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 Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:26 pm
onixdragon kalickjis my character is Aaron hirron and he doesn't know his mom was an uchiha he basically looks like my avatar and has the sharingan but doesn't know it! he is going to be of konoha fail. read the posts in the rp academy before you post a graduation post. you can pass if you dont know what you are doing Onix, I think you should read his RP sample again, he definately deserves the Uchiha spot he asks for ^.^
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Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:46 pm
hi sorry i must not have understood
rp sample
Aaron was standing at the magnificent gates of konoha and thought wow what a wonderful day of training the sky was slightly dark.The day was over he was redy for dinner.he ate his ramen in peace and knew he might finally get a squad he went to his house and got in his blue comfy bed
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:54 pm
kalickjis hi sorry i must not have understood rp sample Aaron was standing at the magnificent gates of konoha and thought wow what a wonderful day of training the sky was slightly dark.The day was over he was redy for dinner.he ate his ramen in peace and knew he might finally get a squad he went to his house and got in his blue comfy bed try to make your posts at least 4 lines long and be sure to put thoughts in italics, and speech in "quotes" but its not bad. pass
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 3:18 pm
My character's name is Alexey. She is an orphan who lives with family friends.
Rp sample
Alexey sat down under a tree, tired from her run. She wiped beads of sweat off of her forehead and looked up at the few rays of sunlight that filtered through the leaves in the trees. "How long have I been runing anyway?" she wondered. She pulled her canteen from its hitch on her belt and took a big and well-needed swig. "That hit the spot." Alexey said as she pulled the bottle from her lips and leaned back against the tree. She closed her eyes and just soaked in the relaxation and the coolness of the shade on her heated skin. Then a voice in the back of her head piped up, "You should be heading back now. Don't want everyone to start to wonder where you are." Alexey sighed heavily, and even though she was reluctant, she got up.
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 2:18 pm
confused i hope i get this right my name is zokou hitsugiai from kumogakure
INTRO
Zokou Zitsugiai sits in a grassy plain area waiting for the wind to blow on his face.Zokou gets up and head for his favorite cliff.To see the view of his village.Once the wind blows he follows it wondering what adventure he might encounter to day.he hopes it just to climb tree and look out to the open.he look around for a rock to sit on to rest.
sweatdrop hope I didnt over do it
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:30 am
Name: Arden Dunham
Village: Where ever is recruiting academy students, no perticular preference.
Arden sat in the classroom of the academy, everyone else had left for the day. He sighed still reading the rules of rping, wanting to get everything perfect the first time. It wasn't that he was perticularly lazy, as a matter of fact Arden was a ambitious character, hoping of one day leading a team of ninja on missions. He closed looked at his watch checking the time, his face reflected back at him in the glass, his blue-green gentle eyes, his short messy hazel hair. He stood muttering to himself "Time to get this over with, life is to short to spend all day in the classroom". He calmly and left the room, looking back at it once before closing the door.
((Who ever approves of my rp, i was wondering if you could help me create a character. Im new to the guild and i assuming all bloodlines must be approved and what not, so it be nice to have someone walk me through it. Thanks alot))
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:44 pm
Roxy Bell - Pass, good description.
Darkxdragonxninja - Please capitalize where appropriate. =/ It could be slightly longer, too. But pass.
PassiveAggressive22 - Pass, good job. =3
[I don't think we are approving customs at the moment. All the old things must be fitted to the new system first. V.V As for the question of a village, please check the village status...though Konoha isn't officially reopening until the end of this weekend, when I'm done with midterms and with most financial applications. ...I'll be doing mostly cleaning though and getting people to convert profiles to the new system if that hasn't been done already.
But if you have any other questions, I'll try to get back as soon as possible.]
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:44 pm
Name:Kazukiro Uchiha
Village: Konohagure
As Kazukiro rides His Horse,He saw the giant academy which he thought was small,And then He jumped off the Horse and run as fast as he could to the academy and saying: "I'm very lucky to be a scholar to this academy.This is a rare opportunity but i will do everything to pass and become a true ninja!" He ran back to His Horse and lead it to the stable and gave it Hay and He said: stay here boy."He ran and stared at all the things that can be seen in the academy.He circled the academy,but then,he heard the bell and he ran to his classroom and said: "well,its time for class!"
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:24 am
Name : Koizumi Mizuki (Family Name, First Name)
Village: Konohagakure ((Hidden Leaf Village))
RP Sample:
Mizuki walked into her room, sitting on the ground with a roll of bandage cloth in her hand. Kicking off her right shoe she started to untie the knot she made on her thigh and unwrapped her leg. Slowly, but surely she could see the wooden grain of her right leg, a reminder of her past and the love of her father. Her fingers brushed against the smooth surface of the wood slowly before she grabbed the new roll and started to wrap her leg up.
Even in a new place such as the Ninja Academy, she was worried about what others would think of this odd limb of hers. It was much easier to make people think she hurt her leg instead of explaining the whole puppet limb. She tied the knot securely as she grabbed the side of her bed and pulled herself up, most of her weight going to her left leg.
She pushed a stray strand of hair and tugged it behind her ear as she walked outside, giving her grandparents a quick goodbye before she walked toward the direction of the Ninja Academy. "This...will be the start of a new me. I will become a puppeteer...just like Dad."
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:30 pm
kazukiro uchiha Name:Kazukiro Uchiha
Village: Konohagure
As Kazukiro rides His Horse,He saw the giant academy which he thought was small,And then He jumped off the Horse and run as fast as he could to the academy and saying: "I'm very lucky to be a scholar to this academy.This is a rare opportunity but i will do everything to pass and become a true ninja!" He ran back to His Horse and lead it to the stable and gave it Hay and He said: stay here boy."He ran and stared at all the things that can be seen in the academy.He circled the academy,but then,he heard the bell and he ran to his classroom and said: "well,its time for class!" pass
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:31 pm
CrimsonCatFury Name : Koizumi Mizuki (Family Name, First Name) Village: Konohagakure ((Hidden Leaf Village))RP Sample:
Mizuki walked into her room, sitting on the ground with a roll of bandage cloth in her hand. Kicking off her right shoe she started to untie the knot she made on her thigh and unwrapped her leg. Slowly, but surely she could see the wooden grain of her right leg, a reminder of her past and the love of her father. Her fingers brushed against the smooth surface of the wood slowly before she grabbed the new roll and started to wrap her leg up.
Even in a new place such as the Ninja Academy, she was worried about what others would think of this odd limb of hers. It was much easier to make people think she hurt her leg instead of explaining the whole puppet limb. She tied the knot securely as she grabbed the side of her bed and pulled herself up, most of her weight going to her left leg.
She pushed a stray strand of hair and tugged it behind her ear as she walked outside, giving her grandparents a quick goodbye before she walked toward the direction of the Ninja Academy. "This...will be the start of a new me. I will become a puppeteer...just like Dad."pass
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:02 pm
Name: Okazai, Kai, Toshi (Last, Middle, First)
Village: Okazai (near Otogakure)
Toshi slowly sits up while still staring up at the azure sky. He slowly looks down towards his surrounding and feels underneath him. 'Hmm. It seems I've fallen asleep on the roof again. Mothers going to worry if I don't tell her I'm right. She's having enough problems as it is accepting me going to the academy.' He stands up and looks around at the mountain village of Okazai.
'I'm going to miss this place.' He takes another long look at the place that will soon be recognized to him as his old home. He spots other children playing a game near the cliffs edge. A group of old people talking about "how great it was to be young." near the market. He jumps off the roof and falls once he lands.
He starts laughing without restraint. "Guess I've been sleeping longer then I thought. I didn't even know my leg was asleep till I landed on it." Still laughing he enters the house and shouts toward the kitchen on the other side of the room. "Hi mother, bye mother. I'm going to be late if I take any longer to go to Otogakure."
With no more then a few syllables out of her mouth he dashes out the door closing it behind him and running towards Otogakure, his new home.
(sorry it's kinda long i got carried away sweatdrop )
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:06 pm
The Winged Guardian Name: Okazai, Kai, Toshi (Last, Middle, First) Village: Okazai (near Otogakure) Toshi slowly sits up while still staring up at the azure sky. He slowly looks down towards his surrounding and feels underneath him. 'Hmm. It seems I've fallen asleep on the roof again. Mothers going to worry if I don't tell her I'm right. She's having enough problems as it is accepting me going to the academy.' He stands up and looks around at the mountain village of Okazai. 'I'm going to miss this place.' He takes another long look at the place that will soon be recognized to him as his old home. He spots other children playing a game near the cliffs edge. A group of old people talking about "how great it was to be young." near the market. He jumps off the roof and falls once he lands. He starts laughing without restraint. "Guess I've been sleeping longer then I thought. I didn't even know my leg was asleep till I landed on it." Still laughing he enters the house and shouts toward the kitchen on the other side of the room. "Hi mother, bye mother. I'm going to be late if I take any longer to go to Otogakure."With no more then a few syllables out of her mouth he dashes out the door closing it behind him and running towards Otogakure, his new home. (sorry it's kinda long i got carried away sweatdrop ) No that's a great length. Posts sound most natural and flow best in the past tense. Reading through it again in the past and see how you like it. Most of the guild works in the past, but I'm not sure if it's a regulation or not. Otherwise. Pass.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 12:43 am
cheerios18 The Winged Guardian Name: Okazai, Kai, Toshi (Last, Middle, First) Village: Okazai (near Otogakure) Toshi slowly sits up while still staring up at the azure sky. He slowly looks down towards his surrounding and feels underneath him. 'Hmm. It seems I've fallen asleep on the roof again. Mothers going to worry if I don't tell her I'm right. She's having enough problems as it is accepting me going to the academy.' He stands up and looks around at the mountain village of Okazai. 'I'm going to miss this place.' He takes another long look at the place that will soon be recognized to him as his old home. He spots other children playing a game near the cliffs edge. A group of old people talking about "how great it was to be young." near the market. He jumps off the roof and falls once he lands. He starts laughing without restraint. "Guess I've been sleeping longer then I thought. I didn't even know my leg was asleep till I landed on it." Still laughing he enters the house and shouts toward the kitchen on the other side of the room. "Hi mother, bye mother. I'm going to be late if I take any longer to go to Otogakure."With no more then a few syllables out of her mouth he dashes out the door closing it behind him and running towards Otogakure, his new home. (sorry it's kinda long i got carried away sweatdrop ) No that's a great length. Posts sound most natural and flow best in the past tense. Reading through it again in the past and see how you like it. Most of the guild works in the past, but I'm not sure if it's a regulation or not. Otherwise. Pass. it does sound better past. I'm just not good at using past tense. Although i'll try my best to fix that.
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