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 Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 4:43 pm
Slapped who? What?
The chapter was great. I loved the interrogation with Jeremy, the funniest part was when he started cussing. Great work, keep it up there, Seaphron.
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 8:42 pm
Slapping, i think, is a basic interrogation technique.
"TELL ME WHERE HE IS." "NO!" -SLAAAAAAPPPP- "GOD. crying OKAY! OKAY! HE'S -place-" "Kthx."
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 4:34 am
@Fish - Glad you enjoyed. The whole slapping thing is nothing important.
@Betman - Oh yeah wasnt even thinking about that!
Announcement! My Personal Computer has been fixed so I can pretty much type my story whenever I am not in school. The only downside to this is I will most likely not be able to post the chapters until friday night. (but there should be at least 2 or 3 Chapters though)
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 1:53 pm
Seaphron Announcement! My Personal Computer has been fixed so I can pretty much type my story whenever I am not in school. The only downside to this is I will most likely not be able to post the chapters until friday night. (but there should be at least 2 or 3 Chapters though) -Nevermind.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:21 pm
Seaphron @Fish - Glad you enjoyed. The whole slapping thing is nothing important.
@Betman - Oh yeah wasnt even thinking about that!
Announcement! My Personal Computer has been fixed so I can pretty much type my story whenever I am not in school. The only downside to this is I will most likely not be able to post the chapters until friday night. (but there should be at least 2 or 3 Chapters though) Why Fridays?
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:24 pm
LOL @ Draken's #
"Da Spork!"
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:30 pm
Huzzah!
I'm thinking of starting my own Cult-ish story soon. >_>
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 5:36 am
@Fish - I can see how that would work but that would be a little complicated.
@Monkey - I can go on the family computer on fridays and upload what chapters i have. (stupid rules)
@Maul - Glad you liked it.
@Wayne - Yea! I enjoy reading them!
Also if you have any means of transportation from games such as the arwing or warpstar please post them here.
Chapter 12 and 13 are typed out. I will try and upload them before friday if possible.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 9:24 pm
Seaphron @Fish - I can see how that would work but that would be a little complicated.
@Monkey - I can go on the family computer on fridays and upload what chapters i have. (stupid rules)
@Maul - Glad you liked it.
@Wayne - Yea! I enjoy reading them!
Also if you have any means of transportation from games such as the arwing or warpstar please post them here.
Chapter 12 and 13 are typed out. I will try and upload them before friday if possible. Sweeeet. I can't wait to read them. My means of transportation is a flying monkey named BOB. BOB stands for Basic Operating Buddy. He is my friend and he flys around and does other cool stuff. Of course I'm just making this up and don't want you to actually put this, but the idea just spurted out of my head at the moment and I just felt like I'd share it with you.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:41 am
With luck I have posted Chapters 12 and 13!
Monkey I will think about the flying monkey it sounds intresting.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:34 pm
I love this series. Its well written, and flows, and its just got good s**t goin' on. cool
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:34 pm
Seaphron With luck I have posted Chapters 12 and 13!
Monkey I will think about the flying monkey it sounds intresting. Lol. But dude, I wonder who LF is.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:36 pm
raet two chapters!
I think LF is Lifeless Fox if I am not mistaken Monkey. (I remember him saying something about him last saturday.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:48 pm
Awesome. Very suspenceful and I liked how in the beginning of the first chapter it smoothly transitioned from a normal morning to an exciting event.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 5:19 pm
Battle stations people, this is not a drill!
I'm liking this more and more every update, let's show Birdo exactly who's boss around these parts 3nodding
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