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1wolffan

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 9:57 pm


Rageflame101
...the stories tend to outlast the rps.

Unfortunately that happens far more often than most would like it to.

If you had seen a red glow version, you'd like it too. You're totally allowed to have him hate pink. But seriously; check out some glowing red stuff online. You'll understand.

I'm glad you like my twist so much. Try not to let your RP peeps see this thread then. Or would you rather I remove the spoiler text. Or better yet. I'll make it white text, so it's like a 'spoiler' tag.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:06 pm


Username: Sir Awesomealot
Name: Mr. Cameron Instructor
Age: 43
Species: He is a Dragon-Folk, a species that is a cross of human and dragon with questionable origins. It is a large clan that is very exclusionary. They're form is humanoid enough to mingle with humans, but just barely. They retain dragon traits such as the different type of sight, animalistic ol factory senses, scales, tails, claws, forked tongue, and fire breath but each person has a different combination and amount of those traits. They can all transform into a dragon without regard for conservation of mass, however, the size, colorings and shape are different for each and the dragon form ages with the person. The lifespan of a Dragon-Folk that isn't involved in significant violence is estimated at 90-130 years, but has so far been unable to be proven. This species rarely lives into old age, and even more so long enough to die from it.
Appearance: Mr. Cameron's skin is a dark caramel color, but does not retain the smoothness of the shade in that it is calloused even where it would be unlikely to have them. The left side of his face is mostly covered with dark green scales, the outer rim of each lined with a thin strip of yellow. A few patched of these scales adorn the other areas of his face. He is bald, with patches of scales, the largest of which is where his right ear would be if he had one. his left ear has a single piercing, a gauge that could easily allow a pencil to go through the hole, held with an open metal cylinder. From it dangles a dragon skull ornament by way of a thin and short chain. His face protrudes much like that of a lizard, but not as pointed. His teeth are clearly meant for a carnivore, and his nose faded into his face to be little more than two slits where the odd shape of his face sticks out a bit more than merely the initial forward stretch. His eyes are different. His right eye is more rounded, and the only lid is a membrane that is usually hidden, leaving the eye more open and unblinking. This eye has no white, only a yellow-green background and a black slit. The other eye is more human, although surrounded by scales. This eye gives the scales the illusion that they are a mask. This eye is colored a deep brown, a significant contrast to the other.
His outer arms, from his elbow to his knuckles, are covered in the same dark green spikes with the thin yellow edge. In addition, the scales from the left side of his face continue from his jaw toward the back of his neck, twisting to cover half of his neck in a way that has the scales covering the spinal area, and a bit past, on the right side. These continue down his back, but her has no tail. His fingers are long, his right hand has three and a thumb, while his left has jsut two and a thumb. All of his fingers end with a claw-like fingernail, a long, strong nail that curves inward somewhat and appears to be a green color over black. The joints of his fingers are knobby and stand out.
The main of his feet are short, but the overall size is proportionate to his humanoid frame because they fork into three large toes. the top of his feet and toes is scaled, but the soles are heavily worn, calloused, and leathery.
It is unlikely and student will see much of this, since he usually wears a hooded cloak with the hood down, a fedora, and heavy brown-leather boots that lace up to the middle of his shin.

His dragon form is serpent-like, lacking wings and feet. It swims through air or water and has a pair of clawed limbs that allow it to carry or land. It is under 10 meters long, but close, perhaps 8 or 9. (Think around 25 ft.)

Why I came to this school: Mr. Cameron came to this school, hired to teach Ancient languages, and has done so here for 8 years; this will be his ninth. He was never a student at this school, and was hired from a job at a university (one that catered to magical beings) where he was researching languages and cultures under an esteemed professor.
Personality: He is blunt and to the point, his care for ancient languages doesn't shine through very well, but is slightly apparent in certain reactions to student comments or errors. Outside of lectures he may be seen while preforming faculty duties such as the occasional turn of rounds, but is rarely seen when not working.

Sir Awesomealot


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:41 pm


1wolffan
The stuff Wolffan said two posts above


Ok, ok. I admit it...I would be saying ooos and aws to the red glowing computer too. I don't have much of a reason for making Zeus hate the color red. Maybe it was because I wanted to draw away from the fact that he hates pink so the Pink-haired girl's creator didn't notice. I actually made this profile before my last disappearance, so I don't exactly remember the exact reason.

I like the twist...but in the end its all up to what I feel like doing when the time comes. At the rate the rp is going (only have my first post out...waiting for a reply) I don't think It will be happening any time soon. In fact, I probably should join a second rp so I don't lose interest in gaia entirely....
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:28 am


World Of Warcraft Character

Username
Myzari
Character Name
Abluna'Jin StoneTusks
Species
Troll
Age
Twenty-eight Summers
Class
Druid
Appearance
Like all trolls, Abluna'Jin , has tantilizing azure skin highlighted by purple and white inks that help channel the will of the Loa he serves. His short tusks curve upward much like the native boars of his birth home, but this is also a sign of his youth. Usually he prefers to dress in cloth robes while he learns new abilities but lately he has been learning hand to hand combat, wielding staves, and casting spells so he has opted to wear naga skin shirts, pants and boots. The leather apparel serves to better protect the young troll as he journeys further from home and learns more appealing forms of mysticism
Personality
A cast off from the GoreTusks clan, Abluna'Jin is unusually chipper and bright. He can often be found humming and working leathers or diligently stoking fires for fresh kills. He enjoys cooking and leatherworking and few speculate that it is a heredity trait he doesn't understand. Abluna'Jin is for the most part a happy-go-lucky with a soft spot for kids. But he does have issues with Warlocks, particularly a female undead lock called Myzari.
History
Born in the Orc capital Orgrimmer, His mother was a brutal witch doctor who was far too cruel to raise a child who was born silent. The GoreTusks dropped the infant off at the local orphanage, convinced that the silent child wouldn't fit in within the bloody clan. Adopted by a gentle Blood Elf priestess staying in the city she raised him with all her beliefs until she died in a raid shortly after his twentith summer. Abluna'Jin was initially trained as a Shaman when he reached maturaty. He was very skilled and a most accomplished healer, unfortunately his easy going nature left him suseptible to a warlock's charms. Myzari was skilled in her art of corruption and immediately noticed the dark taint in Abluna'Jin's aura; never one to let an easy target go, she befriended Abluna'Jin and had him tightly bound to her side for five years. Never once during that time did Abluna'Jin have to call forth his unique skill to heal the lock, as her own powers sustained her, until a child fell from a zepplin in Tirisfal Glades. When Abluna'Jin tried to revive the child he found that his Loa had abandon him and his powers we so damaged that he might as well have become a demon consort himself. In an attemp to purge himself of taint he abandoned Myzari and returned to the Echo Isles and found a Druid who turned the taint into a powerful force. A feral Druid in the making now, Abluna'Jin works to learn the way of the spirits. He has trained as a Leather worker and cook so that the animals and monsters he has to slay on his journey are not killed in vain. It has been noted that he sometimes gets carried away and ends up unintentionally bathing himself ini blood.

Myzari


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:06 pm


Sorry for the time it's taking me to go over your posts. My computer had some issues, and I haven't been fully online until just recently. I'll read through the backlog now, but it'll take me a little time to get through it, and post my thoughts.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:52 pm


Sir Awesomealot
Mr. Cameron

That is an excellent description of him. I was impressed how much detail you put into Cameron. You described him very well. I wish I knew more background about the guy; but that will come later in the story, I'm sure.
PS: Yay for fedora!

Myzari
Abluna'Jin StoneTusks

I'm just going to call him Jin for brevity. He has a very interesting back-story. It makes you connect with him as a character.


However, you may have given him a few too many abilities. I know it's WoW, but I'm going to use some D&D comparisons. In your post, you mentioned hand-to-hand, magic, and healing. That covers 3/5 of the basic abilities in a D&D party. As an individual character, you should pick one of those three to specialize in. A secondary ability would be acceptable, but Jin would be less skilled in it. A third one, is kind of pushing it.

I do realize that you're talking about a Video-Game character, and know that you often have more choices when using game mechanics. I've seen many a game-character with excellent skill in everything (hand2hand, ranged, healing, spells, and trickery/thievery). I am merely critiquing the story aspect of the character. Otherwise, he sounds like an enjoyable character to play out.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 9:00 pm


There is one thing about that though. In D&D Druids can do all of that anyway. Not so much hand to hand, but in wildshape Druids get something better. Outside of wildshape they still retain magic and healing abilities. D&D's character classes aren't balanced though in that respect. I always have to look at those books funny when it might be more viable to have the Druid's animal companion handle melee instead of having a player make a fighter character.

I did hear they balanced things much more in 4.0 though. Maybe there will be fewer CoDzillas to solo an entire campaign.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:27 pm


Wait.
Druids can pull off all that anyway?

Sweet! Now I can be a druid half-fey (or whichever one it is that can use fey step.) I usually have a tough time figuring out how I would play a character. I've never played it, but you'd be surprised how many source-books I've read through regardless.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:43 pm


Of course druids can. I'd have to check my books to make sure, but from what I recall they don't gain access to new healing spells every spell level like clerics do. I believe they get they get new Cure spells every odd level. So Cure Moderate comes as a 3rd level spell, and so on from there. Druids also have the slight issue that they can only use metal when it is in their weapons. No metal armor, no metal rings, nothing.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:03 pm


Metal armor is overrated when you can get dragonhide armor with a Wild enchantment anyway. Lets not forget having spells to mess with people who rely on it, like heat metal, chill metal, and rusting grasp. Then there's those later transmutation spells, and repel metal.

Phaeton


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 6:08 pm


And don't forget the rust monsters.

For mid and late game, I agree with you though. But it's hard to come by the more specialized materials for non-metallic gear when you are at a low level. Even at mid level in some cases. And this is exactly why I prefer to use mages. Who cares about metal? I can make a wand, rod, or staff out of wood or bone. Even crystal.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:03 am


Phaeton
Metal armor is overrated when you can get dragonhide armor with a Wild enchantment anyway. Lets not forget having spells to mess with people who rely on it, like heat metal, chill metal, and rusting grasp. Then there's those later transmutation spells, and repel metal.

Heheh. I like the sounds of that. Having a guy who can't use metals, with multiple ways to counter those who do. I can see quite a bit of fun in that idea. Repel metal sounds like it would even be helpful against a melee enemy trying to attack a druid. After a while, my (non-existent) party may have to opt for less metal, just so they don't get affected by that last one, if it got too strong.

Besides, space ROCK could work too. And, story-wise, might even be stronger than dragon-hide armor, or dragon-tooth weaponry.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:20 am


Naruto Original Character:

Gaianame: Miki the Okami
Name: Tsumi Minamoto
Age: 12 years old
Gender: Female
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin

Chakra Element: Water Chakra
Weapons: Her father’s daggers, Jigoku (Hell) and Gokuraku (Paradise), shuriken, and kunai
Jutsus: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Justu), Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu), Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switching Jutsu), and Mizu no Tanken (Water Dagger)

Special Move: Mizu no Tanken (Water Dagger): A special water style jutsu created by Koji Minamoto, Tsumi Minamoto’s father. You can only use Mizu no Tanken if you have the daggers, Jigoku (Hell) and Gokuraku (Paradise) in your hands (They have the unique seal on them to create and help the user sustain the jutsu). The jutsu takes a lot of energy and chakra to use and the aftershock makes the user weak and the water cuts the user’s arms during use. The jutsu starts with water engulfing the user’s arms and gets into the shape in daggers as it spins around the user’s limbs. Tsumi Minamoto is the only living being in the world to know this technique, but she is not a master at it yet.

Appearance: Tsumi
Bio: Tsumi was born to Leaf Ninjas, Koji and Mei Minamoto. Both of her parents were gentle, kind water-using ninja who were both born in Konohagakure. Tsumi’s father taught Tsumi how to use water jutsus at an early age of seven to hopefully advance her studies in the academy when she was to attend in a few years. Tsumi’s mother taught her how to use ninja gear like shuriken and kunais at six years of age. When Tsumi entered the academy to study being a ninja more, her father began to teach her his jutsu that he created. It was hard for Tsumi since it was a very powerful jutsu and she was such a young ninja. To this day, Tsumi has not mastered her father’s jutsu.

When her parents went off on ninja missions, she would stay with her aunt, Tomo Minamoto, who taught her how to cook and tend a garden. Though staying with her aunt was fun, she missed her parents dearly and was worried sick every night, they wouldn’t come home. Tomo had to calm Tsumi down enough for the young ninja to sleep, but even then Tsumi would have nightmares of her parents being killed on their mission. Tomo tried to reassure her niece everything was alright, but Tsumi wouldn’t believe her aunt.

When Tsumi accepted into the academy, her parents gave her a present as a congratulations for all her hard work. They gave her a cat named Rai. Rai was not a ninja cat, but Tsumi didn’t care, she adored Rai anyways. Tsumi and Rai soon became close friend, being able to sense each other’s strongest emotions from their bond of friendship. Tsumi wouldn’t ever leave Rai behind even when she was told to by her mother and father.

In the academy, Tsumi was very silent to others and only spoke when spoken to, seeing as she never really went outside to interact with the other children in earlier years, but instead chose to stay home and either, before her home training began, watch her parents train or, when her training had begun, train as much as she could through out the day. The children never really bothered with Tsumi in the academy because of this. They only interacted with her when it was instructed by their sensei.

Even then, Tsumi didn’t enjoy interacting with her peers, she preferred working alone, but was scolded for it, seeing as she was to work with a team once she graduated the academy. Her anti-social attitude is what prevented Tsumi from graduating a year early, seeing as she was advanced in her studies far more than the other children.

A year before Tsumi was to graduate the academy, her parents were murdered on a ninja mission in Iwagakure by a rouge ninja. No one knows who did it, but Tsumi made a vow that if she ever encountered her parents’ murderer, she’d kill them, but this isn’t her main goal. It’s only if she sees her parents’ murderer in person. Her main goal is really to become a strong ninja and make her parents proud in the afterlife. Hopefully, she can do that without dying before she’s a Chunin.

Currently, Tsumi lives with her Aunt Tomo and has graduated the academy with flying colors. She is still traumatized by her parents’ death and has nightmares about it, but not all the time. The figure in her dreams continues to remain the same, but she cannot identify who it is in her dream that keeps killing her parents. It scares her to death every time she thinks about the dream and/or the figure.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:50 am


1wolffan
Phaeton
Metal armor is overrated when you can get dragonhide armor with a Wild enchantment anyway. Lets not forget having spells to mess with people who rely on it, like heat metal, chill metal, and rusting grasp. Then there's those later transmutation spells, and repel metal.

Heheh. I like the sounds of that. Having a guy who can't use metals, with multiple ways to counter those who do. I can see quite a bit of fun in that idea. Repel metal sounds like it would even be helpful against a melee enemy trying to attack a druid. After a while, my (non-existent) party may have to opt for less metal, just so they don't get affected by that last one, if it got too strong.

Besides, space ROCK could work too. And, story-wise, might even be stronger than dragon-hide armor, or dragon-tooth weaponry.


I'd have to look up the name of the spell as well as the specifics, but I also recall a spell that turns the melee weapons of an attacker back on them. Literally bends the weapon around and makes it strike its own user. I like that space rock idea, though. I'm partial to blunt weapons. Material just needs to be durable and moderately heavy.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:16 am


Whoa.
Miki, that is one of the coolest (and sanest) Naruto-based stories I've heard. You gave her some really nice strengths, but countered them with appropriate weaknesses. I actually felt like I was in the Naruto world trying to figure this gal out in one of her classes. You've set her up with several paths she can follow. I like the touch of reality in her special ninjitsu. It's an awesome move, but until it's mastered, it's a danger to the user too. (like lightsabers).

Oh wait...
I'm supposed to be critical...

Hmm.
Umm.
Maybe the format could be improved a little for better legibility. Using a little more white space makes it easier for people to read what you type. if you authorize it, may I go into your post, and just change up the format of the post? I won't change any of the text. (heck, there aren't even many typos in there anyways).

Umm, is there any other suggestions I could make...
Perhaps, she doesn't have the nightmares ALL the time, until after her parents die? MAybe?

You've done so well, I'm just nitpicking to find some things. Thank you for sharing your character.
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