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 Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:19 am
I'm still here makie so you are not alone.
I'm debating whether or not I should put my writing up in Ria...cause I need more of a concensis opinion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:27 am
You should put yopur writing up her on Ria!!
I want to read it! I'm sure it's good! ^.^
Yay!! I'm not so alone!!! But Kuri keeps leaving when I come... He dun't like me any more. U.U
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:29 am
Yeah it probably is...I guess I'll put it up!
It's okay Makie. He doesn't hate you...
and now for something completely different.
TaiBaiWong's one problem with the Ria game so far(put in white for everyone to mouse over later)
Darius's sprite looks like a chick. XD!
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:33 am
Yay!! Makie can read it now!!! >.<
Noo... Kuri just wants every one to think that, but secretly he dun't like me. >.>
XDDD Nice Darius... XDDDD You're one true problem in the game is something that makes me laugh! ^.^
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:35 am
Yup that's my one problem overal. XD!
And yeah first chapter is up!
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:36 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:50 am
YES!!! GO SAKURA-CHAN!!!! GO REPLY USING YOUR AWESOMENESS SKILLS OF ROLE PLAYING AND REPLY!!!!!
-making Sakura feel pumped to reply-
Ohh! It's up! I shall go read!! ^.^
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:57 am
Oh. Yo! ::flings hands up::
Ai is here.
Oh Makie-san is here.
To lunch i go.
XDDD.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:02 am
MEANIE KURI!!!! -cries-
You're not my friend any more, meanie!!
Oh, Darius, it's a good story, but... Ano.... You need spell check, and there are a few parts that don't make sense. You should also take time to describe everything to the extent. Take time to describe where he is and stuff. And Darius' personality... I could see what kind of person he is, so I like that. Overall, the plot is good, and I like the chapter, but it was a bit fast.
That's my evaluation at least. ^,^
NYAHAH! I just got free 3k from a Brown giftbox thingie!
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:05 am
Yeah that will happen from time to time because I don't have a word proccesor with spell check because my dad doesn't want me using it for projects. Understandable but that means I can only work with notepad...
expect more chapters as they come and yes it's a bit fast, but expect some fun and expect a certain cameo from someone in Ria who got a little bit of a change.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:08 am
Ah, that's the same with my friend, she isn't allowed to use Microsoft Word or a spell check so she uses Note pad. Tee hee, I have to proofread it all when she finishs something. XDDD
Well, I'll be looking forward to more chapters, Darius! ^.^
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:14 am
Well expect them soon I just want more feedback first.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:19 am
I <3 volunteering as a Red Cross member. So prettiness outside cuz of the snow. Time to do research -.-
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:26 am
xD
I think I wrote a novel than a RP reply.
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 10:28 am
Oh! Sakura-chan is here!
Time for me to go and reply now!
-is afraid because she said the word novel but if it's long it'll mark the longest post Sakura-chan ever had with Oliver-
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