Woodland!" Velar began bending some of the trees and began binding the vines around Makia.
8/13 Earth Style Wall
Unfortunately for Velar Makia heard what Velar was doing and didn't need eyesight to stop it. Makia then said" Wood release!" Velar was astonished. Apparently Makia had created a jutsu so he could stop all wood attacks. Velar couldn't use wood attacks in this fight. He needed to use another jutsu quick. He realized that the mud from his wall was still on the floor so he could use the earth dragon projectile jutsu. He created two dragon made of mud shooting globs of mud towards Makia. The bringer of darkness jutsu had whore off. Makia saw the mud balls coming but he couldn't dodge or have enough time to use a defense jutsu.
9/13 Earth Style Wall
Makia was bombarded with mud balls by the time the feeling of sight recovered to him. Makia fell to the floor but he wasn't defeated. Velar was fresh out of jutsu’s. Well he wasn't but if he did a decent one it would immobilize him for a little while from exhaustment. Velar remembered wait I still have taijutsu! Velar then jumped in the air coming down with a cannon spike towards Makia whom was lying on the floor covered in mud. Makia quickly rolled over dodging Velar’s crushing foot seeing the ground break in his previous spot. Makia formed a few hand seals on his back creating a large tree that was floating in mid air.
10/13 Earth Style Wall
Makia formed some hand seals and said" Wood regeneration jutsu!" The tree behind makia began withering away and its nutrients and manipulating it into chakra replenishing his body. Velar looked up in dismay. Velar couldn't believe Makia had mastered such a powerful jutsu.
Makia's floating tree disappeared along with the land too. Makia said" I knew this was going to happen. I've heard that you exhaust easily but you use very powerful jutsu so I created a jutsu to heal myself knowing that I would be exhausted too." Velar looked up at him amazed he actually studied Velar.
11/13 Earth Style Wall
Velar knew the outcome of this battle because he couldn't use Ninjutsu but that didn't mean he couldn't true. Velar charged straight head on towards Makia. Makia quickly formed some hand seals saying “Wood destruction spikes!" Makia then created a huge amount of spike starting from him ending at the spot where Velar had started. Velar would be shot up in the air or pierced by a wooden needle. But Velar used explosion fist on the ground in front of him destroying the roots thus keeping him safe. Makia thought to himself very clever I see he has improved as well.
12/13 Earth Style Wall
Makia said" I'll give you this you have improved but I have improved more I have fully mastered and fully understand the effects of branches roots trees and wood and how they work for example watch this! This battle ends here and now!" Makia formed a few hand seals and floated the needles and pointed the spikes towards Velar. He shot the projectiles almost as fast as a bullet towards Velar. Velar’s clothes were cut up and began bleeding from everywhere his clothes were cut. Makia said" Told ya the fight was over." Makia walked away. The third hokage came and took Velar back to the plains to heal him.
13/13 Earth Style Wall mastered
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:40 am
Velar awoke saying" Why do I always pass out after a lot the fights...” The third hokage said" The reason you passed out was because you lost the match. You still need a lot more training so let's get started. Wait before we do I just want to say that you are a very powerful student. I've only seen a flew people with as much talent as you. If you learn all the techniques I have to offer you would be so much stronger and I suspect you would never lose." Velar nodded and said" Ok Ok if you want me to learn your techniques then start teaching me the techniques you have left to teach me."
1/7 Fire Dragon Projectile
The third hokage said" Alright alright just listen to my explanation and I haven't even told you what the technique does. This technique is called Fire Dragon Projectile it allows the user to shoot flame from the user's mouth and use it as a sort of gun. Watch me short-stuff." Velar said" Wait! Did you just call me short-stuff?" Velar said to him self in a quiet voice" Ok this guy's going down." The third hokage said" Just shut up and watch kid." The third hokage formed some hand seals and half way opened his mouth and a large amount of flame emerged from his mouth. He then moved his mouth in a circular motion and shot a large amount of fire.
2/7
Velar said" Cool, the first technique you teach me that has nothing to do with mud." The third hokage rolled his eyes and said" Just stop commenting and give the jutsu a try." Velar gave the jutsu a shot but didn't get it exactly. He retried the jutsu until he mastered it. Velar's will power was amazing he would continuously retry anything he didn't get whether he was tired or not. He wouldn't be satisfied until he had fully mastered the jutsu. By the time Velar had mastered the jutsu the sides of his mouth had scorch marks on them from all the fire coming out of his mouth. He sat down tired.
3/7
The third hokage said" Now let's go find you an opponent. As the third hokage turned around Velar said" Wait! I already know my opponent... It's going to be you! I've fought all the kages in the afterlife so far except for you and the fourth. So how about it." Velar got up slowly. The third hokage said" That would be completely unfair but I have an idea that will make it fair. The third hokage created hundreds of clones and split his chakra to about the same amount of Velar’s chakra. Velar said "Hey you had to make like 200 to reach my level of chakra ok you're going down!" One of the third hokage clones summoned king enma and ordered him to destroy all the extra clones.
4/7
The weakened third hokage said" Ok now let's get that match started!" The third hokage called king enma over and turned him into a long pole type stick. The third hokage said" No need to announce the match ready set go!" The third hokage charged towards Velar swinging his pole into his face right after forming some hand seals. Velar did the same thing except he used his sword instead of the pole. The pole and sword clashed then he opened his mouth shooting fire balls from his mouth from the Fire Dragon Projectile jutsu. Velar used ashura senku to go through the pole and the fire balls.
5/7
Velar went through the third hokage as well and went behind him doing a backwards round house kick that would trip the third hokage. The third hokage then vanished and a huge pile of mud took his place. The third hokage was now far behind Velar and was forming hand seals to use earth dragon projectile. The mud behind Velar began forming into a dragon shooting powerful mud balls at Velar. Velar didn't bother dodging them because he was too busy charging at the third hokage. The third hokage saw that Velar wasn't guarding the incoming mud projectiles so he turned them into Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
6/7
Velar immediately figured out his the error as soon as the heated mud smashed into his stomach. Velar fell to his knees with pain of the heated mud. Velar said" Nice strategy. I let my guard down even with the same level of chakra as me you still beat me easily." The third hokage said" That's why I was crowned the third hokage when I was still alive. I was protegy as a kid." Velar said" I'm not surprised and I don't doubt it." Well at least I can do the Fire Dragon Projectile perfectly now." The third hokage nodded saying" Yep here drink this." The third hokage gave Velar another blue potion. Velar’s wounds were quickly healed.
7/7 Fire Dragon Projectile
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 9:44 am
Velar looked to the floor saying" I..... I need to become stronger. Please third hokage teach me more techniques." The third hokage noticed the complete voice change that Velar had made he was serious now apparently. The third hokage said" Ok it's not like I have anything better to do." Velar nodded saying" OK I have no time to waste I must become stronger!" The third hokage jumped back saying" Ok Ok just stop yelling an I'll teach it to you." Not only had Velar’s voice changed so had the expression on his face. He was no longer happy he was power thirsty. His face reminded Velar of Oricihimaru’s.
1/ 7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
The third hokage tried not to make eye contact with Velar but their eyes continuously met. The third hokage thought to himself I better just teach this kid the technique before he goes mad. The third hokage said" Ok the technique I'm going to teach you is the shuriken shadow clone technique." Velar nodded. The third hokage said" Ok to learn this jutsu you have to be able to send a shadow clone through hand seals at anything. Now watch me throw these shuriken and kunai and duplicate them." The third hokage threw a shuriken and kunai and formed some hand seals.
2/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
The third hokage then sent his chakra to the shuriken first creating two duplicates of it then forming some more hand seals for the kunai. The kunai then multiplied by three creating three kunai flying towards the tree along side with the thrown shuriken. Velar said" Ok I think I can do it." Velar then threw two shuriken then forming the necessary hand seals he multiplied them by four turning them into eight shuriken. Velar then stuck them into the tree. Velar said" Ok Sarutobi I would like to challenge you to a battle." The third said" I was a hokage you want to challenge me? I'll cut my power down to your level."
3/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
The third hokage created several shadow clones and summoned king enma to destroy all the clones while the real third hokage fought with Velar. Velar had a blood lust sort of look in his eye waiting for the battle to begin.
The third hokage said" Go!" The third hokage quickly formed some hand seals. Velar watched as the third hokage formed hand seals just as fast as Velar. The third hokage then used fire dragon projectile shooting many fire balls at Velar. Velar used his tree world construction jutsu and swiftly dodged the incoming fireballs. Velar charged towards the third hokage forming hand seals followed by water collision destruction being casted from the hand seals.
4/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
The third hokage was surprised by Velar’s strategy but he was a kage he knew these strategies forwards and backwards. It took a lot more than that to pull a fast one on the third hokage. The third hokage used earth flow river sending Velar backwards. Velar used his water collision destruction to splash the mud away on the floor next to him. Velar then charged towards the third hokage while bending his water and throwing it towards the third. The third hokage threw a kunai and used shuriken shadow clone on it. Then it seemed as though the water flew back. It was really caught in the invisible bag the kunai were carrying.
5/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
Velar quickly bended the water out saying" Nice trick but my trick is better." Velar swiftly formed some hand seals and used Takitsubo no Jutsu and created a large amount of water now he could bend the water at his will. The third hokage formed some hand seals and created a mud dragon from the earth flow river earlier. The mud dragon shot a few mud globs slowly at Velar. Velar had no time to finish his hand seals so he created an ashura duplication to distract the third hokage. The clone then charged straight at Sarutobi with his sword while Velar used the last of his chakra to cast a powerful jutsu.
6/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
The third hokage fended off the clone with two kunai clashing kunai with sword long enough for the real Velar to finish his jutsu. The third hokage had stuck his kunai into Velar’s clone's stomach disappearing in white puff of smoke. Velar said" Do you surrender?" The third hokage said" I never surrender. Bring it on. If I lose then I deserved it." Velar said" Ok it's your funeral. Wait we're dead so... Prepare to lose!" Velar had created his water dragon projectile with the time he had received. Velar then weaved the dragon and hurled it towards the third hokage. The third hokage was struck.
7/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone
The third Hokage’s body was completely desinigrated. Velar said" Wow I completely annhilated him!" Then Velar felt a large amount of body warmth behind him and saw a kunai appear under his chin. The third hokage said" You didn't annihilate me I just used a mud clone. While you were talking I replaced myself with it. Next time don't talk so much other than that you were a very powerful opponent. I would've been in for it if you didn't try and make me beg for mercy. Velar nodded knowing that he still needed more power.
7.5/7.5 Shadow Shuriken Clone Complete
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 3:42 pm
As the boy arrived into the afterlife, a figure appeared in the distance. Smiling, the figure moved into the light revealing itself to be Orochimaru. "Welcome Velar. It took you long enough to die and I was growing impatient. Any longer and I would have gotten the Kazekage, Jason, to go look for someone else worthy of the Seal." Said the snake nin. He then walked over to Velar and placed a hand on his shoulder, paralyzing him with sheer coldness. Bending down, orochimaru started to whisper into his ear. "Seeing that your one of the last members of the Kaguya clan, I think I'll bestow upon you the Earth Seal." As quick as lightning, Orochimaru bit into the neck of the boy, giving him the seal upon the front of his chest bone.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 3:45 pm
"AHHH GRRRAAAGG!" Velar screamed out it pain and lay down and started thrashing. What has orochimaru done to me? "Ahhhhhggagghh!!!" pain flared and velar went unconcious.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 3:47 pm
"Now. Live in servitude under my boy. Be my vessel when the time comes and carry out my deeds when I call for you to do so. Now go on and find out how Jason, the kazekage, knew that I wanted you to come here." Said Orochimaru as he disappeared into the distance.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:21 pm
As Hurdy entered the afterlife, a figure appeared in the distance, much as one appeared in front of Velar. There was a chill in the air and then the figure entered the light, revealing that it was Orochimaru. "It seems that one of my followers managed to get away from my seal... Now, I have chosen you as his replacement. Serve under me when I call upon you. Never turn your back to me and I will grant you true power." Said Orochimaru as he had closed in on Hurdy and then placed his hands upon the boys shoulders, leaning forwards to speak in a whisper. "And be sure to never fail me." There would be a sharp pain in Hurdy's neck as Orochimaru bit into it and the Darkness Seal appeared upon his upper right shoulder. Orochimaru then disappeared as if he has never been there.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:40 am
Velar nodded saying" So who do I go to?" The third hokage responded" I have no idea I can't seem to think of anyone to train you other than Orichimaru but if you did then you would make his prediction true. So if I were you I would just run through the after life and hope you find a teacher. Velar nodded and set off away from the third hokage. Velar saw the second hokage training Deo. Velar's eye brows rose surprised Deo was learning something different from his normal master. Velar then realized that's it I'll go find Deo's old master. Velar headed off to the forests.
1/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar reached the forests looking around in search of Deo's trainer. He didn't even know what his name was or how he even looked like. Velar realized how mysterious Deo's master was. “Who are you?" A mysterious voice from above said. Velar looked up he couldn't tell where the sound was coming from. Velar said" I'm Velar I recently fought Deo when he was consumed by the curse seal." The voice said" I see why have you come here?" Velar said" I'm looking for a new trainer. I'm trying to learn some more jutsu." The voice said" Very well, my name is Yondaime. I was the fourth hokage."
2/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar nodded and said" Ok if you're going to be my teacher I have to sort of be able to see you." Yondaime said" Fine I'm behind the tree to your left. I just like talking like that to freak people out so they will leave me alone." Velar said" Why do you want to be left alone? DEo is a very strong ninja you should be proud that you were the one to bring him to his success." Yondaime said" I'm just like that I enjoy freaking people out." Velar said" Finally a kage with a sense of humor." Velar laughed and the said" Ok what techniques are you going to teach me?" Yondaime said" The Flying Thunder God Technique."
3/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar remembered those words. Velar said" Oh yea Deo used that technique lot isn't that the one where you teleport to anything that has a mark or a kunai or anything else that has been touched by the user." Yondaime nodded saying" I see that you have memorized what the technique does. Ok this technique is very powerful but it costs quite an amount of chakra. Velar nodded saying Ok how do I do it?" The third hokage said watch me and then I'll give you an explanation." The third hokage formed a hand seal and then threw two shuriken at two different trees.
4/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
The shuriken then stuck into both trees and Yondaime vanished. Yondaime then reappeared next to the shuriken on the left and then formed the hand seal again disappearing and reappearing again at the other shuriken. Yonadaime continuously teleported back and forth so Velar could get a better idea of how it worked. Velar said" OK I get it man that technique is cool!" Velar then threw two kunai at the same ones Yondaime did. As soon as the kunai stuck Velar formed the hand seal teleporting disappearing and reappearing at the tree the kunai had hit. Velar said" Awesome I already got it!"
5/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar said" Ok what now?" Yondaime said" How am I supposed to know... What do you normally do?" Velar said" I usually find an opponent to fight or something." Yondaime said" Sure we can do that. I have been told that you're familiar with the rebirth jutsu made of water?" Velar nodded. Yondaime said" Yea I was originally the best shinobi ever until I died in order to save the leaf village. Anyway being the great ninja I am I have a jutsu that will let me bring back the target as long as I have their body. Make sure you kill this guy because he's annoying if you don't I will." Yondaime laughed.
6/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Yondaime pulled out a body for a big bag lying on the floor. The body seemed rotted it seemed that Yondaime had used it many times for his other apprentices. Yondaime formed his extremely long set of hand seals. When Yondaime actually finished his hand seals the body quickly opened its eyes. Velar stepped back feeling weird inside. The body then said" I am Heo. Master Yondaime why have you summoned me? Yondaime said" See that's why this guys annoying he always says master Yondaime when he talks to me. Ok you're orders are to fight Velar and make sure he uses the flying thunder god technique."
7/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar said" Cool you can bring people back to life and command them to do what you want as long as you have the body? Man that is so cool! Can you teach me?" Yondaime said" No sorry, It's a kage secret that I don't share with anyone not even the other kages so I guess it’s a Yondaime secret." Heo said" Can we start with my mission master Yondaime?" Yondaime rolled his eyes saying" Ask Velar when he's ready then you can begin your mission." Yondaime put air quotes around mission and then jumped up into the trees to watch the battle. Velar said" Ok I'm ready. Bring it on."
8/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Heo said" Alright." he then formed some basic hand seals as soon as he was done he removed two kunai from his pouch wielding them one in each hand. Heo's jutsu was for a clone jutsu he then created two clones of himself charging at Velar. Velar threw a kunai at the floor in front of him and at the clone to the far left. Velar also used tree world construction after of course forming the necessary hand seals. Heo's clone to the far left poofing away in a puff of smoke telling Velar that one of the clones was a duplicate and just an illusion. Velar then charged towards the two clones with his sword being wielded with both hands.
9/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar hit one of the Heos incorrectly and was cut in the back by the other Heo which was apparently not a clone. Velar formed a hand seal on the floor and then disappeared and reappeared at the spot where he had stuck his kunai into the floor. Velar formed some hand seals as soon as he was on his feet again. Velar formed the hand seals for the Shichuurou no Jutsu bringing four pillars up out of the ground trapping Heo. Heo formed a hand seal disappearing and reappearing in the spot where he had started at the beginning of the match. Heo said" That's right I can use the Flying Thunder God Technique."
10/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar formed some more hand seals saying" You can't use the flying thunder god technique if your hands are secured or broken. After forming the hand seals Velar used birth of dense woodland creating wooden roots that began wrapping around Heo. Heo then vanished once again but this time it wasn't the flying thunder god technique it was another clone that Heo had created. Velar guessed it was when he was saying that he could do the Flying Thunder God Technique. Velar thought to himself very clever but I know exactly where he is Velar turned around while forming a few hand seals and wielding his sword right after.
11/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
Velar then charged towards Heo who was forming hand seals. Heo then said" Dragon fire jutsu!" Heo then opened his mouth shooting a wild amount of fire towards Velar. Velar closed his eyed using ashura senku to go through the fire saying" I may be dead but I'm still part of the gouken masters clan." Velar then finally put his sword away saying" Time for some good old fashion taijutsu butt kicking!" Velar then jumped towards Heo using using Udima kick towards Heo creating a massive tornado. Heo went in spiraling up in the air due to the fast wind currents. Velar said" I haven't used that technique in a while."
12/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
As Heo fell to the floor Velar jumped up in the air flying towards Heo with two kunai in hand. Velar stuck his two kunai into his stomach very deeply lodged within. Velar dived to the floor faster than Heo to move into his next attack. Velar quickly pulled out his sword cutting up Heo with his swift sword movements. Heo was then on the floor with his eyes close as the essence of life disappeared from him. Yondaime said" Nice job you have no fear to kill that's really good." Yondaime grabbed heo's body and stored him in his bag and hid it again. Yonadaime said" Ok you have learned the Flying Thunder God Technique."
13/13 Flying Thunder God Technique
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 4:41 am
(Sorry that first line sounded gay lol I just didn't know what else to put lmao)
Hurdy yelled in pain as the snake man had his way with him, Leaving him with a mark. Hurdy then collapsed and layed on the ground a jumbled heap, waiting to leave the afterlife, and hopfully leave the pain of the curse mark.
Hurdy was lying there for a time length that even he did not know, until he started to feel the pull again, he was being dragged into the real world, and a new body. Hurdy couldn't help but wonder, whose life would he infect next?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:36 pm
see's portal after waking up in the afterlifde again walks through portal... ninja
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:22 pm
Velar arrived in the afterlife annoyed he was getting tired of this process and he didn't want to run into orochimaru again so he got out of there as quickly as possible.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:24 pm
when u die u must remain dead for 1 day
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