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 Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:19 am
xD I just listened to "Forgotten" by her and I have to write this-- Is it wrong I watched an anti-SasuSaku AMV for inspiration?
Forgotten
Don't let me hear your foot steps
Try not to tell me those words.
Stop in your tracks on that path,
And listen to my heart pour:
"Don't let me be forgotten.
Try not to run away from your fears."
The sight of your face stopped all comotion,
Even the tears in my eyes.
"Don't let me be forgotten,
Since I'm the one that failed to keep you here."
Just remember me,
Because you'll never be forgotten.
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 2:01 pm
That's cute. :3 You can always depend on songs to inspire you..
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 3:06 pm
Sure can. :3 I wrote another one.
Twisted Love [Title doesn't really fit. xD;]
It's the tears in my eyes,
On my face and crack of my heart.
Your stoic face or small frown
Creased in and your own broken soul.
We almost seemed to fit as one the day you left,
You for power, me for you.
Deep Blue does mix into my heart now,
As well as that black I considered true.
It's the tears in my eyes,
On my face and crack of my heart.
Your stoic face or small frown
Creased in and your own broken soul,
That probably made me love you.
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:33 am
This is the first SasuSaku poem I've ever written so it might not be that good...
Standing astonished
tears filled with dread
as he walked away
remembering what he said
"Annoying"
Trying to stop him
tears filled with love
the moon is their witness
shining above
Leaving
Silently crying
tears filled with pain
she'll be here forever
through sun, snow and rain
Waiting
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 2:37 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 4:30 am
Hide and Seek
Can you find me?
In the middle of things,
when I'm alone and broken?
As I walk the dark halls of
lost childhood,
When I crumple in pain
from my burden,
When the leaves fall
and the seasons leave me cold?
Reach out, in the night with
the full moon,
As I leave the past behind,
will you stop,
and try to find me?
Another one of those impromptu things. What do you guys think?
@Kawaii_KaNami-chan1821: Lovely. I like the style of writing, plus the way it's been artsified to fit the poem.
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 2:57 pm
This is getting better everyday! biggrin I made another one!
Confused
First it seems,
you hate those around you.
Then you turn around,
and encouraged me when I was down.
So what am I,
in between?
You've made me so confused,
by doing this to me.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 3:47 am
heart heart heart
Happy Valentines, every one!
heart heart heart
Here's some more poetry:
Ode to the Alone: Sakura
The paper hearts just make you cry
Sweet ol' love songs don't make you fly.
A heart that longs and waits and sighs
As the stars go flicker by.
Would it have been better if
he was here and not adrift?
To have you heart broken while he is whole,
your nights alone, as is his soul?
The minutes and hours and days and weeks
your love not measured for what the heart seeks.
The weeks, the months, and even years,
only serves to flood your eyes with tears,
Till he arrives, unbroken and complete,
though he may think your love obsolete.
Because no matter how, it's great, it's fine.
So long he's here, don't mind a lonely Valentine.
Ode to the Alone: Sasuke
Hearts ablaze to you mean nothing
as is candlelight, chocolate, and frosting.
For your heart is as cold as stone.
You don't mind being alone.
But at night when you're alone it's true,
someone's loving thoughts turn to you.
You may deny that you wish it so,
as you sit in the company of her foe,
That your thoughts, unbidden, are filled with she
whom you left in darkness, tears flowing free.
Perhaps you had a chance, of somehow tonight,
to kiss and embrace in the moon's gentle light.
You wave away such thoughts of care-
to love her is a thing now you wouldn't dare.
Maybe one day, when you reach for her hand
will you allow yourself her love so grand.
Lame-o, I know. But it's Valentines. I'm entitled to be lame.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 1:29 pm
I like Sasuke's. biggrin So romantic... *puts up hearts for Valentine's Day* Sasu-Saku~
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:39 pm
I got a couple. :3 Four in fact. biggrin *nibbles on chocolate* The first two go together. :3 A letter poem and a reply. biggrin
Why
I never asked you
to be nice to me.
I never needed you
to care for me.
So why
you of all people.
Why did
you of all people.
Why why why
were you so nice.
Why why why
did you care.
It's not your
job to do this.
So why
just why.
Why Answered
You may be right
but I'm nice anyways.
That may be true
But I do it anyways.
No one else
would have.
No one else
could have.
I'm naturally nice
but you don't see.
I knew no one
could confront you.
I want this
to be my job.
I do this
because I love you.
Untitled (Can't think of a name)
Love is like a dream,
it can never last.
When it does,
it turns into a nightmare.
At last when you awake,
you find the love gone.
Those who hold to hope,
usually receives grand love.
Untitled (Can't think of a name)
Flip through the album,
and search the photos for the special ones.
Encarved in the dark oak cover,
is a blossoming cherry tree.
Remember the sweet memories,
that taste of creamy happiness and bitter tears.
They are like chocolates,
sweet or bitter they last forever.
Some of its pages yellow with age,
and some put in for the newest additions.
The yellow aged are of family,
the new white pages are full of friends and fresh memories.
Flip to the back,
and add the newest photo of memories.
I like them. :3 Don't you? biggrin
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:36 pm
All this poetry is so nice...
But I can't write poems either. I usually just read them, or get inspired by others. My brain is lacking in that department... sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 12:55 pm
Far Away From My Reach Every night i remember... Your eyes and your face... I want to hold you but... Your so far from my reach... Under the same sky... Over my hopes and dreams... I swear... We will meet again. Just a little poetry i just made up...under the same sky sasuke and sakura could think the same thing..
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 2:33 pm
Taniki Kiminaru Far Away From My Reach Every night i remember... Your eyes and your face... I want to hold you but... Your so far from my reach... Under the same sky... Over my hopes and dreams... I swear... We will meet again. Just a little poetry i just made up...under the same sky sasuke and sakura could think the same thing.. That's sweet...
I usually try not to get to far into the romance things, because it makes me cry. And I hate crying. But I love these!
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:14 pm
I know, they're all so great right? biggrin We have very creative minds here. :3
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:18 am
One, to jump this topic up. Two, I have two poems to share. <333
Untitled
I am lonely,
without you.
I am lost in my mind,
I need you.
Your my map,
in the land of dispair.
Your my lanturn,
in the dark.
So please,
forgive me.
And please,
hold me.
Because I need your love,
I jut don't know how to show it.
Your Stormy Grey Eyes
When I look at the cloudy sky,
I'm reminded or your stormy grey eyes.
Like a hawk,
they sweep the battlefield looking to fight.
Like a cat,
they search for their prey and find its weakness.
Like a fish,
they see everything as if you never slept.
Maybe watching the clouds is a good thing,
if it reminds me of your stormy grey eyes.
The second is my favorite of the two. I got the inspiration of an episode where they show Sasuke's greyish eyes up close kind of. And it was cloudy when I looked outside. <33
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