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 Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:23 am
THe black figure gasped a little as it quickly did a handsign and was struck with the spike from Komens foot straight through it's chest. "I got him." Komen said with happiness in his tone. But his smile would turn upside down in a moment as the black figure started to turn into a mud clone. "Damn!" Komen said as retracted his chakra spike and rolled on the ground after his strike. Komen grabbed his swords from his chakra strands and held a defensive stance as His Byakugan eyes scanned the area for the mans presense. Komen turned behind him as he heard a ground and something come flying out form the bushes behind him.
16/20
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:24 am
the man quickly nodded, and said" you should be,.. the next match is shino vs kira.. lets get started...."
Shino quickly enetered teh ring, and sdid some hand sighns" earyh dragon projectile..." and eargh drgon quickly shot at kira.. kira quickly dodge, and did some hand sighns... flying swalow. his kunai had ivisible chakra.. lee knew what this was.. he ahd already learned this jutsu... kira quicklyswung at shino who doged, but not good enouht, his arm had been cut by the hcakra.. and he quickly screamed. kira came behind him.. intending to drive him down with a kick....
7/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:27 am
It was one of Komen's wood clones and it had 5 Kunais sticking out of it's back. "Damn...one down..." Komen said as he held his defensive stance toward the bushes that the black figure had recently attacked. He made his way toward the bushes ever so slowly. He heard handseals and finally saw the figure with his byakugan eye. "damn!." Komen said as he recognized this technique. He quickly started to bolt for the nearest tree as he heard the words, "EARTH DRAGON PROJECTILE!" A earth dragon appeared out from the ground and started to decimate everything in it's path with earth, mud and rocks.
17/20
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:31 am
Komen held fast to his blades as he saw his other clone ready for the plan to get underway. Komen waited behind the tree as the technique had finally finished. The path of destruction that the Earth dragon had created made everything strewn about. Fallen trees, leaves and various plant life all over the place. Komen stepped out from his barely standing tree and hald his blades at his side. "Hey you! You think your bad? then come and get me!" Komen said as he started to run to his clones location.
The clone had used his Henge no Jutsu technique to hide as a piece of a fallen tree. The plan was just about to start as Komen just reached the area behind his clone.
18/20
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:38 am
shino quuckly did some hand sighnbs, and a wall of earh appeared that kira smashed into. he quickly fellt o teh gorund, and shino sai" nice try kira.. but not goo enough. lets goo. shino quickly did some hand sighns, and the same raon quickjly appeared, hitting him. shino had one, and the announcer said" and thsi fight goes to shin!!! it will be shino and lee in the next round.. evrybody.. get ready.. becuase this is gonna be a fight to remebr.." teh whle crowd cheered.. itw as amazing.. lee had never been in uch a place...
8/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:43 am
The crowd slowly stopped, and the announcer said" ladies and gentelm men. th final round of this tournament!!!! lee vs shino!!! lets see how this one gos. will it be leafs very owbn shinobi.. or the hidden haze.?" te whole crowd booed when they herd hidden haze.. and lee quickly got ready for battle.. it quicly begunm. shino quikcly got behind lee. lee quickly jimped up in the air, and usee leaf great whirlwind.. to send him flying. lee then turned arund just in time to see him hit teh wall. lee amnged a slight smile and said" well.. well.. well... it lookes like the haze willmwin after all......" lee then jumped up..
9/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:43 am
The black figure saw that Komen was tired. Komen was breathing hard as an act to lure the man closer to get a taijutsu attack in. THe black figure laughed as it ran straight for Komen and had his hand up to deliver a killer panter strike to the tired Komen. Komen smirked as he saw that he was in range. "Now..." Komen said calmly as his clone puffed back into form and struck the figure right underneath the chin and sent him flying up a bit. Komen's Moku Bunshin got back to the ground and delivered a flip kick to send the black figure soaring even higher. "Komen Now!" His Bunshin said as he dissappeared after his use had been finished.
19/20
Komen threw his blades into the ground and used the hilts as a kind of spring board to gain height. Komen got right to the opponent and hugged him tight so he could move. Komen heard the figure gasp as Komen grabbed him. Komen then did a handseal at the back of the Figure. "Say good night. CHAKRA SUPAIKU YOROI!!" He said as his tenketsu points gathered chakra and projected his spikes at every direction. Piercing straight through the target and made him into human swiss cheese. Komen dropped to the ground still holding the holed-black figure. THe figure dissappeared as he heard clapping coming from behind him.
20/20 Jutsu Shou Complete.
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:46 am
shino quickly threw some kunai at lee, and lee blocke them with his katana. lee then quickly used hurricane draw.. as very powerful wind currents hot at shino. shino quickly created an earth wall. and lee watched as teh wind slightly slashed it, and broke off to teh side.. it would have badly damged him.. if that had not happend. lee ten said" well it looks like little shino as some tricks up his sleees, but not enough. lee quickly did some ahnd sighns, an threw some explosive cards at the wall. making it shtter to bits. lee then just stood.. waiting to see what would happen... itw as too quite
10/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:49 am
suddenly a hge earth dragon appeared form teh rbbel, and shot at loee. in teh heat of the oment, lee was trapped. lee had no idea what to do.. he then suddenly ahd it. lee quickly began flcikering towards shino. the earh dragon following him. when lee was about a yard away. he quickly tuirned around, while doing some hand sighns. he quickly threw soem fire at the dragon.. ignaiting it.. as he then did some hnad seals, to go ight threw shino.. the dragon tehn hit shino.. flame and all.. as lee quickly flciered away.. he ehard a booing in the crowd... as teh announcer said" well i8t looks like lee, gouken get to train with yondaime.
11/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:51 am
lee was very ahppy, as yobdaime quickly apeared, and said" now everyoje stop boooing.. tis boy is veryv talented.. and i beleave in him.. so please stop this. he is a vry good child.. who i have known for a while now..."the crowd tehn stopped, as yondaime walked away with lee. they quickly ran away.. towards the hill, and arrived. yondaime sat down with lee, and said" good job out there lee. you won teh tournament.. and now i will teach you flying thuinder god.. an actual teleportation jutsu.." lee quickly nodded, and said" thats great when do we learn..." yondaime quickkly tehn sauid" well how about right now..."
12/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:54 am
lee quickly nodded, nad tyondaime quickly showed him the handseals. he then said" okay ;ee, this is all that you ned for this jutsu.. i hope not to see you again for a while.." lee quicjklybnodded, he knew teh reason for thart would be because he was dead. lee then quickly thanked yondaime.. as he could look up at teh sky, and see the golden cloudes of life. he was slowloy being sucked back to the living world.. and yondaime watchjed with a smile on his face" lee. you know your goal.. now acheive it..." wa sthe last that lee heard, befiore he was gone.. yondaime the fourth. what a great man....
13/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:08 pm
Komen heard some laughter as well as he quickly retracted the chakra spikes back into his body and got to his feet. He quickly pulled his kunai from his belt and looked over the area to see someone coming from behind a tree. "Hmm?" Komen siad as he stayed in a defensive stance waiting for that person to come out from the cover of the tree. To Komen's surprise, it was the black figure clapping for him. "You. you still want to fight?" Komen said as he was about to make a charge straight for him. Komen was tired of this on going fight and wanted to end it.
1/13 Flying Thunder God.
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:15 pm
The black figure laughed a big hearty laugh. It looked like it was about to keel over with laughter. Komen raised an eyebrow as he stayed on the defense. "What is so funny?" Komen asked as he wondered if this guy was just crazy.
THe black fgure started to subside from his laughter as he started to speak. "No Komen just that you take these things a bit too seriously." Komen could recognize the voice and let his guard down.
The black figure took his mask off as he had a smile. "THird Hokage...I should've known. Komen said with a sigh then a slight smile as this was really just a test.
2/13 flying thunder god.
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:22 pm
"You did well Komen." THe third Hokage said as he threw off the black cloak and gear and returned to his original shinobi robes. Komen smiled and nodded to the third as he placed his Kunai back into his belt and walked over to his swords to pull them out of the ground.
"You know Komen, I think you need to start using more variety of techniques. You seem to be contantly using that one or two techniques over and over again. THat can be really go against you." THe third advised him.
Komen nodded as he thought about it. "Well I only use those techniques over and over like that because I'm really use to those. Like the Chakra spike armor. It is a versatile and quick move for a defense." Komen explained to the Hokage.
3/13
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:40 pm
"Yes even though it is a very unique and powerful defense. It will not be a defense forever if you constantly use it. A shinobi of great intellect will see that and devise a strategy to defeat you while you use that technique. If you use the technique too much you risk the enemy figuring out how you do that technique." THe third said as he started to walk back to the main village area. Komen never thought of it that way as he followed the Hokage. THat revealing his common moves would create a strategy against him. He started to remember those words carefully.
4/13
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