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 Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:21 pm
As soon as Kuro saw the dolls eyes come to life, he immediately unsheathed his sword and onto his left hand. The sword that normally glistened in the light, did nothing but shine slightly to the small amount of light that they had in the enclosed training area. As the hollows got closer to where Mocka and himself stood, Kuro cautiously paid attention to what his Vice Captain said and nodded.
"Sir! Yes sir!" Kuro spoke enthusiastically as he quickly moved father to the right in order to make the Hollow Dolls come to him instead of Mocka.
Just as Kuro had predicted, the Demi-Hollow followed their new moving target and completely ignored the other Soul Reaper that stood still. Kuro watched carefully as the first one approached him ad lunged for Kuro's leg in an attempt to bite him. Reacting quickly to the sudden attack, Kuro jumped a good ten feet backwards and onto a small rock with only his right foot. Kuro balanced on his right foot and looked back at the Demi-Hollows which, once again, approached his new location.
Without wasting any time, Kuro pulled his right hand forward and extend his pointer and middle finger towards the approaching beasts. Quickly, Kuro gathered his reiatsu and began to form a white string of lighting around his two fingers. He held onto the attack until the closest hollow once again launched at him for another attack. A smirk formed on Kuro's face as he pulled his hand back and thrusted it forward at the hollow.
"Hadou #4! Byakurai!" Kuro exclaimed as a straight shot of lighting hit the hollow dead on its white mask, "One Down. Three to go"
Kuro quickly jumped back as the other three Demi-Hollows jumped at him. He landed back on the grassy field that was his terrain. As soon as his feet touched the ground, both of his hands immediately gripped onto his ZanpakutÅ. He rocketed forward at the airborne Demi-Hollows and slashed at them in a repeating "X" pattern. The first Demi-Hollow did not react fast enough to Kuro's sudden attack so he was slashed in the higher part of his mask. Unfortunately the second hollow had enough time to move away from the strike, but it also left the third and final Hollow open for Kuro's last "X" slash. One hit the third hollow in the chest and the second hit it in the white mask. Kuro swiftly landed onto the ground once more. Once his right foot hit the ground, Kuro used his momentum and pivoted 180 degrees and faced the remaining hollow. This was the last one and Kuro needed to impress the Vice Captain, but how? Kuro did not have much of a chance to think about it because the Demi-Hollow launched itself towards Kuro.
Kuro's reaction time this time was not fast enough, so the Hollow pounced onto him. Fortunately, Kuro had enough time to raise his blade and block the Hollow's teeth from clamping onto his arm. In the position he was in there was no way he was going to over power the hollow by strength alone, he needed to use one more Kidou. Pushing the beast as best as he could back, Kuro charged up a burst of reiatsu and focused it into the palms of his hands. When he felt the reiatsu was charged enough he let it all out in a single burst.
"Hadou #1! Sho!" He exclaimed as his hands and his blade shot forward and pushed the Hollow about three yards away from himself.
Not wasting a single beat, Kuro regained his composure and charged directly for the off balanced hollow and delivered a swift, but powerful, upward slash, slicing the mask completely off the Demi-Hollow, ending the training session. Taking a deep breath, Kuro sighed as he fell to onto his butt followed by falling onto his back.
Kuro looked over at the Vice Captain, "How'd I do?" Kuro asked with a cocky grin on his face.
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:27 am
(( Apart from some minor grammar errors you did very well! One advice, just try not to repeat some expressions over and over again, because it tends to become boring on longer post, like the one you just did... Having said that, its obvious that your post's length is quite satisfying!
Now concerning RP matters... I haven't seen enough of your RP just yet - just now and in the VC office - but you seem to be showing consistence with your RPC personality and the way he reacts to others... Thats a good thing! But I still need to see a lot more RP from you, before I can make a decision...
Overall, you just need to improve your descriptions and grammar... One word of advice: always review twice or thrice your posts.))
I'm sorry if I'll disappoint you... Mock said, while still sitting on the ground the whole time... But you were not good nor bad!...
While speaking, MockaDash leisurely reached inside his kimono for his kiseru and filled the pipe with tobacco... The shinigami gathered some red reiatsu on his right middle finger and thumb and, after snapping them, a small flame was produced...
Mock lighted the kiseru with the flame and took a deep breath of smoke from the pipe, slowly exhaling it before continuing his speech...
First of all, you were able to destroy all the Demi-Hollows without a single scratch on your body!...
But they were, after all, low-level Hollows!!!... The fact that you got tired just from fighting those is unacceptable!!!... And the problem resides in your battle tactics!...
MockaDash took another breath of smoke from the pipe and let the smoke come out as he spoke However, There is no need for you to worry... We are going to work on that!...
Your first instinct when I activated the dummies, was to get away from me in order to draw their attention to you!... That was not needed, since I was the one to activate them, I "told" them not to attack me...
On top of that, if one, or all of them were to charge at me, it would only mean their demises!... Don't think that my guard is down just because I'm seating here!...
Nonetheless, that was a commendable thing to do!... It shows that you are aware of your comrades in battle and their position...
What you need is also the awareness of their power and battle capability, in order to know when to concern about them, and when to concern about yourself!!!...
Mock continued smoking as he talked... I noticed it was easy for you to defeat the Hollow, but the reason you are now tired, is that you spent too much of your energy in order to "put up a good show" for me...
If you really want to impress me, you just need to be more efficient... The only way to kill a hollow is to destroy its mask, as you well know, so why go to the trouble of doing more than that???
Save up your energies!!!...
Simply destroy its mask as quickly as possible and with the less reiatsu or stamina consumption as possible... That way the battle will end faster and you will avoid long and tiring battles!!!...
Mock paused for a couple of seconds and gazed at the sky, as he took a puff from his pipe... He retrieved his small sake bottle and took a sip from it's content...
Next lesson... This time I'll activate six Hollows instead of four, and now their power is quadrupled!!!...
This will be a though battle for you, since you'll be dealing now with Hollows whose power is higher than average!!!...
((Again, do a solo RP... This time taking into account my previous advices... Good luck!!! xd ))
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:35 pm
Kuro nodded towards Mock just as the six hollow dolls came to life and once again came at him. What Kuro noticed different about these Hollow dolls was that they approached Kuro more cautiously than the last batch of Hollows.
Since their power level increased, then their intelligence and instinct must have increased as well.... Kuro thought as he repeated the same move he began with last time and jumped away from Mock. Of course this time he did it out of his own choice rather than to protect his Vice Captain.
The hollows changed their direction and speed almost immediately after Kuro's feet left the ground. This made Kuro even more cautious about how he judged the new higher leveled hollow. Not wasting anytime, Kuro placed his Zanpakuto in between both of his hands and gripped it tight enough to get a good grip. He would not waste any reiatsu on Kidou or Hadou unless it was absolutely necessary.
As his feet hit the ground, Kuro's left foot slid back further than his right foot, which in turn placed most of his weight onto his right foot. Kuro had decided to go for the heads on approach and try to take out one or two hollow dolls in order to go to a number of hollows he handled before. Kuro watched carefully as the dolls came towards him in groups of two. This was going right according to his strategy, but something seemed off to him, but he had to try out his plan of attack.
Pushing off of his right foot, Kuro sprinted towards the Hollows at full speed, all the while keeping his Zanpakuto ready for hacking and slashing. What Kuro didn't notice was that two of the hollows had hung back behind the two forward most hollows waiting for Kuro to attack. Being oblivious to that, Kuro diagonally slashed as the closest Hollow, slicing the mask clean of the it's face. Following his first attack, Kuro ducked under the disintegrating corpse of the first hollow and stabbed upward at the hollow slightly above him. The roar of pain could be heard from the stabbed hollow as Kuro's Zanpakuto pierced the hollows head. Immediately, Kuro pulled back on the blade and sliced the head into two symmetrical halfs.
Unfortunately, Kuro was still unaware of of the other two hollows that had stuck back. Unable to react fast enough to block both oncoming attacks, Kuro blocked the first hollow with the blade of his Zanpakuto, but got bitten by the second one on the shoulder. Grunting in pain, Kuro pushed off of the hollow he was holding in at bay pulled the hollow doll on his shoulder with him. The hollow was smart enough to let go of Kuro and let him push himself away without his enemy.
As his feet, once again, hit the ground after pushing away, Kuro's right hand immediately went to his left shoulder which had begun to bleed through his robes leaving the the stain of red blood on the robe.
"Damn... I got too careless..." Kuro muttered to himself as he ripped a bit of his robe and quickly tied it around the bite wound. "Alright... time to get more serious about this..."
Kuro's aura began to change as his carefree type of attitude and his more serious side began to take over. Ripples over reiatsu washed over the area where the hollows, Mock, and Kuro stood. Kuro could feel his reiatsu almost double in strength. The most notorious change was the gradual color change in his left eye. A mass of white hue steadily spread over his eye making his current eye colors one white and one black. Unbenounced to the hollows, Mocka, and even Kuro was that this was one of his pre-released Shikai abilities.
Kuro somewhat understood what this ability did, but not as much as he should know. He knew that with this eye change, the movements of his opponent or opponents were "slowed" down so that Kuro had a better reaction time. Watching the hollows now, Kuro could see their movements a lot clearer, which gave him his attack pattern.
There were still four hollows alive after Kuro's last attack and they were coming his way. They had gotten into the same battle positions that they had gotten in last time. Fortunately for Kuro, his new enhanced eyesight help him see through their strategy and quickly come up with a counter attack. Focusing a a decent size amount of reiatsu into both of his hands, Kuro forced the reiatsu through his Zanpakuto and stabbed it into the ground in front of him with both hands.
Using the Zanpakuto as a median, Kuro cast his Kidou,"Hadou #1! Sho!" Kuro proclaimed. A wave of reiatsu was sent through the area lifting dirt and sand from the surrounding area causing a huge dirt cloud to envelop the area where Kuro was fighting. Not wasting anytime, Kuro strongly pulled out his Zanpakuto and charged head on at the four disoriented hollows.
Using his enhanced vision, Kuro cut the first hollows mask clean off with a simple upward slash. As he finished his first strike the second closest hollow to him swung his arm at Kuro, but Kuro shifted his weight all onto his right foot and dodged the punch. As Kuro pushed himself back to a normal weight spread, Kuro swung his sword into a quick slice, cutting the attacking hollow's lower arm off. The hollow howled in pain, but was quickly followed by a quick stab into the hollow's face.
There were only two hollows left and the dirt cloud still hung over the field and Kuro was still pretty close to the other two hollows. No sooner had Kuro began to look for the other two hollow when one came out from the dirt cloud in a straight charge at him. The hollow sprinted at Kuro on all fours, but Kuro was prepared.
Spinning his sword with left hand, like a drumstick, Kuro wipped his Zanpakuto at the hollow and began a fast incantation, "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat! Bakudo #9! Geki!"
Extending his right hand's pointer finger, a radiant red light shot from it. The red "shot" blasted past the Zanpakuto and hit the hollow square on the forehead, causing it to freeze in its tracks. Unfortunately for the hollow, the Zanpakuto was still cutting through the air and it couldn't move. The Zanpakuto stabbed through the hollows head and stayed there until the the hollow disintegrated into nothingness and the Zanpakuto fell bluntly onto the ground bellow it.
Only one hollow remained and Kuro was without his blade. The beast realized this and made a seemingly noticeable smirk. Snorting out a small puff of air, it charged at Kuro on all fours in an attempt to ram the unarmed Shinigami. Kuro had no plan for this part of his fight. Without a blade he would be unable to cut the mask off of the hollow. His only choice now was to destroy the mask indefinitely with a kidou. The hollow continued his charge, but Kuro stood absolutely still focusing his reiatsu bit by bit into his right hand. From a different point of view, it would look like Kuro was paralyzed as the hollow was five feet from where Kuro stood, but they would be seeing wrong.
In one quick pump of the legs, Kuro was in the air above the hollow. Of course in his rush, the hollow would not be able to turn around or for that matter look up and see a white flash of electricity erupt from Kuro's right hand. It was Kuro's time to smirk as he extended his pointer and middle finger at the back of the hollows head.
"Die..." Kuro muttered under his breath, "Byakurai..." The white flash of electricity engulfed the hollow's head completely before exploding in a mass of white light and black and red darkness.
Kuro gently landed on the ground below with a soundless thud. The coloring of his left eye slowly retracted back into nothingness as his regular eye hue returned to both eyes. Turning around he walked back over to where Mocka stood with a dumb grin on his face. If Mocka noticed Kuro's persona change before, he would definitely notice Kuro's return to his regular self.
"How'd I do, coach?" he asked jokingly.
[Sorry it took so long. I've been busy this entire week with school and work and I've only had time to check on things and not be able to post. Also, sorry if it doesn't make sense on some parts. I'm quite tired, but I really wanted to get this post done before tomorrow. Again sorry for any dumb mistakes.]
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 5:24 pm
You are pretty decent at fighting hollows... Let us see how you deal with a real challenge!!! MockaDash said as he stood up and picked up his katana from the ground...
This will be your final test!!!... You will be fighting me!!!...
Attack when you feel ready...
((Sorry for taking so long, I've been busy...
Your solo RPs are decent enough... You did however repeated some words, but like you said, it was probably due to you being tired at the time...
This time you'll RP with me...
Send me via PM a list of all your intended powers and abilities for your shikai, in order for me to approve them or not mad d: ))
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:03 pm
A smile formed on Kuro's face as soon as Mocka those five words:
This will be your final test!!!... You will be fighting me!!!...
Kuro turned his back to Mocka and walked over to where his sword had landed after he had killed the second from last hollow. Picking up his Zanpakuto with his right hand, Kuro turned back to face Mocka while holding his zanpakuto in his hand. Kuro now stood about fifteen feet from where Mocka stood. Kuro had the first move, but how would he surprise the Vice Captain after he had seen Kuro fight the hollows?
"Oh well..." he muttered, "It can't be helped..." a quick discharge of reiatsu erupted from Kuro's left hand. In one swift motion, Kuro's hand shot forward toward the direction where Mocka stood. "Byakuri!" Kuro exclaimed as the explosion of white electric affinity, reiatsu shot directly at Mocka.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 9:49 am
(( Dude, you have to work on your grammar... I already warned you about this twice, and I overlooked it on the previous posts because they were long solo RPs and you stated that you were tired... I'm sorry but you won't achieve shikai if you don't write literate posts.
We'll work on this during the spar. Read your posts twice after writting them and look for grammar flaws... Everything else is good, you're just lacking in this small errors.))
MockaDash calmly side-stepped to his right, effortlessly avoiding the White Lightning, as it simply passed by him...
I'm not one of those Hollows... The Vice-Captain said, employing a harsh tone on his voice...
I'll give you a second chance... This time, try to hit me, please... He said with a grin.
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:47 pm
Kuro gave a loud sigh, "This is going to be tough, isn't it?" he said with a tone of annoyance, "Oh well... I'll just have to try my best to beat you!" Kuro ended more confidently.
With his zanpakuto still in hand, Kuro erupted in a burst of speed in one swift motion. Kuro's only chance to damage Mocka was to attack Mocka head on and try to injure him. Kuro continued his rush towards Mocka all the while switching between a straight forward rush to a zig-zag pattern rush.
As Kuro got closer to Mocka, he dropped into a baseball like slide tackle. Kuro slid right at Mocka with his right foot straight up, as if he was wearing baseball cleats, aiming to hit Mocka in the chest or his face. Hopefully this would catch Mocka of guard and give Kuro an opening to place a stronger blow on Mocka.
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:58 pm
Correction... MockaDash started his sentence, as Kuro was rushing towards him. You'll have to try to stay alive!!!!!Hadou#1 -- Shou Mock casted the kidou with his left hand, aiming it at Kuro's right foot, disrupting his kick and knocking the shinigami down... With the right hand, MockaDash casted yet a second kidou. This time, one of his favorites. Hadou #4 -- ByakuraiA burst of light-blue reiatsu, snapped from Mock's index finger, describing a straight line from it to Kuro, and continuing to travel until it hit a wall... Kuro had lost his balance due to the first hadou casted, so Mock guessed it would be hard for his opponent to dodge the White Lightning he had just shoot, and aimed at the left lung. Again, not good enough...((Advice: Don't just write Kuro and Mocka all the time. It turns the post really monotonous and tedious to read! For example: Quote: Kuro's only chance to damage Mocka was to attack Mocka head on and try to injure him. Quote: Kuro slid right at Mocka with his right foot straight up, as if he was wearing baseball cleats, aiming to hit Mocka in the chest or his face. Hopefully this would catch Mocka of guard and give Kuro an opening to place a stronger blow on Mocka. Could've been... Quote: Kuro's only chance to damage Mocka was to attack him head on and try to injure him. Quote: Kuro slid right at Mocka , with his right foot straight up, as if he was wearing baseball cleats, aiming to hit his opponent in the chest or in his face. Hopefully this would catch him off guard and give Kuro an opening to place a stronger blow on him. Also, there are still some grammar errors... In the examples above I underlined some of them... ))
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 7:45 pm
[So I guess that I got sent a bit backwards after you casted "Hadou #1" and I'm not directly under you. At least I hope that's how it is]
Kuro had hoped that his bold strike would have at least caught Mocka of guard, but it was quite the contrary. He had lost his balance due to a well timed Kidou by his opponent and now Kuro was stumbling backwards, on the verge of falling on his rear end, as his opponent was about to shoot a second Kidou aimed directly for his upper body area.
This was bad. Kuro had no way of regaining his balance quick enough to dodge the oncoming White Lightning. A Kidou of equal or stronger force was also out of the question due to the small amount of time he had before getting hit by the attack. All Kuro could do was block the attack or at least try to redirect it, but how? Then it came to him, he would use a lighting rod.
As he finally tumbled backwards, Kuro impaled the ground right next to him with his blade deep enough so that the current of electricity that was being shot at him would hit the part of the blade closest to the hilt. After creating his quick makeshift lightning rod, Kuro did all he could to move as far away from his zanpakuto as possible, but of course with Mocka's flowing attack style, he had little time to move away from his zanpakuto.
Kuro hoped that his "lightning rod" would give him sufficient protection from his opponent's attack, but in any case, he had already began charging some reaitsu in his hands to either defend himself or launch a quick counter attack without his zanpakuto.
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:26 pm
((That was better. Keep it up! xd ))
Quick and inventive thinking there, Kurogome-kun... MockaDash said, as Kuro's sword discharged the White Lightning into the ground, dissipating the energy as it contacted with the seki stone... But now, you have no sword!!!
Mock sprung forward, while aiming his right palm approximately at Kuro's feet... Hadou #31 -- Shakkaho the shinigami yelled, letting a medium-sized orb of glowing red reiatsu shoot from his palm, at its target... Since Mock did not said the incantations to the kidou, its power was greatly diminished, but it still worked its purpose to its fullest!
The Shot of Red Fire hit the tatami floor with a blast, sending pieces of it flying everywhere, leaving trails of smoke in the air. This was done, to keep Kuro from getting close to his zanpakutou, and reach it before Mock could.
The Vice Captain grabbed Kuro's katana by the handle and raised it in order to closely inspect its details... How will you fight now, Kurogome-kun??? Mock said with a grin, while holding the katana on his right hand.
(( Kurogome is a nickname my RPC found for you... If you don't like it just say so IC... Kurogome means unpolished rice, which is black... And I find it fits since you are in the process if being polished xp ))
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:51 pm
Kuro backed away enough so that when his zanpakuto was hit with the electric affinity reiatsu. After the lightning finished dispersing throughout the ground around his zanpakuto, Kuro stood up and looked over at Mocka, "I'm glad you liked it Mocka-San." he responded respectfully.
Finishing his response, Kuro made a run towards his sword, but was blocked by the crash of "red fire" onto the ground near his zapakuto. Pieces of tatami floor scattered around the area pelting Kuro in the face and on his upper body. This attack strategy, had caught him of guard and thus was unable to regain his composure fast enough to reclaim his zanpakuto. Once the small whirlwind of floor pieces ceased, Kuro glanced over to where his zanpakuto once was. Unfortunately, he now saw Mocka holding his zanpakuto in his own right hand. Kuro cursed silently as Mocka asked him how he was going to fight without a zanpakuto. Kuro hadn't thought that far yet.
Sighing loudly, Kuro spoke, "To be perfectly honest, Mocka-San, I had not really thought that far, but that's what makes this battle unpredictable and exciting! We'll just have to see what I can do to even up the odds!" he said with a big goofy grin on his face.
Kuro really had no idea what he could do to reverse this situation. All he could do now was wait for his opponent to strike and see if he could pull out a counterattack. for the time being, Kuro would keep focusing reiatsu into his hands in hopes of turning the tide with a Kidou or two.
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Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:10 am
This is like a game of chess!!! You always have to think several moves ahead!!! You can't just react in the spur of the moment!!!... Mock said, as he charged at Kuro, brandishing Kuro's own zanpakutou at him!
Tell me something... The Vice-Captain asked with a grin. How does it feel to be sliced by your own blade, Kurogome-kun???
MockaDash swung the katana with an upwards motion, striving to split Kuro's chest in two! The shinigami placed his left hand on the tsuka of his own katana - that still rested at his waist - and gripped it tight, ready to draw it in the blink of an eye!
Don't you know that the blade is the soul of the warrior??? Lose your blade and you'll lose something far more important than your own life...
You'll lose your honor!!!
Quickly following the slash with the katana on his right hand, Mock drew his own with his left, and, raising his arm, performed an upward crescent slash with it. The slash was aimed at Kuro's right shoulder joint, intending to rip off his limb!
You don't deserve that arm, if you can't grip your blade with it!!!
Think like a duelist, boy!!!
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Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 7:17 pm
"Here goes nothing..." Kuro muttered to himself as he slid his left hand across the air in front of him, "Hadou #1! Sho!"
A pressure on the air in front of him drastically increased and pushed Kuro's swinging blade away from him. Quickly shifting his weight onto his left leg, he dodged Mock's zanpakuto from slicing his arm clean off. A smirk grew on Kuro's face as he knew it was time to reclaim his zanpakuto.
Raising his right arm, Kuro aimed his index and middle finger for his own Zanpakuto, which Mocka held in his right hand. The reiatsu he had built in that hand exploded out and formed into the familiar crackling affinity of electricity.
"Hadou #4! Byakurai!" he exclaimed loudly as the electricity headed for the Zanpakuto his opponent held. If it hit, it would travel down the blade and send volts of electricity all through his opponent's body. If Mocka didn't want to get electrocuted, he would have to drop Kuro's zanpakuto, which would give Kuro the opportunity to reclaim his sword.
[My bad on the really bad grammar this may have, I'm pretty sick and I can really think straight today, whihc is why I havent had time to reply earlier. If anything sounds weird or wrong, tell me so I can either post my reasoning to it or edit it. Sorry in advance]
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Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:18 pm
MockaDash grinned at Kuro. Nice move, Kurogome-kun!!! As the White Lightning was aiming for Kuro's Katana, Mock let go of it and placed his left hand on the tsuka of his own Zanpakutou, in order to tighten the grip he had. Mock's katana was above his head, due to the upward motion he had just performed to try and rip Kuro's arm, so Mock could only bring it down with both hands.
The Vice-Captain brandished his katana in the air, downwards, between Kuro and himself. Kuro's Zanpakutou was struck by the lightning and started falling, but if its owner were to try and grab it, he would have no choice but to be cut down by Mock's attack!
Let us see, how far are you willing to bleed, in order to make amends for your mistakes!!! Mock said with a smile, unfitting the current situation...
((Your reply was fine. And I do hope you'll get well soon xd ))
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Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:49 pm
Mocka was right. Without his zanpakuto, Kuro was nothing but an empty shell. The zanpakuto is supposed to be a shinigami's weapon, but also his closest ally. If he was ever going to achieve the level of shikai, he had to show Mocka, but more importantly his "partner", that he was willing to put his life on the line to regain his closest companion. Kuro could feel time slow as his zanpakuto slowly fell to the ground after being dropped by Mocka. Pushing off of both of his legs, he dove forward towards his zanpakuto. As he dove, he could sense his opponent's blade get closer and closer to making contact with his body. Stretching his right arm out, Kuro did everything he could to reach out and catch his zanpakuto before it hit the ground.
The tips of his fingers could feel the tip of the handle as he tried his hardest to wrap his hand around the handle. He could already feel Mocka's zanpakuto make contact with his skin, but he had to keep going! Stretching as far as he could, Kuro wrapped his hand around the handle of his zanpakuto. Unfortunately, as soon as he gripped onto the zanpakuto, the Vice-Captain's sword was already slicing through his upper body region. The pain slowly spread throughout Kuro's body, but he didn't care. He had his partner back and he knew that was all the mattered for now.
Using the last of his momentum, Kuro twisted his body away from the blade in an attempt to stop the total slicing of his body. After this he would land on the ground, with a loud "thud" completely out of breath. A small, but noticeable smile peeked through Kuro's lips, "Welcome back..." he murmured to himself.
[Thanks. I'll try to get better soon! biggrin ]
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