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 Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:36 pm
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2520/4233085454_ab4fb14247_o.png Full Name: Andrew Hiraka
Nicknames:
Age: 17
Birthdate: 8-21
Gender: male
Ethnicity: caucasian
Nindo: nindo is to get stronger no matter what
Personality: pretty much a layed back non worry kind of guy. usually hes just joking around but there is times when he takes his work very seriously. He doesnt like loud people and loves to fight.
Behavior: he acts smoothly around the ladies and is very chivalrous
Biography: (Back Story) he was born and raised in the sand village. He once had a brother but he died in battle , thefore has been wanting to become a great ninja just like hios brother. Andrew has parents but there constantly going on missions so they have no time for him
Village: the village hidden in the sand
Rank: genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning:
Bloodline: none
Curse Mark:none
Weapon of Choice: 2 sharp katanas
Ninja Class: ninjutsu
Strengths:
●great chalkra control
●Intelligence
●Durability
Weaknesses:
●Elemental Vulnerability
●cunning
●close combat
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Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
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Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: earth
- Secondary:
Chakra Color: red
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationdoes not have a squad at the moment Sensei:
Team Mate:Mitsuki
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Element - Japanese Element Name
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Genjutsu
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Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: on the forehead
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Flack Jacket Style | Color:
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
|left leg
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
|right leg
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
|back pocket
Exploding Smoke Grenade:
Makibishi:
Shuriken:
Flash Bombs: ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5 foot 5
Weight: 110
Body Build: (dont fill out yet)
Eye Color: brown
Hair Color: blond
Family: 2 parents and a dead brother
Theme song:eye of the tiger-survivor ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:28
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:32 pm
Alrighty then:
You start as a genin
You only know the 4 jutsu we put for you, so the non elemental ones
You have to apply for a summoning, well in your case make one
You have to pick a ninja class, which is in the starter thread where you found this profile section
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:37 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:55 pm
aprslw:
Just a few more things:
1. Now that you have a Ninja Class, your strengths and weaknesses need to reflect that of the Ninjutsu class. (that is they need to be selected from the list of available strengths and weaknesses for that class)
2. Your preferred weapons of "2 sharp swords" ...do you mean Katana?... Katana & Wakizashi?... Kodachi... more detail is needed.
3. Your profile inserts your characters name in a lot of unecessary places, such as when mentioning your Nindo, you say "Andrew's Nindo is ..." where it could just be the Nindo itself.
4. You may already know this, but you dont have access to your second element until you are a Chuunin.
5. Under "Jutsu" you have it written : "andrew has the ability to move earth" ...what does this mean? Do you mean in general, as an earth elemental user?... because if so, it's extraneous (unneeded)
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:52 pm
Full Name: Deil Grist
http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime guy/sunfiretlz/anime/HotAnimeGuy4.gif?o=364 (please look)
Nicknames: Sledgehammer
Age: 18
Birthdate: 12/15
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White
Nindo: Never back down when you believe in something
Personality: Loner
Behavior: Easily agitated by people, but keeps to himself
Biography: (Back Story) After my clan was disbanded by the people, I was taken up by a farming family between the land of sand and snow. I was too young to remember my parents, and was raised on the land learning how to farm. One day the farming couple revealed to me that my real parents were missing, but did not tell me of my clan's special physical features. They saved up enough money when I was 18 to send me away to the village hidden in the sand to become a shinobi, and from there the story begins...
Village: Sand
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning:
Bloodline: Genjuu-Kinzoku (Fierce Metal)
Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice: My Body
Ninja Class: Taijutsu
Strengths:
●Strength
●Durability
●Speed
Weaknesses:
●Lightning Jutsu
●Overusing Acid
●Low Chakra
●Low Chakra Control
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
● Body of Steel
● Acid made by body
● Good at taijutsu
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Wind
- Secondary: ______ (learned at : Genin/Chuunin/Jounin)
Chakra Color: Dark Blue
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Element - Japanese Element Name
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Genjutsu
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Neck/Straight/White
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: Vest/Tan
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Arm
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Back
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 2
Makibishi: 0
Shuriken: 15
Flash Bombs: 2 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight:
Weight: 220 lbs
Body Build: (dont fill out yet)
Eye Color: Grey
Hair Color: Brown
Family: Mother and Father (Missing)
Theme song: I will not bow________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:30 pm
One last thing...what you changed (the workding below jutsu) ...you actually cant do any of that.
...that is, not until you learn the corresponding jutsu which allow you to do it. Nothing at a base level would give you the ability to wield those powers, but as you train, you'll gain the ability to do such things I'm sure.
Just remove that for now, and then you are Approved!
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:21 pm
Deil :
Your Profile is fine, pending the approval of your bloodline. Send me a PM when you find out and Ill take a second look.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:42 am
Cobra_X Seraphim :
1. You need to change your race at the bottom of the profile (from Goron)
2. Also, I'm not sure on your weapon. technically, your class isn't allowed a custom weapon.
3. And the Shinobi skills section involving your crown, I'm afraid that would have to almost be considered a kind of Cursemark. Unfortunately however, you already have a bloodline, and you cannot have both. ummm, yeaah, that's my theme song... goron race. I'm human. and I'll change it to a regular bo staff, and... yeah, alright, no crown, got it.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:12 am
Seraphim of Souls Cobra_X Seraphim :
1. You need to change your race at the bottom of the profile (from Goron)
2. Also, I'm not sure on your weapon. technically, your class isn't allowed a custom weapon.
3. And the Shinobi skills section involving your crown, I'm afraid that would have to almost be considered a kind of Cursemark. Unfortunately however, you already have a bloodline, and you cannot have both. ummm, yeaah, that's my theme song... goron race. I'm human. and I'll change it to a regular bo staff, and... yeah, alright, no crown, got it.
After all that, you are approved!
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 11:15 am
 Full Name: Leona Pressure
Nicknames: Press
Age: 17
Birthdate:
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: White
Nindo:
Personality: Nice and outgoing
Behavior: Crazy at times
Biography: (Back Story) She was born and raised in Mist and grew up living a pretty normal life. She was raised by her mom and dad and she worked her way up to chunin level where she is now at fighting and protecting Mist Village. Her parents are very proud of her. They would love to fight along side their daughter but they are retired ninjas now just enjoying their lives and letting other ninjas put their lives in danger. Her parents taught her all she knows about puppets, and she knows a lot about puppets. She works hard and never gives up on her dream of one day become Mizukage.
Village: Sound
Rank: Chunin________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning:
Bloodline:
Curse Mark: Mizu
Weapon of Choice: Puppets
Ninja Class: Puppet
Strengths:
● Intelligence
● Chakra Control
● Agility
Weaknesses:
● Weak Bodied
● Low attack power
● Lack of Cunning
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
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Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Fire
- Secondary: Wind
Chakra Color: Green
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Fire - Katon
→ All basic Fire Jutsu
Genin:
→ Fire Release: Two
→ Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique
→ Fire Release: Flame-Resistance Technique
→ Fire Release: Ember Clone Technique
Chunin
→ Fire Release: Three
→ Fire Release: Flame Sphere Technique
→ Fire Release: Incendiary Technique
Wind - Fuuton
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Genjutsu
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Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
Uses puppets. Has Chiyo's ten puppets and Karasu.
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color: Waise
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: None
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right upper leg
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Pouch on lower back
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Kept in pouch on lower back
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 11
Makibishi:11
Shuriken:11
Flash Bombs: 11________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5' 5"
Weight: 110
Body Build: Slim
Eye Color: Hazel
Hair Color: Light Brown
Family:
Theme song:________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:(Rank and other things approved by Cory.)
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 11:29 am
Full Name:Akio [unknown last name]
Nicknames:Aki
Age:18
Birthdate:december 3rd
Gender:male
Ethnicity:american
Nindo: 'Women are a pain I would rather be alone then with a naggin Female..'
Personality:non-talkative, shy,out-going
Behavior:???
Biography: (Back Story)unknown
Village:Leaf
Rank: genin________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning:
Bloodline:
Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice: posioned blades in both arms
Ninja Class:genjustu
Strengths:
●genjustu
●posion
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Weaknesses:
●taijustu
●non-close combat
●females....
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Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
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Chakra Element(s): earth and fire
- Primary:fire
- Secondary:earth (learned at : Genin/Chuunin/Jounin)
Chakra Color:white
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _____ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color:tilted on right eye on head normal style black
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N/A
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| leg black
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
|on behind black
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
|side black
Exploding Smoke Grenade:2
Makibishi:2
Shuriken:6
Flash Bombs:2________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight:5.6
Weight:125 pounds
Body Build: (dont fill out yet)
Eye Color:blue
Hair Color:white
Family:none
Theme song:Pain-Three Days Grace________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:19 pm
Scrapples:
1. Would you consider joining another village besides Mist? Mist already has so many members, it would be nice to send some to Sound, as they have the fewest.
2. You need to use the Strengths and Weaknesses of the Ninjutsu Class. they are outlined within the ninja class, so take a look at the strengths/weaknesses allowed for the class and choose from those.
3. You need to specify your elemental jutsu within your profile. I know you already said that you are a Fire/Water user, but you need to choose a tertiary element (even though you cannot yet access it)
...then in the fields below, fill out what jutsu you know from each element. As you are ninjutsu class, I suppose it's okay for you to say that you know all Genin and Chuunin level techniques of your two elements, but you will need to add Jounin techniques into the fields as you learn them, so you need to mark them as Fire, and water for that future time.
4. Do you really have Chiyo's puppets? that would be pretty advanced for a Chuunin?
5. Also, I know that i made a Puppet class...I guess Cory has not approved of it yet. If you plan on using puppets, you would probably need to change your class and it would change a lot of stuff.
...I guess ultimately, you need to decide whether you want to be a Puppet user, or a Ninjutsu user (or at least which you want to be your primary)
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:25 pm
Angel:
1. does your character actually look like that? ...because they aren't an assassin, so the caption beneath the picture is a bit misleading.
2. How is your biography unknown? Are you saying that you don't know it because you have no concept of your character?...or does your character simply not know anything about his past?
3. If you are part of the Genjutsu class, you need to take your Strengths and Weaknesses from the lists provided in that class. You will see what strengths and weaknesses are allowed within the Genjutsu Ninja Class post... please choose from those lists.
4. Your chakra element info is fine as of now, but remember that as a Genjutsu user, you dont have access to your second element until you are a Chuunin.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:29 pm
§_Scrapples_§
1,2 and 3 I edited my profile. Cory said I can have her puppets I just can't use them all at the same time. I can only use them at separate times since i'm only chunin. I was hoping there would be a puppet class I could join, I would rather have that then ninjutsu class.
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