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I'm personally not sure about your first ability....( O m O ) I'm kinda scared to approve it because of that. But everything else seems fine....hmmmm I say Approved

HOWEVER, if another approval MOD overrules me that may change so please do be aware my approval is not solid! ( > m < ) That I cannot stress enough.



You don't really need a pouch of clay. You have mouths on your hands that will mend explosive clay. Also you can only really have projectile based items in your inventory atm until you go guy stuff....

So I say change that and afterward you will be Approved

Approved

I think that will be fine, once that change is made you are Approved

lol Its okay xD we all get that way

Thank you both for the approve :3

In your first attribute add "Slightly increased" strength etc.

In your second attribute to me is too similar to Tamer class attribute which increases one's senses. and just too many things being increased for a single personal attribute. If you chose one of those like sight only then I'll accept also you can always chose something entirely different.

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Full Name: Valoren Shiranui
Nickname: Val, Valoren

Age: 16
Birthdate: October 24
Gender: Male

Height: 66 in/135cm
Weight: 123 lbs./60 kg

Nindo: "Fear the Calm Before the Storm "
Personality: Valoren is a relatively calm individual who prefers speaking in a quiet voice, often yawning between sentences. He sees life as dull but often warns people to beware the calm before the storm while rarely ever seeming to follow his own advice. Although he is perhaps the most extreme possible case of albino, it hasn't seemed to bother him much and he's even marked over with with bright red paint, ignoring the remarks of others.

Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Genjutsu
Subclass: Sensor

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Bloodline: Ranton (Under Approval Process)

Chakra Pool: 245
Chakra Element: Suiton and Raiton
Chakra Color: White
Chakra Materialization: Valoren's chakra forms in a flickering aura

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Ranged Combat
Weaknesses:
• Strong Minded Foes
• Close Quarter Combat
Fears:
• Dying without Achieving anything
• Being Caught and Defeated by A Simple Genjutsu

Class Attributes:
• Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius
• Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased
Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster.
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Personal Attributes:
• Learn Bloodline Techniques [1] Post Faster (Subject to Change)
• Learn Genjutsu [1] Post Faster

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 8
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 12
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: N/A
Weapon Range: N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location: N/A


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• 10x Shuriken
• 15x Kunai
• 5x Smoke Bombs

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Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton
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Raiton
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Ranton
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Valoren was born not only left handed but albino as well in the village of Kumogakure, a village mostly dominated by darker skinned people. Although this did not directly affect his teaching, it did cause some tensions between him and the people of the Academy while he attended. One day, while attending, he inadvertently used a very very poor version of a simple Ranton technique. It was then that his family was alerted to the presence of the bloodline within their family. They were baffled as neither of them knew of the limit within their own family ties. This led to a violent split between Valoren's mother and father, the young boy going with his mother due to his father's renouncement of Valoren's existence. Unsure what to do, Valoren's mother took him to the Academy and sought a tutor for the boy to manage his chakra control so he wouldn't go and injure himself with more Ranton techniques. This was accomplished but Valoren was in turn slowed in his progress through the Academy, only graduating with people who were about two years his juniors. This has not discouraged Valoren and he only sees it as a momentary lapse in his ability, being a step behind other class mates.

Sorry, the 345 was my fault, other guilds with similar classes run using 300+ so I accidentally jotted down 345 without a second thought. Thanks for catching that sweatdrop

Ready For Re-inspection