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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:20 pm


Very simple. I was always thinking about how to incorporate that skirt in an avvy and I like it. Just very simple and elegant at the same time.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:18 pm


I really like it, but the hammer blots out the rest of the outfit.
Love the eyes though, they bring everything together.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:01 pm


I like the colors you chose. I would suggest a little more elaboration but overall it's very cute 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:48 pm


I do like this, but I'd suggest bringing that white/silvery color down to the bottom.
It just seems like it's just hanging there for no reason [ other than to be a tree, but still ]. It'd balance out nicer.
You could also find a similar colored background / tree / companion and remove the silver / white tree all together and put that in instead maybe.
Tthough I think the two are nice together and you just need to drag the lighter color down towards the feet. . . [ on the opposite side of where the tree is. ]

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:27 pm


Lol thanks. I was actually making the avvie for an avvie contest thing I guess you caught me in my act... theme was silver and brown xp kinda threw it together quickly. But yeah this is my normal avvie which is more random. Momo = in all my avvies since I bought him as a newbie rofl
PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:21 am


I like it a lot. Just one thing. That green orb... what item is it from? I assumed it was the Sibyl's Incantation, but I can't find that pose... maybe I'm just overlooking it...

EDIT: Found it, I was in fact overlooking it sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 7:39 am


At a certian point more stuff just makes you look over done. There is alot going on in your avatar. Prehaps it is too much?
PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:45 pm


Needs a cigarette.
But eh, I like it but I don't, how the clothes are shaded is funny, it bugs me.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:34 pm


You need to have clothes on your lower half, looks awkward without any 'pants'. Know you might have panties on, but that is not clothes and it still looks awkward. Including with the long coat. The ice skate shoes look out of place too on the avatar.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:35 pm


@Roland I think it's neat they made the staff transform into an orb for that arm position. It's like the reason I bought the item xd

@Saverio I get what you're saying. However, the birds, the pond, and the flowers are part of the background and I like the vibrant colors that they bring. For the avvie base I have The dress, hat, bag, tattoo, which while is a lot are similar in a dark color. I took out the mouse.. I forgot why I put that little guy there, always thought he was adorable, even while farting rofl


For Koneko, I like your avvie, especially the way you integrated silver and gold throughout. The mythical theme is also well thought out. A suggestion for other designs (and this is just because I like to do this) is to play with other colors. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:05 pm


it doesn't blend very well. The pink hair-dress-background all seem separate. Maybe try to stick to more of a theme?
PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:09 pm


it's alright. It's not an avi that I particularly like, but I see nothing to complain about. It's just personal taste, I guess.

EDIT: For whoever comments on mine, I'm currently doing a cosplay of Sora from the videogame series Kingdom Hearts.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:30 am


Ah, the ol' Kingdom Hearts I Sora cosplay. Not a bad one, no. If only Gaia had more options with all the belts and useless chains and s**t Sora has hanging off of him during the game... Oh well, nice job. Timeless. You should see if you can work to add something to it, though.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:50 am


I really think you should try and get ahead with avatar design, but that's not quite what I meant.

It looks interesting, but the smoke kinda messes with the butterflies.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:29 pm


your avi is noob-ish, but i didn't even notice until i looked to see what items you used. I think it's really good! 3nodding
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