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 Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 10:42 am
I have made the changes. hopefully.
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:02 pm
DaMetaEX I have made the changes. hopefully.
Uhm, I'm sorry. I think I may have been somewhat vague.
Fire would go in the Affinity slot of your profile. Also, I'd meant you could consider choosing the Elemental School or majoring in Evocation with a minor in Conjuration, not all three [though you're free to keep all three, but I wanted to clarify my own words^^;. The more schools a magus practices in, the less-effective the magic^^; Sorry, that's my bad.
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:36 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 1:07 pm
Your Affinity slot still says Electricity^^;
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 1:37 pm
ok. i swear if i messed this one up something is wrong.
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 5:00 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 5:16 pm
Before you get her to review it, I think you accidentally erased your main school of magic. ^^;
Not sure if you noticed, but whatever was there is missing now.]
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 5:16 pm
Rengato Before you get her to review it, I think you accidentally erased your main school of magic. ^^;
Not sure if you noticed, but whatever was there is missing now.] come on!
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 5:19 pm
been trying all day. altered, fixed, refixed, re-refixed, re-re-refixed, ext. is it good now. i have spent several hours just trying to get 1 charecter approved.
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 5:46 pm
DaMetaEX been trying all day. altered, fixed, refixed, re-refixed, re-re-refixed, ext. is it good now. i have spent several hours just trying to get 1 charecter approved. Well, it was really just a matter of what was written in it. I mean, you know what we meant of course, but if some random guy came into the guild and applied for a character profile and saw that yours was, regardless of whether it was fixed or not in your actual thread, messed up in the submission thread, then they might make something incorrectly and expect to be approved since you were approved with those mistakes visible in the profile. ^^;
Sorry if it inconvenienced you at all, but it was just a matter of making sure we don't frustrate other people by contradicting ourselves later on.
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 5:54 pm
DaMetaEX been trying all day. altered, fixed, refixed, re-refixed, re-re-refixed, ext. is it good now. i have spent several hours just trying to get 1 charecter approved. Accepted! You're all set^^ Thanks for your patience~
Feel free to post your character thread and begin! Don't forget to read and sign the Guild Rules!
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2017 7:25 am
Username: [ luvandra ] Name: [ lakshmi ] Nickname: [ good luck ] Race: [ elemental ] Ethnicity: [ indian ] Gender: [ female ] Orientation: [ bi-sexual ] Alignment: [ neutral ] Affinity: [ water,air ] Age: [ 12 ] Birthday: [ jan 30 ] Height: [ 5.9 ] Weapon: ]staff Magic:Illusion,Evocation,Abjuration F= air bubble, air bubble creates a bubble of air around you and four others so you can swim half an hour, E= jump boost= caster casts spell and can jump higher than average 10 feet, D= liquid suit,caster creates a suit that gives him/her and four others fins and webbing in between hands and feet, C=tornando, caster creates a tornado of there affinity, B= sky walk, the caster casts this illusion and then it appears the caster can walk on air , A=pressure ice, caster casts this spell a launches 9 daggers made of ice that freeze a small area damaging over time Relationships:❖ [ no one ] Strengths:✔[ i'm very strategic ] ✔[ i'm a good ally ] ✔[ i would love for a female knight ] Weaknesses:✘ [you're RPC's Flaws] ✘[archers] ✘[adorable animals] dislikes: [you're RPC hates] ✘ [ show offs ] ✘ archers ] ✘ [ really rude people ] likes:✔[ strong scary people but also nice ] ✔[ romance ] ✔[ sleeping/cat naps cat_burning_eyes ] Personality:❖ [nice, smart, charming] History:❖ [i was tending the garden and then i noticed something was wrong. the plant were dieing then that's when i heard the screams i look over my shoulder and all i saw were houses burning. i had then realized the fire elementals were attacking ] Outfits:❖ [the stuff you're RPC wears] ❖pink salwar kameez Items:❖ [the stuff you're RPC has] ❖spellbook ❖ Other:❖ [i have led 15 knights to victory then moved on] Themes:❖ Main Theme:https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=video&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjflcD1j7jSAhXJq1QKHdNHAvoQtwIIHDAA&url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sia31xQBWAM&usg=AFQjCNHSXMsxEXQOTeUwIf3XQV6LTc-siA&sig2=BijNGNX5VNMUYhNSIrsahg ❖ Battle Theme:https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=video&cd=5&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwirkIndj7jSAhWps1QKHYAQBd4QtwIILjAE&url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktvTqknDobU&usg=AFQjCNGC67_h8-7H4zGJuQtp8CazYfyAtA&sig2=JZx2BQgq4BWJ0D2ztgBRfw ❖ battle theme:https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=video&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwiOxqebkLjSAhXmhVQKHbuQC6QQtwIIHDAA&url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sf6LD2B_kDQ&usg=AFQjCNGZxT_HoBol6iLNdY258fe1IyEyiQ&sig2=nF8X1CF57dhTY8sM7zTsfg cat_burning_eyes cat_burning_eyes cat_burning_eyes cat_burning_eyes cat_burning_eyes cat_burning_eyes
i have now given up on life
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Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2017 11:57 am
Hi! Thanks for your profile submission! There are a few things I'd like to address regarding it.
-I think your coding got a little messed up as your character's image should be right-aligned^^;
-Affinity: Nature, Dark, and Light are not available Affinities within Nevermore: A Tale of Knights. Also, your remaining Affinities are conflicting. For information regarding Elemental Affinities, please see The Lore and World Book.
-Magic: Your magic is quite vague. Spells should be laid out plainly, each individually described and each ranked separately.
-Ranking: Ranks range between F and SS, the previous being the lowest and the latter being the highest. That being said, please consider looking at Character and Profile Information to read more about Ranks.
-History: I'm sorry, but your character's biography is very vague. We'd appreciate it if you could elaborate for the sake of our world. We've put a lot of effort into building it, and contradictions now [especially if brought up on the fly due to vagueness] make expanding later difficult. Please understand.
-Outfits: "Tech Suits" aren't really a viable thing in any of the Guild's currently known Kingdoms. Technology in the world is quite low as it stands. There's not much room for futuristic and even some modern devices. To find out more about the setting, we'd suggest taking a look at The Lore and World Book.
-Do remember that Knights are the only ones who can end their Contracts with Mages.
Your Character Profile would benefit from checking out the links I've provided. Please let us know when you've made the appropriate changes! Thank you!
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Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2017 5:39 am
lavandra hellmoon once you go taco you never go backo S-sorry, does that mean your profile's ready for re-evaluation?^^;
-Magic: Don't forget to include your character's School of Magic and do know that your character has spells in various different Schools. The more Schools a Mage practices in, the less effective their spells. For more information about Schools of Magic, check out the Lore and World Book.
-History: You've yet to make any clarifications or additions to your character's history. I'm really sorry, but we can't accept something like "a lot of dead people" with a clean conscience.
-Outfits: As I've stated before, the current level of technology in Nevermore: A Tale of Knights would not allow for something so advanced as a tech suit.
Please let us know when you've made the appropriate changes, and we'll look over your profile again at that point.
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