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 Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:31 am
((By the way guys, I know most people don't mind this but personally this bugs me A LOT. I noticed that there was a lot of auto hitting and autoing other people's actions in the last page or so, with Bone and Darkshadow, not to mention Willowheart and Foxfur. If you guys are ok with it, then it's all good, but auto-hitting always bugs me to no end, and I get REALLY mad if someone did that to me. I'd appreciate it if you guys gave other people a chance to respond to your actions, such as saying "Darkshadow aimed a blow at Bones' face" and then Bone can choose to take the hit or not.
Thanks.))
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:42 am
DARKSHADOW Do you hear me?
I'm talking to you.
Across the water.
Across the deep, blue, ocean.
Under the open sky.
Oh my, oh baby I'm trying. "Anytime little one."[He said just before being attacked. Darkshadow collapsed as the white tom landed on him. But managed to get up. He looked at the toms claws. Reinforced with dogs teeth?]"Get out of Nightclan now."[He snarled at Bones. Darkshadow was already covered in blood. His back leg oozing blood more than it ever did. But instead, Darkshadow pushed the tom off him and pinned him down.] I hear you, in my dreams.
I feel your whisper, across the sea.
I keep you with me, in my heart.
You make it easier when life gets hard
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:00 am
((Sorry for the ooc, but just as a note, fox traps are generally strong enough to shatter bones. The ones with teeth are sometimes strong enough to completely severe a limb...this is just a note blaugh ))
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:05 am
iZann ((Sorry for the ooc, but just as a note, fox traps are generally strong enough to shatter bones. The ones with teeth are sometimes strong enough to completely severe a limb...this is just a note blaugh ))
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:09 am
((Well those were the traditional ones, I don't know about the newer ones. I think these ones are banned and the wire loop ones are used nowadays, or cages...but yes, the jaws type are strong enough to shatter the foxes' bones...ouch.))
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:50 am
 Ƨнαттɛяɛ∂ғαиɢ
Ɯαяяισя╔══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗
[Shatteredfang heaved a sigh. She ached all over. But she ignored it, facing Darkshadow and The other cat once more. She smiled slightly, pride flickering in her eyes. He was fighting like a true NightClan warrior. Her eyes grew worried as she noted the blood flowing from the tom's wounds.
She quickly tried to shove Darkshadow off of Bones, but kept a paw pinned on the tom's face.] "Get back to camp," she half ordered. "You're going to get yourself killed!"
[ooc:] I know! ^^ That's why Shatteredfang lost her tail, and Birchshadow died almost instantly. It broke her neck.... :'[╚══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:56 am
BONES [Bones screeched in pain. His throat getting sore due to screeching and yowling. How did the gray toms bones not break? Maybe they were about to. He just had to run a little. Bones got away from Shatteredfang and Darkshadow and ran a little.]"Catch me if you can, you lazy old cat!"
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:05 am
DARKSHADOW Do you hear me?
I'm talking to you.
Across the water.
Across the deep, blue, ocean.
Under the open sky.
Oh my, oh baby I'm trying. "I don't want you getting hurt. Or the kits."[He looked at Shatteredfang with sincere eyes. But after being called an old lazy cat flames burned in his eyes.]"Who are you to call me old and lazy."[He snarled at the white tom. Darkshadow chased after him. Suddenly, his back leg snapped. The pain in his leg worse then ever. Darkshadow yowled and collapsed to the ground.]
I hear you, in my dreams.
I feel your whisper, across the sea.
I keep you with me, in my heart.
You make it easier when life gets hard
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:14 am
BONES [Bones laughed at the tom.]"Yeah, you so aren't lazy."[He said sarcastically. Bones ran off out of Nightlcan territory. Heading towards the boarder.]
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:51 am
Ƨнαттɛяɛ∂ғαиɢ
Ɯαяяισя╔══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗
"These kits will also need a father!" she growled after him. [She started after Darkshadow and Bones, but froze as she heard a sickening crack, and Darkshadow yowl. She hissed a few loud curses, padding toward him.] "Now look what you've done, you arrogant loon!" She growled unintentionally, before taking Darkshadow by the scruff. "Nowh, we knemd do go bacsh mtoo camphhhhh." (Now, we need to go go back to camp), she growled around his scruff.
]She tried to pull him toward camp, but he would barely budge. She snarled another curse, letting go. She padded to examine his leg. It was bleeding profusely.
She sighed.] "I'm going to have to try to set this, and you'll have to go to camp by yourself," she meowed quickly. She sighed, grabbing ahold of both sides of the break. She took the rest of his leg in her teeth, and jerked her head to the side. It moved slightly, but didn't set. She hissed another curse.] "Try to go back to camp," she meowed, setting off after Bones' scent. [She felt heavier, and that made her slower.]
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:02 pm
DARKSHADOW
Do you hear me?
I'm talking to you.
Across the water.
Across the deep, blue, ocean.
Under the open sky.
Oh my, oh baby I'm trying.
"Shatteredfang! It's no use he ran away. He just wants to kill."[He yelled to her, hoping he could hear. He got up on three of his legs and started to walk back to camp. His blood making a trail every step he took.]"Stupid rogue. Broke my back leg.."[He muttered to himself.]
I hear you, in my dreams.
I feel your whisper, across the sea.
I keep you with me, in my heart.
You make it easier when life gets hard
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:28 pm
[Blackflame lashed out her tail.]"Well i'm not afraid to follow that cat that wants to kill."[hissed Blackflame, the she-cast had to much pride to admit anthing, ecept this. She slowly padded after Bones, not a bit of fear shone in her.]
(Oh yea,I can't spell ecept, XD)
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:49 pm
Thistleclaw [Blackflame lashed out her tail.]"Well i'm not afraid to follow that cat that wants to kill."[hissed Blackflame, the she-cast had to much pride to admit anthing, ecept this. She slowly padded after Bones, not a bit of fear shone in her.] (Oh yea,I can't spell ecept, XD) ((Psst. It's spelled except. wink ))
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