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Senku Kumari

PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:08 pm


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Ferraku emerges from the tree line high above the river bank where he was training he walks down a long dirt road until he reaches the populated area of the mist village. He hears all the cheering and then spots blood on the other end of a back alley he is walking by. He figures a fight must have broken out and that is why people are yelling and cheering. Oblivious to the fact some of the yelling is of terror. The noise had stopped and a deep silence fell over the crowd, he hears something flying through the air behind him, he pushes on the tip of his blade which is tied to his back. The hilt is pushed straight up and down so it blocks the back of his head. He then hears a splat and mud gets on his sword and back. He looks behind himself with irritation. He thought he was actually being attacked, but it was just his brother throwing mud balls. "Must you be so intrusive, i wouldn't doubt it, if you were the cause of that uproar either." Ferakku says obviously annoyed with his brother. 2623+192=2815
PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:19 pm


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Isoga laughs from behind Ferraku. "What ya looking at bro? And yes i was the cause of it. I killed someone who was going to kill someone else. I warned him, but he made me do it." He jumps back a little bit and the mist around him dissipates. He can know be seen with the blood from the person he killed not to long ago, dripping from his face and chest. His hand is also covered in blood, from when he pulled it out of the mans chest. Isoga then draws a Senbon needle and twiddles with it in his hand, preparing for Ferraku to attack him. He also has his other hand in his pocket, getting ready to make hand signs if needed. Isoga then stands there waiting for Ferrakus next move.

(3201+137=3438 chakra)

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:38 pm


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Ferraku notices the obstructions in the air very quickly, only because many of his clan's elders have the same technique. He then sees Isoga appear just as he had previously anticipated. He looks at him with annoyance then turns his back and begins to walk away slowly, after about twenty or thirty steps he vanishes. He reappears on a wooden bridge above that connects to a staircase leading up the mountain side of the south end of the mist village. He went up here because there was not other people walking around it since it was only linked to one large building it was empty most of the time. He continued up the wooden switch back stairs climbing closer to the flats above the mist village. After ten sets of switch back stairs he stood level with a rocky plain that had scarce patches of grass spread upon it. He walked on the plain until he reached the tree line and disappeared into the forest. He walked through the dark woods for a long while until he saw the light of a torch. He got closer and came upon a small wooden hut in a circular clearing in the trees. In the back end of the clearing eight wooden targets shaped like people were stuck in the ground. This was a training spot to test out new hunter nin. He took stance facing the targets, he reached back and unfolded his leather strap where ten needles were holstered. He grabbed two needles gently, but carefully. One in between his pointer and index finger, the other between his index and ring finger. In a hasty movement he flung his hand forward and spread his fingers releasing two needles flying at the wooden targets, the needles hit just below the neck and to the right, he was aiming for the heart, but was quite a ways off. His accuracy was still in development with needles. It was one of the only weapons he did not use much as a kid. 2815+338=3153
PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:33 pm


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Ferraku retrieves his needles from the dummy and walks back to a thirty foot distance and takes stance once more. He places his needles in between his finger and fires them out with a snapping motion of his arm, and the extension of his fingers. The wizz through the air and stick into the center of the dummy's chest. This shot was much closer than before, only about three inches off his mark this time around. He uses anatsu odori and appears next to the dummy, he clenches the needles tightly and pulls them out of the dummy forcefully. He walks back hastily this time hoping to hit right on his mark, he clenches the needles tightly and zones his eyes in right on his mark. He takes a step forward in the direction of his target and swings his arm forth releasing the needles, the bolt in the wind and stick right in the center of the dummy's heart. A look of satisfaction appears across his face. He runs forward towards the dummy and pulls his needles out, he smiles at the two marks he has just made. He bolts backwards taking stance again, this time he will attempt to hit the two opposing shoulders of the dummy, a much harder task than before. He puts a needle between his pointer finger and index finger, then another between his ring finger and his pinky finger. He bolts forward and chucks the needles, the left needle goes low and hits where the ribs would be on the dummy, the other shoots too high above the shoulder and flies into the wooden wall behind the dummy. He does not retrieve his needles this time, he draws two more from his leather holster and places them in his hand, he swings his arm up and snaps his wrist sending the needles streaming from his hand. The first one hits right below the armpit, and the second one hits in the center of the neck of the dummy. He needs to get one right on before he can analyze the flaw in his technique. He pulls out two more needles and zones his eyes on his target, with a quick motion he releases them from his hand, on hits the top of the right shoulder while the other hits dead center on the chest, he is happy that now he can analyze the flaw in his form, before it was just guessing. He angles the left needle more to the left this time. He then snaps his wrist and flogs his arm out, the needles race out once again. This time the left one hits the neck, and the right one hits dead on. He is very good at mimicking movements to the slightest imperfections. Although any shinobi from his clan would have to be good at that since they all use needles. He takes stance this time he angles the left needle slightly down and to the left. He puts the right needle like before. He snaps his wrist and shoots them outward. The left needle hits the armpit while the right needle goes dead on yet another time. He reaches into his leather holster only to discover he has thrown all his needles. He walks up to the dummy and removes nine needles from its body, after he counts nine he instantly remembers, that one of them hit the wooden stop behind the dummies. Sure enough the needle is there, he pulls it out then heads back to the thirty foot line, he places the needles in his hand. The left one just like before except angled a tiny bit less down. He snaps his wrist and flings his arm forward, the needles blast outward. The left one hits the top of the shoulder and the right one hits dead on. He is beginning to get more of a feel for how the angle effects the throw of the needle specifically. He now will move onto his third and final challenge. He will hit the top of the neck below the chin the heart and the left kidney all in one throw. He places the needles in between each slots of his fingers not including his thumb and pointer finger space. He snaps his wrist and swings his hand, he recalled how he hit the heart before. The needles fly out towards the dummy across the firing range. The middle on hits the hear the top one hits the left eye and bottom one hits the chest plate right side. He realizes he is going to have to do a lot of work on this throwing challenge to get it down. He draws three more needles and snaps his wrist flinging his hand once more, angling the top needle down and to the right slightly. The needles fire out, the top one hits the mouth dead on, the middle one gets the heart once again and the bottom one flies past the right arm hitting the backboard. He draws needle, but he only has two remaining. He goes to fetch his needles starting with the one on the back board then getting those stuck in the dummy. He steps back and takes stance. He angles the top needle slightly down and snaps his wrist sending the needles soaring through the air. The top one hits its mark at the top of the neck, as well as the center one strikes dead on the heart, the bottom one hits the right rib cage. He draws three more needles clenching them tight, he focuses and takes a deep breath. He keeps the top and center needles how they were and angles the bottom on to the right and down slightly. He snaps his wrist and lets a rip of all three needles, the fire out the top and center hit their mark as expected. However the bottom goes to far left and flies outside the kidney and hits the dummy's hand. He takes out three more needles and zones his eyes in all three marks, he snaps his wrist and flings the needles out. The all slam against the wooden dummy right on there mark, top on the top of the wind pipe, middle right in the heart, and bottom piercing directly into the left kidney. He grins with joy in his successful target practice, he runs forward retrieving nine of his needles and holsters them. He closes his needle pouch and collects his belongings and disappears into the trees making his way back to the hidden village of the mist. 3153+1098=4251

Senku Kumari


Senku Kumari

PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:11 pm


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Ferraku heads through the trees until he reaches the rocky plateau, the sun is on the rise he can see light behind the mountains, but no rays have cast upon the landscape yet. Ferraku leaps on the cliff onto the second highest switch back stair case. He then leaps across to a high roof and hops down to a lower building just to the right of the one he was on, from this building he jumps on to the bridge connecting the switch backs. He then drops to the ground, he dashes down the street considering he did not want to have to kill any petty crook who decided to mess with him. After a while he reached the dirt road and continued on it for several miles, before reaching the tree line where he would head down to the river bank. He bolted down the hill dodging trees and logs on the way, until he came to the clear river bank and the fresh flowing river itself. He got his book out and looked in the index until he found his desired jutsu. He turned to page sixty three, Mizu Bushin No Jutsu. He looks at the hand signs there is only a few and it takes him about ten seconds to memorize after that he puts the book down and stands at the river bank, he begins to mold chakra with the tiger seal. He closes his eyes and performs the seals to create water clones, "Mizu Bushin No Jutsu!" He shouts, a body of water appears, but collapses before it is even fully done forming. He looks stressed at how bad of an attempt that was, it didn't even take enough form, for him to test its strength. He performs the seals again focusing his chakra more and picturing himself in his head. "Mizu Bushin No Jutsu." He says seriously, the water takes form and a clone of him appears. "Well let us test how strong of a clone you are, the clone climbs onto the river bank. Ferraku pulls out two kunais and throws on to his' clone. The clone catches it and Ferraku charges the clone, the clone cuts down and Ferraku dodges it with incredible ease and cuts the clone in half with his kunai. He is upset with how easily the clone went down, he quickly performs the jutsu again before the water from the previous clone sinks into the ground. The clone rises again and Ferraku jumps back, "Koy(come)" He says to the clone, the clone charges at him and dashes forward with the kunai. He knocks the kunai away and spins stabbing backwards into the clones stomach and cutting left, the clone splashes down once more. He begins doing the seals, "Mizu Bushin No Jutsu." He says and the clone again rises, Ferraku draws his sword and as does the clone, Ferraku runs at the clone and cuts down, the clone reacts much quicker than before and places the large katana up to block Ferraku's attack, Ferraku pulls out a kunai while there sword are locked and cuts at the clone, the clone jumps back and draws two kunais throwing them at Ferraku. Ferraku rolls to the left avoiding them, he then dashes at the clone and cuts upward, the clone leans back avoiding the slash and spins slashing at Ferraku's back. Ferraku hastily ducks avoiding the cut and kicks at the clones leg. The clone avoids his kick by jumping slightly back and swinging his blade down. Ferraku rolls out of the way then flips to his feet and points his sword at the clone panting. The clone was fighting on par with him, and he was very impressed by the success of the clone. The clone stabbed at him in a big motion and he ducked under the slash and stabbed up at the clones jaw, the clone leaned back avoiding the attack and brought his blade down at Ferraku. Ferraku spans quickly and blocked and knocked his sword upward. He then cut at the clones leg, but the clone dropped his sword pointing down and it stuck in the ground and stopped Ferraku's blade. The clone took his sword out and jumped back after he avoided the attack at his legs. Ferraku decided he would end this now before he used up all his stamina defeating a single clone that he had created, he charged at the clone and the clone charged at him. "Anatsu Odori." Ferraku says, he vanishes and the clone turns to water as he appears standing ten feet behind the fallen clone. "Well, I guess my clones are strong enough. " He says to himself lightly chuckling, he grabbed his book and the kunai from the fallen clone. He made his way up the hill side away from the bank of the river making his way back to the mist village.
(817/700 Mizu Bushin Learned) 4251+817=5068
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:37 am


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Ferraku finishes climbing to the tree line as he was heading up from the river, he walks along the dirt road passing a few caravans and miscellaneous other people. He even saw two mist jounin which was a rare sight, since most of them choose to elude the eyes of the public at all times. Finally he reached the open doors and the large arch way that lead into the mist village, he went to the library and returned the book on water jutsus he had acquired a while back. He picks out a more advanced book from the shelves and heads out into the busy streets of the mist village, it was early in the morning and many people were wandering about the streets at this time of day. Ferraku walks down the road and finds his way back to the dirt road, after walking a few miles he found the tree line, that was lined up with the tree line. He scurried down the hill making his way through the trees until he found the flowing river. However, he did not train there this time, instead he followed the river down stream, after a while of following the water he entered an area of the bank that was covered with thick green foliage and tall pine trees. He followed down the river bank for nearly four miles. He began to hear the sound of crashing water, he then dashed through the trees until he came upon a huge rock ledge and to his side a massive flowing waterfall crashed down into a giant lake below. Ferraku jumped down the nearly fifty foot cliff. He landed on the water, but was not able to stay standing. He fell beneath the water with a large splash, he than swam to the top and climbed his way to standing on the water. He figured this was a great new training spot, he opened his book and came upon a particular technique he liked very much. It was called Suiton Mizu Kamikiri, he began to read up on the hand signs. It required even more seals than than Suiton Mizurappa. He read them aloud attempting to memorize them, "Tiger Ox Bird Rat Dragon Ox Ram Horse Serpent Bird Monkey Hare Boar Dragon Bird Tiger Ram Rat Horse." He said astounded by how many signs there were he than began trying to memorize them, he recited them as best as he could, after a while of practicing he got it down. "Tiger Ox Bird Rat Dragon Ox Ram Horse Serpent Bird Monkey Hare Boar Dragon Bird Tiger Ram Rat Horse." He recited getting all the signs in the right order. He than made his first attempt at performing the jutsu, he closed his eyes and molded a large amount of chakra. "Suiton Mizu Kamikiri." He said calmly, he stomped his foot on the ground and a thin wave of water rose, and sliced across the lake and collide into the dirt bank cutting a huge gouge in the use to be perfectly straight bank. He realized that the attack lacked a lot of the power it should have normally. He then turned to face towards the rock face on the left side of the waterfall. He did all his seals and faced the waterfall focusing a lot of chakra into his hands. "Suiton Mizu Kamikiri." He says with great motivation, the slicing blade ripped across the lake and cut up the stone face, leaving a small cutting mark behind it, it cut right through a small tree growing out of the side of the rock face. It was strong, but he realized he still needed to have a lot more power behind it then he currently had. He does his seals focusing his chakra and keep his mind calm, he pictured a very keen blade in his mind as he prepared to launch the jutsu. "SUITON MIZU KAMIKIRI!" Ferraku shouts unleashing a ripping blade of water at the rock face, it rides on the water and cuts a deep slice into the rock surface and rides up the rock face. It goes about fifteen high and cuts off an entire tree off the cliff side. He now knew that he had gotten the power for the jutsu down. He was not sure however how fast the technique was. "Suiton Mizu Bushin." Ferraku says, and a water clone appears aside him, he dashes to the other side of the lake and starts performing seals and building up a large amount of chakra. "SUITON MIZU KAMIKIRI!" He shouts blasting out a water wave at the water clone, it raced across the lake. The clone dashes left easily avoiding any damage from the technique, but by the time he recovered from dodging, a second water cutting blade came slicing right at him. The clone fails to dodge the attack and it cuts him in half, it was not as fast as Mizurappa, but had a wider attack range. It also did a lot damage upon contact to the enemy. He is satisfied with the power and speed of his technique. He then sits down in a meditation form of sitting, he begins to mold chakra and close his eyes. He works to increase his chakra control, to help sharpen his techniques to become more powerful and more efficient. He opens his eyes and prepares to continue his training.
(902/900 Suiton Kamikiri Learned) 5068+902=5970

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:40 am


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Isoga stands there for a moment and then realizes what happened. His brother just completely ditched him. Isoga sighs and turns around and jumps onto a building. He hops form the buildings and heads to the same open field he was at before. Once there he takes out a book and begins to read. He flips through the pages and finds a section on clones. The type he study's is the Water Clone jutsu. He has a idea on how he could use that jutsu to its maximum potential. He reads on how to use the jutsu then stands up. First, he closes his eyes and relaxes himself. The cool mist quietly floats around him, hitting his face with a cool touch. He then focuses on chakra manipulation. His chakra flows smoothly through out his whole body. Isoga then begins to breath deeply and then does hand signs. His chakra flows through his body and to his hands. He then says the jutsu. "Water Style, Water Clone Jutsu!" His chakra flows from his body and begins to manipulate the water around him and in the air around his body. They begin to take form, but just turn into a blob and explode. Water flys through the air and soaks Isogas body. He shakes his head to get the water from his hair off of him. He then does the hand signs and focuses on his chakra. "Water Style, Water Clone Jutsu." Water, again, forms around him and creates a blob. The blob starts to rise up, and gets to be about the same level as Isoga. But the same result. Isoga does not even try to get rid of the water from his head. He just sighs and cracks his neck. He then does the hand signs and releases his chakra from his body. The water around him begins to mix with his chakra, and starts to pile up on each other. The water rises up and begins to take form. Its height is the same as Isogas, and the build is also the same size. Arms begin to form, so do the legs, but the water falls down with a heavy splash. Isoga is happy to see that the clone is coming along smoothly. He then begins to make the hand signs needed and focuses his chakra. "Water Style, Water Clone Jutsu." The water around Isoga rises up and forms a blob on the ground in front of him. It begins to rise up, and creates two legs on the way up. It then forms a waste, and a stomach. Next comes the chest and arms. The water clone rises up and forms a head. The clothes then begin to form and the water clone appears to be Isoga, but the water clones face is just nothing. Isoga bites the tip of his thumb and dismisses the clone. He then does the hand signs and the water clone again forms a blob. It starts to rise up and creates the clone the same as before, but this time, the mans face begins to get facial features. A nose begins to form and so do eyes and a mouth. Ears soon follow. The clone looks almost exactly like himself, only the nose is to small and the eye colors are different. Isoga lets the clone go, and then sits down to take a quick break. He lays down and looks up as the mist softly touches his face. It tickles a little bit from the wind, but he ignores it. After a while Isoga stands up and stretches his body. He then forms hand signs and the clone forms and begins to rise up. This time the clone is perfect. Isoga cant help but grin in satisfaction. Isoga then decides to fight this clone for a bit. Isoga jumps back and throws 2 Senbon needles at the clone. They stick in the clone, only to fall down. Isoga should of known normal weapons wont harm a water clone. He then runs forward at the clone, and punches towards the clones gut. The clone blocks the fist, and punches at Isogas head. Isoga leans back, barely dodging the clones fist. Isoga then makes quick hand signs with his free hand and stomps on the ground. Water rises up and forms Ice Needles, that then rain down upon the water clone. The clone gets teared to shreds and Isoga back up. He grins and turns off and begins to walk around.

(3438+772=4210 Chakra)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:38 am


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Ferraku looks in his book for the next technique he wants to learn, he comes upon a technique called Kirigakure No Jutsu. He reads it over and finds that not many hand signs are required to use this jutsu. Ferraku centers himself on the middle of the lake and forms the seal of the ram and begins to accumulate a large amount of chakra all around him. The air thickens around him and the water begins to move as his chakra continues to build up. He closes his eyes and begins the seals. His eyes spring open and his chakra roars, "Kirigakure No Jutsu!" He says loudly, he forms a very small patch of. The mist is also quite thin and not very useful for combat purposes. He spreads his feet further apart and begins to build up more chakra and spreads it out upon the lake. Ferraku begins to form seals and his lips part from each other opening. "Kirigakure No Jutsu." He says with no enthusiasm, a large cloud of mist rises from the lake where he stands, but the mist is still very thing and quite useless for that reason. He begins to mold chakra into the air and into the water around him. The water begins to create small waves heading outward from him as his chakra increases. He does his seals and slams his hands together sending a breeze of wind outward. "KIRIGAKURE NO JUTSU!" He yells, large amounts of mist begin to form around his body in a spiral, he focuses more chakra in them and releases the mist into the air. The mist spreads throughout the lake bed, a cloud of mist covers the lake bed. Even with all those changes, the technique is still not nearly complete. He takes stance again forming the seal of the ram and begins to produce more chakra into the water and the air. Ferraku takes a deep breath in and lets it flow from him slowly do relax him while he completes all the seals required for the hidden mist technique. He looks straight ahead with great determination. "Kirigakure No Jutsu." He says sternly and seriously. The mist swirls around him in a big twister, he vanishes from sight while inside the thick mist concentrate. He does the sign of the tiger and packs more chakra into the mist and creates more mist till a fifteen foot mist twister is rotating around him. He releases his sign and places his hand outward, the mist spreads throughout the lake forming a thick cloud on the waters surface, and in the air around him. The cloud is much thicker, but still not enough to effect anybodies visibility in combat. He takes stance in the lake once again increasing how much chakra is in the water and air, just as he did before. He begins his seals while keeping in a very deep state of concentration. The chakra emanates from him causing the air and water to move outward from him, he sucks his chakra within bringing the air close to him. "Kirigakure No Jutsu." He says with a hopeful voice, the mist draws in towards him, it begins to collect and accumulate all around him. Chakra can be seen within the mist concentrate as it circles around him, he does the seal of the ram and draws in more and more mist releasing a massive amount of chakra into the air around him. The cloud of mist begins to form all over the lake making a very thick mist that limits Ferraku's vision to about two feet. Ferraku falls to one knee panting from the massive amount of chakra he used training this jutsu. After taking quite a long breather to recover from his weakened state he walks over to the lakes edge and grabs his things. He climbs the rock face next to the waterfall making his way back up towards the river side. He follows the water for a very long while until he reaches the river bank where he was training before. He makes his way up the hill and to the dirt road. The dirt road actually seemed rather short now, but that is only because the walk to the waterfall is about five or six times longer than the walk on the road. Finally he had reached home and entered the mist village. He decided to show off his new skills to those of who he respects most, his clan elders. He goes to the in door water jutsu training area within the building complex where his clan resides. Once inside the building he centers himself upon the pool where many of his clan members are congregating around him. He releases a huge amount of chakra and catches all their attention, he begins hand seals and holds the ram for a brief period to focus more chakra into his mist. He puts his hands outward, "Kirigakure No Jutsu!" He shouts releasing a very thick cloud of mist that fills the whole room. He then leaves the room without even looking at the reaction of his superiors, but that is only because he is confident in the fact they would be impressed with him.
(870/800 Kirigakure No Jutsu Learned) 5970+870=6830

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:51 am


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Isoga wanders around the village and stops by a food mart of some kind. He looks through there assortment of food. His mouth drools from the delicious food in the store. He picks out some food, and walks off from the stand. He reaches into his bag where the food is and starts to eat some old apples. It is hard to get fresh fruit here in the Mist Village. He finishes it and notices some kids sitting in a alley way looking starving. Isoga vanishes and appears above them. He reaches into his bag and drops 3 apples down for the kids. They all jump and grab them and look up at who dropped them, but Isoga is no longer there. Isoga hops on the building rooftops, looking down at the many criminals in the area. He comes to one spot and notices two criminals who have a killing intent in there eyes. Isoga stops and makes his hand signs. "Water Clone Jutsu" The water around him grows and forms a exact clone of Isoga. The clone looks at Isoga and nods and jumps down to the man at the left. Isoga goes to the man at the right. The man the clone went to looks at him. "Whad'ya want kid im busy." The clone does not say anything it just stands there looking at him. The man starts to walk up to the clone and stops about two feet in front of the clone. "You lookin for trouble punk?" The clone just stands there, motionless and not talking. The man gets annoyed and draws out a kunai. "Fine then you can die punk!" The man stabs at Isogas water clone, but the kunai just sinks into his body harmlessly. The man pulls back, not knowing what just happened. The water clone then pulls out a Senbon needle made of water, and throws it at the man. The Senbon needle sticks in the mans arm and he drops the weapon. The water clone then runs up holding a Senbon needle, and stabs it into the mans knee. The man trys to step back, but the Senbon's needle is deep in the mans kneecap, preventing him from using that leg. The water clone then raises his hand up and punches the man in the face. The man gets knocked back, and the water clone then kicks him in the knee where the needle is. The man shrieks in pain as the water clone breaks the mans kneecap. "Please! Let me go...i wont do it again...." The water clone nods and turns away and vanishes. The man sits there dumb founded that he actually got away. The real Isoga, is following the other man. This man has a couple shurikens with him. Isoga commands his water clone to move in front of him and have him waste his shurikens. The water clone appears in front of the man and throws a Senbon at him. The man takes out his Shurikens and throws them all at the water clone. They all stick in him and the water clone vanishes. Isoga then taps the man on the shoulder. "huh? What is it kid?" "I know you where planning on killing someone. Please leave before i have to hurt you." The man laughs and punches Isoga in the gut. Isoga bends over holding his gut. "You hurt me? Idiot!" He then elbows down at Isogas head. Isoga jumps away and throws two Senbon needles in the mans shoulders. The man reels back in pain and pulls them out. As soon as they are pulled out, Isoga is right in front of him and socks him in the face. The man gets knocked back and hits the ground hard. He stands up and runs off as fast as he can. Isoga cracks his knuckles and walks off.

(4210+650=4860 Chakra)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:50 pm


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Ferraku makes his way through the village under the bright glow of the ominous sun. He makes his way through the streets and heads into the mountains the mountains by heading up a steep long hill for several minutes. When he reaches the rocky plateau he races across it vanishing into the forest. He bolts through the trees that elude him from the sun's bright rays. After a while he comes upon the targeting range where he was practicing hsi needle throwing accuracy the other day. He takes stance and draws four needles from his holster, he places all four needles in between his pointer and index finger. He lunges forward snapping his wrist and the needles fly from his hand streaming across the firing range, they each hit a separate dummy. The far right needle nails the dummy in the heart, the middle two both miss the dummy entirely and the left most needle hits the dummy's arm. He draws four more needles from his leather holster and zones his eyes onto his targets, he takes a step back and breaths in heavily. He releases his breath steps forward and swings his arm snapping his wrist. The needles rocket out of his hand, his throwing speed was improving. The slam into the dummies, the far right hits its mark on the heart the middle right one hits the stomach directly, the middle left needle misses and the far left needle hits the dummy's shoulder. He pulls four more needles from his pouch and closes his eyes, he takes stance and pictures his targets, he visually produces a line of dummies in sync with those actually in front of him. His eyes open and a determined look appears across his face, he steps forward and snaps his wrist launching the needles towards his targets. The stick into the dummies all at the same time, the far right needle pierces the dummy's heart and the middle right hits the center of the dummy's chest. The far left and left middle needle both strike the right section of the chest. He bolts forward and collects all his needles from the dummies. He walks back configuring how he will account for his errors in his last throw. He focuses mentally lining up imaginary targets with the real ones. He predicts the angles off all his needles and adjusts accordingly, he dashes forward snapping his wrist, all the needles stream outward at incredible speeds, bang bang bang bang.n All four needles strike the dummies like clock work, Ferraku looks out at the dummies to see all four of them with a needle stuck in their heart, he grins with satisfaction and retrieves his weapons from the wooden dummies. 6830+455=7285

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:04 pm


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Ferraku draws his sword from his back and decides it is time to improve his fencing skills, he stakes his sword in the ground and begins doing hand signs. "Mizu Bushin No Jutsu." He says, and a cloud of smoke spurts up revealing to water clones holding the same sword as Ferraku, Ferraku unsheathes his sword from the ground and takes stance. "Koy(come)" He says antagonizing the water clones of himself. The clones dash at him slashing down from either side, Ferraku dives forward and lands on his hands flipping onto his feet, the clones turn to face him. Ferraku dashes at them, he dashes left targeting one clone at a time. He takes stance behind the clone, and stabs at its back. The other clone knocks his sword down, and the one he attacked spins cutting at his head. He ducks avoiding the attack. The second clone slashes up at him after he ducks and he flips back, but not quite in time considering his chest was slightly cut. He breathes deep and looks at the clones. He dashes at them and jumps into the air cutting down, the clone brings his sword up to block. Ferraku focuses his chakra into his blade and overpowers him sending him tumbling back, immediately after which the other clone stabs at Ferraku. Ferraku knocks his blade away bare handed and stabs back. The clone dashes to the side and the clones take formation standing together. Ferraku takes off running at them once again, he slashes inward, then vanishes before completing his attack. He appears above them in an instant and hooks both his feet on each of the clones jaws and launches them in either direction. The clones fly outward and roll on the ground. Ferraku rushes one of the grounded clones and slices him in half before he manages to rise again. He turns to see the other clone charging him and cutting down. He makes a quick slash to knock his blade off its mark. His blade is forced away upon contact but the clone's sword sticks into the stone to Ferraku's left side. Ferraku dashes back crouching sliding and runs his fingers across the dirt as he slides. He points his sword at the clone and charges at him, he dashes left when he gets close. He then quickly averts direction and appears to the clone's right side and stabs inward piercing the clones side, the clone turns to water and falls to the ground in the form of a puddle. He sheathes his sword on his back. He is sweating heavily and breathing fast in a panting state. He is very worn after completing both sets of training. He makes his way back to the mist village walking slowly, as to not use any of his reserve energy in the process. 7285+474=7759
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:36 pm


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Ferraku makes his way down the dirt road out the east end of the city within the mist village, he heads down it until he comes upon the large tree line with a sloping hill. He walks down the hill until he reaches the river bank, he then follows the flow of the water for miles and miles, until he comes upon a large waterfall pouring into a lake. He scales the rock face on the left side of the waterfall, using the ingrown trees to help him move down the side of the waterfall. When he is about ten feet up from the lake he molds a bunch of chakra onto his feet and jumps down onto the surface of the water. He opens his book and begins scanning through the pages until he finds a technique that he likes. He comes upon a jutsu called the water prison technique and realizes most of his techniques would not be good for subduing opponents, but rather just killing them. He looks at the hand signs and sees that there is quite a few, but they have a repetitive pattern. Rat Dragon Serpent Bird Dog Ox Boar Dragon Rat Dragon Serpent Boar. He reads on to say the more sets of these hand signs you do the better the technique will work and the longer it will last, but of course there is a limit to how well the technique will work and last. He memorizes the hand seals while he continues down the page reading tips and info on the technique. He studies the various uses for it, it says that some hunter nin make incredibly powerful water prison after they have subdued there enemy. They then use the prison to suffocate them as a form of torture to withdraw information from their captured subjects. Ferraku realizes he cannot train this jutsu without someone to see how well it will work. Ferraku does several hand signs, "Mizu Bushin No Jutsu." He says and one water clone appears in a cloud of smoke standing next to Ferraku. Ferraku then recites the hand seals from the book in his head and commences doing them. He then focuses a lot of chakra in a circular shape in the water beneath him and goes into a deep state of focus as he does this. "Suiro No Jutsu." He says and the orb of water forms entrapping the clone within it. The water prison disperses very soon after it had been formed. The cone drops from the orb and lands on his feet. Ferraku is upset at how poorly it worked with his first attempt. He begins doing the hand seals embedding even more chakra into the a circle in the water beneath him he then does the hand seals very many times to increase efficiency of the technique. Rat Dragon Serpent Bird Dog Ox Boar Dragon Rat Dragon Serpent Bird Dog Ox Boar Dragon Rat Dragon Serpent Bird Dog Ox Boar Dragon Rat Dragon Serpent Bird Dog Ox Boar Dragon Rat Dragon Serpent Bird Dog Ox Boar Dragon. After a few straight minutes of forming seals and pouring chakra into the water he is ready to perform the jutsu. Chakra builds up chakra in his hands as he prepares to perform the technique. "Suiro No Jutsu." He says and a water orb forms, but instantly disperses sending a wave of water out from the burst. Ferraku goes flying from the wave, is it obvious he cannot control that much chakra at once, so maybe he overdid it with the hand seals a bit. He begins to form the seals again this time only two sets of them. Upon completion of the hand signs he closes his eyes and focuses his chakra. "Suiro No Jutsu." He says and the orb forms creating a prison around the clone, he continues to poor chakra into the prison at a very steady and constant rate. It lasts much longer than before but after seven or eight minutes the prison breaks once again. He is much more satisfied this time however because the technique at this level could at least serve some kind of purpose. He took a small break considering he had used a lot of chakra on his second attempt despite it being a total failure. He gets up after about ten or fifteen minutes and commences his training once more. He centers himself on the lake and begins forming the seals for the water prison technique. He embeds a large amount of chakra into the water beneath him. He closes his eyes and slams his hands together. "SUIRO NO JUTSU!" Shouts Ferraku, the prison forms trapping the clone once more, this prison had visible lines of chakra within it. It was obviously very strong in comparison to the other few he had done, even his most recent once which was fairly well done. He stood there for a long while maintain the prison and after a good solid half hour the water lost form and splashed back into the lake. He grinned with joy at the fact he had produced a legit water prison technique so quickly. Ferraku waked off the lake feeling content with the level he had brought his technique too, he grabbed his book and began climbing back up the rock face, after a few minutes he was back on the trail, this time going against the flow of the water, considering he was trying to retrace his steps. After a few hours he arrived at the river bank, from there he headed up the hill making his way to the long winding dirt road. He continued down the road until he reached the mist village. He then went through the streets until he reached a more isolated area of the village where his house resided, he pushed the door open and entered the small house. He went into his room and took his sword off his back and removed his leather needle holster. He neatly stacked all his gear aside his bed. He then pulled the covers up and laid down beneath them. He passed out quite quickly due to the exhaustion from all his training he had been doing recently.
(1039/1000 Water Prison Learned) 7759+1039=8798

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:24 pm


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Ferraku wakes up from his long slumber, he recovered quite nicely from all the damage his body took from training. He jumped to his feet, strapped his sword on his back. He put on his belt and tied his headband onto his forehead. He grabbed his leather needle holster and strapped it to his belt. He walked out the front door of his house made his way to the hunter nin training ground. He was lucky he found that place, hunter nin do not really need any form of basic training and they are always to busy to use a place so out of the way anyway. He has only seen one hunter nin there in the past five months, when he originally discovered the place. He made his way to the wooden bridge that connected to the switch backs, he jumped onto the bridge and ran up the long sets of wooden stairs. He was pumping with energy, his agility was at its best due to him being well rested. When he reached the top he took off running into the thick forest, after another few minutes he had reached his desired destination, but he stopped just before the clearing of the training ground and saw two hunter nin standing there talking. He was astounded and surprised at the fact that they were there. "You can come out kid, we already know your there." One of the hunter nins says without even turning around to face him. Ferraku timidly emerges from the forest. "I suppose your the one who has been using our training ground?" The hunter nin asks. "Y-yes sir." Ferraku responds with fright. The hunter nin chuckles briefly, "So can you use that big hunk of sword on your back or is it just for show?" The hunter nin asks obviously mocking Ferraku. "Of course I can use it." Ferraku says with a new found sense of adamance. The hunter nin looked a little surprised then a smirk crosses one of their faces. "Ok then, show me what you got." He says drawing his nimble katana from its sheathe. Ferraku grins mischievously, "anatsu odori." Ferraku says, he vanishes and reappears slamming his blade down at the hunter nin. The shinobi blocks his sword with ease holding his small katana in one hand, he then averts Ferraku's blade to the left. Ferraku realizes he is completely left open with no means of dodging or blocking. "That first attack had some impressive speed behind it for a genin, but if this was a real fight you would already be dead. " The hunter nin tells him "Yea, I guess so." Ferraku responds appearing to be calm, but really he was filled with anger and hate for the hunter nin due to him being embarrassed because he was beaten so easily. 8798+470=9468
PostPosted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:52 pm


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Ferraku makes his way back through the forest quietly ranting to himself about those hunter nins. They had angered him deeply with their cocky attitude and showing off. He came upon the rock plateau and then descended into the the village below by jumping down the switch backs. When he reached the bottom he made his way towards the docks, he figured there were much more peaceful places to be then the slums of the mist village. It was a short walk to get there. He arrived at the vast boating docks and figured he would go to the village of the sand, he knew he could not get there by boat alone. He figured a desert would be a nice change of scenery for him, he filled his canteen in a nearby stream, that wasn't filled with salt water like the ocean where the boats were. He then hustled aboard the ship. He did not tell anyone he was leaving or bring anything except money and his essential ninja equipment. The boat set sail, he sat down in the corner of the top deck as if to avoid having to talk to anyone. The boat raced through the waters, finally after a while he saw a beach off in the distance, he stood up and got ready to leave the ship and begin his long walk to the village of the sand. 9468+233=9701

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