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Lance Fulgurant
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:21 pm


Zane Hajime
iAsakura
Rpc Name: Ruuji Hyuuga
Village: hidden sand
Rank:unknown
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan
Rp Sample Ruuji dashes across Sunagakure. "hmmmmmm maybe i should train a bit, it has been some time since i activated the bayakugan" He goes to an old training ground and stands in the center of the training ground and starts to ready his stance. "bayakugan" "64 palm strikes" He moves through the air in amazing speed throwing strikes in the air.


Asakura, this does not show that you can properly use the byakugan properly in rp. No offense, but Lance is really tough on these and he would kill me if I approve this


yes... yes I would
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:27 pm


Hark: APPROVED!!! good job

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


xTx Monty xTx

PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 9:38 pm


Rpc Name:kero ken
Village: unkown
Rank:unknown
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara clan / Mokuton

Rp Sample : kero ken dashes through the forest as he trying to escape the bandits kero ends up at the the cliffside looking down at the the cliffside he turns around to see the bandits circling him "we've got you surrounded their nowhere to go "
kero looking around he smirks at them "or do i have you trapped" kero lifts his hand and tree roots shoot up from nearby trees and begin grabing the bandits locking them in place as they begin to scream one of the bandits begins to run "where are you going " kero begin to perform a seal as the bandit getting away the bandits locked connects with kero shadow causing him to spread out stopping the last bandit in his track begging to be let go kero smiles "no" kero crushes his left hand into a fist causing the tree roots to crush the binded bandits while his right hand begin to slowly creep up the last bandit neck "now sleep Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu" shadow snaps the necks instantly killing the bandit, kero begin to look at the mess he just made and then begin walking away with his hands in his pockets
PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 9:46 pm


You cant have two clans......

Gregar828
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Lance Fulgurant
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 9:49 pm


alright well first things first, you can't have both a clan and a bloodline, so you'll have to pick one, and so I'm just going to ask that you write up a new sample, better showing how you intend to use whichever one you choose, and this time try and give me a little more than... well I was going to say such and such amount of sentences but it's all one big blob of text with almost no punctuation, so go ahead and try again using punctuation and really go into detail about the abilities you use, and make sure that I can see that you understand not only the strengths of the bloodline/clan, but the weaknesses as well
PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:28 pm


Rpc Name:Lord Iron Fang
Village: Mist
Rank: academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton
What you know about the clan/bl: i know what is in the show about it and the manga and some other stuff ive seen on the web

the bloodline can create and manipulate the wood element by combining the elements of earth and water. this can be a very strong element and adaptable to a variety of situations. this ability not only gives you the ability to make wood grow around the user but even allows the user to grow it out of there own body.
in this guild you guys put that the ability grows stronger with every rank and makes the wood used in the jutsu harder and stronger as well. you guys also have it written that the ability improves when surrounded by a dense amount of wood. the ability also include a few other talents such as tracking jutsu using seeds. oh and the bloodline also assists in containing and controlling the demon beasts. this was amplified by the first hokages neckless on naruto in the show. though strong this ability can be broken by the demons with enough chakra and effort

Its first major draw back is fire obviously because fire burns through wood. so fire jutsu are super effective. also you guys put that lighting is the same way.(while i dont really agree with this i have to abide by what you say) the logical way to back up this clam is lightning hitting trees and i guess the train of thought from there is setting them on fire.

Rp Sample:
Shashi ran for his life through the dense trees. he zigged this way and that hoping to lose the man chasing him. then ten feet infront of him he saw a low branch."i can get that" he breathed and jumped for the branch. His fingers passed just underneath it and sashi's momentum carried him far passed the tree limb and right back down to the hard packed dirt. "alright i wont do it again i promise." young Shashi wailed as the man chasing stood over him. "you be right boy! you wont!" the man yelled and raised the huge knife he had in hand over his head for a swing. "no!" Sashi wailed as the man brought the knife down. Moments seemed to last for an eternity. Finally Sashi got tired of waiting for his imminent demise and looked up with squinted eyes. he had indeed been waiting there for some time. He saw the man there covered in a tangle of roots and wood with the knife stopped mid swing. Sashi sat up in surprise and crab crawled away in horror. "wa-wa-what happened?" he asked to the open air and even more horrifying was the response he got back of "you happened" then out of the shadows stepped an anbu blackops. "what? i dont get it." Sashi tried to reply. The man turned and using a fire jutsu set the captive ablaze with the same carelessness as one turning on a light. The anbu strolled over to where little Sashi sat and gripped him by the throat. Sashi was paralyzed by fear and could do nothing but stare into the mans sharingan eyes. " i was sent to kill you but your just making this too easy. ill let you live for now boy but in return i want you to go train with the hidden mist so someday your head will be worth taking. now run!" he barked letting Sashi drop hard down to the pack earth. with no options left Sashi obeyed and ran for his life

Lord Iron Fang


xTx Monty xTx

PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:55 pm


Nara clan
strength: allow the clan members to use their shadow as a way of offensive and defensive attack moves. it also allow them to (if possible done right) chain one enemy shadow with another given the attack procedure and if the enemy are nearby. note though even though they use shadow as a way of transport their attack the sunlight is their best friend giving at a certain time. also that flash bomb can cause the shadow to get stronger and travel a little futher

weakness: though the clan uses shadow it does leave a pathway toward where the user of the justu is. and that also when in a possession they arent able to do any movement which leaves them open for an attack which then would cause a cancelation of the jutsu they were performing. also noted that even though the got somebody it a shadow possession if the oppenet that caught in it has a higher charka then the other then it is possible for the other person to have a weaker grab on the person.

village:cloud
rank: academy student
Rpc name: Kero Ken

light flicker as the kero is looking through a two way mirror "you know he not gonna talk", "yea i know that why ill make him talk", "well you best get in their then we can only keep him for so long", Kero walks out the side door leaving the other ninja staring at the person in the other room. kero walks into the other room as the man in the chair looks at him kero closes the door "you know what you did their a while back didnt seem quite right" kero begin taking off a glove revealing a tattoo of a hand crawling down his hand while the man looks at then back at kero "i got this made a while back ago you like, their more added to it but time to get to the point you do know why im here right", man nodds at him in confusion "aww really you dont that sad for you and fun for me well im here to interrogate you for some info" kero begin performing a seal "but you cant do that i have rights" man begin speaking but then kero cuts in on his dialouge. "really now well where your at your rights wont help you here" kero shadow begin waving a little moving around the the room as the man looks at it as it circles around him connecting to his shadow. "now tell me where the girl at " kero still keeping the the man locked in place as the man begin to feel a chill run down his leg he see a a hand coming up from his feet slowly moving up his body "last chance tell me where she is" " i dont know who your talking about i was just hired as a extra beef "
"really now why dont i believe that " hand begin wrapping the man body tightly squeezing his body kero begin performing another seal. "you better tell me now or else this the end for you " man aching in pain trying hard not to crack but the hand begin slowly moving up towards his neck strangling him "well are you gonna tell me " "she in the sound village " kero stops the seal and look at him. "really now well how can i believe a crooked person like you " man begins gasping for air then calm himself down a little "well it the last place they talked about from what i heard they where taking her their for an extraction point", kero walks toward the mirror and begin fixing his hair "you got that he squelled even before it about to get fun" kero walks away from the mirror and heads toward the door opens it and head outs slamming the door shut on him.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:25 pm


Lord Iron Fang: I liked your rp sample, but I would have liked to see a bit more to be honest, so here's what I want you to do: right a brief summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the bloodline, make me believe that you know this bloodline inside and out.

Monty: ok well I'm glad that you at least only picked one, but you still didn't give me something that's very easy to read, but anyway moving on. If I don't take into account your horrible grammar and focus on your rp, it's still a bit lacking. Again you only used one technique, which is fine, but at the same time you didn't really show me that you know this clan inside and out, which is what I need to see. I'm going to ask you to do the same thing as Iron Fang: write up a brief summary (preferably using correct grammar rules), talking about the strengths and weaknesses of the nara clan, make me believe that you know this clan inside and out.

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


Hizuma the Troublesome

PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:57 pm


Rpc Name: Hizuma Hyuuga
Village: Mist
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Byakugan
What you know about the clan/bl: The Byakugan is the trademark doujutsu of the Hyuuga clan. The user is granted a 359 degree field of visibility, and can see great distances. However, this isn;t what makes it unique. Th Byakugan can see chakra in a person's body. Through their signature fighting style, they can cause damage to chakra pathways and in effect stop thir opponent from using their chakra. The only blind spot in their vision is a vertibrae in the back of their neck.
Rp Sample

Hizuma stood calmly on his side of the arena, his eyes closed and hair blowing in the gentle breeze. The peace and tranquility was short lived, however, as his opponent made his way to the field, causing the stands to erupt into cheers and applause. Comparitively, Hizuma had recieved very little recognition, though he knew this was merely because this small village had probably not heard of the Hyuuga Clan. His opponent strolled up and looked at Hizuma, who still had his eyes closed.
"Heh, he couldn;t touch me. I'm one of the greatest" his opponent boasted, causing the stands to erupt once again. Hizuma calmly opened his eyes, looking into his opponents dark green eyes with his blank cream ones. "Whoa, creepy, but they won;t help you against me. Give up now" his opponent taunted as the proctor took his position.
"Why? I already know the outcome" Hizuma said casually, as if discussing the weather.

"And, begin" the proctor called.

"Byakugan"
Within two seconds, Hizuma's eyes had taken on a hint of a pupil as the veins around them bulged with chakra. His opponent stepped back, then jumped into a defensive stance. "Creepy, but useless" he said, dashing forward as Hizuma fell into a Jyuuken stance. Once in range, his opponent threw a punch toward Hizuma's eye. The punch, however, never found its mark, instead meeting resistance fomr Hizuma's left hand. "Too easy" he said, tapping his opponent's arm hard a few times. The opposing shinobi drew back, angry red spots appearing on his arms due to Hizuma's "attack". He began to form hand seals, but stopped as his jutsu never came to fruitation. "what happened" he wined, trying the jutsu again. Thanks to Hizuma's Jyuuken strikes, his chakra in is arm was shut down, leaving him baffled and open. "You know, you're in my field of vision" Hizuma called casually, Falling back into the same stance. "Eight Trigrams: Sixty-Four Palms: Two Palms" he called, striking forward quickly, slamming his fingers into his oppoent. "Four Palms" four more strikes, "Eight Palms" eight more strikes, "Sixteen Palms", "Thirty-Two Palms". Finally, battered his opponent grinned his cocksure grin at Hizuma. "Is that all you got..."
"Sixty-Four Palms" Hizuma said simply, jabbing at Sixty-three of his opponent's tenketsu, closing them off for awhile while damaging his opponent's organs from the outside. On the Sixty-third strik, he noticed his opponent had somewhere along the line passed out on his feet, his silly grin still plastered on. "Sixty-Four" Hiuzma said simply, tapping his opponent;s forehead. He turned as a quiet thud could be heard behind him.

((Could do more if you'd like. I usually get bloodlines apprived bfore I start RP-ing))
PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 11:11 pm


Hizuma: Excellent job, APPROVED!!! please feel free to make a profile and begin rp-ing

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


Lord Iron Fang

PostPosted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 7:06 am


sorry ive just started on gaia so im a little unsure about the lengths you guys want me to use. i went and used the edit thingy but let me know if i need to add more then that.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:16 am


L.I.F.: alright then, it looks good, APPROVED, I'll put you down in the bloodline list

Lance Fulgurant
Crew


xTx Monty xTx

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:10 am


i fixed it somewhat to my full knowledge if not then i need more information and more knowledge of it
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 5:28 pm


I haven't created a RPC profile yet.
Rpc Name: Mizutenma
Village: N/A
Rank: N/A
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa
What you know about the clan/bl: They are master swordsmen who practice the Three Sword-Style. They aren't good with Ninjutsu and can't do Genjutsu. They are very fast and are very strong

Rp Sample:
I was on a stroll in the forest at night. I looked at the full moon then looked back in front of me and saw a kunai coming at me. I took out my swords and deflected it. I looked around trying to figure out who threw it. Three guys jumped down from the trees. I got ready to strike when the one in the front said," Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!"
I jumped into the trees to avoid the fire. I thought," Who are these people?!?! They aren't from around here!" I jumped down from the trees behind them and attacked. They turned around and the one closest to me looked at me in the eyes. He had the Sharingan. I thought," They're Uchihas and now I'm trapped in Genjutsu. This is just great. I can't even break it. I'm dead."

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