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 Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:14 pm
As Makura began to fly around as if he were a rag doll. Regaining his composure whilst flying through the air, Makura's chakra would swirl about his body as he vanished from view and appeared behind Jinx with his arms folded across his chest.
"So how did you do that..."
Jinx turned around to face Makura, smiling as he used the previous technique.
"This technique is almost simple...you must let you chakra control the shadows around you and force them at your opponent. Then you fling them into the air.....A very useful technique."
{2/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:20 pm
Makura would smile as he focused his chakra until it became visible around his body. He then placed his hands together to form the hand seal that Jinx had done. His eyes looked about at the shadows, waiting for their movements as the violent winds blew through the area.
Jinx continued to watch, hoping to see a drastic improvement like makura had done with the previous technique. But after a few moments, nothing happened. Makura continued to look at the shadows waiting to see something happen.
{3/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 1:27 pm
After a few minutes of no progress, Makura let his chakra subside within his body. He looked about himself looking for any changes within his shadow, or the shadows being produced around the area. Jinx soon grew bored with watching the child continue to do nothing at all. Taking a seat onto the ground, Jinx would begin to fall into a deep sleep. He was tired from training this body all day, despite how talented the child was.
Makura shook his head as he watched his teacher fall asleep.
"I have to master this technique.."
{4/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:17 pm
Makura spent the next few hours continuing his training so that the technique will be accomplished. The Uchiha child clasped his hands together before letting his chakra become visible around his body. He let this chakr flow through the shadows of the ground until they began to move as if on their own. Suddenly, Makura would let the shadows lunge towards Jinx, but they would soon stop as they came closer to his body.
"I need to focus more..."
Jinx would open his eyes to see the shadows begining to retreat back to their original places.
{5/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:21 pm
Jinx began to shift in his sleep as a cold wind began to blow through the air. It was getting darker outside, and shadows were begining to lessen. The technique would be pretty hard to complete when there is no shadows around to manipulate. Makura was getting very frustrated at this and he watched as the shadows began to shrink until they were almost gone.
"I have to hurry..."
Makura's chakra would once again be visible around his body as he continued to let the chakra circulate around his body. He needed to master this technique in the next few hours or else he will have to wait till the morning.
{6/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:24 pm
Suddenly the shadows would leap outwards and grip Jinx's leg. Makura smirked as he let the shadows grab hold of both of Jinx's leg firmly. Jinx began to wake up as he felt the shadows apply their pressure onto his legs. Performing another hand seal, the shadows then launched Jinx into the air, sending him flying as if he were a rag doll. Makrua laughed as he watched Jinx flailing through the air. Jinx would curse underneath his breath as he continued to fly through the air. Jinx began to flip and twist his body as he continued flailing through the air. His dark eyes staring at Makura who remained on the floor, smiling. Muttering underneath his breath, the man spoke to no one in particular.
"I was still trying to sleep..."
{7/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:26 pm
As Jinx regained his composure within mid air, he'd suddenly appear behind Makura, placing his hand behind his back. At this, the child swiftly turned around to face Jinx, smiling that he had finally completed the technique.
"Great Job..."
Makura placed his hands inside his pockets as darkness fell upon the Hidden Night Village. At the end of his training with this man, the child placed both hands together, forming the tiger seal yet again. With this, the small Uchiha child would disperse without a sound, or without a defined destination that he was headed to. The child just needed to continue on with his training.
{8/8}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:46 pm
As the child finished the jutsu, Makura placed his right hand before his face, raising his index and middle finger. At this movement, the child swiftly vanished from existance.
The boy would reappear in front of Benimaru Geese. At this the the child began to speak.
"Can you teach me yoru technique?"
Geese stared confused at the random question the child asked before replying.
"Sure..."
[Mystic Bomb]
{1/10}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:50 pm
As Geese took a few steps backwards he would raise his hand in front of him. Simultaneously, Makura would lift into the air. Still holding Makura suspended in air, Geese would walk casually to another location. Sitting Makura down in a very dark and rock infested hill, Geese would turn to face Makura, smiling.
"Now this technique is quite difficult. I don't expect you to learn this even in the next week. It will take much chakra to control this technque and perform it effectively."
Makura shifted his body wieght to his left side as he placed his hands inside his pockets. The techniqued seemed rather interesting, and it gave Makura more motive to complete it.
{2/10}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:52 pm
wahmbulance Mods wahmbulance Your Post Are Too Short. Add Some Meat to those! Yes Like 7-8 Lines....To count for anything...you got about 5 lines on some. Add more or they don't count...
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 2:58 pm
"You must let your chakra enter your hand and take note of your surounding area. Let the energy explode as you make contact with the enemy. By doing so...you can send a shockwave that will knock your opponent off their feet, or perhaps kill them with the pressure."
Makura's sharingan eye would spin in excitement. He needed to learn this technique by the end of today. If he can do this, he will become very powerful. Also, if he mastered this technique, Makura would be able to move onto more powerful techniques that will surely kill his opponent. This was Makura's plan, with these eyes, he can become stronger than anyone else.
{3/10}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:01 pm
[Sure. I'll edit the smaller posts...]
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:20 pm
Geese's words echoed through the solem area. The words send chills down Makura's spin as he sat on the ground. For he knew that this technique would take a lot to accomplish, though this reincarnation was ready for anything. He knew this newfound vessel could handle much more than his previous body. Though Makura stil couldn't get over being without his sound amps...but he will adjust.
Geese then bend down towards the ground, letting the cooling winds of the night caress against his hair. The telekenetic man smirked as he felt his chakra pulsating throughout his body, giving the man a soft white glow. Makura would merely stand in awe as he watched the man begin to perform the technique. The tomoe in the child's eyes span rapidly in excitement. The very power within Geese caused Makura to stand upright and move to a more distant, and safter location than where he had been previously.
{4/10}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:47 pm
Makura continued to move to a safer location as he watched Geese. At this, Geese swiftly contracted his arm backwards with impressive speed. His entire arm appeared as a bluer with the swift movement, bending the very light around him, due to his own telekinetic prowess.
Makura smirked, for he too wanted speed that matched, or seemingly surpassed his own. Though Makura knew that this will take time, but the eager child would always persist.
As Geese's arm was pulled far enough, he would release it, while he remained knelt onto the ground. Before the blow even connected, a shock wave would knock Makura from his feet and onto his buttock. The power was amazing...but this was before contact.
As Geese's arm made contact with the ground, it would be as if gravity was lessened. For in these few seconds, the entire earth about him lifted upwards in a devastating roar. The shock wave send several boulders in Makura direction with great force. Geese took little note of this, for he knew the small Uchiha child would make it out of several tough situations.
{5/10}
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 3:54 pm
Chaos. This was all that could be said about the landscape after such a powerful technique. Several tons of rock debris lay scattered about the land, for all life seemed to have been banished within an instant...and all from a single punch. For a moment it seemed like their was no life until the slight rumble of the ground would move about the rocks, revealing a small child laying amoungst the ruins.
As his feeble hands reach upwards in attempt to grasp a few molecules of oxygen. Emerging from the rumble was Makura. His sharingan eyes would peer into the now foggy area to witness the man still kneeling on the ground.
"I must learn that technique..."
At this the child began to stand upright, dusting his now dirty clothes in an attempt to understand just how did that man perform such a powerful technique.
{6/10}
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