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Laram Myusai

PostPosted: Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:59 pm


I think I have to do this.

Laram woke up with a yawn.
"It doesn't feel like it will rain today," Laram said feeling the weather patterns like the elders taught him. He climbed his way as high as he could physically go in the tree. Laram peeked his head out of the protection of the leaves and inhaled deeply.
"The air here definitely has a different aroma than Hoenn, but not an unpleasant one."
Laram looked over the town. Eyeing the townspeople and sighed.
"I would really like to stay here until I can see Cronde, but then again it might take some time."
After debating with himself for almost three minutes Laram decided he would go. Laram leapt from the branch he was on and began to fall. Edging his fall towards another branch he grabbed on to it as fast as he could. It snapped just as he expected, the little branches at the top weren't going to slow his descent much but anything helped when doing a stunt like this. Still falling at a fatal velocity, Laram grabbed as many branches as he could. When he got half-way down the tree the branches started bending rather than breaking.
"Good," Laram thought. "I still have plenty of time to slow myself before the ground."
At the bottom of the tree Laram had already stopped himself three branches up, and was now jumping to the last branch. As he grabbed the branch with his hand he pumped his legs doing a full swing around it before dropping to the ground. Looking back up at the tree Laram regretted his stunt. Remembering all the lectures his father scolded him with over the years, Laram couldn't help but feel chastised as he surveyed the carnage he caused in the upper canopy of the tree. A tear came to his eye as he thought,
"I have to think before I act, it seems like everywhere I go, I cause devastation. I'm sorry tree, please forgive me." *hugs tree*
Laram takes one more sorrowful look at the tree before he walks away. As he walks away five twig sized branches fall to the ground.

I hope it's alright. I'll be trying to get my character into Konohagakure when it opens.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:24 am


"What would it be like to fly?"

Kumogakure, the village hidden in the clouds was truly beautiful as the transient light of the setting sun spilled over the entire vast length of the bridge. The usual rumble of activity, from the laughter of playing children to the mighty screams of old men hawking their wares, added to the surreality of the evening and a single breath rose into the air as if it was a wish to the heavens.

Kaminari Aoi, at twelve was beginning to blossom into a rare flower - ugly, disgusted, and totally unsure of herself. Yes, she was one of the most prettiest students in the academy and had excellent grades, but deep inside her, she knew. She was a monster that fed on people's praise and selfishly stuck to the notion that all the negative comments were untrue. She was weak, vain... pathetic. A life such as hers need not be wasted anymore and just a single leap, a bound into oblivion, would end it and everything would be alright. The gossip and the stealthy sneers would stop and she can finally touch the sky that she so loved. All she had to do was move and get pass the bridge's railings.

Yes, just a single jump.

"Oi, little girl, you still haven't paid for that dango stick ya' know! I'm about to close-up and I can't wait much longer," an old man, obviously the dango shop owner, hollered at her from across his stand looking bored. At the lack of response, he continued, "Well, hurry up. I ain't got all day."

"Oh!" Aoi had just noticed that deep inside her pale hands lay the remains of a half-eaten pink dango, all of its filling effectively squished into a gross inedible goo. "Um..." she paused a bit, looking abashed before brightening into her usual demeanor that rivaled the sun, " I'm so sorry, Ojii-san! Heeeere, I'll pay, but only if you let me pick through the last batch of dango with a discount." the vendor gave her a death glare, but had grudgingly held out the box of pastries for the girl with the s**t-eating grin. After all, she had looked so sad just now and she was his best customer.

As Aoi held a large bundle in her hand and thanked the old man teasingly, she noticed that despite him appearing to be pissed off at her, he was unconsciously putting more dango into her bag. He also accompanied it with tales of his exploits when he was still a young shinobi, a fond look on his face. Her current situation was forgotten... no, resolved. Aoi realized that escaping from one's problems was not the answer, but to face it head on and change for the best. Some people do care about her and faces flashed into her mind as her smile grew wider and her need for life was re-affirmed. She gave the old man a cheeky remark and was rewarded with a blast of self-righteous fury.

Yes, she could fly this way too.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:50 am


My opinion...

...Pass...

...And I believe the whole crew would quote me.

OH and @J3, I would say you passed too O:

/not crew.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:08 am


@J3: You mix past and present tense and you have this!!!!: *open mouth in shock*!!!!!!! The first part is really nice and then you have that. XD So yeah... it's still a pass just don't do that.. XD

@Happy Sparky. Oh hi again. XD Pass.~

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:50 am


Rika frowned at her mother. "Why are you making that face, okaa-sama?" She was biting her lip, and her eyes were red. "Are... are you crying?" she asked, rather shocked. Her mother, the fearless kunoichi, reduced to tears?

"Yes!" her mother cried tearily. "As much as I shame the Iida name, how can I not?" She gave her daughter another hug, for the umpteenth time. Her mother's soft blonde hair pressed against the side of Rika's face, and not for the first time Rika associated it with the fresh feel of grass; grass was the beacon of water, after all, and Rika had come to cherish grass in the unchanging landscape of the deserts.

"You know I'll come back," Rika assured. Yes, she was the one who did the reassuring in the relationship. It had come to be her role like that.

Her mother sniffed, patting her head. "Did you talk to your brother?"

"Yes."

"Your father?"

"Yes."

"You have food? Maps? Everything?"

"Yes, okaa-sama."

"Don't forget to scrub in between your toes, and don't eat too fast. Try not to be too nice to people you don't know, and don't be naive. Not everyone is as close as we are," her mother warned. She was referring to the caravan; though it was more than one, obviously, everyone who lived in this nomadic family were all very close, and simply called their community 'the caravan'. They trusted each other, they survived together.

Rika, being just about immune to embarrassment, nodded. "Okay."

"And keep your hair practical."

"Of course. Why would't I?" Rika replied, confused. She had worn short hair for all her life.

'Well... you might meet a boy..."

"I know plenty of boys."

"Good grief girl, that's not what I meant!"

Rika said nothing. She was really confused now. Her mother sighed. She didn't know how her baby girl turned out this way, and couldn't tell if it was for better or worse.

"I suppose... you should get going," her mother said sadly, trying not to say anymore. More words and she might reduced to a ball of sentiment and tears.

Rika gave her a mild smile. "Don't worry, okaa-sama. I made a promise to come back, didn't I?"

Her mother nodded. "Alright. Off you go," she said, turning Rika's shoulders and facing her towards her destination. Her bags and possessions were on her back, and her mother made certain her boots were on correctly.

Rika started to walk, then. First, in uncertain, shuffling steps, but the more she took the faster she pressed. She glanced back at the caravan several times, memorizing the picture she saw. It was one as pretty as any artisan's painting, a picture of community, of children playing in the sand, of the story tellers engrossed by the fire, of the women and men sowing or moving things or just standing and talking. Some of them, including her okaa-sama, saw her and waved.

No, it was definitely worth more than any painting. It was a moving neighborhood, her childhood. It raised and shaped her into what she was today, and she was afraid to leave it behind. The farther she got the less she saw, until the image of the caravan had been obliterated and all there was left was the wind whipping the silent sands and the constant desert heat.

Enough doting. It was time to push forward, to Sunagakure no Sato.

(( sweatdrop sorry it seems quite long)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:06 am


Thanks, Qyp and Kouri-chan. <33
Will start working on a profile for Kumo after midterms.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:56 am


A gentle breeze slowly swept across the plain, the grass tenderly swaying against the wind. A single blade of grass tickled Okazai Yasuo's nose, stirring him. He awoke to the bright sun hidden behind red clouds, night slowly approaching. "Just how long was I out?" he wondered, observing his surroundings for the first time in hours. It wasn't wise for a ninja to just fall asleep in some random field, but that never bothered Yasuo. He enjoyed these few moments of peace between training and school. It was times like this that allowed him to just stop and think, to slow down and observe a bigger picture. Is there more to the world than just Otogakure? he wondered. Oh, how he longed to find out, how he yearned to see the world through eyes unclouded by hate or malice. He knew of the wars of the past that pitted village against village, country against country. To be bitterly honest, war sickened Yasuo. Maybe it was just his nature, but tranquility appealed to him more than war. He gazed longingly back up at the sky, dreaming of seeing that serene world become reality. "Yasuo! Yasuooo!!" He looked back towards the village, spotting Sachi on the main road. "Come ON, Yasuo! It's getting late!" she cried. Yasuo let out a heavy sigh, and glanced one last time at the sky before joining Sachi...
PostPosted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:04 am


soul_society13
A gentle breeze slowly swept across the plain, the grass tenderly swaying against the wind. A single blade of grass tickled Okazai Yasuo's nose, stirring him. He awoke to the bright sun hidden behind red clouds, night slowly approaching. "Just how long was I out?" he wondered, observing his surroundings for the first time in hours. It wasn't wise for a ninja to just fall asleep in some random field, but that never bothered Yasuo. He enjoyed these few moments of peace between training and school. It was times like this that allowed him to just stop and think, to slow down and observe a bigger picture. Is there more to the world than just Otogakure? he wondered. Oh, how he longed to find out, how he yearned to see the world through eyes unclouded by hate or malice. He knew of the wars of the past that pitted village against village, country against country. To be bitterly honest, war sickened Yasuo. Maybe it was just his nature, but tranquility appealed to him more than war. He gazed longingly back up at the sky, dreaming of seeing that serene world become reality. "Yasuo! Yasuooo!!" He looked back towards the village, spotting Sachi on the main road. "Come ON, Yasuo! It's getting late!" she cried. Yasuo let out a heavy sigh, and glanced one last time at the sky before joining Sachi...
Passed. But, it was kinda hard to read since you didn't use paragraphs. Watch out for that in the future 3nodding

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Hoshigaki Hiru
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:59 am


Jester Halcyon
Rika frowned at her mother. "Why are you making that face, okaa-sama?" She was biting her lip, and her eyes were red. "Are... are you crying?" she asked, rather shocked. Her mother, the fearless kunoichi, reduced to tears?

"Yes!" her mother cried tearily. "As much as I shame the Iida name, how can I not?" She gave her daughter another hug, for the umpteenth time. Her mother's soft blonde hair pressed against the side of Rika's face, and not for the first time Rika associated it with the fresh feel of grass; grass was the beacon of water, after all, and Rika had come to cherish grass in the unchanging landscape of the deserts.

"You know I'll come back," Rika assured. Yes, she was the one who did the reassuring in the relationship. It had come to be her role like that.

Her mother sniffed, patting her head. "Did you talk to your brother?"

"Yes."

"Your father?"

"Yes."

"You have food? Maps? Everything?"

"Yes, okaa-sama."

"Don't forget to scrub in between your toes, and don't eat too fast. Try not to be too nice to people you don't know, and don't be naive. Not everyone is as close as we are," her mother warned. She was referring to the caravan; though it was more than one, obviously, everyone who lived in this nomadic family were all very close, and simply called their community 'the caravan'. They trusted each other, they survived together.

Rika, being just about immune to embarrassment, nodded. "Okay."

"And keep your hair practical."

"Of course. Why would't I?" Rika replied, confused. She had worn short hair for all her life.

'Well... you might meet a boy..."

"I know plenty of boys."

"Good grief girl, that's not what I meant!"

Rika said nothing. She was really confused now. Her mother sighed. She didn't know how her baby girl turned out this way, and couldn't tell if it was for better or worse.

"I suppose... you should get going," her mother said sadly, trying not to say anymore. More words and she might reduced to a ball of sentiment and tears.

Rika gave her a mild smile. "Don't worry, okaa-sama. I made a promise to come back, didn't I?"

Her mother nodded. "Alright. Off you go," she said, turning Rika's shoulders and facing her towards her destination. Her bags and possessions were on her back, and her mother made certain her boots were on correctly.

Rika started to walk, then. First, in uncertain, shuffling steps, but the more she took the faster she pressed. She glanced back at the caravan several times, memorizing the picture she saw. It was one as pretty as any artisan's painting, a picture of community, of children playing in the sand, of the story tellers engrossed by the fire, of the women and men sowing or moving things or just standing and talking. Some of them, including her okaa-sama, saw her and waved.

No, it was definitely worth more than any painting. It was a moving neighborhood, her childhood. It raised and shaped her into what she was today, and she was afraid to leave it behind. The farther she got the less she saw, until the image of the caravan had been obliterated and all there was left was the wind whipping the silent sands and the constant desert heat.

Enough doting. It was time to push forward, to Sunagakure no Sato.

(( sweatdrop sorry it seems quite long)


Wow love that! I'll pass you since Dimi seems not to have noticed your post xd

Pass!
PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:36 pm


Seiya sighed as he sat on the roof of his home. He was frustrated. He just couldn't understand the finer applications of Genjutsu. Sure he could use them but they weren't all that good and were easily dispeled most of the time. He could pull of Ninjutsu easily and he was good at Taijutsu but other than dispelling a Genjutsu he could barely detect most Genjutsu and his own Genjustu were pathetic. He sometimes wondered if he should try and focus more of his time on studying Genjutsu so he could use them easier or if he should stop trying to improve that facet of his training and focus on Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. He smiled as he got to his feet.

"I guess I'll just focus on what I'm good at." He thought aloud before leaping off the roof and landing in a crouch on the street.

As he walked down the road he wondered what he should get for lunch. Should he get some ramen, curry or stir-fry? Or maybe he should just go home and make a sandwich.

"Great thinking about food is making me hungry." He complained aloud as he put a hand on his growling stomach.

Kaore Ryu Akira


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 6:51 pm


Forgive me but I have a TERRIBLE memory when it comes to names and Bloodlines, ESPECIALLY if their Japanese. D8 In Naruto I only remembered Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto (obviously!) and Kakashi (I finally remembered after the 30th book owo) Soo... I cannot remember bloodlines/moves... I might learn here though :3 My goal really. So this is about a girl, trying to catch an eggplant thief.

"HE WENT THAT WAY!" an old man in charge of the market shrieked, his voice unusually high for a grown man.
"I GOT IT!" Sayuri yelled, her voice brimming with seriousness.

Turning away, she let out a grumble... "Eggplant thief... What a joke...Why can't we just go and fight dragons or something...."
"THAT WAY!" ,the old man compellingly shrieked again.
"GOT IT!" Sayuri shrieked back mimicking his voice, and before he could say anything in remark, she was off.
Her feet skimmed across the pavement, after the 'eggplant thief' .
"Idiots...' She muttered. She followed the direction the man had pointed, which had gradually led into a great expanse of wheat. 'What! How am I supposed to find anything in this me-!'
Sayuri narrowed her eyes, as she spotted a gray figure racing toward the field, a few meters behind here. In it's jaws it held a purple eggplant.
"What a JOKE!" ,She said outraged, her eyes burning with the ridiculousness of her mission.
'Might as well...' She pinpointed the rabbits next moved, and pounced, moving with lightning speed as she caught the rabbit.
It's eyes brimmed terror as it struggled, trying to get free. "Not on my watch..." She growled, as she snatched the eggplant away. 'Rabbit soup might be good...' She thought observing the horrified rabbit, now struggling like a maniac, it's body racking itself, trying to get away from the monster, Sayuri.



-Oh... I give myself a 4/10 8D-
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 8:58 pm


Akira, love the format, the psychological conundrum was good but there could have been some variants to the term genjutsu that could have been used to make the text slightly less repetitive xd

However, very good, pass.

Lulu great interaction, storytelling and description, but you don't need to skip a paragraph between every sentence. However very good, looking forward to RPing with you too.

Pass.

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Amaya Fujiko

Beloved Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:25 am


Okay guys, I am a USERPER but it is only beacause my username is based on my RP charcter.

Here goes!
(My character's weapon is a katana)

Amaya Fujiko ran across the dirt road, the golden tassets on her clothes reflected in the sunlight. "Where the hell are you?" She shouted out. Looking around to try and find the enemy shinobi. Her katana seemed to get heavier and heavier in her hand, as more and more blood gushed out of a wound of her shoulder. "Damn it" she uttered weakly.

The rouge shinobi appeared in front of her, seemingly out of no-where. "Haha, though you could beat me? Your just a little girl with a stick". The shinobi stared at her, laughing as she struggled to stand up. "I'll show you what this bloody stick can do" Amaya said, a dark look in her eye. She stabbed him right through the chest. "Mission complete"
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:11 pm


Amaya Fujiko
Okay guys, I am a USERPER but it is only beacause my username is based on my RP charcter.

Here goes!
(My character's weapon is a katana)

Amaya Fujiko ran across the dirt road, the golden tassets on her clothes reflected in the sunlight. "Where the hell are you?" She shouted out. Looking around to try and find the enemy shinobi. Her katana seemed to get heavier and heavier in her hand, as more and more blood gushed out of a wound of her shoulder. "Damn it" she uttered weakly.

The rouge shinobi appeared in front of her, seemingly out of no-where. "Haha, though you could beat me? Your just a little girl with a stick". The shinobi stared at her, laughing as she struggled to stand up. "I'll show you what this bloody stick can do" Amaya said, a dark look in her eye. She stabbed him right through the chest. "Mission complete"
pass.

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Simpashia

PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:34 pm


Simpatia panted in fear as the burglar walked into the attic. The moon was the only essence of light through the window, Simp's eyes were full of fear, he could see the man who had just killed his grandparents, his teeth crushed harshly against each other, he continued to breath very heavily, fortuned enough he hid himself well, beneath a sheet, he looked like any other sheet-covered furniture there. He looked at the man with fear-full eyes, identifying every feature he could find, and he saw enough, a left hand with only one finger left, a right eye with a very noticeable scar, and tattoos on his bold head, arms, and legs. Simp continued to pant, however, the man was panting twice as hard, making Simp's breath a whisper. The burglar walked slowly investigating the attic, Simp just fainted at the sight of this. ----------

The next day the police found Simp in the attic, unharmed, he was taken to the sheriffs office, were he was fed and given the proper treatment to calm him down, that very day the police called his parents, and after a while of calming him down he finally spoke. The police walks up to him and ask if he could identify the criminal, Simp remembered he had studied the man very well, yet when he thought about it, and finally spoke, he said "I don't remember how he looked like."
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