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To start: with your bio and your character's age/race, it literally makes no sense. Your spirit being 25,000 years old would make you a cave man.

Second, Would you go into a little more detail with Power Boost like how much power he gain while the fight is going.

Example: (you don't have to use this exactly)
It doubles his speed, strength, and senses; as well as gains half a reiryoku level of strength every five[5] posts . The strength of the blade resets when it returns to sealed form.

Approved

A little more detail on your Fullbring Power would be nice. I mean I understand how it works, just not the power behind it. Like how strong is this destructive force... and how strong does that part of his body get?

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Full Name: Hilda Maria Sturluson
Nickname: Maid of Ragnarok

True Age: 20
Age Appeared: 20
Birthdate: 6 / 3
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Half-Welsh, Half-Japanese
Blood Type: O-

Sexuality: Bisexual

Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 148 lbs
Eye Color: Left eye blue, right eye green
Hair Color: dark violet

Life View: "Listening to someone blindly is boring as hell. I'd much rather figure out who to ally myself with, fight against myself. My path is mine and no king is going to take that from me."
Personality: Hilda is a tomboyish maid with a bit of a authority problem. She is the first to speak how she feels, she tends to like doing whatever she wants rather the do what she is ordered to do. A good description is to assume she is like a cat. Just like a cat she has a weakness for curiosity and and treats which is a good way to get on her good side. Hilda wears most of her emotions on her sleeve and is a bit of a hot head when it comes to people staring at her chest. However she is loyal to who she values as allies and will never stab them in the back unless they did the stabbing first. Despite her attitude toward authority no one really knows why she choose to become a maid, as her profession career contradicts her personality

Likes:
- Freedom: She likes following her own path and ideals rather then listening to orders
- Sating her Curiosity: Hilda is very curious to the point of wanting to learn as much as she can about who she is fighting.
- Art: She loves music, and drawings however her favorite art's is the art of abilities of other fighters. She also isn't a bad painter
- Archery: "she works to be a precise archer and loves working on it."
- Sweets: "Hilda has a major sweet tooth to a point it is easy to get on her good side by bringing a piece of cake."
- Sleeping in the midday sun in a tree: "It brings her good dreams and relaxes her."
- Being warm: "Covering in many blankets,curling around a fire, enjoying the sun etc"

Dislikes
- Pervs: "self explanatory considering her chest size"
- being slaved, controlled, or captured: "She greatly dislikes anything that goes against her will to the point of even lashing out"
- Bugs: "they are creepy.... end of story"
- Whiners: "people who don't know how to pick themselves up and get back to their path and just become depressed in the corner."
- Being woken up abruptly: "NOT a morning person."
- Being cold: She dislikes being cold, doesn't mind snow but hates the cold aspect.

Side: Neutral
Rank: N/A

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You want to know my story? Alright just don't fall asleep cause I will only tell it once. As was born as the unwanted child to a real stickler of a quincy family, something about the master of the estate having an affair or something I really didn't care at that time, all I know was the last time I saw my real mother she gave me my Cross of Slyph for my bow. Now being the unwanted children my older siblings got everything while I got the cruel training to fight and even locked in the basement a few times, real medieval treatment at time. Though what was hilarious was that I was the only pure bloody Quincy in my family apparently however they looked at just a worm but that's beside the story. As a grew so did my desire to be free and it was that drive that made me work even harder and go as far as to rebel quite a few times, you wouldn't know from how I look now or maybe you would but I was a real rebel. If I thought I was going to be caged by them I'd struggle, bite, and do all I could just to fight fate. My siblings weren't very different, Though I showed them in time. Anyway I was raised more like a servant and slave than a daughter, however during this time I was always planning on becoming free my way. By the time I was learning how to fight I kept my power low, trained what was taught to me in secret and suffered fake defeats to lure my family into a false sense that I was weak. Then when the time was right I made sure that my arrows were stronger then their's before I ran I could take down my siblings easy enough but my "mother" would catch me and lock me in a closet or basement. When I was older I'd try to escape again and the cycle repeated.

As I grew my I really grew into my figure, please stop staring and focus on the story did my family really want to chain me down, something about status mumbo jumbo and distracting the guests I don't know and again at the time didn't care too much about. So I worked as a servant and slave until I couldn't take it anymore. My spiritual energy exploded and that lured a mess of hollows to my home, as I fought my mother with my true weapon "Angelus Valkryia." Well actually it wasn't my full weapon rather it was just one of the arrows of my true weapon that I used like a spear as the hollows came, I don't even really know how I summoned the arrow at the time. The hollows came and fought and fought like a pack of beasts. I used the battle as a distraction to run away however first I made sure to shoot my captors at least once before I ran away. I didn't shoot anything fatal and didn't kill them that was the only kindness I gave them for giving me a home and shelter while I grew. I ran as far as I could only guided by the winds and how fast my feet could carry me. At one point I finally got to see the "Terror" that I was lied to about, Shinigami. I stayed hidden and just watched as the person fought to save a soul from a hollow, entranced by the abilities that were so different then my own. This is where my curiosity took place, as watching the abilities were like mentioning magic to a little girl. It was art in it's own right and I wanted to study more and more about these abilities, and not just Shinigami, but everyone it was as if their souls were painting a picture and I want to see the finished piece.

Anyway after that I grew up more began to self teach myself as much as I could. Though it'd be easier to find a master that isn't a complete... sorry getting carried away. I found a little piece of heaven to relax and live life my way, although I still work as a maid because well If you have the skills you might as well use them but at least I get paid this time. So that's most my story I still have more to write and learn but for now this is it, I'm just a humble Quincy battle maid who works for hire now with dreams of true freedom.


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Reiatsu Color: Violet
Reiryoku Level: Weak

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Hirenkyaku: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Practitioner Level
• Tae Kwon Do: Practitioner level
Known Weapon Styles:
• Quincy Archery: Practitioner Level
• Quincy Marksmanship: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reishi Absorption: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level

Strengths:
• Powerful piercing attacks
• Excellent sense of sight, hearing, and smell
Weaknesses:
• Delay between arrows
• her attacks are precise to a point making dodging is easy
Fears:
• Spiders
• Being Controlled
• Losing Freedom


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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow
Cross Name: Breath of Slyph
Cross Location: Left hand
Cross Appearance: Slyph Cross
Weapon Type: Bow
Cross Type: glove


▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon
True Weapon Name: Angelus Valkria
True Weapon Type: Heavy Long Bow (Bow)
True Weapon Description: A long bow made for shooting rather large lance like arrows and in impressive distance. Consider almost like a Miniature Ballista in bow form. It's main ability is shooting arrows for piercing power and power, however due to it's size and the size of the arrows it shoots it doesn't really have a good rapid fire capability only managing to fire one to two arrows a post, as well as having a bad recoil rate. However the sheer force and precision range make up for this, or at least that's what Hilda believes. Based heavily on nordic myths.

True Weapon Ability:
Ratatoskr Geirr (bore tooth spear): The normal Arrows of Angelus Valkyria, while slowly to make and shoot they are the size small spears with Lance like arrow heads. When fired they spine to add to the piercing power of the lance and due to their size they boast power. More common then not Hilda uses these arrows as a temporary close range weapon as well. Due to their size however the arrows aren't very sneaky if you see them which makes dodging easy. They also have a bad kick back.

Gungnir (Odin's Spear): Currently the best attack Hilda has in her arsenal, after having to chain herself to something solid or have some support to aim she gets her bow ready. The normal Ratatoskr Geirr arrow changes to an even larger form that is constantly spinning even when not shot out of the bow yet. Her bow gains a more compound bow like with about 3 more extra bow strings to hold the arrow as she pulls back the bow to aim. She puts as much destructive and piercing power as she can into the single arrow as she takes aim for a vital point. After the arrow is completely ready does she take and and fire resulting in an extremely powerful drill like arrow with the piercing power to eviscerate anything in its way and very capable of breaking most defenses in its wake before reaching it's target. As the force is enough to send her flying if she was properly supported. With it's sheer piercing ability and power is immense it takes both preparation to make which makes it unwieldy and it based on Hilda's Reiryoku level. This attack usually can only be used once as there isn't time to charge a second volley and it requires Hilda to remain perfectly still while charging.
--Weak to Average: 4 post to charge, 1 post to fire (5 posts)
--Strong to Great: 3 posts to charge, 1 post to fire (4 posts)
--Immense+: 2 posts to charge, 1 post to fire (3 posts)

Jörmungandr Akkeri (World Serpent Anchor): An arrow that comes with a length chain of Reiryoku with it that is normally connected to the bow until another arrow is fired then the chain is anchored with the other arrow. These arrows are mostly to hold things in place of bring things closer to Hilda (if her weight allows it) or move hilda around like a slingshot as she controls the length of the chain at will.. The chain alone is weak however when the chain is anchored with other Jormungandr Akkeri chain arrows quite the strong sealing ability. The chain strength is normally based on Hilda's Reiryoku level however if she allows an ally to touch the chain holding her target the chain will be based on their reiyoku level instead. At max she can only have 5 of these chains active at a time meaning 9 to 10 arrows can be anchored. The strength of the chains is the amount of chains she currently has on her target. meaning one chain is the weakest and five is the strongest without help. Since she can only really set up one chain at a time she tends to use this for more practical use then combat use unless she has help.

Yggdrasil Rót (World Tree Root): An arrow with a rather seed like arrow-tip that when fired on Hilda's command bursts into a wall like shield of Reishi roots to block attacks or opponents from getting to close. The wall of roots can be moved by Hilda's command and destroyed easily by someone of a higher rank. This arrow is mostly a ploy to by time for someone else to attack or for her to get away. As an offensive Yggdrasil Rót can be shot at an opponent like a net to stall them for a single post however Hilda can not take advantage of the moment they are caught as they break out before she can attack as the roots can catch the opponent but are weak alone without the rest of the shield to back it up..

Mjolnir Nagl (Mjolnir nail): Arrows that have a specialized arrow tip with three arrow heads on top of each other like sticky barbs they are far weaker then the normal arrows too even if hit directly with just the arrow it wouldn't be fatal unless it a head shot. These arrows don't have the same piercing power but enough to get lodged into whatever she is shooting directly and is sticky enough to stick on a glancing blow. These arrows do not go away until Hilda wants them to and only four of these arrows can be sticking out at a time. (she still can only fire 1 or 2 arrows a post however these arrows stay after shooting them). However The Mjolnir Nagl Arrows have a special ability of taking it small saplings of reishi in their form and waiting for Hilda sign. Upon a snap of her fingers the arrows explode with the power of how much reishi they took in.
--1 post: "minimum power like a fire cracker, mostly just a loud sound. No reishi absorbed and just exploded as soon as it was fired"
--2 posts: "Medium power like being hit with a hand grenade (no shrapnel). Stuck around one post before boom"
--3 posts: "Max power is like being hit with a bundle of dynamite. Stuck around two posts before hilda snapped her fingers."

Mímisbrunnr (Mimir's well): A specialized arrow that is shot into the ground around allies. The arrow collects spirit particles around it, changes their property and shoots them back out the back end like a geyser. This Geyser of spirit particles last 5 posts and anyone caught in it's gentle deluge has sped up healing and energy regeneration. (Hilda only has the healing aspect). Mimisbrunner Heals slowly over time, minor wounds needing a post, major needing 3 posts, and severe needing 5 posts. However isn't a quick healing station and if the severe wound is fatal it won't help without prior medical attention. Mimisbrunner however can restore the energy of fighters other then Hilda quite quickly letting the get back into the fight quickly. Hilda can only use this ability three times before she is exhausted.



▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: Quincy: Vollständig ( Quincy: Complete ) (not achieved)
Vollständig Name: Empyrea Frejya
Vollständig Enchantments: "Beyond the eternal winter of Fimbulvetr. I call for the horn to blare and signal forth Ragnarok."
Vollständig Description:
Weapon: The normal Long bow that was used for Angelus Valkyria changes to an Arbalest Aka a large medieval cross bow. Not much changes from its use from true weapon mode however the recoil of the weapon is severely reduced and it has a clip of three arrows before needing a reload and be winded back up. Which requires on post to do so.
Clothes: Hilda's clothes in Empyrea Frejya is a white version of her maid uniform with a silver-ish apron and bow. However her right arm is clad in a golden like armor with a Pauldron with an eagle design on it and the fingers like claws. Her left hand has a golden shield like glove only. Her thigh high stockings become golden armored boots that reached cover about as much as the stockings did. Her right eyes as a monocle with a wing on it and a Reticle on the lens, and finally she has a white nurse like hat with golden Valkyrie's wings trailing back. On her back she has an eagle feather colored cloak that can become eagles wings.

Vollständig Ability:


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▬▬┤|Your Technique List
▬▬┤|Quincy Techniques
• Basic Blut
• Blut Vene
• Blut Arterie
• Ransōtengai
• Keen Eyes
• Lock On

▬▬┤|Ginto Techniques
• { start with none, however you can learn them }
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▬▬┤|Custom Techniques
• { state with none, your race information holds you limit }

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Full Name: Akuma
Nickname: b*****d Brat

True Age: 16
Age Appeared: 15
Birthdate: July 18
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: B

Sexuality: Hetero

Height: 5ft 6inch
Weight: 145lbs
Eye Color: Yellow
Hair Color: Black

Life View: Life is exhausting, it has so many twists and turns. The best way to not get lost is to carve your path as you see fit
Personality: Akuma has a very enigmatic persona. He'll always do the most unexpected thing in a situation.

Likes:
Smoking
A god old fashion brawl
Dark Rooms (less light the better)
Dislikes
Bossy People
People In General
Loud Children

Side: Fullbringers (If he can't help it)

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Akuma's past started as a troubled child with nothing to gain. He'd always been selfish and cocky. And every time kind people would approach him he'd only act crude. One reason for this is cause of his father. He always taught Akuma that protecting people was a wast of time, unless there were benefits. The other reason for his nasty demeanor is his eyes. Both of his parents were attacked before his birth. When he developed in the womb, he gained an unnatural amount of energy for a fullbringer to have at that stage. When he was born his eyes had already gained clarity as his eyes had the same look of that of a hollow's. To the doctors, they thought of Akuma as some sort of demon. But it wasn't just them, almost everyone thought of him his way for a long time. The day he entered high school bullies had all heard the rumors of his strength and fighting streak. That year, almost all the bullies were either wiped out or left the school.


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Reiatsu Color: Black
Reiryoku Level: Weak { Start at this }

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Bring Light: No Skill
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Practitioner Level
• { you may have one more at the same level }
Known Weapon Styles:
• Fullbring Combat: Practitioner Level
• Weapon Combat: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level

Strengths:
• Superhuman Streangth
• Vast Stamina Reserve
Weaknesses:
• Opponents with vast enrgy
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Fears:
• His lack of fear
• His mom's hugs


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▬▬┤|Fullbring: Object Affinity
Fullbring Name: Darker Than Sin
Object Location: Waist
Object Appearance:

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Object Type: Badge
Fullbring Power: The Badge sinks into Akuma's skin, allowing him to cover any part of his body in a hard black substance. The strength of the covered areas triple in strength and destructive force. He gains half a reiryoku level of strength every three posts due to the black substance becoming harder every time it make physical contact.


▬▬┤|Fullbring: Unlocking
Unlocked Name: Not Applicable
Unlocked Enchantments:
Unlocked Description:
Unlocked Ability:
{ Everyone = 6 techniques }


▬▬┤|Fullbring: Awakening
Awakening Name: Not Applicable
Awakening Enchantments:
Awakening Description:
Awakening Ability:
{ Everyone = 5 techniques }

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▬▬┤|Custom Techniques
▬▬┤|Your Techniques
• None

I love the base of your character. Very much. (I don't care to much for the picture but that doesn't change the love for her.)

1: I have a couple quick questions over some abilities:

Is Gungnir (Odin's Spear)'s destructive force based on her Reiryoku level, or is that it at a weak level. If it is that at a weak level, Does it become more powerful as your character grows?

To have a better understanding of Jörmungandr Akkeri (World Serpent Anchor), in my mind it's like hair. One hair is weak, but when in bunches it's strong.
Are they stronger when overlapping or in general...?

With Yggdrasil Rót (World Tree Root) it says you can move the wall of roots. As in you are moving the wall itself or just the roots?


2:I'm unsure you are aware of our ability post cool downs. I'm going to assume so, only because I'm unsure lol. But if you look back at other peoples profiles you'll notice how they have cool downs. like you can use that ability every so many posts. If you would please add those.


Other than that you should be good to go. Once edits are made and question answered I'll look it over once more.