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 Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:06 pm
Its more for formality that we are supposed to keep things having to do with problems or comments about characters before they are accepted in the character applications topic.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:13 pm
The latter is done and so I return to format.
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Aria Di Blasfemia Eterna Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:19 pm
I wanna approve his character.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:25 pm
Ichiban no Takaramono Hitori demo yuku yo Shinitaku natte mo
Koe ga kikoeru yo Shinde wa ikenai to
Tatoe tsurakute mo Sabishisa ni naite mo
Kokoro no oku ni wa Nukumori wo kanjiru yo ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ lol aria... post @~@ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Megutte nagarete Toki wa utsuroida
Mou nani ga atta ka Omoidasenai kedo
Me wo tojite mireba Dare ka no waraigoe
Naze ka sore ga ima ichiban no takaramono
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Aria Di Blasfemia Eterna Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:29 pm
I love the way this man writes, but the power is hard to judge. It seems to need limitations of a sort, but i don't truly know. It is certainly a fun power though.
Though he should stay away from blue bracelets.
Hm. *goes to look again to decide if help is desired or not*
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*walks away to go get malix* As much as i like to play approval mod as much as possible, the power is vary close to a few lines, and i didn't see where the ball bounced.
But they might have been the double's lines.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:35 pm
You give me something to reduce an I SHALL! Like lady garrington! scream heart
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:41 pm
honestly I do dislike nitpicking but it has to be done and I am getting better at being sorta impartial.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:51 pm
I would have given you stuff to reduce... but you're kinda artistic... which makes me biased...so i handed it off to malix, because he has a cutting edge, and can be non-partison.
I would have just shoved you in neutral btw. The reason you have to have an alignment, is because you are placed under a specific principal based on it...so it matters.
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Aria Di Blasfemia Eterna Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:54 pm
I've seen far worse. Where being artistic means nothing. Malix as a compliment you are a pathetic nit-picker compared to some of the ban hammer lords and conclusion jumper I've witnessed.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:58 pm
haha yea i know though that is the thing I could do worse but I dont like being mean after all so yea.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:05 pm
Yes indeed the changes will be made post haste. Instead I will use the power of suggestion whilst they sleep to create dreams. Like in that one episode of whitest kids you know only without the heads exploding. Then we can do battle within the dream world until Rhez is slapped and told harshly to shut up.
~Edit:And so the changes have concluded open to more changes.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:12 pm
necro I dont see the changes in the ability
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Aria Di Blasfemia Eterna Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:36 pm
there's less pain. But it's subtle.
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:42 pm
Quote: but dream manipulation is a little more complex. Upon wanting to do so his tongue grows sharper and finds it's way into the hosts sub-conscious.(The change into speech) The powers are strongest during a full moon which can be greater explained by the bio. The earlier ability gaining power from the moon has yet to be truly mastered if at all.(The removal of illusions until a later date) "The person will no longer hear voices in their head and be swayed by them."(No more being trapped in the head) "Rhez becomes stunned"(The drawback for messing with dreams when the person wakes or he becomes interrupted while whispering sweet nothings .) If what your saying is turn the dream muddling ability into a "yet to be learned" that can be done. Necro has proly given you the most troubles out of all your members Necro apologizes. crying
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:46 pm
Ichiban no Takaramono Hitori demo yuku yo Shinitaku natte mo
Koe ga kikoeru yo Shinde wa ikenai to
Tatoe tsurakute mo Sabishisa ni naite mo
Kokoro no oku ni wa Nukumori wo kanjiru yo ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Trust me im pretty sure you have not given the most troubles lol,I think crystal has ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Megutte nagarete Toki wa utsuroida
Mou nani ga atta ka Omoidasenai kedo
Me wo tojite mireba Dare ka no waraigoe
Naze ka sore ga ima ichiban no takaramono
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