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Baylu Eras

PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:04 am


Xeithx
Gaia Name:Xeithx
Character Name:xeithx Ibazi
Clan: Ibazi
Element Affinity:Wind
Age:9 Students are ages 11 to 14
Sex:Male
Birthday:Summer 2 94
Theme Song:ANTHEM 4 PIPE DREAMS AWESOME! My theme song is SNAPPED
Physical Description:He is 4'8" slim. His skin tone is a mulatto brown, his eye color is a white.His hair is a pure white, the style of his hair looks like he has just woken up. His facial features are that he has a moon shape scar on the right side of his face that stretches the top of his forehead to his chin. One last thing he has a huge burn mark on his back that resembles a zero that he received when he was a few days old.
Clothing:Know to stick with in a formal wear format, sandals, black, white, and black kimono.
Personality:He is tough seemingly calm when with others, he can show his bursts of energy when no one is looking. He's disrespectful to those around him on a constant base. He can be quiet, or he could talk forever, it depends upon the company he keeps.
Background:At birth, Xeithx was thought to be a wild child for he always seemed so full of energy and was thrilled by the curves and points of the objects around him. His parents wanted different then this foretelling, and they gave him constant chores to keep him obedient and out of trouble. From calligraphy to cleaning the house,he had to work. Want to discuss with Sorri how your character will come into Shimagakure? I know the Ibazi are not a bloodline-clan, but if your character is blood-kin to Sorri, you should mention it here.

Other:

-Abilities-
edited your abillties, hp and cp

Rank:Academy Student
LV:1
HP: 11
CP: 6
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 12
Charisma: 12
Endurance: 12
Agility: 12
Intelligence: 12
Strength: 12

-Skills-

Chakra Mod 1
Ninjutsu:1
Control:

Charisma Mod 1
Persuade:
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:1

Endurance Mod 1
Focus:1
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim:

Agility Mod 1
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance:
Spy:1
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod 1
Genjutsu:
Detect:
Sense:
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge:2
Alchemy:

Strength Mod 1
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu

-Equipment-

Items:
Weapons: added your weapons

Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Strength
Blacksmith DC: 10
Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10

Valuables:


Fix the things mentioned and post back!
PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:36 am


Gaia Name:Xeithx
Character Name:xeithx Ibazi
Clan: Ibazi
Element Affinity:Wind
Age:11
Sex:Male
Birthday:Summer 2 94
Theme Song:ANTHEM 4 PIPE DREAMS
Physical Description:He is 4'8" slim. His skin tone is a mulatto brown, his eye color is a white.His hair is a pure white, the style of his hair looks like he has just woken up. His facial features are that he has a moon shape scar on the right side of his face that stretches the top of his forehead to his chin. One last thing he has a huge burn mark on his back that resembles a zero that he received when he was a few days old.
Clothing:Know to stick with in a formal wear format, sandals, black, white, and black kimono.
Personality:He is tough seemingly calm when with others, he can show his bursts of energy when no one is look. His disrespectful to those around him on a constant base. He can be quiet, or he could talk forever, it depends upon the company he keeps.
Background:At birth, Xeithx was tough to be a wild child for he always seemed so full of energy and was thrilled by the curves and points of the objects around him. His parents wanted different then this foretelling, and they gave him constant chores to keep him obedient and out of trouble. From calligraphy to cleaning the house,he had to work. As he grow, he became more control easier to handle, so his let him hang out with his cousin Sorri Ibazi, than soon after they became the best of friends. But something happen to them when sorri join the ninja academy, thus started their rivalry.


Other:

-Abilities-

Rank:Academy Student
LV:1
HP:11
CP: 6
XP: 0/50

Chakra:12
Charisma:12
Endurance:12
Agility:12
Intelligence:12
Strength:12

-Skills-

Chakra Mod
Ninjutsu:1
Control:0 + [clan 1]

Charisma Mod
Persuade:0
Lie:0
Seduce:0
Handle Animal:0
Sing:0
Disguise:0
Intimidate:1

Endurance Mod
Focus:1
Blacksmith:0
Fortitude:0
Rope:0
Swim:0

Agility Mod
Dodge:0
Sprint:0
Escape:0
Sneak Attack:0
Balance:0 - [Clan 1]
Hide:0
Dance:0
Spy:1
Tumble:0

Intelligence Mod
Genjutsu:0
Detect:0
Sense:0
Fuuin:0
Trap:0
Knowledge:2
Alchemy:0

Strength Mod
Taijutsu:0
Grapple:0

Weapons
Sword:0
Staff:0
Melee:0
Ninja:0
Throwing:0
Range:0
Heavy:0

-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu

-Equipment-

Items:
Weapons:

Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Strength
Blacksmith DC: 10
Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10
Valuables:

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Baylu Eras

PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:10 am


any talk about how to introduce your character? [you can go ahead and post your profile in the scroll.]
PostPosted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:55 am


Gaia Name: Elyk-Camroc
Character Name: Mouchou Aranami
Clan:
Element Affinity: Water
Age: 12
Sex: Male
Birthday: Spring 2 93
Theme Song:
Physical Description: He is 4'10" with a bit of muscle on him, very little body fat. His hair is dirty blonde, with most of it organized in messy looking spikes. It comes down a little bit past his shoulders. His face is very gentle looking, but his deep brown eyes that are always darting around offsets that gentle look. He has a tattoo of a broken wing on the left side of his back, and a tattoo of a wave on his chest. He has quite a few scars, including one that goes all the way across his neck, and three on each of his forearms. Small scars that look like they could of been from a whip or something similar adorn his lean frame.
Clothing: Aranami wears a dark blue tank top, which fits to his lean body nicely. On the back of it, it has stitched into it two wings, one being right where his broken wing tattoo is, the other directly opposite. He also wears a pair of black shorts, which are fit enough to stay on, but baggy enough to give his legs plenty of free movement. He wears dark blue shoes that has one wing on each, one wing on the left side of the left shoe, and one wing on the right side of the right shoe. However, the shoes wings differ from the shirts, as they are covered by a wave design that circles the whole shoe. He wears a wristband that has a dark blue wave design with a light blue sky above the waves.
Personality: He respects everyone, but more so people that are stronger than him. He is competitive and will always accept fights, which he will always go all out on. He underestimates nobody, and wants to always fight people he believes are stronger than him, not cause he thinks he can always win, but cause he thinks he can always learn. He tries to be calm and tries to think of multiple outcomes before rushing into something. However, it's not always the case, cause any situation where he sees stronger opponents his blood boils and he wants to issue a challenge right away. He's not stupid, and won't rush into a situation where it is a lose/lose unless it benefits someone close to him. He comes off almost a little too strongly when he first meets someone, but if he warms up to them he becomes very rude, but not in a mean spirited sort of way. He clams up if there are too many unfamiliar people around him, and will try to excuse himself if he feels he isn't wanted. He can go into an almost depression at any time, cause of a psyche problem, but around others he will always try to hide it. He places other peoples joy over his own, and becomes happier when people close to him are.
Background: He lived with his family in a coastline village for the first five years of his life, in which they beat into him respect. If at any time he forgot to use a respectful tone, they chained him up and whipped him.
His brother always told him, "Mom and Dad don't beat me cause I'm strong, they wanted another strong kid, not a weakling like you." Aranami decided to become strong in his own way when he was four. His family was strong, and did mercanary work for the village they lived in, mostly just shrugging off low life bandits and the such. However, he did not know the dark side of his family, which was while they "protected" the village they were in, they terroized the next closest village under the codename of The Wing Bandits. His family taught him over the years how to fend for himself, and how to fight, but that was more so he didn't get in their way, more then love.
When he was 8, a mysterious stranger attacked his village while he was out hunting. Estatic at what he had caught, he ran back to the village with a full grown boar on his back, hoping that he might get even a tiny bit of respect that he felt was deserved for him. He was greeted with a couple hurt villagers crying out in pain. Rushing to their side, he saw them back away as they spat curses at him. "YOU! Your family got us in this mess. You're a monster just like them! Go burn, go die!" He couldn't think, he just dropped the boar and ran to his house outside the village, and saw the stranger, who had a tattoo of a wave on his bare back, holding a sword of fire at Aranami's mom's throat. Without thinking, Aranami charged him, with a beastialy roar, and was greeted with a flash of hot steel across his chest, all he remembered before losing consciousness was his mom's death scream. The stranger turned to the kid instantly and started to treat him.
When Aranami woke up, he saw the man... no, the murderer of his family sitting with his back towards him. Seeing a tanto close by, Aranami grabbed it and tried to rush the mysterious man. A couple seconds later, Aranami was screaming in pain as the man disarmed him, almost breaking his arm in the process. "If you want to kill me, attack while I sleep. Don't rush, because even while I sleep I listen for sounds of an attacker. If you want to kill me, learn from me, so that one day you can. I am Gokai, and if you want to kill me, prepare to suffer through hell before even obtaining a fourth of my power." Over the next three years of his life, Aranami trained with this assassin as his goal, to kill Gokai was all he could think about. He learned a variety of stuff, like hiding, using swords, escaping, and attacking an unsuspecting target, but that was about all Gokai taught. Gokai one day decided to brand Aranami with a wave tattoo on his chest to cover up the burned scar, and he asked what Aranami would want as a tattoo. Aranami looked at the clothes he had been wearing for quite awhile, always being resized, that had the wing symbol on them that he always had wondered about as a kid.
"I want... a broken wing." He explained to Gokai.
"Hmmm... the wing bandits... a broken wing... I see." Was all Gokai responded before working on the tattoo.
The years passed and he always tried to catch Gokai off guard, but true to his word, he was always aware. However, right after Aranami's eleventh birthday, something that changed his life forever happened. Gokai got murdered. The assassin who was always three steps ahead of Aranami got brutally decimated by a strange warrior with an infinity symbol.
Rushing to Gokai's side, Aranami exclaimed, "NO! You can't die. I need to kill you!" Aranami suddenly noticed he was crying. "I'm crying? The person who murdered my family is getting more tears from me then my family? I'm so messed up."
Gokai then caught his attention. "Well, seeing how you never knew how strong I really was, try to get as strong as you can, then you can duel me when we meet in hell." Those were Gokai's last words, as the warrior with an infinity symbol stuck a katana through Gokai's heart. Controlling himself, Aranami looked up at the infinity symbol on the warriors headband.
"Where did you train Sir?" Aranami respectfully asked.
"Shimagakure." was all he said before cutting off Gokai's head.
"Shimagakure, eh?" Thought Aranami as he turned and ran toward the ocean. "I will find this Shimagakure, and will train there, so I can beat that damn old assassin when we meet in hell!" He yelled towards the sky as the waves crashed on the rocks.
He finally did find a way to the island Shimagakure was on, through complete accident though, as he eventually built a raft, and traveled by himself for a year, always searching for the phantom academy. Everywhere he went either had never heard of it, or had just tall tales about it, no one believing it trully exsisted. He never gave up, and eventually found what he though was an honest to goodness clue, from another warrior bearing the infinity sign. After traveling quite far for himself, his journeys end was in sight.
Other:Aranami beats his chest before going into a battle, to pump himself up.

-Abilities-

Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 13
CP: 5
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 10
Charisma: 10
Endurance: 16
Agility: 14
Intelligence: 12
Strength: 10

-Skills-

Chakra Mod
Ninjutsu:
Control:

Charisma Mod
Persuade:
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:

Endurance Mod3
Focus:
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim:

Agility Mod 2
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape: 1
Sneak Attack: 2
Balance:
Hide: 1
Dance:
Spy:
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod1
Genjutsu:
Detect: 1
Sense:
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge:
Alchemy:

Strength Mod
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword: 1
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu

-Equipment-

Items:
Weapons:
Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Strength
Blacksmith DC: 10

Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10
Valuables:

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Baylu Eras

PostPosted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:59 am


Elyk-Camroc
Gaia Name: Elyk-Camroc
Character Name: Mouchou Aranami
Clan:
Element Affinity: Water
Age: 12
Sex: Male
Birthday: Spring 2 93
Theme Song:
Physical Description: He is 4'10" with a bit of muscle on him, very little body fat. His hair is dirty blonde, with most of it organized in messy looking spikes. It comes down a little bit past his shoulders. His face is very gentle looking, but his deep brown eyes that are always darting around offsets that gentle look. He has a tattoo of a broken wing on the left side of his back, and a tattoo of a wave on his chest. He has quite a few scars, including one that goes all the way across his neck, and three on each of his forearms. Small scars that look like they could of been from a whip or something similar adorn his lean frame.
Clothing: Aranami wears a dark blue tank top, which fits to his lean body nicely. On the back of it, it has stitched into it two wings, one being right where his broken wing tattoo is, the other directly opposite. He also wears a pair of black shorts, which are fit enough to stay on, but baggy enough to give his legs plenty of free movement. He wears dark blue shoes that has one wing on each, one wing on the left side of the left shoe, and one wing on the right side of the right shoe. However, the shoes wings differ from the shirts, as they are covered by a wave design that circles the whole shoe. He wears a wristband that has a dark blue wave design with a light blue sky above the waves.
Personality: He respects everyone, but more so people that are stronger than him. He is competitive and will always accept fights, which he will always go all out on. He underestimates nobody, and wants to always fight people he believes are stronger than him, not cause he thinks he can always win, but cause he thinks he can always learn. He tries to be calm and tries to think of multiple outcomes before rushing into something. However, it's not always the case, cause any situation where he sees stronger opponents his blood boils and he wants to issue a challenge right away. He's not stupid, and won't rush into a situation where it is a lose/lose unless it benefits someone close to him. He comes off almost a little too strongly when he first meets someone, but if he warms up to them he becomes very rude, but not in a mean spirited sort of way. He clams up if there are too many unfamiliar people around him, and will try to excuse himself if he feels he isn't wanted. He can go into an almost depression at any time, cause of a psyche problem, but around others he will always try to hide it. He places other peoples joy over his own, and becomes happier when people close to him are.
Background: He lived with his family in a coastline village for the first five years of his life, in which they beat into him respect. If at any time he forgot to use a respectful tone, they chained him up and whipped him.
His brother always told him, "Mom and Dad don't beat me cause I'm strong, they wanted another strong kid, not a weakling like you." Aranami decided to become strong in his own way when he was four. His family was strong, and did mercenary work for the village they lived in, mostly just shrugging off low life bandits and the such. However, he did not know the dark side of his family, which was while they "protected" the village they were in, they terrorized the next closest village under the codename of The Wing Bandits. His family taught him over the years how to fend for himself, and how to fight, but that was more so he didn't get in their way, more then love.
When he was 8, a mysterious stranger attacked his village while he was out hunting. Ecstatic at what he had caught, he ran back to the village with a full grown boar on his back, hoping that he might get even a tiny bit of respect that he felt was deserved for him. He was greeted with a couple hurt villagers crying out in pain. Rushing to their side, he saw them back away as they spat curses at him. "YOU! Your family got us in this mess. You're a monster just like them! Go burn, go die!" He couldn't think, he just dropped the boar and ran to his house outside the village, and saw the stranger, who had a tattoo of a wave on his bare back, holding a sword of fire at Aranami's mom's throat. Without thinking, Aranami charged him, with a beastly roar, and was greeted with a flash of hot steel across his chest, all he remembered before losing consciousness was his mom's death scream. The stranger turned to the kid instantly and started to treat him.
When Aranami woke up, he saw the man... no, the murderer of his family sitting with his back towards him. Seeing a tanto close by, Aranami grabbed it and tried to rush the mysterious man. A couple seconds later, Aranami was screaming in pain as the man disarmed him, almost breaking his arm in the process. "If you want to kill me, attack while I sleep. Don't rush, because even while I sleep I listen for sounds of an attacker. If you want to kill me, learn from me, so that one day you can. I am Gokai, and if you want to kill me, prepare to suffer through hell before even obtaining a fourth of my power." Over the next three years of his life, Aranami trained with this assassin as his goal, to kill Gokai was all he could think about. He learned a variety of stuff, like hiding, using swords, escaping, and attacking an unsuspecting target, but that was about all Gokai taught. Gokai one day decided to brand Aranami with a wave tattoo on his chest to cover up the burned scar, and he asked what Aranami would want as a tattoo. Aranami looked at the clothes he had been wearing for quite awhile, always being resized, that had the wing symbol on them that he always had wondered about as a kid.
"I want... a broken wing." He explained to Gokai.
"Hmmm... the wing bandits... a broken wing... I see." Was all Gokai responded before working on the tattoo.
The years passed and he always tried to catch Gokai off guard, but true to his word, he was always aware. However, right after Aranami's eleventh birthday, something that changed his life forever happened. Gokai got murdered. The assassin who was always three steps ahead of Aranami got brutally decimated by a strange warrior with an infinity symbol.
Rushing to Gokai's side, Aranami exclaimed, "NO! You can't die. I need to kill you!" Aranami suddenly noticed he was crying. "I'm crying? The person who murdered my family is getting more tears from me then my family? I'm so messed up."
Gokai then caught his attention. "Well, seeing how you never knew how strong I really was, try to get as strong as you can, then you can duel me when we meet in hell." Those were Gokai's last words, as the warrior with an infinity symbol stuck a katana through Gokai's heart. Controlling himself, Aranami looked up at the infinity symbol on the warriors headband.
"Where did you train Sir?" Aranami respectfully asked.
"Shimagakure." was all he said before cutting off Gokai's head.
"Shimagakure, eh?" Thought Aranami as he turned and ran toward the ocean. "I will find this Shimagakure, and will train there, so I can beat that damn old assassin when we meet in hell!" He yelled towards the sky as the waves crashed on the rocks.
He finally did find a way to the island Shimagakure was on, through complete accident though, as he eventually built a raft, and traveled by himself for a year, always searching for the phantom academy. Everywhere he went either had never heard of it, or had just tall tales about it, no one believing it truly existed. He never gave up, and eventually found what he though was an honest to goodness clue, from another warrior bearing the infinity sign. After traveling quite far for himself, his journeys end was in sight.
Other:Aranami beats his chest before going into a battle, to pump himself up.

-Abilities-

Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 13
CP: 5
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 10
Charisma: 10
Endurance: 16
Agility: 14
Intelligence: 12
Strength: 10

-Skills-

Chakra Mod
Ninjutsu:
Control:

Charisma Mod
Persuade:
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:

Endurance Mod3
Focus:
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim:

Agility Mod 2
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape: 1
Sneak Attack: 2
Balance:
Hide: 1
Dance:
Spy:
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod1
Genjutsu:
Detect: 1
Sense:
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge:
Alchemy:

Strength Mod
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword: 1
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Ninjutsu

-Equipment-

Items:
Weapons:
Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Strength
Blacksmith DC: 10

Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing biggrin amage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Requirements: N/A
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10
Valuables:


Great job! There's not a single thing wrong with your profile. xd I especially like your story. You can post your profile in the scroll thread in the Shimagakure Subforum. Are you planning on introducing your character by drifting up the shoreline on the raft? If so, I can meet you with an NPC and get you introduced to the village.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:35 pm


Baylu Eras
Great job! There's not a single thing wrong with your profile. xd I especially like your story. You can post your profile in the scroll thread in the Shimagakure Subforum. Are you planning on introducing your character by drifting up the shoreline on the raft? If so, I can meet you with an NPC and get you introduced to the village.

I didn't know where to post a response, so if I shouldn't have posted it here, well, delete it then.
And that was the basic idea was gonna be Aranami drifting ashore after a while at sea. I'll go ahead and post my first RP post on the shoreline, and whenever you're ready, you can respond with a npc.

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Gaia Name: Aeroden Eternium
Character Name: Rin’Egan, Nadeshiko
Clan: Rin’Egan
Element Affinity: Earth (1st)
Age: Eleven
Sex: Female
Birthday: Autumn 4
Theme Song:
Main theme: Name of Life [by Joe Hisaishi]
Battle theme:Hikari no Yukue [by Savage Genius]
Physical Description: Nadeshiko posseses a childish appearance, and has often been called ‘doll-like’. She has the typical Rin’Egan build; small, and slim, with orange eyes. She also has a sickly-pale complexion, and weighs even less than her little body suggests. Her eyes are long-lashed, round, and large, and are a darker orange than usual, almost to the point of being light brown. Everything about her slender form is tapered and delicate; she has a pointed chin, small hands and feet, and an equally dainty mouth and nose. Her face is ovaline, and occasionally, when she has been in sunlight for a very long time, freckled along her cheeks. Her princess-cut hair is black to the point of almost being blue, and hangs past her knees. She almost always wears a quizzical or curious expression on her face. Her movements match her appearance: light and quick, blessed with the wild grace that is given to all children.
Clothing: Unless the occasion calls for lots of fighting or trudging through layers upon layers of filth, then she will generally be dressed in a full and proper kimono, complete with heavy silken layers, bright patterns, sleeves that reach the floor, stiff, thick obi, and elaborate knots. Her battle uniform consists of tied back sleeves, a shorter, jet-black kimono, worn over lightweight mesh armour, with a lighter, more flexible, lengthier obi and her hair tied up. The only ornament that she is ever seen with is a hairpin in the shape of a nadeshiko flower. When she isn’t wearing ninja boots (she wears them with her kimono too), Nadeshiko is barefooted. She keeps her tools and weapons with her at all times, tucked into various places in her kimono and obi, or in a pouch when she is wearing her battle uniform.
Personality: She tends to be rather shy around those that are unfamiliar to her or that she is uncomfortable around. Among strangers, Nadeshiko will remain reserved and for the most part silent. She is more likely to observe the crowd than to socialize with them. Her nature tends to surface around those close to her. To them, she is known as a childish but intelligent, incredibly stubborn, forgetful, passionate, honest, and painfully blunt young girl. She is a quick learner and an excellent student; it takes her very little time to pick-up something new. She is also famous for her slow ways; Nadeshiko prefers to take things one at a time, and take her time doing it, because she wouldn’t be doing it if it wasn’t worth doing, and if it’s worth doing than she should do it properly. This is also applied to her thinking; she will go through something over and over again until she can come up with a logical answer or reason, although when she finishes contemplating, rare few people can tell. Even so, she is an impatient child, and can't sit still-she's not the type to jump around and run into walls, but she has to be doing something, even if it's just twiddling her thumbs. And above all else, she desires strength and power, a result of her own lack of physical strength.
Background: Like the vast majority of the Rin'Egan clan, Nadeshiko was born and raised within a small community of nomads. She was the only child of a doting mother and a rather stricter father, but it was only after she was born that her parents personalities shifted so. Before starting a family, her mother had been the fiercest of fighters, and her father had been the well-educated and diplomatic merchant. But after losing two children during infancy, and with their last, living child being so frail, it's not much of a wonder.

Nadeshiko's parents often clashed as to how to raise her.
Nadeshiko's father trained her without mercy from day one, and her mother was loathe to let her do anything at all really. Nadeshiko grew to intensely dislike her mother's feeble attempts to preserve her life, and from this, her adamant and willful nature bloomed. She recalls how, as a child, she had always preferred to be with her father, and learn from him, even though he gave no quarter. She also remembers how, during one especially trying session, her doujutsu revealed itself.

Although her own caravan was one that covered the largest areas, and though she had an abundance of knowledge and scrolls to go through, Nadeshiko soon found this wasn't enough. Her thirst for knowledge, in general and of her newfound skills, not to mention her loathing of being in one, enclosed space (as her mother was trying to pen her into) lead her to wanting to leave her caravan. She was learning a lot yes, but not enough. They went to many places yes, but they always traveled the same trails, the same direction. And more than that, she wanted to meet others of her clan. She wanted more training. It just wasn't enough. With a bit of research, a bit of luck, and some eavesdropping, Nadeshiko found out that the other Rin'Egan with her doujutsu had left on their own. And that one of these other children had gone to Shimagakure. So she spoke to her father, wisely decided not to tell her mother, and was sent to train at Shimagakure by her father.
Other: She was taught the ways of Buddhism, but Nadeshiko is not a Buddhist. She's also claustrophobic, trained as a dancer, and is allergic to apples.

Doujutsu:

[1] Rin’Egan:
Description: The eyes of the clan member are of a somewhat orange color and are divided in a series of shaded rings that circle around the pupil. It is in these circles full of chakra that allow the use of the special ability. The clan Member’s vision is divided on these rings so that he can see what he is looking at as well as anything a Physical bushin[ made of water, earth etc…] of him or another clan member nearby is watching. This gives them a great edge on battle giving them an almost flawless defense Depending on how many other eyes he is looking through is how many ring divisions appear In the eye when activated. This in turn makes them a bit vulnerable since it’s a bit difficult to focus on other things. It is rumored this is the cause of the separation of their people
Cp cost: 20 + 5 per set of eyes
Damage: N/A
Requirements: 20 ranks of Focus per set of eyes, 10 ranks of Control per set of eyes
Stats per viewpoint:
+ lv to Detect ,Dodge, Spy
- lv to Focus, Balance, Sense
Requirements: 15 Control , 20 Focus, Physical Bushin, Target with Rin'Egan Seal
Special: + Level to Detect, Dodge and Spy. - Level to Focus, Sense and Balance.

-Abilities-

Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 10
CP: 7
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 10+4
Charisma: 10+2
Endurance: 10+0
Agility: 10+1
Intelligence: 10+5
Strength: 10+0

-Skills-

Chakra Mod 2
Ninjutsu: 2
Control: 2

Charisma Mod1
Persuade: 1
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate: 1

Endurance Mod 0
Focus:
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim: 1

Agility Mod 1
Dodge: 1
Sprint:
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance: 1
Spy:
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod 2
Genjutsu: 1
Detect:
Sense: 1
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge: 1
Alchemy:

Strength Mod 0
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu

Genjutsu

Clone Technique [Bunshin no Jutsu]
This technique creates intangible clones of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can usually be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.). You use this technique to confuse your opponent in order to attack them more easily.
Cp Cost: 2 per bunshin
Damage: None
Requirements: Must be taught.
Seals: Ram, Snake, Tiger
Special: If Clone technique is successful you may use sneak attack onto your following attack if it coincides with the technique.
Special: If opponent fails the sense/detect check and you choose to fight alongside with your clones, opponent rolls an additional "Luck" dice with their attack. This dice does not count towards their total dice roll. For them to hit you amongst all the clones, they must roll a 11 or higher. If they succeed +Luck Roll to next sense/detect roll against technique.

Ninjutsu

Body Replacement Technique [Kawamiri no Jutsu]
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique. If the technique is successful you can use sneak attack to attack your target.
CP Cost: 5
Damage: N/A
Requirement: Must be taught.
Seals: Ram
Avoid: Dodge or Ninjutsu roll.
Special: + Chakra Mod to Dodge, Sets up for Sneak attack if dodge is successful.
Roll: 1d20 + Dodge + Chakra Mod

-Equipment-

Items:

Weapons:
Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Modifier: Strength
Throwing: Damage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing : Damage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10

Valuables:
-Nadeshiko hairpin, a gift from her mother


(Hmmm......I hope I didn't do anything wrong :/ Looking back, my bio is well below adequate by my standards.)
PostPosted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:16 am


Aeroden Eternium
User Image
Gaia Name: Aeroden Eternium
Character Name: Rin’Egan, Nadeshiko
Clan: Rin’Egan
Element Affinity: Earth (1st)
Age: Eleven
Sex: Female
Birthday: Autumn 4 Year 94
Theme Song:
Main theme: Name of Life [by Joe Hisaishi]
Battle theme:Hikari no Yukue [by Savage Genius]
Physical Description: Nadeshiko possess a childish appearance, and has often been called ‘doll-like’. She has the typical Rin’Egan build; small, and slim, with orange eyes. She also has a sickly-pale complexion, and weighs even less than her little body suggests. Her eyes are long-lashed, round, and large, and are a darker orange than usual, almost to the point of being light brown. Everything about her slender form is tapered and delicate; she has a pointed chin, small hands and feet, and an equally dainty mouth and nose. Her face is ovaline, and occasionally, when she has been in sunlight for a very long time, freckled along her cheeks. Her princess-cut hair is black to the point of almost being blue, and hangs past her knees. She almost always wears a quizzical or curious expression on her face. Her movements match her appearance: light and quick, blessed with the wild grace that is given to all children.
Clothing: Unless the occasion calls for lots of fighting or trudging through layers upon layers of filth, then she will generally be dressed in a full and proper kimono, complete with heavy silken layers, bright patterns, sleeves that reach the floor, stiff, thick obi, and elaborate knots. Her battle uniform consists of tied back sleeves, a shorter, jet-black kimono, worn over lightweight mesh armour, with a lighter, more flexible, lengthier obi and her hair tied up. The only ornament that she is ever seen with is a hairpin in the shape of a nadeshiko flower. When she isn’t wearing ninja boots (she wears them with her kimono too), Nadeshiko is barefooted. She keeps her tools and weapons with her at all times, tucked into various places in her kimono and obi, or in a pouch when she is wearing her battle uniform.
Personality: She tends to be rather shy around those that are unfamiliar to her or that she is uncomfortable around. Among strangers, Nadeshiko will remain reserved and for the most part silent. She is more likely to observe the crowd than to socialize with them. Her nature tends to surface around those close to her. To them, she is known as a childish but intelligent, incredibly stubborn, forgetful, passionate, honest, and painfully blunt young girl. She is a quick learner and an excellent student; it takes her very little time to pick-up something new. She is also famous for her slow ways; Nadeshiko prefers to take things one at a time, and take her time doing it, because she wouldn’t be doing it if it wasn’t worth doing, and if it’s worth doing than she should do it properly. This is also applied to her thinking; she will go through something over and over again until she can come up with a logical answer or reason, although when she finishes contemplating, rare few people can tell. Even so, she is an impatient child, and can't sit still-she's not the type to jump around and run into walls, but she has to be doing something, even if it's just twiddling her thumbs. And above all else, she desires strength and power, a result of her own lack of physical strength.
Background: Like the vast majority of the Rin'Egan clan, Nadeshiko was born and raised within a small community of nomads. She was the only child of a doting mother and a rather stricter father, but it was only after she was born that her parents personalities shifted so. Before starting a family, her mother had been the fiercest of fighters, and her father had been the well-educated and diplomatic merchant. But after losing two children during infancy, and with their last, living child being so frail, it's not much of a wonder.

Nadeshiko's parents often clashed as to how to raise her.
Nadeshiko's father trained her without mercy from day one, and her mother was loathe to let her do anything at all really. Nadeshiko grew to intensely dislike her mother's feeble attempts to preserve her life, and from this, her adamant and willful nature bloomed. She recalls how, as a child, she had always preferred to be with her father, and learn from him, even though he gave no quarter. She also remembers how, during one especially trying session, her doujutsu revealed itself.

Although her own caravan was one that covered the largest areas, and though she had an abundance of knowledge and scrolls to go through, Nadeshiko soon found this wasn't enough. Her thirst for knowledge, in general and of her newfound skills, not to mention her loathing of being in one, enclosed space (as her mother was trying to pen her into) lead her to wanting to leave her caravan. She was learning a lot yes, but not enough. They went to many places yes, but they always traveled the same trails, the same direction. And more than that, she wanted to meet others of her clan. She wanted more training. It just wasn't enough. With a bit of research, a bit of luck, and some eavesdropping, Nadeshiko found out that the other Rin'Egan with her doujutsu had left on their own. And that one of these other children had gone to Shimagakure. So she spoke to her father, wisely decided not to tell her mother, and was sent to train at Shimagakure by her father.
Other: She was taught the ways of Buddhism, but Nadeshiko is not a Buddhist. She's also claustrophobic, trained as a dancer, and is allergic to apples.

Doujutsu:

[1] Rin’Egan:
Description: The eyes of the clan member are of a somewhat orange color and are divided in a series of shaded rings that circle around the pupil. It is in these circles full of chakra that allow the use of the special ability. The clan Member’s vision is divided on these rings so that he can see what he is looking at as well as anything a Physical bushin[ made of water, earth etc…] of him or another clan member nearby is watching. This gives them a great edge on battle giving them an almost flawless defense Depending on how many other eyes he is looking through is how many ring divisions appear In the eye when activated. This in turn makes them a bit vulnerable since it’s a bit difficult to focus on other things. It is rumored this is the cause of the separation of their people
Cp cost: 20 + 5 per set of eyes
Damage: N/A
Requirements: 20 ranks of Focus per set of eyes, 10 ranks of Control per set of eyes
Stats per viewpoint:
+ lv to Detect ,Dodge, Spy
- lv to Focus, Balance, Sense
Requirements: 15 Control , 20 Focus, Physical Bushin, Target with Rin'Egan Seal
Special: + Level to Detect, Dodge and Spy. - Level to Focus, Sense and Balance.

-Abilities-

Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 10
CP: 7
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 14
Charisma: 12
Endurance: 10
Agility: 11
Intelligence: 15
Strength: 10

-Skills-

Chakra Mod 2
Ninjutsu: 2
Control: 2

Charisma Mod1
Persuade: 1
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate: 1

Endurance Mod 0
Focus:
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim: 1

Agility Mod 1
Dodge: 1
Sprint:
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance: 1
Spy:
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod 2
Genjutsu: 1
Detect:
Sense: 1
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge: 1
Alchemy:

Strength Mod 0
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu

Genjutsu

Ninjutsu


-Equipment-

Items:

Weapons:
Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Modifier: Strength
Throwing: Damage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing : Damage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10

Valuables:
-Nadeshiko hairpin, a gift from her mother


(Hmmm......I hope I didn't do anything wrong :/ Looking back, my bio is well below adequate by my standards.)


Your bio and descriptions are very good! I added in the year your character was born and I made a few spelling correction. The only thing that's wrong with your profile is the techniques and skill points. You may distribute only 6 skill points and you begin with no techniques. Please make that edit and post back. Also, speak with your clan leader to discuss your character's entrance to the roleplay.

OpalHime


Aeroden Eternium

Diamond Duck

13,350 Points
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  • Grunny Grabber 50
  • Hygienic 200
PostPosted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:37 pm


User Image
Gaia Name: Aeroden Eternium
Character Name: Rin’Egan, Nadeshiko
Clan: Rin’Egan
Element Affinity: Earth (1st)
Age: Eleven
Sex: Female
Birthday: Autumn 4 Year 94
Theme Song:
Main theme: Name of Life [by Joe Hisaishi]
Battle theme:Hikari no Yukue [by Savage Genius]
Physical Description: Nadeshiko possess a childish appearance, and has often been called ‘doll-like’. She has the typical Rin’Egan build; small, and slim, with orange eyes. She also has a sickly-pale (almost translucent) complexion, and weighs even less than her little body suggests. Her eyes are long-lashed, round, and large, and are a darker orange than usual, almost to the point of being light brown. Everything about her slender form is tapered and delicate; she has a pointed chin, small hands and feet, and an equally dainty mouth and nose. Her face is ovaline, and occasionally, when she has been in sunlight for a very long time, freckled along her cheeks. Her princess-cut hair is black to the point of almost being blue, and hangs past her knees. She almost always wears a quizzical or curious expression on her face. Her movements match her appearance: light and quick, blessed with the wild grace that is given to all children.
Clothing: Unless the occasion calls for lots of fighting or trudging through layers upon layers of filth, then she will generally be dressed in a full and proper kimono, complete with heavy silken layers, bright patterns, sleeves that reach the floor, stiff, thick obi, and elaborate knots. Her battle uniform consists of tied back sleeves, a shorter, jet-black kimono, worn over lightweight mesh armour, with a lighter, more flexible, lengthier obi and her hair tied up. The only ornament that she is ever seen with is a hairpin in the shape of a nadeshiko flower. When she isn’t wearing ninja boots (she wears them with her kimono too), Nadeshiko is barefooted. She keeps her tools and weapons with her at all times, tucked into various places in her kimono and obi, or in a pouch when she is wearing her battle uniform.
Personality: She tends to be rather shy around those that are unfamiliar to her or that she is uncomfortable around. Among strangers, Nadeshiko will remain reserved and for the most part silent. She is more likely to observe the crowd than to socialize with them. Her nature tends to surface around those close to her. To them, she is known as a childish but intelligent, incredibly stubborn, forgetful, passionate, honest, and painfully blunt young girl. She is a quick learner and an excellent student; it takes her very little time to pick-up something new. She is also famous for her slow ways; Nadeshiko prefers to take things one at a time, and take her time doing it, because she wouldn’t be doing it if it wasn’t worth doing, and if it’s worth doing than she should do it properly. This is also applied to her thinking; she will go through something over and over again until she can come up with a logical answer or reason, although when she finishes contemplating, rare few people can tell. Even so, she is an impatient child, and can't sit still-she's not the type to jump around and run into walls, but she has to be doing something, even if it's just twiddling her thumbs. And above all else, she desires strength and power, a result of her own lack of physical strength.
Background: Like the vast majority of the Rin'Egan clan, Nadeshiko was born and raised within a small community of nomads. She was the only child of a doting mother and a rather stricter father, but it was only after she was born that her parents personalities shifted so. Before starting a family, her mother had been the fiercest of fighters, and her father had been the well-educated and diplomatic merchant. But after losing two children during infancy, and with their last, living child being so frail, it's not much of a wonder.

Nadeshiko's parents often clashed as to how to raise her.

Nadeshiko's father trained her without mercy from day one, and her mother was loathe to let her do anything at all really. Nadeshiko grew to intensely dislike her mother's feeble attempts to preserve her life, and from this, her adamant and willful nature bloomed. She recalls how, as a child, she had always preferred to be with her father, and learn from him, even though he gave no quarter. She also remembers how, during one especially trying session, her doujutsu revealed itself.

Although her own caravan was one that covered the largest areas, and though she had an abundance of knowledge and scrolls to go through, Nadeshiko soon found this wasn't enough. Her thirst for knowledge, in general and of her newfound skills, not to mention her loathing of being in one, enclosed space (as her mother was trying to pen her into) lead her to wanting to leave her caravan. She was learning a lot yes, but not enough. They went to many places yes, but they always traveled the same trails, the same direction. And more than that, she wanted to meet others of her clan. She wanted more training. It just wasn't enough. With a bit of research, a bit of luck, and some eavesdropping, Nadeshiko found out that the other Rin'Egan with her doujutsu had left on their own. And that one of these other children had gone to Shimagakure. So she spoke to her father, wisely decided not to tell her mother, and was sent to train at Shimagakure by her father.
Other: She was taught the ways of Buddhism, but Nadeshiko is not a Buddhist. She's also claustrophobic, trained as a dancer, and is allergic to apples.


-Abilities-

Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 10
CP: 7
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 14
Charisma: 12
Endurance: 10
Agility: 11
Intelligence: 15
Strength: 10

-Skills-

Chakra Mod 2
Ninjutsu: 1
Control: 1

Charisma Mod1
Persuade: 1
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:

Endurance Mod 0
Focus:
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim: 1

Agility Mod 1
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance: 1
Spy:
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod 2
Genjutsu:
Detect:
Sense: 1
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge: 1
Alchemy:

Strength Mod 0
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu

Genjutsu

Ninjutsu


-Equipment-

Items:

Weapons:
Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Modifier: Strength
Throwing: Damage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing : Damage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10

Valuables:
-Nadeshiko hairpin, a gift from her mother

Fixed. I think. And I've contacted him.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:47 am


Aeroden Eternium
User Image
Gaia Name: Aeroden Eternium
Character Name: Rin’Egan, Nadeshiko
Clan: Rin’Egan
Element Affinity: Earth (1st)
Age: Eleven
Sex: Female
Birthday: Autumn 4 Year 94
Theme Song:
Main theme: Name of Life [by Joe Hisaishi]
Battle theme:Hikari no Yukue [by Savage Genius]
Physical Description: Nadeshiko possess a childish appearance, and has often been called ‘doll-like’. She has the typical Rin’Egan build; small, and slim, with orange eyes. She also has a sickly-pale (almost translucent) complexion, and weighs even less than her little body suggests. Her eyes are long-lashed, round, and large, and are a darker orange than usual, almost to the point of being light brown. Everything about her slender form is tapered and delicate; she has a pointed chin, small hands and feet, and an equally dainty mouth and nose. Her face is ovaline, and occasionally, when she has been in sunlight for a very long time, freckled along her cheeks. Her princess-cut hair is black to the point of almost being blue, and hangs past her knees. She almost always wears a quizzical or curious expression on her face. Her movements match her appearance: light and quick, blessed with the wild grace that is given to all children.
Clothing: Unless the occasion calls for lots of fighting or trudging through layers upon layers of filth, then she will generally be dressed in a full and proper kimono, complete with heavy silken layers, bright patterns, sleeves that reach the floor, stiff, thick obi, and elaborate knots. Her battle uniform consists of tied back sleeves, a shorter, jet-black kimono, worn over lightweight mesh armour, with a lighter, more flexible, lengthier obi and her hair tied up. The only ornament that she is ever seen with is a hairpin in the shape of a nadeshiko flower. When she isn’t wearing ninja boots (she wears them with her kimono too), Nadeshiko is barefooted. She keeps her tools and weapons with her at all times, tucked into various places in her kimono and obi, or in a pouch when she is wearing her battle uniform.
Personality: She tends to be rather shy around those that are unfamiliar to her or that she is uncomfortable around. Among strangers, Nadeshiko will remain reserved and for the most part silent. She is more likely to observe the crowd than to socialize with them. Her nature tends to surface around those close to her. To them, she is known as a childish but intelligent, incredibly stubborn, forgetful, passionate, honest, and painfully blunt young girl. She is a quick learner and an excellent student; it takes her very little time to pick-up something new. She is also famous for her slow ways; Nadeshiko prefers to take things one at a time, and take her time doing it, because she wouldn’t be doing it if it wasn’t worth doing, and if it’s worth doing than she should do it properly. This is also applied to her thinking; she will go through something over and over again until she can come up with a logical answer or reason, although when she finishes contemplating, rare few people can tell. Even so, she is an impatient child, and can't sit still-she's not the type to jump around and run into walls, but she has to be doing something, even if it's just twiddling her thumbs. And above all else, she desires strength and power, a result of her own lack of physical strength.
Background: Like the vast majority of the Rin'Egan clan, Nadeshiko was born and raised within a small community of nomads. She was the only child of a doting mother and a rather stricter father, but it was only after she was born that her parents personalities shifted so. Before starting a family, her mother had been the fiercest of fighters, and her father had been the well-educated and diplomatic merchant. But after losing two children during infancy, and with their last, living child being so frail, it's not much of a wonder.

Nadeshiko's parents often clashed as to how to raise her.

Nadeshiko's father trained her without mercy from day one, and her mother was loathe to let her do anything at all really. Nadeshiko grew to intensely dislike her mother's feeble attempts to preserve her life, and from this, her adamant and willful nature bloomed. She recalls how, as a child, she had always preferred to be with her father, and learn from him, even though he gave no quarter. She also remembers how, during one especially trying session, her doujutsu revealed itself.

Although her own caravan was one that covered the largest areas, and though she had an abundance of knowledge and scrolls to go through, Nadeshiko soon found this wasn't enough. Her thirst for knowledge, in general and of her newfound skills, not to mention her loathing of being in one, enclosed space (as her mother was trying to pen her into) lead her to wanting to leave her caravan. She was learning a lot yes, but not enough. They went to many places yes, but they always traveled the same trails, the same direction. And more than that, she wanted to meet others of her clan. She wanted more training. It just wasn't enough. With a bit of research, a bit of luck, and some eavesdropping, Nadeshiko found out that the other Rin'Egan with her doujutsu had left on their own. And that one of these other children had gone to Shimagakure. So she spoke to her father, wisely decided not to tell her mother, and was sent to train at Shimagakure by her father.
Other: She was taught the ways of Buddhism, but Nadeshiko is not a Buddhist. She's also claustrophobic, trained as a dancer, and is allergic to apples.


-Abilities-

In game Stats:
+1 to Ninjutsu per 2 lvls
+1 to Control per 5 lvls
-1 to Taijutsu per 5 lvls
-Level to Genjutsu
-1 to Endurance per 5 lvls
-1 to Agility per 5 lvls

Rank: Academy Student
LV: 1
HP: 10
CP: 7
XP: 0/50

Chakra: 14
Charisma: 12
Endurance: 10
Agility: 11
Intelligence: 15
Strength: 10

-Skills-

Chakra Mod 2
Ninjutsu: 1
Control: 1

Charisma Mod1
Persuade: 1
Lie:
Seduce:
Handle Animal:
Sing:
Disguise:
Intimidate:

Endurance Mod 0
Focus:
Blacksmith:
Fortitude:
Rope:
Swim: 1

Agility Mod 1
Dodge:
Sprint:
Escape:
Sneak Attack:
Balance:
Hide:
Dance: 1
Spy:
Tumble:

Intelligence Mod 2
Genjutsu: -1
Detect:
Sense: 1
Fuuin:
Trap:
Knowledge: 1
Alchemy:

Strength Mod 0
Taijutsu:
Grapple:

Weapons
Sword:
Staff:
Melee:
Ninja:
Throwing:
Range:
Heavy:

-Techniques-
Taijutsu

Genjutsu

Ninjutsu


-Equipment-

Items:

Weapons:
Kunai (1)
Melee: Damage: 5 to 9 + Str Mod + Melee Bonus
Modifier: Strength
Throwing: Damage: 4 to 8 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Endurance
Blacksmith DC: 10

Shuriken (5)
Throwing : Damage: 4 to 9 + Str Mod + Throwing Bonus
Modifier: Agility
Blacksmith DC: 10

Valuables:
-Nadeshiko hairpin, a gift from her mother


Sweet~ Don't forget your clan bonuses:

In game Stats:
+1 to Ninjutsu per 2 lvls
+1 to Control per 5 lvls
-1 to Taijutsu per 5 lvls
-Level to Genjutsu
-1 to Endurance per 5 lvls
-1 to Agility per 5 lvls
NOTE: Clan bonuses are either underlined or bolded and kept separate from other points.

Only the negative to genjutsu counts now, but eventually the others will and they'll be edited in along the way. you're good to go. just contact a crew member on how you'd like to introduce your character.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:21 pm


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Pet Name: Seppen
Owner Name: Rin’Egan Nadeshiko
Clan: Rin’Egan
Element Affinity: Ice
Age: Approximately four-five months old.
Sex: Male
Breed: Snow Leopard
Birthday: Unknown
Them Song: You've Got a Friend in Me
Physical Description: He’s a very fuzzy little snow leopard kitten. Since he’s only a few months old, and a bit of a runt, he’s smaller than most housecats at this point. He has some very pointy ears and little fangs, and somewhat oversized paws that make him a little clumsy. His thick fluffy pelt is snow-white with some black markings, and he has mismatched eyes; one is blue, the other is green. His tail is as fluffy as a squirrel's.
Personality: He’s like a little kid; which he technically is, because he is the equivalent of a five-year-old in human years. He likes to stick his little black nose into everything, and is always testing out his abilities, sometimes in some very dangerous situations. Seppen also happens to be a very playful kitten, and is always rolling and tumbling and clawing the stuffing out of people’s cushions, which can be irritating, but many find it easy to forgive him. The little snow leopard is ironically very good at making puppy-dog eyes, though he does this unconsciously (that kind of face only appears on him when he’s very scared of something). Seppen is also quite a scaredy cat, despite his adventurous nature; up against a larger and potentially more dangerous animal (like his owner), he is little more than useless. Nonetheless, he can also be a sneaky little ball of fur.
Background: He was born in a litter of two, in the snowy mountaintops on the mainland. Nadeshiko’s Rin’Egan caravan was passing through, and one of the young warriors hunted down the kittens’ mother. He took all three snow leopards back to camp, soon after which one of the kittens died. Nadeshiko did not like unnecessary deaths of the family of cats (well, she didn’t like unnecessary death at all, but that’s beside the point right now), and, in her spiteful mood, while the warrior was asleep from drinking too much, pulled a meat-flavoured sack over him and tied him to the nearest tree. He was camping out a little ways from the main caravan, so no one noticed the loss of his presence.The remaining leopard saw all this, and, having nothing else to do, followed Nadeshiko back to camp. Her family looked at the poor kitten, and knew it couldn’t survive on its own. So Nadeshiko took care of the kitten, which she named Seppen, and Seppen decided that he would like to follow her wherever she went. Including to Shimagakure (he’d snuck onto the boat).
Other: The only human he allows to touch him is Nadeshiko.

-Abilities-

LV: 1
HP: 10/10
CP: 6/6
XP: 0/50
Chakra: 12
Charisma: 14
Endurance: 10
Agility: 14
Intelligence: 12
Strength: 10

Skills:

Chakra Mod 1
Control: 1
Trick: 0

Charisma Mod 2
Befriend: 2
Intimidate: 0

Endurance Mod 0
Focus: 0
Fortitude: 0
Swim: 1
Dig: 0

Agility Mod 2
Dodge: 0
Sprint: 1
Escape: 1
Sneak Attack: 1
Balance: 0
Hide: 0
Spy: 0
Tumble: 0

Intelligence Mod 1
Coordination: 1
Detect: 0
Sense: 0
Smell: 1

Strength Mod 0
Fight: 0
Grapple: 0
Climb: 1

Damage: 1 - 5 + Strength Mod

Tricks:

PostPosted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 12:41 pm


Aeroden Eternium
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Pet Name: Seppen
Owner Name: Rin’Egan Nadeshiko
Clan: Rin’Egan
Element Affinity: Ice
Age: Approximately four-five months old.
Sex: Male
Breed: Snow Leopard
Birthday: Unknown
Them Song: You've Got a Friend in Me
Physical Description: He’s a very fuzzy little snow leopard kitten. Since he’s only a few months old, and a bit of a runt, he’s smaller than most housecats at this point. He has some very pointy ears and little fangs, and somewhat oversized paws that make him a little clumsy. His thick fluffy pelt is snow-white with some black markings, and he has mismatched eyes; one is blue, the other is green. His tail is as fluffy as a squirrel's.
Personality: He’s like a little kid; which he technically is, because he is the equivalent of a five-year-old in human years. He likes to stick his little black nose into everything, and is always testing out his abilities, sometimes in some very dangerous situations. Seppen also happens to be a very playful kitten, and is always rolling and tumbling and clawing the stuffing out of people’s cushions, which can be irritating, but many find it easy to forgive him. The little snow leopard is ironically very good at making puppy-dog eyes, though he does this unconsciously (that kind of face only appears on him when he’s very scared of something). Seppen is also quite a scaredy cat, despite his adventurous nature; up against a larger and potentially more dangerous animal (like his owner), he is little more than useless. Nonetheless, he can also be a sneaky little ball of fur.
Background: He was born in a litter of two, in the snowy mountaintops on the mainland. Nadeshiko’s Rin’Egan caravan was passing through, and one of the young warriors hunted down the kittens’ mother. He took all three snow leopards back to camp, soon after which one of the kittens died. Nadeshiko did not like unnecessary deaths of the family of cats (well, she didn’t like unnecessary death at all, but that’s beside the point right now), and, in her spiteful mood, while the warrior was asleep from drinking too much, pulled a meat-flavored sack over him and tied him to the nearest tree. He was camping out a little ways from the main caravan, so no one noticed the loss of his presence. The remaining leopard saw all this, and, having nothing else to do, followed Nadeshiko back to camp. Her family looked at the poor kitten, and knew it couldn’t survive on its own. So Nadeshiko took care of the kitten, which she named Seppen, and Seppen decided that he would like to follow her wherever she went. Including to Shimagakure (he’d snuck onto the boat).
Other: The only human he allows to touch him is Nadeshiko.

-Abilities-

LV: 1
HP: 10/10
CP: 6/6
XP: 0/50
Chakra: 12
Charisma: 14
Endurance: 10
Agility: 14
Intelligence: 12
Strength: 10

Skills:

Chakra Mod 1
Control: 1
Trick: 0

Charisma Mod 2
Befriend: 2
Intimidate: 0

Endurance Mod 0
Focus: 0
Fortitude: 0
Swim: 1
Dig: 0

Agility Mod 2
Dodge: 0
Sprint: 1
Escape: 1
Sneak Attack: 1
Balance: 0
Hide: 0
Spy: 0
Tumble: 0

Intelligence Mod 1
Coordination: 1
Detect: 0
Sense: 0
Smell: 1

Strength Mod 0
Fight: 0
Grapple: 0
Climb: 1

Damage: 1 - 5 + Strength Mod

Tricks:



Fantastic, just like Nadeshiko's profile. Aside from one spelling error everything is good to go. Just post Seppen’s profile (use this copy) under yours in the profile scroll. Also check out the pet system every now and then as it will be going through some changes soon.

Katz the Nine Lives
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Kioshi Ninja

PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 5:21 pm


Gaia Name: Kioshi_Ninja
Character Name: Toshiro Kioshi
Clan: Undecided
Element Affinity: Fire
Age: 14
Sex: Male
Birthday: Summer 3, 91
Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KfJALYa_ZZc
Physical Description: Kioshi is of a medium build, not to big, yet not to small either. Through years of self-training he has gained a perfect size for both speed and power. He is about 5'6", with a light tan and b***h black hair, cut to a short enough length to spike, but not too long. His eyes are a deep red with clack shading near the edges, wish isn't uncommon to his family, but is a sight to others around him. Nothing all to special to look at, be it fits his purposes, so he is pleased with how he looks.
Clothing: Kioshi loves to wear a blood red scarf, that may seem like it's a tad too long as it hits the ground when he stands still, but he refuses to cut it as it was given to his father before he left to defend his small village from raiders. He wears a simple black tunic with no sleeves, as this allows his arms the best mobility and is tight fit around the est of his body, as it doesn't snag when fighting or training. He wears fingerless gloves given to him but his mother, they are nothing special, but he still holds them dear.
Personality: Kioshi likes to do things on his own, to prove he can do anything on his own, so he wont be a burden to others. He loves the company of close friends, and dreams of falling in love, but it's not his main focus. With a strict diet and training regiment every morning, he's always the first one up and about in the village. After his daily training he loves to sit around in the most random spots in his village, and just observe the people he see's, so as to try and understand more about himself.
Background: Kioshi always wanted to be the best shinobi he could be, just like his father. But being the only child in his family, he couldn't just leave his mother to fend for herself while his father was off fighting. One day after and intense day of training with some friends, Kioshi decided to take his family boat and take a nap on the water in the sun, but he didn't realize the current swept him away from his village. A day or two later, Kioshi found himself beached on a new island, unaware of where he was. Upon talking to passers by, he found he was on the island of Shimakure, but more importantly that they had a shinobi academy. After hearing this he thanked the kind travelers and headed straight for the academy, in hopes they could make him stronger/
Other: Kioshi means "quiet" or "silent". His parents found this fitting as he didn't cry after birth, and was never one to really speak his mind.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 5:59 pm


Kioshi Ninja
Gaia Name: Kioshi_Ninja
Character Name: Toshiro Kioshi
Clan: Undecided
Element Affinity: Fire
Age: 14
Sex: Male
Birthday: Summer 3, 91
Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KfJALYa_ZZc
Physical Description: Kioshi is of a medium build, not to big, yet not to small either. Through years of self-training he has gained a perfect size for both speed and power. He is about 5'6", with a light tan and b***h black hair, cut to a short enough length to spike, but not too long (what not too long? the spikes?). His eyes are a deep red with clack shading near the edges, wish isn't uncommon to his family, but is a sight to others around him. Nothing all to special to look at, be it fits his purposes, so he is pleased with how he looks.(Can we reword this?)
Clothing: Kioshi loves to wear a blood red scarf, that may seem like it's a tad too long as it hits the ground when he stands still, but he refuses to cut it as it was given to his father before he left to defend his small village from raiders. He wears a simple black tunic with no sleeves, as this allows his arms the best mobility and is tight fit around the est of his body, as it doesn't snag when fighting or training. He wears fingerless gloves given to him but his mother, they are nothing special, but he still holds them dear.
Personality: Kioshi likes to do things on his own, to prove he can do anything on his own, so he wont be a burden to others. He loves the company of close friends, and dreams of falling in love, but it's not his main focus. With a strict diet and training regiment every morning, he's always the first one up and about in the village. After his daily training he loves to sit around in the most random spots in his village, and just observe the people he see's, so as to try and understand more about himself.
Background: Kioshi always wanted to be the best shinobi he could be, just like his father. But being the only child in his family, he couldn't just leave his mother to fend for herself while his father was off fighting. One day after and intense day of training with some friends, Kioshi decided to take his family boat and take a nap on the water in the sun, but he didn't realize the current swept him away from his village. A day or two later, Kioshi found himself beached on a new island, unaware of where he was. Upon talking to passers by, he found he was on the island of Shimakure, but more importantly that they had a shinobi academy. After hearing this he thanked the kind travelers and headed straight for the academy, in hopes they could make him stronger/
Other: Kioshi means "quiet" or "silent". His parents found this fitting as he didn't cry after birth, and was never one to really speak his mind.



Overall, discriptions are well done with a few spelling errors (things I bolded in your profile).

Only thing about your background is that Shima is really the only place with actual Shinobi... think about maybe changing shinobi of your old village to gaurds? Or simpler yet, maybe protectors?

Make those changes and then post back here for another check smile

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