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 Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 4:28 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:56 pm
Hmm.
I... sort of don't like Janna.
Not because she's a bad character, just because if I knew her in person, I wouldn't like her. I preferred Janine, in a way, but I think really I don't care that much for either. (Yes, I am aware that they are the same person. But you know what I mean.)
David I like well enough, except when he gets really soppy, which again totally fits him but which I back away from without exception.
Basically I'm reading this for Nina haha.
Anyways. No more non sequiturs from this from 'til next update.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 2:12 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:20 pm
all i gotta say to the new part is just ....wow...
I'm amazed that David took the courage from all these steps and I cant help but admire his tenacity. Hes a man who can get exactly what he wants....
As for the second wow is what perspired in the end after he proposed to Janna, she wasn't sure... Is she just not ready? or what is going on??
Love the cliffhangers you give us. Amazing! ^^ I really can't wait for the next part so I shall proclaim you start right meow!
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:25 pm
mrgreen I'm baaaaad.
Done soooooon!!!
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:43 pm
KirbyVictorious mrgreen I'm baaaaad. Done soooooon!!! your worse in more ways than one -.-
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:49 pm
Nitpick: wouldn't they have had to do more tests on David? I mean, the symptoms don't always show.
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 6:05 am
I don't know ninja sweatdrop would they? Like, blood/urine tests, or what? o.O
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:40 am
hmmm downtrodden he seems,
I think it will all come together when he gets home to where Janna is.
three people are alone in the world.....
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:41 am
Actually that'd be more like 600,000. But whaaaaaaaaaatever you like.
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:43 am
three people that I know of...
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:45 am
Janna and David count as people?
In that case, there are lots of other characters out there O.o
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:46 am
KirbyVictorious Janna and David count as people? In that case, there are lots of other characters out there O.o yeh those are two of the people I was talking about.
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:48 am
You...you're missing the whole point. O.o
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