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 Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 3:56 pm
Komen reached the top of the mountain and fell over to his back gasping for air. "I..I..I did it..." Komen said with a smile as he started to close his eyes. His muscles were strained to the point of breaking and he was so sore he couldn't move. "I...I wonder if the Ho..Kage saw me." Komen said as he closed his eyes and started to breath the thin air trying to get oxygen for his tired Body. "S..So...tired..."
THe third Hokage body flickered right next to Komen and brought him back to the bottom of the mountain. "Breathe Komen. Breathe."
11/13 Earth Style Wall.
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 8:36 pm
Komen caughed as his lungs started to fill with the thicker more abundant air. He slowly opened his eyes as everything was very blurry. "huh??" Komen kept still as he looked around with his blurry vision. "A..am I dead..again?" Komen asked as his vision started to focus again.
The third smiled as he saw Komen Coming back to reality. "Nope Komen but you were close." e said with a nod.
Komen heard the voice as he looked up. "T..Third Hokage?" Komen asked as his vision finally cme back.
"Yup Komen it's me. You did an amazing job." He said as he saw the spirit atmosphere start to enter Komens body as it was rejuvenating his body and mind.
12/13 Earth Style Wall
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 9:37 pm
Komen started to feel rejuvinated as he finally had enough strength to sit up. "Argh...man that was a rough time." He said as he scratched his head.
"Yes but all that training did wonders for your endurance Komen." The third said as he saw that he still had his two buckets of rocks in his hands. "And I see you kept holding on to those rocks Komen."
Komen looked at the two buckets. "Yeah Sensei. I wasn't going to let these go for my life. Even though they were heavy as hell in the end."
THe Third Hokage dropped a scroll into Komen's hands. "Here Komen Here is a scroll for another technique. This is your reward for finishing your goal."
13/13 Earth Style Wall. (Complete)
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 1:07 am
As Ace appeared in the afterlife after a violently battle he decied to get some training done sense he had not been here in a while"well time to go look for the 3 hokage there is one jutsu in paticular i want to learn"ace said as he went around the after life he had noticed his curse seal was gone"yesss yea its gone......but somehow i feel naked now.....i kinda want it back"ace said as he felt on his neck but he could live without it"well maybe i will see someone i know here"ace said as he went looking for the hokage
jutsu shou1/20
Ace was looking for a long time as he seen orochimaru"hey boy......i gave you the curse seal where is it"orochimaru asked as ace pulled a kunai out and got into a battle stance"well i am not here to harm you just come here boy!"orochimaru demanded as he felt aces nack and pushed him back"begone now kid i have no other buisness with you"orochimaru said as he walked away in the afterlife he has met ace in the exams when seki summoned him
jutsu shou2/20
As ace continue to look around he sen lots of fighter training for an upcoming after life tornament so he got ready as he wanted to train as he saw the hokage training 4 people"he zero what brings you back here"the hokage said"how do you know i am Zero....by the way i go by ace now"ace said as the hokage responded"yes but here you see your spirirted and i see Nara Zero....i see youve become and uchiha i thought you hated them"the hokage asked"well i kinda do"ace said as he looked at the others training
3/20
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:14 am
As Sage would awake following the fight that she had with Gana she would let out an ear shattering scream for the first three seconds. Sage would then look around and see that she had once agian been forced to return to the afterlife. Sage would then start to look around as she remained there on the ground to see if she had managed to bring along a friend, but was not seeing him anywhere. Sage would then lower her head and start to shake it from side to side and mutter, "This is far from over." Sage would then force herself to her feet and then begin to walk around the spot where she awoke for the next few minutes. Great Breakthrough: Post 1 of 9
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:40 pm
Komen was starting to get to his feet as he left the two buckets of rocks and the big stick on the ground. "Great so that means I can stop carrying that thing around right?" Komen asked as he hoped that the Third Hokage didn't have another plan to use that heavy thing.
THe third nodded his head. "Yes. You are correct komen, You no longer need that strengthening tool." With a snap of the thirds fingers, the bucket and big supporting stick vanished into a puff of smoke. Komen found that strange that that was possible but he didn't really mind, due to the fact that he was well...dead.
1/20 Jutsu Shou
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:45 pm
Komen dusted his pants as he stretched out. The spirit aura that was abundant in the afterlife made him feel like a whole new Komen. "Man...I'm feeling great now." Komen said a she continued to stretch his legs then his arms. The muscles that were once strained to breaking had absorbed enough spirit aura to heal 100%.
The third smiled as he was glad to hear that. "Good good Komen. Are you ready for the last phase of your training with me?" The third asked with a laugh in his tone.
Komen smiled and looked at the third. "Yeah of course Sensei. What is it?" Komen asked as he stopped stretching and faced the third.
2/20 Jutsu Shou.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:29 pm
"Well it's something that goes like thIS..." The third Hokage said as he was now dressed in his black battle outfit, complete with a full metal helmet. Komen's eyes widened as he saw that and knew in his mind what the Hokage, his sensei, was planning to do for the last test.
"The last test Komen is to fight me with everything you have." The third said as he folded his arms across his chest and waited for komen to get ready. Komen put his arms up and got into a relaxed fighting stance as he knew that this was going to be a huge uphill battle.
3/20 Jutsu Shou
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:57 pm
"Ok here I come." The Third Hokage said as he went barreling straight for Komen. The Third Hokage threw a set of Shurikens at komen.
The shurikens came at Komen at a high speed, barely giving him a chance to react. Komen place his hands together and sat in a horse stance
"CHAKRA SUPAIKU YOROI!!"
Komen said as his voice echoed. His whole entire body pushed out chakra spikes all at once and deflected the shurikens. his spikes were like pneumatic rams and created an outward force to deflect the shurikens.
4/20 Jutsu Shou.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:12 pm
Ace was gonn train and enter the tornment"so what do i have to do to enter"ace said as he scrathced his head"well thats simple sense you dead just enter.....i like to see you here for the whole thing i heard orochimaru was gonna enter"the 3rd hokage said"ok i am gonna do it and beat orochimaru"ace said as he he was feeling n the muclse on his arm"i am ready for anything and i am gonna take that orochimaru down....town"ace said as he would begain training for the tornament
4/20
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:22 pm
The third Hokage came barreling at Komen but this time throwing punches and kick combinations at Komen. Komen was amazed at the taijutsu Level of the Third. I guess they don't call you Hokage for nothing. komen said in his mind as he was blocking with all he had. The combinations madeit impossible for Komen to form any seals so he could deliver his favorite technique, the "Chakra spike armor." Komen jumped back to get some distance and dived right back into the Third. "KONOHA SENPUU!" He said as he delivered a rotating kick against the hokage.
5/20 Jutsu Shou.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:22 pm
Ace and the kage was training as ace looked at the kage as the age pulled shuikans out"shurikan shadow clones'the kage said as all the shurikans turn to clones and dashed at ace with full speed as ace sent a kick to one of them the other came from behind and grabbed ace"now the rest grabed zero and take him down"the kage said with a laugh as the clones had ace"wow your preatty good"ace said as he grabbed a kunai and stuck the clones behind him then sent a backward flying kick to the other clones
5/20
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:31 pm
As the kage walked back a bit ace ran past the clones and jumped and sent a kick to his face as the kage easily dodge by ducking"man come on i thought you were better ace or should i say zero"the kage said as he laughed"well thats not very funny your going down...to the ground?ace said as he was kinda confused"awwww come on kid you got better joke then that"the kage said as he sent a knee to aces stomich"swwwwwww that hurt"ace said
6/20
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:33 pm
Komen saw that in the distance another student was fighting the Hokage. "What?" Komen said as he delivered a clean blow to The Third Hokage he was fighting and it disappeared. "Huh? Damn these must be clones." he said as he looked at the other student. "A kunai with a note hit the floor just next to Komen.
"Komen, I see another challenge for you. You must fight the other shinobi in the area and I will train you depending on how the fight goes."
Komen sighed as he read the note. "Guess I have to though." Komen took a Kunai out and threw it at Ace as he began his charge toward him.
6/20 Jutsu Shou
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:41 pm
As ace heard the kunai it hit him in the leg"oww what you do that for"ace said"you must train with this other shinobi"the kage said as ace lookd at the other shinobi"well well well if it isnt komen.....usai? remember me from the chunin exam.....well lets see how strong you gotten"ace said as he threw a kunai as komen and he ran up to komen and dashed around him leaving 4 kunais uin a circle"well i am waiting"ace said as he dropped te kunai as was about 5 yards from komen he had to keep his distance
7/20
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