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I don't know the exact word, I think it might be third person.

Anyway, like I said. You ARE NOT doing it as if you are the person. You don't say "I" unless you are talking.

Let me give you an example of a RP post.

Sasuke ran up to the lake and jumped across it to land on the surface. His chakra control allowed him to land and stand on the water, it was the walking on water technique. "What have I got myself in." Sasuke said as he ran his hand through his hair.

Notice how I'm not Sasuke. Think of yourself as a puppet master. You control them but you aren't them. You control their actions and words but you still aren't the character. But when they talk they can say I, because that is what HE is saying. Also make sure to capitalize. Click shift for the first letter of each sentence.

Also just keep in mind this isn't texting or chatspeak, this is heavily on literacy. So make sure you spell it "what"

Also you want to do everything but what they say in past tense. So instead of walks, you'd say walked.

....and then his friend Marco walked up.
Also you need to capitalize names.

Also just keep in mind, it is leap and not leep.

Also if you want to end the sentence with " "
Remember that the rule is that the period goes before the sentence. I'm going to do your whole RP post but in the more correct way, I'm not insulting you, showing you an example you might understand.

sitting under an apple tree i think to my self "wut is there to do today". then my friend marko walks up to me and says "hey want to go by the lake and swim", filled with excitment i leep up "let's go". we run all the way there and befor i even have the time to take my shirt off he pushes me in. as i'm falling i grab his arm and yank him in with me...."hahaha" we both cry. "Wut a day i think to my self as i sit under the same apple tree the next day.

Sitting under an apple tree, he thought to himself. "What is there to do today." Then his friend Marco walked up to him and said "hey, want to go by the lake and swim," filled with excitement, he leaped up "let's go." They ran all the way there and before he even had the time to take his shirt off, his friend pushed him in. As he fell, he grabbed his friend's arm and yanked him in with him... "Hahaha" they both cried. 'What a day' he thought to himself as he sat under the same apple tree the next day.

You make only a few of the same mistakes over and over, so if you get those laws down, you'll be fine.

You aren't the character, you simply are saying what they are doing. You say he or you call your character by his name unless you are in " " in which you are talking. Such as:
Gin smiled as he looked up at the rose. "What a beautiful rose, but I'm more beautiful." Gin said as a grin formed on his face.

Make sure you capitalize names and after all periods to start new sentences.

Make sure you put periods and comas BEFORE the end of the " " and not right after.

PAST TENSE ASWELL.

That's pretty much it, do those simple things and your fine. It's almost like your telling about the past, like your telling a story about another person. But for specific things that they say you can quote, like in a school paper.

Looking into the darkness, i'm walking thew the snow covered ground. just then my friend marko is on the street ahead of me "marko" i yell. he looks over at me just in time to see me as a car rams into him from the side. "nooooo" i yell running over to him, but it's to late. tears fall from my eyes screaming his name over and over again. "why couldn't this have been me, why" then the driver get's out in a hurry. he says "oh my god, i didn't see him" as i can smell wiskey on his breath.

Tenkei ran across the field, as he reached the middle of it he jumped into the air, performing a flurry of hand signs he holds his right hand in a circle around his lips then a burst of flames blow to the ground. He follows the flames and meats several ignited grass blades, his hands blur in another grouping of hand signs "Pheonix fire jutsu" the flames on the ground rip into rows upon rows acrossed the field. Tenkei turns around, leaving the flames that now spread wildly unattended to.

How was that?

It was a rainy night as Tyson was reading one of his Dads' scrolls on ninjutsu. It was describing a jutsu knowen as the Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu . "This jutsu, can it really be performed?" Tyson ran out into the rain with a look of per determination. He started to do all the necessary hand sign from Ox to Bird, and nothing happened. "I must not be strong enough yet." Tyson then ran back in his house drenched in rain and continued studying so one day he could master that jutsu.

How was that?

Tyson was training next to the clear lake training using the Water Clone Technique. He would ratger be swiming in the lake then practicing his ninjutsu. Tyson was grasping for air after fighting another one of his clone for the upteenth time."Forget this," Tyson then went and dived into the lake. "This feels so good."

How about now?

Sample

Rath yawned greatly as he sat up from his napping spot under a tall oak. His hand lifted to scratch at his short brown hair. The mans fingers would brush out dirt, and knock off leaves with each pass along his scalp. A sound in the distance rang through his ears, his head turning in the direction of the disturbance. For a few moments the sounds continued, until a squirrel perked it's head up from the fallen leaves and sniffed the air. With a smirk, he stood from his place on the ground alerting the small critter which immediately ran up the nearest thing it could find. Sadly, the nearest thing to the squirrel was Rath's pants leg.

There he was, in the midst of the forest dancing around and screaming like a fool with a squirrel making laps in his pants. Finally Rath would trip over a tree root, and fall to the ground the squirrel exiting his pants and darting clear up a tree. Dazed and confused he sat for a moment questioning the reality of what had just happened to him. That was until an acorn bounced squarely off of his head, causing him to gaze up into the tree. Another acorn fell, smacking him in the eye this caused him to make a strange sound much like a dog being smacked on the behind.

In the tree, the squirrel was dropping anything it could find on him. "Hey give me a break!" He called up to the thing he had once shared his pants with. No avail. The squirrel began to pelt him over and over until he finally moved far enough from the tree and out of it's range. "Geeze, I'm glad he didn't have a jealous wife or something." Images passed through his mind for a moment, of another squirrel attacking him out of rage for it's 'boyfriend' cheating on her with him. (I have an overactive imagination..)

Ryugo was outside making bomb kunei when he heard the rustling of tree branches."Sounds like i have company."Ryugo said as he started making hand signs, then when a bunch of anbu black ops from the hidden rain village came Ryugo used the hidden mist jutsu."Your to weak."Ryugo says as he slashes all there neck with a kunie and when he was about to sit down a jonin appeared with a scar on his left eye, wearing an old blood covered trench coat."Are you Ryugo?"Asked the jonin as he looked at the dead anbu."you must be strong to notice me through all the mist this should be interesting."Ryugo said as he took out a demon wind shuriken.

(um i think thats it was it good enough)