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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:51 pm


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Rook 'Riichi' Ryuujin
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Rook was walking safely through the Flame village. The space crabs didn’t bother him, as he didn’t bother with them. He was one individual and had no power against them. He was fresh out of the academy, and was well on his way to learn many more jutsus. The one thing he just learned was his clan’s one jutsu. He was from a clan who didn’t have more than one jutsu, but this jutsu could be powerful enough to wipe out an entire village. He breath out, his hands in his pockets. He was looking ahead, seeing a space crab, and soon his usual smirk was wiped off his face. He simply stared at it, and with the staring, the crab sensed someone was looking at it and quickly turned around. The crab made eye contact with Rook, and soon his red eyes were piercing into its’ soul, and the crab became intimidated. Rook smirked, as the crab began to shift uneasy. The dark aura that Rook carried around quickly took effect on the one fearful crab. The young Ryuujin took a step towards the creature, which resulted in it turning and walking away. Rook laughed before his smirk turned into a smile. He felt powerful and loved the feeling. He continued his way to the training grounds, scaring crabs as he went, and saw they had yet to invade the training area. Rook took his hands out of his pocket, his shaggy black hair waving in the wind. His red streak turned to fire when the sun hit it at just the right angle. The newly graduated shinobi made some hand signs and quickly, his image was copied and appeared in a puff of smoke. The smoke cleared and another Rook stepped out. His hands were in his pockets, his cloak was long and filled with the usual chains, his hair swayed in the wind. He just looked the exact same as the original. The two smirked at each other, before the clone pointed to a piece of hair that stood out on top of Rook’s head. Rook’s smirk changed to a look of confusion, before he raised an eyebrow. The clone laughed, and shook his head.

"Your hair looks stupid today." The clone said. The thing about Rook’s clone is that they seemed to think they were en entirely different person and acted as if they were. But they still held the properties of the clone jutsu, as well as having their own personality. Some people found it strange, but Rook found it great that the clones were able to find themselves another identity than just stealing his. Rook looked at his clone, before lifting up his right hand and pointing to the clone’s face.

"Your face looks stupid today." The original said back to the clone. The clone frowned, before the usual taunting smirk was back on his face. He took a step back, and raised his fist to the original. He looked ready for battle, and let of this deadly vibe. Rook smirked, before throwing out his arms, his long jacket flowing with the movement, and leaned back a bit.

"Come at me, bro!"Rook exclaimed while the clone began to laugh his a** off, and Rook couldn’t help but chuckle. He just insulted his clone and happily took an insult from him. The young Ryuujin looked at his clone before moving to the side of the clearing that was also known as the training grounds. The two face each other, their laughter dying down, and the usual smirk was plastered on their faces. Their hands rested at their sides, and Rook was going through a list of jutsus that were open for him to try and learn, and there was a lot. Rook smirked and went on to the first one he thought would be fun and easy to learn and could be useful all in one. Then a jutsu came to mind. He smirked and began to preform hand signs yet again. He was only using the hand signs he could guess that meant the jutsu he wanted to learn. He only hoped he got the jutsu right. Sure enough, he was dead wrong. A bit of flamed began to accumulate under his right foot. The flames suddenly shot Rook forward and into a tree. Rook’s chin met the rough bark and he bit his tongue. A awful sound of something cracking was heard when Rook met the tree, and sure enough, the impact knocked a branch loose and slammed down on Rook. The poor young male layed limp under the fair big sized branch, and he continued to lay there. The flames under hi foot was burned out instantly, and his jutsu failed. He sighed, before rolling both the branch and him over. His clone could be heard laughing in the background. Rook finally got the branch off him and he sat up and quickly glared at his clone. The clone was holding onto his stomach, laughing his guts out while trying so desperately to stay standing on his feet. He gasped for breath and wiped away a tear. The original was making his way back to the clone, and finally stood next to him. Rook held a dark and rather evil looking smirk. The clone’s laughter was dying down, but the occasional chuckles were heard. Rook grabbed onto the clone’s hands, and began to make hand signs with it. On instinct, the clone began to concentrate on the hand signs, and soon, a red glow was seen under the clone’s left foot. Rook channeled his chakra into the clone to preform the jutsu, and soon enough, the same flames were seen under. The clone frowned when it saw what Rook was doing. It wasn’t log till the clone was sent shooting across the field and into a bush. The clone let out a howl of pain, before a puff of smoke was scene. Rook doubled over, holding onto his stomach and trying to grasp breath. His lungs burned with the lack of oxygen, his clothing was getting dirty, and he was growing weaker from all the laughing. After a few minutes, the laughing Ryuujin calmed down, and sat on the ground smiling from ear to ear. He stood up and brushed himself off, before conjuring another clone. The clone didn’t look too happy. Rook smiled at it, before raising a hand.

"What happened back there? Did the bush attack you?" He asked in the usual I-don’t-care tone. The clone had his arms crossed, in the deadly red eyed glare, his hair covering his face, and finally the intimidating dark aura. Rook waited patiently for an answer, and let the clone glare his head off. The clone breathed a sigh before looking at his creator.
 
"The bush didn’t ‘Attack’" he added air quotes with his fingers "It was more like ‘Oh, look. Someone who’s gonna fall on me. Let’s magically grow thorns just so I can stab him in the butt.’ sort of thing." The clone said sarcastically, making his voice sound overly sweet when imitating the bush’s voice. Rook on the other hand, smiled when he heard this. The clone raised an eyebrow.

"What? No apology?" It asked. Rook smirked.

"Why should I apologized for something you deserved?" He answered back. The clone wasn’t mused in the least. "At least we know what not to do." Rook said, looking on the bright side. The clone sighed, knowing getting Rook to apologize was a lost argument. The clone sighed again, before getting Rook’s attention back to the task at hand. The two quickly were back on track, looking at one another, and preforming the hand signs they could remember. Rook quietly muttered the names of the hand signs, as the clone copied him completely. The young Ryuujin sighed as he felt his inner most heat began to boil up to the surface of his skin, and quickly begin to spread throughout his body. He grinned as the clone let out a sigh. Rook closed his eyes and began to picture the flames burning across a field, making everything turn black with sickness and death. He smirked as he knew he was going to get this jutsu down. Rook opened his eyes, and saw his clone was dong the same. The clone was concentrating on his inner fire, and wasn’t doing so well. Rook looked down, before forcing the burning sensation down to his feet, and soon his feet were glowing the intensity of the fire. His clone watched him, and mirrored his moves, and quickly grasped the concept of it. Rook waited till his clone’s feet glowed, and smiled when they did. They looked at each other and grinned, before placing their right hands on their hips.

"Flame glide, complete!" They both exclaimed while walking towards each other. But Rook and the clone, not knowing the actual background and intentions of the jutsu, shot forward and both let out a yelp of surprise. After a few seconds of panic and terror, they collided and went tumbling to the ground. Their limbs were tangled and they rolled on the ground. They both groaned while trying to untangle themselves. Rook placed his hand on his forehead, from where their heads met. The clone let out a laugh, before Rook ruptured into a fit of laughter. After the two calmed down from the laughter, Rook quickly undid the jutsu and the clone disappeared in a puff of white smoke. Rook propped himself up on his hands, and looked at the sky. The sun filtered down and began to warm him, the sun’s rays made him light skin glow. His body began to take in the warmth of the sun and hid it deep in his body. Once the kid was up on his feet, he looked himself over, and brushed off all the dirt and other things that clung to his clothing. Once again, he walked to the side of the clearing he was one before, and got back into a the ready position. His hands danced into the form of the hand signs again. His body began to heat up again, and soon his feet began to glow again. He laughed as he felt the nice warm tingle of his familiar element. His feet glowed, and he smiled to himself. Rook crouched down, and pushed off with his foot. He went shooting into the clearing, as if on roller blades, and began to preform tricks. He jumped onto a tree, before skidding to a stop on the highest branch, only to twist in a 360, and began to plummet down to the ground. He smirked as he saw the ground was coming to meet him head on. Once he was close enough, he placed his hand on the ground, tucked in and rolled into a somersault He got right back up and went on with his game of playing around. He laughed as he felt the win in his hair, and smirked when he performed tricks. He just finished a trick, and was simply skating around. He wasn’t paying attention to where he was going, and his front met the hard bark of a big tree dead on. He let out a puff of breath, and quickly slid down it’s trunk. The young Ryuujin wasn’t happy about getting shown up by a tree, so he stood up, glared at the tree, placed his hands in his pockets, and began to pace back to his original position on the other side of the clearing. Normally people would forgive the tree and go on with whatever it was they were doing, but not this Ryuujin. Rook walked to the side of the clearing, and stared at the tree. He wasn’t an idiot, he just preferred to get revenge on anything in his way or made him look like a fool. His stare turned to a glare, and soon he turned away. He began to go down the list of jutsus be could use against this tree to show it who was boss. Rook could remember a jutsu he could learn from a scroll he had at home. Something to do with flames going into the ground to create pillars of fire? He smirked, and turned back. His hands slowly raised into the hand sign for fire, and his hands slowly formed other, into an array of smooth movement. Once all the hand signs were made, the young boy felt his chest begin to warm, he felt the burning begin to wield up and slowly began to gather into a small point in his body. It gathered above his heart, and somewhat burned his lungs. He inhaled a deep breath, then quickly began to disperse it towards the ground. The flames were then spread over the ground around him, as it looked like he was basking in flames, and the flames died down, and soon they seemed to be sucked into the ground. The boy smiled, before looking at the tree that seemed to be taunting him. His red eyes were narrowed into a glare and he couldn’t help but want to beat the crap out of it for making a fool of him. But he guess the tree couldn’t help it if he was an easy target. He lifted up his hand slowly, his cloak flowing out with the movement. The clearing got warm all of a sudden, and soon it shook slightly. The young Ryuujin felt in power and totally at peace as the ground was ripped apart and the glowing red, oranges and yellows ruptured into the clearing, forming large flame looking pillars. Rook raised the other, as the flame pillars began to slowly begin to come closer and closer to the tree that pissed off the angry teen. The ground below was becoming more and more unstable with all the fire ripping it apart, the tree was becoming more and more of a target. Rook smirked evilly, as he stopped and let his hands drop to his side, everything went quiet. The wind blew lightly, and the sun shone brightly. Rook continued to leer at the tree, before raising both his hands at once. Soon enough, more pillars full of flames reached up around the tree, dragging it out of the ground, burning it's roots, and completely burning it. The tree was lifted up into the air, it's leaves burning in no time flat, the dirt was becoming nothing, while the branches were aglow, and were slowly loosing their length. The tree was a big mass of fire, and Rook felt wonderful about lighting it on fire. He sighed as the tree landed on the ground, part of it flying everywhere and scattering along the ripped up earth. He smirked and continued to look around at all the other trees. It was clear this tree was out of commission. Rook smirked and was satisfied that his revenge had been successful and was even more impressed that he was able to learn yet another jutsu. The young Pyro turned on his heels, his cloak swaying dramatically behind him, and soon was making his way back into town. He was a bit tired from the small training session, but he was also hungry. He smirked as he saw something was going on ahead. It seemed like a lot of people were gathered around a single point. There was lots of shouting and lots of rushing around. There was something in the middle, looking a lot like a fight. Rook always enjoyed a good fight, and enjoyed watching it even more. He silently strolled up to the crowded people, and walked around, before pushing his way past people to see what was going on. Inside the circle of people, he saw two men were fighting. One looked small and frail, while the other guy was well over 200 pounds. Rook was sort of impressed that the little guy actually decided fight, let alone was winning. He crossed his arms as he felt more people press against his back. He growled in annoyance as some of the people backed off from him, disturbed by his aura. He smirked at them over his shoulder, as they back off even more. The smaller man dodged a punch from the much larger man, and Rook began to calculate the chances of this small man being victorious. Rook sighed, seeing no other way then breaking some rules and bringing weapons into the fight. He watched them wrestle and beat the crap out of each other, while people around him scream out instructions, insulted them, screamed in excitement. Rook normally would have though that standing around watching other duke it out was lame, or even selfish, but he was doing that. He was about to turn and go to a shop he knew had good service and had the best food in town. He knew the owner and occasionally was given free food. He frowned as he saw the bigger man bring out a kunai and a chain with a heavy looking spike ball out of what seemed to be his butt. Rook raised an eyebrow, before seeing people around the circle back away. He stood where he was, as it seemed he had joined the fight. The smaller man looked rather scared and feared for his life. The young boy didn't like to play dirty, but he also didn't like to be defeated in battle. His frown soon turned into a smirk. The bigger man began to swirl the spike ball around, Rook hearing small gasps as people began to back away. He clenched onto his cloak's sleeve, wanting to jump in a kick some tail. A scream could be heard as he looked to the side, seeing some more of the space crabs began to tear at the area everyone was in. What stupid, inconsiderate creatures they were, not even allowing for the fight to come to a close. Rook quickly came to the conclusion that the smaller man would be the one to die first, and the bigger man would defiantly come out victorious. But Rook could also get involved and help the more frail of the two. The crabs began to lash out at people, sending them flying in all directions, their pincers were clamping down on people, instantly cutting them in half. As much as Rook liked to see useless people fall, he also felt they didn't have to die. He glared at any crab that so much as glanced in his direction, and quickly went back to the two men fighting. They didn't seemed fazed by the sudden assault against the village, and were more focused on each other. Rook quietly walked around their range of attack, and watched with a slight thinking face. The fat guy swung the large spike ball and the smaller man quickly dodged to the left, just barely being missed. Rook almost laughed at how pathetic it all seemed. Here were two large men who seemed to be getting along great, but then something happened and they were at each other's throat. Rook quickly jumped into action and grabbed onto the chain of the spike ball, and pulled on it. The big man let out a yelp of surprise, as he flopped back on his back. He looked up at Rook, before glaring at him. Rook narrowed his menacing red eyes, and his dark smirk slowly shone on his face. The smaller man took this as a sign to run, and quickly took off. But like Rook had predicted, he was fast, he was down the street before the fatter man could look up. Once the man had taken in all that had happen, he looked up at the younger male, obviously furious.

"Hey, dip! You let him get away! This is my fight and my fight only!" The man screeched out loudly, before jerking himself onto his feet. The man turned towards Rook, before taking a step closer to the male. He tightened his grip on the chain, and pulled outwards making the chain make this snapping noise. Rook's smirk grew as he knew he was in for a good fight. The man glared, and lunged forward. "But you JUST DRAGGED YOURSELF INTO THIS!!!" The man howled loud enough for even the space crabs to stop in their tracks of killing people and turned to take in the scene before them. Rook on the other hand, didn't so much as weaver as the man was charging at him. The young boy waited for the last moment to dodge to the left, and stuck out his foot, tripping the man flat on his face. A few chuckles and squeaks could be heard from the crowd of people and crabs. Rook looked around to see even the crabs had gathered around to observe them. The red striped boy simply blew them off, before looking down at the man who was struggling to get back up. Rook lifted his foot and clamped it down on the man's back, making his face meet the ground again. A wail of pain could be heard by the man, and Rook didn't care at all. The man rolled over, grabbing onto Rook's foot. The man ripped the boy's foot out from under him and wrestled him to the ground. The man slammed down on the boy's chest, causing the wind to be knocked out of the poor boy who was getting crushed. The boy gasped and heaved as his lungs began to burn for air, and struggled against the weight that was on him. Rook let out a battle cry, before reaching out to his inner fire, and began to focus all he could on the surface of his skin. He huffed and quickly soon became aware of what was happening to him. He could feel the heat, and soon enough, so could the man on top of him. Rook opened his eyes to see his whole body was on fire, the red, oranges and yellows were dancing upon his body, gracing on the man. The man quickly realized his mistake and quickly rolled off Rook. The boy stood up, the flames still dancing around him. He looked at the man, before smirking. The flames died down, as Rook simply waved his arm and the flames went out completely. The man glared more, before clutching onto his arm. It would seem that Rook had injured the poor man, but something inside Rook felt great about hurting this man. The pyro stood tall and proud, waiting for the man to make his next move. Rook crossed his arms, his smirk not once leaving his face. The Ryuujin laughed as someone yelled out to finish him off. The man got up, and glared a hateful glare at Rook, this on encouraged the pyro to hurt him even more. The man grabbed the chain, snapped it threateningly, and began to slowly walk over to the boy before him. Rook was calm and cool as a pickle, while the man was furious and couldn't hold the anger ff his face. The man began to swing the spike ball over his head, and soon the chain and ball made a whooshing sound. Rook continued with his calm, taunting manner. The man finally ripped the spike ball and chain down on Rook's head, only to have Rook dodge to the left. He smirked and continued with his counter attack. The chain just missed Rook, and was being held just above his shoulder. The young Ryuujin lifted his hand up and gripped onto the chain, before focusing his chakra into the chain. He focused some more, but didn't notice the man had snuck up behind him and wrapped a bit of the chain around his neck. Rook gasped and brought his free hand up to the chain, trying to get it loose enough to breath. The man smirked and began to whisper things into Rook's ear. But the young boy had a different idea in mind. He divided his focus into two area. His right hand that was placed on the chain, and his foot. His foot began to glow, much like before and the Flame Glide technique, but this time, it was soldering hot. The man noticed something was wrong when Rook didn't struggle much. He blinked and opened his mouth to ask the young boy why he was so quiet, but soon got his answer as Rook brought the hot foot down onto the man's foot. The man gasped at the heated foot met his, for he was wearing sandals. Not the best foot wear, but it seemed the man didn't care most of the time. The man's foot was then mounted to the ground for a short amount of time. The man let out a loud scream of pain, as the crowd of people and crabs cringed. The man began to cry out for help, or something to help him ease the pain, but Rook wasn't even done yet. He focused the rest of his attention to his hand, and not before long, the chain began to turn red. The chain was dropped to the ground by the man, and Rook picked it up where it had turned red. The dark individual grabbed it, before looking at it. He smirked again, and turned to the man.

"Maybe next time you should pick on people your own size. It's sort of pathetic to pull a b***h move like that." Rook said throwing the chain in the air and catching it again. He did this a few more times, and hear a few girls from the crowd swoon and sigh, as if they were in a fairytale. The boy didn't pay much attention to them, and continued at the task at hand. He held out both his hand in fists, both sides of the fist touched, as the chain was clenched between his fists. The dark aura around him began to intensify, soon everyone would feel a bit on edge. Rook laughed before pulling his fists apart and running them along the chain. As the chain slipped through his fists, The chain quickly began to turn red, and soon enough, it was glowing a bright shade of orange. Rook began to spin it over his head, and watched as the man began to struggle against the ground, trying so hard to get his foot out of the hold. Rook laughed, and quickly brought the chain down. It acted much like a whip, lashing out at the man, making a sizzle noise as it hit his flesh. The man let out wails of pain and screams of agony. Rook lashed him a few more times, before letting the chain fall to Rook's side.

"Have we learned our lesson yet?" He asked in a dark tone. He smiled evilly at the man, who quickly got on his knees and began to apologize for his actions and began to babble about not wanting to die. The boy simply looked down at him, and smiled a bit. He couldn't help but laugh at the situation. Rook dropped the chain by the man's knees, which burned him a bit, and turned away from him, his smirk still present on his face. The young boy laughed as he looked over his shoulder.

"Make sure you remember it. Or else I might need to give some...reeducation." He said and winked. There were gasps and more swooning from the crowd, and the man began to thank Rook for his generosity. But the boy was beind far from fair. He was letting this man live, who would more or less hurt more people for his own gain, kill simply because he felt like, make people fear him so no one would appose him. Rook smirked, knowing he was the exact same way. But he didn't really need to try and scare people, he just developed a strange dark aura that told people to keep their distance. He didn't mind it at all, he thought people were both stupid and desirable at the same time. He was lucky to be one of the few people who weren't trapped in their webs of distortion. The boy walked past girls who drooled over him, men who glared because of jealousy, crabs who feared they too might end up like him. He smirked, putting his hands into his pockets, and continuing to walk away. He began to head for a stop in a tree, where he would sit and think about the world. But before he did that, he began to venture off to his favorite restaurant. He soon came to a curry stand, and ordered a small bite to eat. He waited for his order to be finished, and laughed when the man said it wouldn't be ready for a few minutes. Rook reassured the man he was OK to wait, and was hardly the person that would attack for something so small. The man nodded and went back to making the curry. After waiting a few moments, Rook felt something bump into his back, and upon looking over his shoulder, he saw a girl who had watched him fight had tripped and used him as support. He smirked at her, while she looked up at him. Upon seeing he was her support, she quickly let go, blushed and began to stutter an apology. Rook reassured her it wasn't worth the apology, and turned to her fully. She nodded, before asking him why he stepped in. Rook didn't falter at the question, but looked at the man as he held out a package of curry. He thanked the man, and paid him. Soon, Rook began walking down the path. Without knowing it, the girl began to follow him. He ventured down the streets of the Flame village, and greeted villagers as they spoke of his great fire wielding skills, and commented on the man he had left half dead. He stopped and looked over his shoulder, looking at a tree.

"You can come out now." Rook said. His right hand in his pocket, his left hand carrying the package of curry. The girl blushed and walked around the tree. Rook tilted his head, before giving her a cute confused look. "So what is it you want? Oh, I know. You want my auto-graph. That's sweet, but I don't do the paparazzi thing, sorry honey." He said in a rather flirtatious voice. The girl's blush deepened, as she shook her head. Rook placed his right hand on his hip and waited for her to say something. The girl shuffled uncomfortably, and continued to stay silent. The boy was beginning to become bored and rather annoyed with the hesitation. The girl finally took a step towards his, despite the fear she held for Rook's dark aura and manner.

"U-Ummmmm...I just wanted to...ask something." The girl stuttered. Rook raised an eyebrow, before turned to walk away, The girl took another step, and then jogged to his side. The young boy continued to walk, and didn't pay much attention to her. The girl walked next to him, and stumbled a bit when Rook took a sharp turn into the forest. She looked at him, watching him begin to fade in the darkness of the forest. She followed, and looked around, clearly on high alert. Rook walked to a tree, before reaching and grabbing onto a low branch, he threw himself into the air, before grabbing onto a branch higher up and slowly made his way up to the top of the tree. The girl watched and gasped as he kept getting higher and higher. She stayed near the bottom of the tree, and simply watched as the dangerous looking male got near the top. He layed back on a branch, and put his arms behind his head and closed his eyes. The sun beamed down on his perfectly, and his body was beginning to warm with the familiar tingling sensation. He didn't open his eyes as he addressed the girl.

"Go ahead and ask." He said in a monotone voice. The girl looked up and became timid again, before wondering if she should really ask. She sighed, before looking up at Rook with round fearful eyes.

"What's your out take on the world?" She asked as if it was the most important thing in the world. Rook didn't so much as blink. He sighed, and opened his eyes, looking at the sky. He laughed at her questions, while she flinched, thinking she must have been stupid for asking such a thing. Rook thought the same. He let out a low growl, before rolling over and looking at the girl. He placed his hand on the side of his head, and rested his arm against the branch. His red eyes looked her over, before piercing into her soul. She gasped as she realized he could kill her at any given moment. He smirked, before replying in a complex way.

"This world can be so cruel -
Go the wrong way, and look like a fool.
Some things, so hard to understand,
Ugly occurrences in such a beautiful land.

We destroy ourselves every single day,
Destroying our world, destroying our way.
We go through life feeling almost blind,
Such a long travel, often nothing to find.

Some become no one, some become great,
Some with such love, some have anger and hate.
How can we be so different, and also the same?
We all have secrets of tragedy and shame.

Our reason for life seems so dense.
We search for answers so we can make sense.
If we're all here for a reason, we want to know why,
Something we may never know, before we die.

If the world actually revolved for you and me,
How would we know, shouldn't we see?"
He answered in a riddle. He smirked as he saw the confused look pass along the girl's face. He stood up, his shadow casting along the ground and falling on the young girl. He smirked, and waved with two fingers. The girl looked at him, with a look of utter confusion. Rook jumped off the branch, before making hand signs, quietly muttering the names, and soon felt the heat again. He smirked, loving the tingling sensation, and focused it all to his back. He was quickly approaching the hard earth below, and he was slightly becoming a bit panicked. He began to focus more, hoping somehow it would work all of a sudden. As he neared the earth, he heard a scream from the girl, as if her scream would help him. He felt like he wanted to spit out a massive ball of fire, so he went with alternate plan. He took a deep breath in and blew it towards the ground. He saw the ball of fire form in front of him, and quickly covered his face from the fire. He was jerked to a stop all of a sudden, and soon enough, he knew why. He smirked, and flared out his arms, the heat rising to much higher degrees, and soon he felt his back on fire. The wind caught something and forced Rook upwards. He gasped slightly as he was raised up higher than the tree, and was in the air above the village and trees. He looked over his shoulder, seeing large magnificent fire wings gracing upon his back. The light of the wings radiated off his face, and his smirk returned. He wondered if he could control them, and began to filter a small amount of chakra into them, if only to control them. The wings on his flapped and he was pushed once again into the air. He looked at the sky, and laughed as he could feel the sun's rays becoming more and more hotter. He smiled, and continued to have fun in the air. He flapped his wings, before wrapping them around himself. He plummeted towards the ground, he could feel the wind rushing through his hair, he could feel the wind whisper in his hair, and if felt magnificent. He smirked, and flared out the wings at the last second, and began to scale into the sky again. He didn't know anything like this was possible, and therefor he was happy to have discovered this jutsu. He might not have been the original one to discover it, but in that one moment of not knowing what to do, he thought he did a good job in getting a leveled head and preforming the jutsu. He soared into the air, and began to twist, loop, dash forward, and simply enjoy the feel of having the wind to his face. Something caught his eye as it sparkled in the forest, and directed his course to the source of the sparkle. He plummeted towards the earth and smiled, hoping to make a clear landing. But instead of what he had been hoping for, he came a little too close and rammed himself right into the tree were the sparkle came from. The tree was knocked back a bit, as it's foots couldn't support it from the impact. Rook slid down the trunk, and soon placed his hand over his nose, cursing loudly. He growled, before looking at the tree. Something was familiar about the tree, but he didn't give it a second thought. He walked around the tree, and began to look around for the source of what had caught his attention. He placed his hands on the bark, and began to get bored and a bit frustrated on what he was suppose to find. He had no idea where to search, and where he shouldn't search. He was about to leave, when he saw the sparkle from the side of the tree. He walked closer, and soon saw something metal poking out. He looked at it closely, as it seemed to the tip of a weapon. He smirked as he remember what it was. It was his scythe that he had hid in the tree before someone could take it from him. People in the Flame often tried to steal it, for it was one of the best scythes in good conditions. He tried to take good care of it, cleaning the blade daily, keeping it within an arm's reach when he had it with him. He smirked, before he began to preform hand signs. He stood back from the tree, before looking at it with a smirk. Much like the other tree, he was going to put it out of commission just like the other tree that had made a fool of him. He brought his fits up, before dashing at the tree, He thrust out his fist, as it lit on fire and quickly made a large indent on the bark, as well as a burn was left. He smirked, liking the new form of taijutsu. He quickly went into a full out taijusu attack and kept beating the tree much like the large log in the training grounds. The tree was hit so many times that the tree was soon set on fire, just like the other tree. He smirked and looked to the side. He figured there must be something worth all the tree beating. The tree broke under all the plumbing it was taking, and soon the bark around the weapon had been burned away. Rook stood back, the flames from his fist and feet disappeared. He slowly took the scythe out of the grasp of the tree, and ran his hand over the flat side of the blade, it needed to be sharped and cleaned again. The scythe was made with lots of blades around the much larger blade. The scythe had a total of three blades, the top one was larger than the two under neath it, and much more lethal. The scythe was attached to a odd chain like thing that was normally hanging around Rook's waist. The boy smiled at it, before attaching the chain around his body and the scythe, making it fit just right around the body of it. He loved the scythe, and he fought roughly with it. He looked at the tree, watched it burn for a few more minutes, before turning and making his way back to the training grounds. He walked, and hear the bird chirp and forest animals trying to get away from the space crab attack. A few crabs could be seen wondering around the forest trying to look for someone to kill, someone to sink their claws into. He shook his head as a few of them popped out of a bush, turned to him, realized who they were up against, and quickly scurried off. He smirked, and place his hands back into his pockets. He felt complete with the large heavy piece of metal on his back. He felt content and hoped nothing was going to attack him. Actually, he sort of hoped something attacked him, it would make for an interesting battle. The forest was in turmoil, but Rook didn't pay any attention to it. As long as those strange crab creatures didn't barf up water on him, he was OK with it all. He finally reached the training grounds and wondered what jutsu he should learn next. He wondered what it would be like to have a clone MADE of fire. He smirked, before he began to think of what the ethics behind this theory would be. He raised his hands out of his pockets, and began to make hand signs. He once again focused on the fire he loved so much, and began to realize he was far more happier in the most hottest of places. He quickly saw the fire within him began to become visible as fire seemed to materialize in front of him. He gazed at it for a moment, before realizing something was stepping out of the flames. The person who seemed to be walking out of the flames was him. He done it, he made a clone out of fire. The clone smirked at him, every detail was the same as the original standing only meters away. He smirked back, before raising his hand into the air for a high five. The clone did the same and continued to copy the original's actions. The clone laughed at Rook's completely astonished face. He couldn't help but love the way the clone's hands were heated, almost as if he WAS the fire. Rook looked the clone over. His hair was the exact same black shade, his red stripe was on the same strands of hair, his red eyes were the same crimson color, his lean and strong build was the same, his posture was straight and powerful looking, his gestures were the same. The only difference between the two were the clone admitted more heat than the original. Rook though this might come in handy when needed, and would more or less throw off everyone. He smiled to himself, before looking around, thinking of another jutsus he could learn. Both Rook's looked at each other before reaching up and taking their scythes off their back and held it in their hands. They smirked at each other, before positioning themselves of each side of the clearing. The two gripped onto their scythes, before raising it high above their heads. Rook began to twirl his scythe around in a large circle and soon thrusted it upwards into the air. It spun around, and began to glow red. Rook preformed some hand signs, and as his scythe came down again, he grabbed onto it, the red becoming more and more visible. He smirked, before looking at the clone. The clone was going to be there to destroy the jutsus in case Rook couldn't handle it on his own. The scythe was twisted around more, as the blade began to glow ever more, soon turning a brighter red. Rook smirked, and continued on with the jutsu. The blade became so hot, that flames began to blaze off it, and soon, because it was spinning so fast, the flames began to become a huge vortex of flames. The flames got hotter and bigger, as the jutsu became more and more stronger. The scythe was spinning faster and fast, as Rook let out a battle cry, he unleashed all the power towards the clone. The clone let out a yelp as it saw it was heading straight for him. Rook held out his hand, and began to direct the vortex of burning flames after his clone. The clone jumped into the air, successfully avoiding the mass of flames. The vortex continued on for a bit, till Rook closed his hand and pulled it back, making it lunge for the clone again. Rook smirked as he was in control of something so destructive and powerful. The clone looked over his shoulder, seeing the vortex was rushing at him again. But he didn't have enough time to avoid it and ended up getting hit head on by it. The clone gasped and soon a large explosion was made from the clone's destruction. To Rook's displeasure, the explosion disrupted the flaming vortex, which cancelled out everything else. Rook frowned, and continued on with her learning and teachings. He was happy about this new jutsu, it should serve him well in fight that sill had to come. He smirked, and placed his hands back into his pockets. He went over to a tree that was un scorched by flames or destruction he had caused, and was even more happy when he finally got to settle down for a bit and eat his lunch. He pulled the package out of his pocket and proceeded to unwrap it. The red curry was onto of rice, and that was just how Rook love it. And for a side, there were two egg rolls and two spring rolls. He began to eat the curry and rice first, as he looked around at all the burns and destruction everywhere. He smirked at it, and continued to eat. The wind was great, cooling down the area, and the sun beamed down, harshly at the forest. He could hear the distant screams of people, he could hear the distant snapping of the crabs. He felt the hot food burn his mouth and throat, but it was the filling bit he loved the most. He continued to eat, and soon he came to the egg rolls and spring rolls. He looked at them with sheer happiness. He stuffed them into his mouth, savoring every chew and swallow. He was in heaven just from the food. The loved egg rolls and spring rolls, he loved them more than fighting, which was really saying something. He quickly began to finish up, before hoping to his feet again. He went straight out to the training grounds, ignoring the fact he just ate. He had his usual smirk on, with his hands stuffed in his pockets. He looked at the side, seeing something was going on, and sure enough, there was a group of crabs at the side of the clearing. It would seem they were challenging him to a fight, and he would gladly accept. They fanned out and began to get into a ready position, and Rook did the same. He took his hands out of his pockets, and held them at his side. The crabs seemed to be a bit intimidated by his shadowed manners, and became a bit skiddish. He laughed and looked at them straight on. The seemed some what determined to get this done and over with, seemingly as if they were going to win this fight. Rook smirked, before bringing his hands up into a hand sign to focus. They took this as a changed to attack, and charged as fast as they could towards him. His smirk widened as he had predicted their moves. He took a step closer, making more hand signs. He took a deep breath in, before holding it for a moment. His head was tilted back slightly, his chest was puffed out, and he was having a a chance to observed what they were doing. He smiled as he saw they were doing nothing much charging and snapping at him. The boy took one last breath through his nose, began to mix his chakra into the air within his chest, the fiery burning sensation present again, and exhaled into a massive ball of fire. Much like the Uchiha's fireball technique, but much more larger and a lot more destructive. Rook smirked, thinking he was stronger than the average Uchiha, and continue on with the assult. The crabs squealed with pain and sounded like they were getting murdered, but the owner of the fire didn't care. He stood back and watched the massive ball of fire engulf the small pack of crabs, but gave a look of confusion when he saw it had shrunk in size and was hurled back at him. He gasped and began to preform hand signs again. He looked around, and began to think stronger and faster, his chakra spreading throughout his body, and soon he was able to dodge it. He was engulf in flames for a few second, before he appeared through it, with only slight singes, less damage than what would have happened. He saw a crab had been waiting on the other side of the fireball, and had raised a claw. The crab slammed it down, hoping to land a blow. But Rook was faster and, because of the jutsu he just preformed, he was able to make a quickly getaway. Once he was at a safe distance, he realized he had just preformed the Innerfire jutsu. He had heard about it, and it seemed to make someone resistant to fire as well as stronger and faster. He looked at his fist and clenched it. He smiled at the crabs, before taking a step towards them. Rook was a bit out of chakra, so he decided he wasn't going to let this drag on any longer than it had to. He smiled before looking at them, and glared slightly. A few of them stiffened, while other glared back. Rook looked deep in their eyes, seeing as they were glaring back at him, as he slowly made more hand signs. His smile turned to a dark smirk, and he began to play with their minds. The crabs soon began to see Rook begin to disappear, and they saw fire begin to form all around them. Upon feeling fear for the devastation element, they began to screech and cry like a crab in boiling water, as they hated fire. The group soon were placed under Rook's genjutsu, Burning Daydream. It was a great thing to use, and it was great for anyone who seemed immune to Rook's dark aura. He watched the crabs wiggle around like a marine creature out of water, excuse the pun. Rook began to work quickly, and preformed more hand signs. The air around Rook became more and more hotter, as the young boy began to envision a large fire made out of entirely flames, and soon, he opened his eyes to see a large ring of fire had indeed surrounded them with fire. Rook smiled, and made a few more rings. The fire rings, Pyro Prison, was able to keep Rook and the crabs in it. And now for the finally blow to the crabs. As Rook continued to scrabble at his brain to remember the jutsus he had read of a scroll, he began to preform more. He could only hope this would happen the way he wanted it too. He took in a deep breath, just like the Great Sphere jutsu he had preformed a while back, he held it in his chest, mixing the chakra together. But instead of flames coming out, Rook had mixed in a smaller amount and considerate it a lot more, a large cloud of burning ash came out of his mouth. It surrounded them all, and was blocked by the Pyro Prison they were all trapped in. But luckily the Inner fire was still in effect and the ashes didn't hurt Rook that much. The ashes lingered in the air, making it harder for them all to breath. Rook watched as the crabs were badly burned and brought out of the Genjutsu, and soon they began to fall lifeless on the ground. Rook smirked, before walking away. He reached the rings of fire, and crushed them with his hand. As he did, the ash still in the air spilled out into the clean air, making a cool effect. Rook smirked, before brushing off any extra ash that had fallen on him. He had done all the learning he needed, and was ready to head some place else. He thought of any other place he might be able to learn any fire related jutsu, and the first village that came to mind was the Volcano village. They had many jutsu there that they could teach him. He laughed before breathing out a large fireball of fire, and walked through it. Just like before, he had these large wings made of fire. He smirked, before taking to the sky. He looked over his back at his scythe, and wondered where he could find a place to sharpen it. He sighed, before looking back at the sky, wondering if there was such a thing as a sky jam. He continued to think about things he could learn as he made his way to the Volcano village.


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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:54 pm


_____________Volcano Village________________



Rook finally arrived at the Volcano village. Halfway to the volcano though, his jutsu's effect wore off and he fell into a rose bush. After entangling himself, he set the bush on fire and watched the roses burn till they were black. After that, he simply walked the rest of the way. The Pyro made it to the village, and walked through the gates. The guards did do much, they just asked who he was. After he identified himself as a traveler, he made his way to the Library. The Library was close by, thankfully, but that didn't stop this Ryuujin from getting into trouble. He heard a scream from up ahead, and saw some man running away from this really frail looking woman. She began to screech about having her purse stolen, and low and behold, the man had a bag in his hand. Rook smirked, and waited for the right moment. His hands rested comfortably in his pockets, and his eyes were shadows by his bangs. He kept his composure, and simply continued walking. After a few minutes, the man was within range. Rook's arm was suddenly thrusted outwards and the man collided with his arm, which threw his head back, but because of his momentum, he crashed to the ground and slid on his back a bit. The young boy couldn't help but smile at the man who was laying flat on the ground by his feet. Rook leaned over the man, and stared him in the eyes. The man opened his eyes and glared at Rook, till Rook glared back, his aura clearing showing to the man. The man on the ground gasped, before getting up and shrinking away from the young boy. He shook and held out the bag to him, as Rook took it and laughed smiled at the man.

"Why, stealing is wrong. Don't let me catch you doing it again." Rook smirked as he let his slightly evil side show. The boy turned to the woman who ran up to him, her hand reached for her chest as she huffed and puffed from running all that way. She puffed for a few moments, as Rook continued to wait. After a few minutes, she gasped and looked at Rook. she held her breath and raised her hand to him, as if to point something out. Rook blinked, before she gasped and continued to pant. Rook raised an eye, his smirk slowly fell off his face, as the woman continued. He crossed his arms in slight annoyance, then he glanced to the man, who then took this as the time to leave and dashed away. The woman finally got her breath back, and looked up at Rook with a smile. She had long orange hair, with big round green eyes. She looked no less then his age. She began to thank him, bowing to him gratefully. He watched her, wondering why she was so bubbly after almost getting her purse stolen.

"Thank you so much, stranger. I didn't think I'd ever get that back." She said and laughed to herself. Rook smiled back, and mirrored her friendliness. He always became more friendly when someone wasn't hostile towards him, or gave off the vibe that they might try and attack them. He nodded to her.

"Your very welcome. I'm Rook, by the way." He said holding out his hand for a hand shake, and his other one with the bag. The girl blushed as his deep, seductive voice. Rook stayed where he was and waited for her to react. She soon held out her hand and grasped the bag, before retuning his hand shake. The girl laughed and smiled brighter. She looked around, seeing many people were looking at them. Rook could see them staring out of the corner of his eyes, but he didn't care much. He bowed respectfully to her, before he said his farewell and began walking down the street. The girl blinked in confused of his sudden leave, and ran after him, calling out his name. She soon caught up to him, and Rook kept his eyes forward.

"I'd feel bad if you didn't get something for your heroic save." The girl said as she walked next to him, and continued to talk the whole way. She gasped a bit, as if she just had a great idea. The girl stopped, and Rook stopped to see what she had to offer him. Soon, she rummaged through her purse and pulled out a scroll. She held it out to Rook, who took it in his hand and looked it over.

"It's a scroll with all the village's jutsu that everyone can learn. I don't have much use for it, cause I already learned them all, but maybe you can put some use to it." The girl said and smiled. She bidded the young Ryuujin a last farewell and went down an alleyway. Rook looked at the woman, was it a coincidence that she just happened to have this scroll? The likelihood of that happening was falling into the single digits. The confused male simply shrugged off the odd feeling and continued his way to the training ground. He was looking the jutsus over, memorizing the hand signs needed and how to preform the jutsu. Some looked promising, while other simply looked like they shouldn't be on the scroll. But because of Rook's nature, he would learn them all, and find a way to use them all. It was just in his nature. He continued on, before looking at the scroll again. His eyes strayed to one jutsu called 'Magma Rising' and Rook knew he had to be in the volcano to learn some of these. He sighed, and ventured towards the volcano. He began to scale the rough stoned mountain, while he began thinking to himself. He was rather bored, so he decided he would talk to a clone. He paused as he made a hand sign, and soon a clone poofed into existence. Both males smirked at each other as they resumed their adventure up the tall mountain like volcano.

"OK, I got a riddle for you. I am the beginning of the end, and the end of time and space. I am essential to creation, and I surround every place. What am I?" Rook asked his clone. The clone blinked as it began to think for a moment. The clone stayed quiet for a few minutes, then looked at the ground. Rook laughed and smiled. "I never knew I was so dumb." He exclaimed.

"Hey!" His clone countered. "God. That's my answer." The clone said. Rook's laughed roared out and echoed off the mountain. He brought his palm up to his forehead as his clone glared Rook's head off.

"It's the letter E, you idiot!" Rook said in between laughs. "End, timE, spacE, Every placE." He explained to the clueless clone. The clone frowned, before looking at the ground. "Here's another one: My life can be measured in hours, I serve by being devoured. Thin, I am quick. Fat, I am slow. Wind is my foe. What am I?" Rook said, trying to confuse his clone again. The clone puffed upwards, his bangs being blown out of his face.

"That one's easy. It's a candle of course." The clone replied. Rook smirked, he knew he was smart at some points. The two kept quizzing each other with riddles, testing how much the other could figure out things outside the box. The two laughed and normal people would think they were crazy, but they were completely fine with it. It was a way to pass the time. Soon, the two walked to the edge of the volcano, and looked into it. There was a small village near the bottom. It seemed more like a clan was living inside the volcano. It didn't seem to have too many members, a few people walking around here and there. They didn't pay much attention to the people around the opening of the volcano. The two looked at each other, before the clone grinned and gave Rook the thumbs up.

"Good luck, man." the clone said and disappeared in a puff of smoke. Rook frowned and looked deep into the volcano. He sat down near the edge, and swung his legs over the side, and got a grip on the side. He laughed as he could feel the rock under his feet tickle him through his shoes. He shifted his weight to his right foot, before sliding down much like a skateboard. He had his right foot out in front of him, and he smiled as he felt the heat become more and more intense. He breathed in the humid air, and soon he came to the village. It seemed to be OK to stand on. The rock the small village was resting on wasn't hot enough to burn someone, but it wasn't something you'd go bare foot on. Rook liked this place already and was beginning to like it there. He was a pyro, and liked anything to do with fire of heat, so this was perfect for someone like him. He gasped as he saw the lava flowing underneath the village. He smirked and put his hands in his pocket. He began to walk around the small village, looking at how all the buildings seemed to be built. He was interested, maybe he might settle down here and learn all their advanced jutsu. It would be fun, but it was also be annoying in some ways. He continued on, till he came to a large open space, seeing this was the small training ground. He sighed, not much room, but he would have to deal with it. The first thing he wanted ot learn was how to walk on lava. This was dangerous and would kill him if he got it wrong. He walked to the side of the training grounds, and looked at the lava that flowed underneath it. He pulled out the scroll again, and looked it over, his eyes not missing a single thing. He wanted to make sure he got it right, and made sure he survived. He sighed and stood up. He began to think about the walking on water technique, and thought of it as a similar jutsus. He smirked, and began to prepare himself. He began to focus on his feet, gathering the hottest chakra he could muster into his feet, and began to try and become one with the lava. Soon enough, it felt like his feet were basking in lava, and for some reason, it didn't hurt at all. He blinked to himself, before calming down and looked at his feet. He closed his eyes again, and slowly lowered himself onto the surface of the lava. Instead of fearing it like many others would do, Rook focused on it's heat through his feet, and soon he felt like he was standing on a hard surface like rock of the dirt. He took a step out, wobbled a bit, and soon leveled out. He opened his eyes to see his feet were on the surface of the lava, his shoes weren't burning, and he wasn't falling in. His expression turned to shock, he was standing on the surface of the Lava, without being burned! He loved it. He began to dance around the surface, earning a few laughs from people who were watching, and soon he was happier than ever. He always loved fire, he always felt one with the strange destructive element, but he was even more physicked to learn how to control the hottest thing known to man. He was ready fro anything, and he was ready to learn more. Once he had his fill on dancing along the surface of the lava, he went back to the side and began to sift through the scroll. Just as he was about to select one, he noticed a few people were making their way over to him. He polity smiled at them, before waving a greeting. His shaggy hair was in a wild mess, but that didn't seemed to bother the four people walking over. Once they stood a little ways away from the Pyro, they smiled at him and muttered a greeting. It seemed like a grandmother, grandfather, granddaughter and grandson. But Rook couldn't be sure when it comes to age of people. The small group smiled at him, before the grandfather began to speak in a rather raspy voice.

"Good evening there, young man. I seen you've come to learn some of the magma jutsus, have you? That's great. We don't see many people here theses days." He said in a cheery manner. The grandson was around six years old, and he trotted over and began to look at Rook's cloak.

"Is this a cape, mister?" The boy asked. Rook looked over his shoulder at the younger boy, and frowned.

"No, it's just my jacket." The sister of the boy ushered him over, for she could see the little boy was annoying him. "Why yes. I do enjoy heat, and what better way to stay warm than keeping close to the hottest thing on earth?" Rook asked. The Grandmother laughed, before nodding.

"Do you have a few minutes, young man? We would like to show you something." She said in an exactly raspy voice. It was the sort of voice that made you cringe from how airy it was, and sort of made people feel uncomfortable, but Rook didn't mind at all. He nodded and greeted them all again, but this time with a hand shake. He smiled down at them as they smiled up at him. He was the tallest of them, for they were mostly short.

"So, what is it you would like to show me?" Rook asked as they began to show Rook into a cave. The group began to maneuver around the cave walls, till they got to the back of the cave. The back of the cave was flat, and looked rather smooth. The only light of the cave was a oil lamp that the young daughter held. Rook looked at the flat wall and saw many pictured were carved in it, and smiled to himself. He gasped as he saw one that looked like someone he knew, but upon looking closer, he saw the differences and dismissed the thoughts of knowing the person engraved on the wall. The pictures began to make scenes, and reminded Rook of Manga. He simrked, as his fingers traced over the pictures, and soon he looked to the side. There was a long poem written on the side. The young Ryuujin tilted his head and walked over to it, and began to trace his fingers over it. He began to read the words.

"In darkness of the night
I spied him in a tree
Sat I froze by the sight
He was looking at me
The summer's heat became a chill
The angel of death at his kill

My heart skipped with the fright
Blinked my eyes to bet'r see
Glanced back with all my might
Parted he my comp'ny
My chest was quickly pounding still
The angel of death at his kill

I did rise and take flight
The fear made me to flee
From darkness into light
To free captivity
Unbinding my soul from his will
The angel of death at his kill

Many years since that night
Gazed I on that braz'n be
Mem'ries of still incite
Fears of my slavery
Existence of him makes me ill
The angel of death at his kill"
This confused the boy to no end, for he didn't know what it meant. He continued on, and began to read something else on another wall. He looked at the picture above it, and saw the picture was of someone's outline, as if the person reading it could place themselves in the picture,

"When death comes
I’ll need not love –
Consumed,
No wreath or dove
Could offer me salvation,
Not when I’m no more.

A weathered stone will bear my name –
Identity of once a being
Living out existence in
A world of risk, and never seeing
Sense of why we’re here.

My genes will die away thro’ child –
Hue of eyes and hair, the way of thought,
Will quickly dim with generation –
Bow to future dominance –
Memories of provenance
Resigned to curious few.

When death comes
I’ll need not grace
Below; no grieving face
Will call my resurrection,
Not when I’m at ground –

Death and I so bound."
It began to make no sense to Rook, so he simply stood away from the wall. He turned to see the other four were still looking at the wall, and sighed as he waited for them to finish. His hands were back in his pockets, but a frown was still present on his face. He sighed as he saw they were not going to be leaving any time soon. He said a farewell that seemed to be ignored, and began back down the cave. He was following the light glow from the lava, and was hoping he wouldn't run into any more trouble or any more uninvited lunatics. But as luck would have it, something always goes wrong. Something reached around Rook's neck and grabbed onto it. He let out a yelp, his hands going to whatever was on his neck on impulse, and quickly grasped it, and threw it as hard as he could. Judging on how much the thing weighed, he guessed it would have to be a human he threw. He pushed himself against the dark walls of the cave and focused on anything that shifted, and soon saw something rushing for the exit. Rook, being somewhat frustrated with this unannounced attack, leaped forward and grabbed onto the back of the person's shirt, wrenched them to the ground, and climbed on top of them. Rook let out a growl and pinned their hands above their head. He looked down and saw the granddaughter of the group, and blinked in confusion. In a flat out second, his postured turned from battle ready to confused teen boy. He tilted his head to the side, and quickly got off her. The girl got up and looked at him.

"I'm sorry. I was just trying to find you to apologize. My family is a bit weird, but my old folks just want to get their story out there. I'm sorry if we disturbed your training. Please, accept this." She said as she held it out to him. It was some sort of plant. He looked at it, then looked back to her. She sighed, before taking his hand and forcing him to take it. "It's just a rare that only grows here. It can get rid of a nasty cold, just in case." She said. Rook nodded and bowed, thanking her. She smiled and turned around and dashed back into the cave with her group. They were defiantly a lively bunch, and weird. He looked to the sides, before continuing to the clearing with the scroll in hand. He walked down the small village, and went back to his original place. He picked out a jutsu he was going to try and learn before the group decided to come and take him away to look at pictures on the side of a cave. He stood there, and filtered his mind of all thoughts, his mind completely going blank. He was focusing on nothing, letting every feeling flow through him, nothing holding him in place. He felt somewhat at peace. He felt himself relax, he felt his body begin to become limp and stable. He sat down and let his hands fall into his lap. He was feeling the heat of the lava from here, and he felt everything was simply fading away. He was becoming more and more chill with each passing moment. His hands slowly raised, and hand signs were formed after a few moments. After that, he went on with the jutsu. Once he was fully relaxed and ready, he began to focus his energy into reaching out to the center of the earth and pulling out the magma from it's very center. Something Rook didn't even know was possible. But Rook didn't care, it was something he was willing to try and risk his life. It had to do with fire and heat, therefor, he wad there. He knew no water jutsu, but that was because of his nature, and mostly because it was the opposite of his element. He sighed as he felt the fire burning deep within him, and soon, just like almost every other jutsu, focused the burning sensation to the palm of his right hand. He slammed it onto the ground, and began to filter more chakra into the jutsu. After first, nothing happened. After a few minutes, nothing happened. It came to the point were Rook began to think something went wrong and he didn't do it right. He sighed and was about to let go when the ground began to shake slightly. He gasped as he realized he had indeed pulled off the powerful jutsu. The lava began to swirl upwards, and soon it began to melt everything it touched, and began to lash out at a lot of things. Rook let out a yell, before rolling out of the way of a large lava tentacle. He blinked, seeing he would need improvement on this jutsu. He smirked, before breaking the jutsu and allowing the lava to go back to it's original spot. He smirked, before looking down the list of jutsus again. He finally saw one that was somewhat like his own Clan's jutsu. This jutsu was to create a dragon out of lava, and Rook was up to the challenge. He looked at the lava and began to channel into it, becoming much like it. He preformed the hand signs, and focused on it as much as he could. He could only hope that last jutsus didn't take too much out of him. The lava began to sway, and soon a small strand of lava began to rise. It didn't satisfy Rook in the least. He began to pour much more chakra into the jutsu, and soon the strand became a big mass of lava. It began to take on the form of a dragon, and much like his Dragon Fury, he could see it too could roar. It was almost the size of the very small village inside of the volcano, which made Rook very happy. The dragon leaped into the air, and headed towards the top of the volcano, and soon, the dragon soared into the night. Rook watched as the dragon flew around for a bit, before Rook got hit with a dizzy spell. It would seem he used up too much of his chakra today. The dragon made it;s way back down to it's summoner, and happily went back into the lava like were it was suppose to be. The young Ryuujin sighed, and leaned back, laying on the floor. He panted for a few minutes, before taking the scroll. He looked at it, and saw a jutsu that was much like his Great sphere jutsu. He smirked, knowing he would be able to pull this off. He layed there for a few more minutes, looking at the dark navy sky, more like back, and watched the stars twinkle. They shined and twinkled, much like small tiny little suns at night. But they were defiantly not bright enough. Then his eyes were casted upon the bright full moon. He sighed and watched it for a few moments. The full moon had many mysteries to it, no one could count them all. He loved the night just as much as he loved heat, light and the sun. He was barely awake when he realized he needed to be training. He shook his head to clear it from many sleep he may have been feeling. He quickly got up, and walked to the side of the training grounds near the lava. He looked over the edge, and smirked at it. He glanced down at the scroll, and began to make the hand signs written down on it. He smirked as he felt the heat begin to center in his chest, and soon he focused on the burning, centering his chakra along with it. He took a deep breath, and quickly held it in for a few moments. He forced all the air out, but instead of air coming out, a long strand of lava began to fly out of his mouth, He twisted his body around as the lava spit twisted and was flung in many direction. This technique could come in real handy. He saw the lava fly everywhere and quickly began to melt some rock that it landed on. The young boy stopped and looked around, seeing the lava was beginning to solidify into rock. He placed his hands in his pockets, his body was hot, and the heat was magnificent to him. He sighed in contentment as he loved the feeling of having his whole body heated. He looked at the lava again, before making simple hand signs. A bit of lava began to rise, and soon something stood on the surface of the lava. The lava melted and shaped into a another version of Rook. The young Ryuujin was amazed that he could now make three types of clones. He smirked, while he clone smirked back. The clone walked to the side, and stood in front of Rook. The original could feel the heat coming off him, as he took a step back.

"Careful, you might burn me to death." He said to his clone. The clone smirked, before nodding and began to turn back into lava. It seemed Rook was a bit out of chakra at the moment, and needed a bit of a break. He panted a bit, and knew he was going to need a bit of a break from this. But sleeping in a volcano wasn't the best idea anyone could have. So he carefully began to scale the volcano, and began to feel like he was getting stronger, way stronger. He was happy with today's results, as he could feel his muscles. He couldn't wait to learn more and simply couldn't help but feel excited for when he was able to win against anyone. He smiled, and quickly went back to scaling the huge mountain of rock. He wish he could have known the story behind all those drawings and words. But he wasn't the brightest person anyone would know. He was just strong and resourceful. Rook wasn't like most people. He didn't rely on emotions to guide him, but he didn't have them and felt them. He only listened to them when he needed to make a decision. He also wasn't one of those kinds of people who tried over and over to get people to love him, he didn't try to get people in bed with him, he was much too young for that sort of thing. He was one of those people who wasn't attracted to people in that way. He surely was an odd individual. I'm pretty sure I just wrote the same thing over and over, just worded differently. Oh well, more points. Rook soon reached the top of the volcano and heaved himself over the edge. He soon layed on the side, and panted with the effort. He was almost out of chakra for the day. He sighed and sat up into a sitting position. He could hear a few muffled voices up ahead, and he crawled to the side of the mountain. He peeked over the edge, and saw two boy around his age seemed to be practicing their jutsu. He smirked, as he pulled the scroll out of his pocket and began to look at it, wanting to see how much they could teach him. One of the boys were taking in a breath, and soon held it. The friend was checking his posture and soon told him to stand up straighter. This amused Rook, as the one preforming the jutsu finally breathed out. But something seemed to have gone wrong and the air he had breathed in was suppose to turn into something else, and man did it ever. Rook figured he was trying to preform was Melting Gas, but the gas seemed to come out more as a liquid. It spewed on the ground, and it began to melt. The friend sighed, as the friend flushed with frustration. The friend began to laugh, and soon he was doubled over laughing so hard. The friend didn't look amused at all, and told the friend he was going back to the village to get something to eat. The friend finally got a hold of himself and quickly went back with his friend. Rook smirked as he knew what they were doing wrong. He slowly watched their shrinking forms as they made their way back to their village. He smiled as he stood up, and looked over the long way down. He hoped he didn't fall, he hoped he didn't have to break bone on the way down. Cause getting down was completely different from going up. The young Ryuujin simply stood where he was, looking up at the moon. He smirked, before preforming more hand signs. He could feel the last of his chakra begin to accumulate in his chest like so many other jutsus he knew. He began to think of a gas, began to focus on the mist of purple he would use so many times to burn people. He closed his eyes, and began to infuse them till they felt nothing more than powder. He focused everything else he had on the surface of his chest, and then began to exhale into the night. The chakra infused air was thrown out into the night, the dark purple mixing with the blackness of the sky, as it was almost invisible. The heat it gave off was great, and the smell was almost repulsive. He could help but smile at himself. Yet another jutsu was learned, and he was drop dead beat from all the training he had just done. He sighed, and then flopped backwards onto the hard surface of the stone. He was laying there for a few minutes,before rolling over onto his sotmach. He was always wondering about thing, always thinking deeper into thing. He began to write his thoughts down, maybe someone would see them and begin to wonder just as he had. He wrote them in the dirt in front of him, and be thought about burning them into the rock. He could leave his mark here, he could do a lot here.

"Someone once said, 'The road to hell is paved with good intentions.'
But it is much more than that, one can go so far as to mention,
That many on that road think they have with God, good relations.'
Have you ever read God's Word and learned of His expectations?
You may think you need a God, but the truth is He don't need you.
While God wants your love that's true, remember one thing He did do
He sentenced satan to death, yes that's right, satan is to die.
And anyone else, who like satan, exalts themselves on high.
God loves and God hates, while it's God's will all come to salvation,
Many who knowing not God's Word, will come to worship satan."
Was now scribbled into the dirt of the volcano. He smirked as he felt himself begin to fall sleep. He was becoming more and more tired with every passing moment. He smirked, before closing his red eyes, and rested his head on his arm. He was content were he was. It was warm, and comforting to him. He fell into a deep sleep in the matter of minutes and didn't make up for anything.


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When the young man did wake up, the sun was filtering down on his now rested body, and it tingled with warmth. Rook loved the feel, for it felt sort of like he was floating. He sighed in contentment, before rolling over completely, covered with dirt, and layed in the sun. The words he had written in the dirt was gone, for the gentle breeze must have whisked it away. He loved were he was at the moment, and decided he wasn't going to move for a while yet. He had learned all he could where he was right now, and he was more than happy to simply lay there all day. But he had to get going. He wondered what village he should go to next. He sighed as the sun was warming his face, his cheeks felt tingling with warmth. He loved the feel. He wondered what other village he could go to. He wanted to know a few things that could possible counter the element he so despised. He began to think of villages around the Flame, and began to think of things they might had for him to learn. The hidden Steel? No. Hidden soul? Nope. Hidden emotion? No. Hidden Love? Defiantly not. Rook shook his head as he stood up. The first thing was to go to a village that knew a lot, and possibly could have a lot of information for him to learn. He slowly got to his feet, the floating feeling he once had was wearing off and he was slowly brought back to the world of the living. He looked down at the village, and frowned. He was hungry, but he wasn't about to venture down all that way just for a bit of food. He sighed, before taking in a deep breath. Upon taking in the deep breath, he began to scale the mountain again. But it wasn't in the direction of the village at the bottom of the volcano, it was towards the Leaf Village. He had heard people talk about people in the Leaf being knowledgeable and strong, so maybe he could learn from them. He didn't care much for formalities. He simply walked as a few rocks crumbed from beneath his feet and tumbled their way down the mountain. He ready for more intense training, and couldn't help but feel pumped for it. Even if Chaos was around, the crabs didn't bother him. And if Rook was going to take over a village when he was older, he was going to need all the power he could get. Rook's hands made his way back into his pockets, and he smirked. But soon, he let out a laugh. He began to think of a village that would be worth taking over, or taking back in one case. The village Hidden in Flames had been taken over by the Swords of the Crescent Moon. At the time, Rook was too young to know what was happening, but he resented them for it now. If anything, he deserved to be the leader of the Flame. He was most capable of taming the flames, he was the most closest thing the Flame had to being a full fledged fire Shinobi. He had what it takes. And he was planning the entire time as he was making his way to the Leaf. A few crabs had decided to try and take a few nips out of him, but he made sure they wouldn't try to take a bite out of anyone ever again. Those things were annoying, and he wasn't about to let them get in his way. He wasn't about to let anyone get in his way. There was this one crab that seemed to be somewhat brave among them all, and had decided to block his path. This make Rook a bit pissed off. He didn't like these creatures to begin with, and he never would. They were water based creatures, and he hated water. Therefore, he hated them. The crab crawled over to him, flexing his punchers like he intimidate the young boy. Rook, clearly pissed off, glared. He's glared before, but this time was completely different. He glared and his aura magnified to the point where the crab would nearly suffocate with fear. He continued to glare, and took a step towards the stupid idiot thing. It cringed and tumbled backwards, landing on it's belly. He frowned, before taking his hands out of his pockets. He was just about ready to crush this thing with his bare hands. And he would do it too. Rook's hands quickly flashed in the movement as he began to smirk, his evil side was becoming exposed. He didn't like this monster, nor did he like what they were doing. They all deserved to die. And if they weren't careful, their death would be the most painful of them all. He didn't care anymore, he just wanted this thing off the face of the earth. He began to filter most of his chakra into the jutsu, he filtered his hate and anger into it, and soon enough, a large roar could be head in the distance. Rook smirked, as the ground shook slightly. Out of the mouth of the volcano, a large strand of lava began to rise from it. The lava soon became a large magma dragon as it soon roared out. It's mouth opened wide, as it could have swallowed an entire house whole. The crab looked at it, and quickly realized Rook was going to completely wipe it off the face of the earth. It quickly turned and began to shuffle it's way across the land, hoping to get away and maybe this child would leave him alone. But man, it ever wrong. Rook raised his hand, and quickly took after it. The boy dashed after it, as it was trying to go after. The heat of the chase gave Rook that drive to excel towards it. The magma dragon quickly followed, twisting and turning in the air, warming the area just by following. The crabs screeched, as other crabs noticed how much trouble the crab was in. They were about to assist their friend, but backed off when they saw the angry Rook and his magma dragon following close behind. He laughed out, while jumping on the crabs back. He pulled out a kunai, before grabbing one of it's long eye tentacle. He began to glare even more, and quickly cut it off. The crab screeched and fell over, instantly it knew it's life was over. It's last eye turned to Rook, as Rook grabbed it and glared into the eye.

"What right do you have?" Rook exclaimed in it's face. The crab shook with fear as it saw the magma dragon begin to caught up behind Rook. "Who makes it right for you to go around and kill all these people when we were simply striving for survival?! How dare you invade our space thinking we'd fear you and take kindly to your action!? You disgust me. You AND YOUR RACE!!" Rook screamed at the crab, before forcing it to watch as the manga dragon roared and opened it's jaw. The crab scrambled to get up, but Rook didn't allow it. He pulled on the eye, and at the last second, cut it off too. Rook could be evil, he could be very violent, and he could even be insane. But when he got pissed, he was nothing but evil. The young Ryuujin laughed before jumping off the crab, and watched as the dragon devoured it. The dragon let out a roar, and soon it turned into a vortex of lava. Once it was finished with it's attack, the dragon began to venture it's way back to the volcano. Upon looking at what was left of the crab, all he could see was a skeleton of it. The shell was burn and crisp, while the insides had been completely burned and was now hollow. Rook smirked, stuff his hands in his pockets, before walking the rest of the way towards the Leaf. As he was leaving, the wind blew, and the remains of the crabs was blown away in the wind. The other crabs around he quickly learned not to mess with him.




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[Word count = 15830 x 2 = 31660
Total word count = 16115
Jutsus learned:
Burning Daydream ((1500 Skill Points))
Innerfire ((1000 Skill Points))
Flaming Hands ((800 Skill Points))
Crimson Lotus Flower ((500 Skill Points))
Ash Product Burning ((700 Skill Points))
Double Vision Technique ((400 Skill Points))
Skin Aflame ((600 Skill Points))
Cauterize ((500 Skill Points))
Embrace ((700 Skill Points))
Flaming Tantos ((400 Skill Points))
Flameglide ((400 Skill Points))
Suture Kit ((700 Skill Points))
Great Sphere ((1000 Skill Points))
Pyro Prison ((700 Skill Points))
Foot Trap ((600 Skill Points))
Flame Cyclone ((1000 Skill Points))
Wings of Flame ((600 Skill Points))
Flame Style ((700 Skill Points))
Magma Spit: 700
Magma Rising: 1000
Magma Clone: 700
Magma Dragon Jutsu: 800
Crimson Clone: 700
Melting Gas: 1000
Healing Vapors: 900
Anesthesia Gas: 700
Sticky Gas: 800
Exploding Object: 700
Bomb Shadow Clone: 700
Explosion Transport: 600
all together should add up to 31400 Skill Points]

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 10:27 pm


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Joker only laughed as he watched Batman dodge roll the explosive from the side but was still a bit caught in the explosion. Not bad for the Dark Knight if he was able to still move like that after such an explosion. However, Batman threw several batarangs towards Joker, only to have him sidestep and dodge towards the side but was blindsided by the smokescreen. That was not the usual tactic of Batman! Joker felt something was off as he continued to move through the smoke, only to dodge last minuet as a shadow of what looked like a claw came at him. Instead of clipping him in the sternum, it struck him in the leg as he tried to roll away, causing Joker to spin upon the ground until he stopped. "Oooooh! It looks like Batboy wants to fight dirty! Well then lets fight dirty!" Joker pulled out a small bag and then rolled out the marbles within, causing them to roll out in all directions around him before pulling out a deck of cards and throwing them all in 360 degrees around him, using the smokescreen as cover for what he was doing against Batman.


Harley was a bit surprised that Batgirl managed to dodge the metallic bat and stepped on it, only to throw the explosives towards her. Harley only laughed a little as she jumped towards Batgirl to tackle her and twist around so that the girl would be in between Harley and the bomb. And since Batgirl was hiding her face, she would not be able to see such an attack coming. "Ya stupid girl, why don't you get blown to smithereens!"

Joker Jr. just continued to laugh as he held the gun still pointed towards the Boy Wonder. The weapon had a third trigger. The firing mechanism for the Bang Flag. JJ pulled the trigger, firing the weapon towards the Boy wonder as he was putting on the Gas Mask before reaching into his jacket with his other, free hand.

Bane noticed the swords suddenly getting pointed upwards and quickly threw his arms to the side, letting the blades merely graze against his arms as he still slammed into the ground. This would cause Azreal to lose his balance which caused Bane to then go for the man's leg with one of his hands while the other reeled back in a fist. Before he would throw the punch, Bane would attempt to slam Azreal into the ground to catch the man off guard to make sure the attack was more safe. After all, Bane may be almost complete muscle, but he was still just as smart as Batman.
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2012 1:52 am


Batman took one step as he was getting ready to head towards Joker. However he rolled on the marbles and started to fall to the ground. The cards were hidden by the smoke..so even though Batman was quick to recover..the cards still managed to pierce through his shoulder and part of his chest. Random..was Joker's friend today..Random would be Batman's enemy tonight as well. However Batman quickly placed his right hand down to the ground. As he placed his hand on the ground he pushed himself upwards landing up right a few feet back. This however made the ground harder to stand on. He pulled the grapple gun back.. he was going to reel Joker back one way or the other. He couldn't walk but he would make Joker come to him. He took his cape off and placed it on a rock. As he jumped high on a table that was concealed in the smoke. Silent take downs was his favorite.. and hopefully he could quite the joker down.
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PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2012 2:00 am


She didn't even make a sound that she felt the pain. It hurt none the less. but she didn't show pain. that is what they didn't do.. they didn't show hurt. they didn't show emotions. However with the quick turn that Harley did.. Batgirl was able to pick up the bat. She tried to kick Harley off of her as quickly as possible. As she recovered and started to swing the bat at Harley's head. She wanted to take her down fast and hard.. so that she couldn't hurt anybody else.

The weapon flew towards the Boy Wonder. He still had his wings up. The wings blocked the bullet however it caused the wings to shatter at the same time. He quickly pointed the other side of his wings towards Joker Jr. As he did he squeezed a button in his palm and a large shards of the wings started to fly towards Joker Jr. They were blunt daggers that would hopefully hurt the Clown Prince Jr and take him out the game. However Red Robin knew to much.. He didn't want to put all of his eggs in one basket.

Azrael was quick but he wasn't quick enough. As he felt the slam into the ground the air almost escaped from his lungs. He still had his hands clutched around the blades. As he brought down the first blade towards his foot. He would push the blade down as far as possible. Then with the second blade he would attempt to pierce the man's abdomen. He didn't want to maim him to bad.. but he didn't want to get killed either. Azrael was feelign the pain of this fight.. he seemed to get the short straw this time around.
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2012 3:52 am


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Hidden Fragment: Net Slum Home of GeininX
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xxxA creaking noise and then a very loud crash is heard as GeininX mutters a swear under his breath. “Now I’ll have to rebuild that. Get out of that scrap pile Randal!” Randal begins chirping loudly, like a blue jay, as GeininX groans. He really hated having to go over things again. He could hear the two females outside, barely, as they remained silent for a time. His rough handling of things really didn’t help set the mood for open conversing. Yet Kawari does decide to speak finally. Even though when she speaks at first, GeininX stops, thinking a computer is relaying information to him. But as she furthers along in her questioning, he can hear a hint of humanity in her voice. He wouldn’t have even noticed that if that were the first time he heard her make a sound. “A girl talking like that is a girl worth digging through the skull of,” GeininX thinks to himself. He wasn’t going to go declaring that she was an android, or something. Even though it wouldn’t be out of character for him to declare something to be fact just because he felt it so. He would just assume that she was poking fun or expressing how she knew computer jargon and the talking patterns of mechanical objects.

xxxThe Morgana kicks an empty can off to one side of the room before something hits the ground. More things fall and eventually everything is quiet. The sound of paper being ripped is heard and then the sound of a thin metal object striking against wood is heard soon after. He was writing down something that he wanted to remember about Kawari to do, say, or inquire at some point. He only needed to write it down to really get it in his head so he balls the paper up and throws it at Randal. The small boy lets out a weak toot like a baby elephant and then begins to scramble around fearfully within the pile of metal items.


xxx“Hm,” GeininX says calmly as Noze soon begins to speak. He is standing in the doorway now, looking at Kawari first and then Noze. “Come on inside. I wanted to make a path so nothing got broke and you two didn’t get hurt. It’d be great if I were just the type of person that didn’t have a reason behind not wanting you to get hurt but I’m not that great with people. I hate people being on my case and cutting into my scripting. If you two got hurt, even if they think you are my friends, they’ll use it as an excuse to hassle me whenever I step foot out of Net Slum.” The Morgana teen then decides that just going on about things in The World wouldn’t cut it. Both females just asked where they were, so he needed to address that. “Right.” GeininX turns around and walks into the piece of building. He slaps a wire with his pinky a touch and soon the room is lit with a faint yellow-orange glow. It wasn’t an effect, the light bulbs were just bad quality. The layout of the inside is very confusing. If there wasn’t a path, it would be hard to figure out what is where and where’s the way to avoid loose wires on the ground. There are scraps in piles in the corners and near the center of the floor. Broken porcelain dolls are also strewn about.

xxxSome are trapped in the wires on the ceiling as well. It did give an eerie touch, but they didn’t look like they were placed for that. A squeak is heard as Randal touches a stuffed bear from his hiding spot. The stuffed creatures neck is cocked to the left and stuffing is oozing out of the open hole and keeping his head in that position. There are other stuffed animals too, but they are all damaged in some way. Sparks fly, making a noticeable ‘zzzt’ noise now and then off the created path and on the floor in easy to see locations. “The lives wires are dangerous. Never came in contact with one by accident myself, of course. But I’ve had a run in with them a time or two and it wasn’t pretty. So avoid that and the glass.” The steel blue eyed figure brings up a hand and tosses his scarf off to one side lazily. “So you asked where you are? This location is Net Slum, as you know. But Net Slum isn’t a known location where you’re from. I guess Okashi would say that Net Slum doesn’t belong to any nation or region in your world. It’s simply a field or large region, within an almost separate world from yours. Need to think on how to make things make sense.” GeininX strolls nearer to a cluster of monitors at the back center of the room.

xxxThey’re all resting on the floor and there are keyboards and one mouse in the center of the circle of monitors. Behind those monitors is a massive device with a large array of flashy lights with a rainbow of colors and making a quiet beeping noise every four second counts. That could be the master computer that controls things within the building… or it could just be a big blinking, beeping, hunk of scrap. “Your world is called Earth and mine is called The World, emphasis on The World since they’re a proper noun in the English language. In my world we don’t have continents, per say. We just have zones. And when we travel we use a device that transports us instantaneously. I, unlike normal people, am special. I can travel to Net Slum, which is a location that can’t be accessed by just anyone. And there’s that.” GeininX turns to face his guests and plops down on a cube shaped metal object. He lets out a sigh before saying something more. “I’m the only one that can get you to and from this zone, safely.” He tacks on safely to show they can get out, but he is their best bet in getting out the same way they came.

xxxWith minor side effects, but better than the alternative. “But once we leave here, you two are able to move about the zones freely. You just can’t come here. Hopefully that makes sense because I don’t do the whole explaining thing.” Filtering out the undeserved arrogance, he was saying that he wasn’t good at explaining things to others. As mentioned, he isn’t the best with people given his near solitude.



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PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2012 4:07 am


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Hidden Wind: Jewel Mines
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xxxxShaneko finally arrives in Hidden Wind after a long journey and sighs. She stepped away from the others sometime in the last three years in search of special weapons. It didn’t matter if they were crafted in a village, handed out in some manner to them, or they created them on their own; Shaneko wanted to find weapons of all kinds and replicate them. Then, once her collection was complete, she would open up an exhibit in Craftsman in order to shuffle more people in. As it stands, no one has been to Hidden Craftsman in over a year. Crafters have been forced to ask compensation for weapons received instead of simply gaining income off of food, shelter, and certain resorts they’d built. Times were getting hard. Before long Hidden Craftsman would be shaking hands with Hidden Katana just to have enough traffic to pay for everyday necessities. For her people, Shaneko would have to give her all. She’d heard from someone nearby that Hidden Wind housed a number of people with unique weapons. She would have better luck elsewhere, but figured she’d start here anyway. The Dattoumaru travels into the outskirts of the village where the mines are, in search of natives.

Many are huddled down below in the mines rather than out and about in the village. Shaneko is watched carefully by villagers and defense personnel; better known as ANBU. Some are out in the open while others lurk in the shadows. Perhaps she should have come as Shaneko Warabe of the Dattoumaru clan, Takumikage of Hidden Craftsman instead of plain Shaneko? She looks around and tries to catch someone to talk to as they emerge from the ground. But before getting any real information they are underground again. And since only natives or contract holders are allowed underground for any reason, she couldn’t follow. She walks over to a large mound of rocks and leaps up onto the top of them. Eyes follow her, wary she might knock the structure down, as she sits on top of the pile. Since the natives aren’t concerned about her being up there at the moment, no one tells her to get down. “Hello. Are you looking for someone?” Shaneko looks down after hearing a very sweet sounding voice to see a young girl. This girl is covered by a heavy duty outfit ideal for mining, heavy duty boots and gloves, and a very hard helmet.

“You shouldn’t be out here, you could get hurt. And if that mound falls then the villagers are gonna be really mad.” Shaneko smiles at the girl and hops off of the pile. The rocks don’t so much as shift at her movements.

“I didn’t mean to cause trouble. My name is Shaneko Warabe. I’m a member of the Dattoumaru clan and leader of Hidden Craftsman.” She notices this girl tilt her head a little and wonders if she knows about anything she said, including her home village of Hidden Craftsman. “I’m not really looking for anyone in particular. I’m in search of special weapons. Not to claim as my own, mostly just to make replicas of. You wouldn’t happen to know where I could find any, would you?” Shaneko watches the female remove her helmet and her mouths drops a little. She’s so beautiful. For someone that digs for jewels in a mine, she was a very brightly colored girl.

“My name is Yanu Smith. I’m a member of Hidden Wind’s Kailash clan. It’s nice to meet you, Takumikage.” That meant that she knew of her. Maybe Yanu was trying to remember something? “I’ve never really been to Hidden Craftsman. So I only know about you from what villagers here and in other villages tell me. Are you in search of replicas to put into your village and sell? If so then I can’t help you.”

“Oh, uh, no. I’m not looking to mass produce special items. You see, I just want to make one replica. I figure it would bring in a lot of publicity to my home village if I open up a sort of weapon museum. When it comes to stores, we prefer to make unique weapons to distribute or allow people to make their own.”

“Like Hidden Katana?” Yanu asks only to see Shaneko’s smile fall. She looks a little angry, but Yanu knows it’s not directed to her. “I always wondered why your villages didn’t combine to create a super village. You could combine your unique weapon materials with their materials and have it where people can make their own weapons. And then you both wouldn’t be compared. Or maybe you could partner with them? Oh…” Shaneko seems not to be very keen on this conversation. She’s not shooting the idea down, but it is easy to see that the conversation is bothering her. “Anyway. If you want, I have something that I think you’d like. You’ll have to come with me back to my house, though.” Yanu then pats Shaneko on the shoulder. “Don’t get so upset. Your village is a good village and so is theirs. But I can bet you that together you two could set aside your differences and become the main place to go for all of your weapon needs. Plus, with that museum of yours, it could bring in people for both villages. I won’t bug you about it anymore; it’s just something I always imagined.” Yanu turns about and begins heading to a small area outside of the actual village and the mining area where small huts are located.

Shaneko nods and then takes after the young female. Having overheard Shaneko’s statement to Yanu, some of the ANBU stop following her. The few people that do, follow anyone no matter their identity. Just in case.



Once Shaneko and Yanu arrive at the location between where the huts are and where the mines are, Yanu stops. Going on the defensive, Shaneko activates both of her doujutsu to their fullest levels. It isn’t until then that Shaneko notices the barrier surrounding the girl and the substance clinging to her skin. “I didn’t mean to startle you,” Yanu expresses. She turns to look at Shaneko and bows slightly. “My item is here. I never leave it anywhere. I just didn’t want to show it to you with all of those people and shady characters around. I can’t show it to you completely. We’re out of easy hearing range but not sight. So I will give you a small fragment of the armor for now. You’ll probably need at least that much to make a proper replica. Still, even though my item is here, would you like to come to my house for a while? I need to get freshened up but you can make yourself at home. I’ll be sure to make you something cool to drink and eat since it’s pretty hot this time of year. Oh, would you?” Shaneko understands Yanu’s reasoning and shuts her eyes. She opens them to reveal her steel blue eyes. Instead of taking a portion of the armor now, Shaneko bows back.

“Sure. I wouldn’t mind coming to your house with you. I know you were busy before you were planning to take me, but it’s all right. Maybe I could even fix you something?” Yanu giggles, her hair bouncing effortlessly as she does. Shaneko couldn’t get over how beautiful and well-kept she is despite her field of work.



Once arriving at Yanu’s hut, Shaneko takes a seat on a wooden barrel. She makes herself as comfortable as she can as Yanu cleans up in the showers in the center of the clusters of huts. Even though Shaneko didn’t live like a queen, she still fashioned her home more than a hut like this. She wondered why, with the beautiful structures in town, Yanu and the other miners would live in these huts. When Yanu finally steps into the hut again, Shaneko is nearly floored. One of Yanu’s arms is holding up the covering for the hut that covers the door, while her other hand is clutching the handle of a small basket. Her hair is straight down and a bright light pink. Her head is leaning forward a little and tilted to the side, her hair draping her neck. She’s wearing a white sundress and gold sandals. Her eyes look like they’re a mixture of light yellow, green, and pink. Or maybe their mixed with a hint of sky blue? Shaneko couldn’t tell. Even though she knew not to look anyone in the eyes, hers were positively mesmerizing. She steps farther inside and watches Shaneko. Her lips, paints a faint pink, seems to hold a small smile no matter what.

“I look weird, don’t I,” the Kailash asks, snapping Shaneko back to reality. “I come from working in the mines and look like I live in some big city. I just have a really good barrier, some say. Others say that I am a girl born from a jewel. But then I always fan them off. I’m nothing special, just weird or unique. Now if I were to become a hero for this village, then I would be special. It’s what you do that makes you special, in my opinion.”

“You really don’t come off as someone that works in a mine; even with these eyes of mine.” Yanu just smiles and tilts her head. “So what is it that you have in mind to prepare?” Yanu’s eyes widen. She’d been chatting and taking long showers instead of getting something for Shaneko.

“I forgot that I needed to get things ready. You wanted to make something too, right?” Shaneko nods and Yanu gesture for the Takumikage to follow her. They leave out of the hut and walk a ways before finding a small shed. “We cook things in here.” She opens the door and leads Shaneko inside before giving her a brief tour. “The refrigerators are there, the freezer is off to the side there, the tool closet is in the back, you can use any of these tables to prepare things but you have to clean up afterwards…”

“Yanu, can I ask you something first?” Yanu turns to Shaneko beside her and nods. “Why do you all lives in this area with such, um…”

“We live out here while we’re mining. This isn’t where a lot of us live. But since I mine here more than I just live here, I only have a home here. Actually, I thought I lived somewhere else for a few months. But I couldn’t find the place no matter how hard I searched. Still, I enjoy living out here. I don’t have to worry about anything as long as I work when I come to Hidden Wind.” Shaneko listens carefully and wonders if she may have come off rude. “Others in the village ask me the same thing when they see me. It’s just that since I travel with my friends when I’m not working, I just don’t need two homes. And the hut holds what I need it to so that’s fine.”

“I didn’t mean to pry.” Yanu shakes her head and Shaneko goes on. “Seems like you enjoy traveling?” Yanu goes to gather ingredients as Shaneko preps the work area. When Yanu returns with the goods, the two set to work on making a tasty, cool treat.

“It’s more that I enjoy the company of the others really. I like to travel around with my brother and friends because we don’t live close to each other. I hope to one day live with my brother at least someday. But that would require me to move to hidden Substance. I would rather not do that until I become a Representative of Hidden Wind, first.” Yanu set a portion of The Adamantium onto the table as Shaneko takes it finally. As Yanu prepares the treats, Shaneko begins to test the portion of substance. This would be a nice little experiment.


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Warabe [Dattoumaru], Shaneko {Word Count::--/Chakra Surge::145,600}
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Smith [Kailash], Yanu {Word Count::--/Chakra Surge::--}
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2012 4:13 am


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Hidden Emotion: The Center
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xxxxThe two share in the bliss of lime snow cones and cold cakes before it’s time for them to go their separate ways. “I vow to return again for a visit. I had a lot of fun. Maybe next time you can come to my house in Craftsman!” Shaneko waves her arm as does Yanu. Once the Kailash gives her a reassuring nod, the Dattoumaru turns on the path to the docks. She begins walking to the docks, ready to make her journey to yet another village. And in her journey she would continue to study the Adamantium material.


Her next destination would be Hidden Emotion. It wasn’t one of the villages that anyone mentions as being a place where special items would be, but she decided that she’d go there for some decent food and rest. But once she enters into the village, the villagers are far too depressed to assist her. People are crying in the streets and shopkeepers refusing to aid because they can’t stand to look at her. What kind of village is this? “Isn’t there anyone that can help me?” Shaneko then notices a growing shadow forming overhead and flickers out of the path. A figure that seems to be shrouded heavily by a dark aura comes crashing to the ground where she’d stood. A crater is formed and debris flies everywhere. People begin crying loudly as they run for their lives. “Why have you attacked me? State your name.”

“You’re not old Takai, are you? That’s disappointing,” the figure says in a high pitched voice. The aura rages around him before suddenly disintegrating. A figure that is completely white in skin and dress turns to reveal the only differently colored parts of his body. His eye sockets are pitch black and blood seems to drain from them. Was he all right? “I’m Uirusu. And that guy beside you is Byouki.” Shaneko had been so preoccupied with this white male that she hadn’t considered there being another. She turns her head to look but finds nothing. A trap! She whirls back around and is met with the white male feet from her. She’d had enough. She pulls free a charm from her Charm Bracelet and blows the attack of this man with a pitch black blade. Uirusu grins at the blade when he notices a red demon eye gazing at him. “I have eyes… wanna see?” Shaneko almost couldn’t help but watch as eyeballs rolls around before bubbling from the back of his skull. They snap in all directions, all of them opposite of each other, before snapping straight forward. Shaneko somehow found the strength not to look into his eyes. She wasn’t sure what could result from doing so.

The blade she carries changes shape until forming a round shield. Uirusu takes this moment to flicker from against the shield and up behind Shaneko. But Shaneko wasn’t going to let him get the better of her this round. In a shorter time than batting ones eyelashes, Shaneko is turned completely around. Her blade is out at her side now. She turns the blade into a bat this time and swings it hard. She aims to thwack this being over the head with the bat to knock him out. “Harder, faster, stronger!”

“What?” Shaneko watches as Uirusu clenches a fist and swings his arm to slam against the bat. A quake rocks through the bat and Shaneko’s body. This seems to stun her for a moment. Just long enough for Uirusu to flip backwards and reveal a man in the air directly behind him. Like the arm that Uirusu had used, this one has a Golden Ribbon wrapped around it. He clenches his fist and reels his arm back and aims to strike Shaneko in the face. Since she couldn’t dodge, she could only try to cushion the blow. This man slams his fist into her face and then freezes there. An eruption of chakra, wind, and plain force from the strike booms forth. It spans out several feet before being safe enough to idly stand in the way of. Uirusu is blown back as a crater forms beneath Shaneko’s position. The white being latches onto a light pole and swings around and around until his momentum is slowed. He then stops twirling and rests along the top of the scythe shaped light pole.

“Woo~,” he whistles as Byouki leaps back. Shaneko, finally regaining movement, swings her blade to knock the man away from her. This man is completely black, unlike the other man. The only part of him that isn’t jet or at least charcoal black is his skin which is a grayish brown color. His eyes are a glossy black, but Shaneko wouldn’t peer into them to know for sure. Bloods finally drains from Shaneko’s nostrils, not having evading the whole of the blow. What power… “We told you our names. So we’ll wait until you tell us who you are.”

Shaneko looks up at Uirusu and then the black colored man, Byouki. “My name is Shaneko Warabe. I am the—.”

“Boring,” Uirusu shrieks. He leaps off of the light pole and down to the ground near Shaneko. She raises her shield, ready for another go. Byouki walks over to Uirusu and the two seem to focus on each other for the moment. “Have you come here to ruin our good time, girly? We’re natives here. We’re entitled to a little mayhem here and there in our home. So beat it~!” Shaneko begins to protest when a grotesque scene plays out before her. It takes everything she can muster to keep from vomiting. She can only manage to watch the shadows the two create. Uirusu is seen with his mouth open wide, the sound of his piercing wail making the scene even worse, as he thrusts the hand with the Golden Ribbon on it into Byouki’s back. Byouki raises his head and opens his mouth. Shadows of tiny droplets are there one minute and gone the next. Byouki hunches forward as Uirusu brings in another hand to tear open Byouki’s back. The shadow of Byouki’s jagged flesh and the immense amount of blood splattering and dripping is easy to see, even in the shadow. Blood, blood everywhere! Shaneko hunches over a little, but doesn’t take her eyes off of the shadow.

She finds the will to remain conscious at the gut and mind wrenching sights she would later behold. Uirusu is seen shoving and forcing his way inside of Byouki like a mascot uniform. More blood spatters and some falls into the area where the shadow is. Shaneko stumbles back and stare horrified as Byouki’s limp body is successfully infiltrated by Uirusu. But once he is completely inside, the pair take on a different form. At one point in time, light would emit from their body and conceal it from view for the change. But Uirusu and Byouki, mostly Uirusu, has become a level or so darker. So his aura is black and thus a black aura covers their form when Uirusu initiates the change without Byouki volunteering. The same dark aura from before envelopes their forms before disappearing in the same fashion as before. A new individual is left standing in their place. The once Golden Ribbons are tattered and parts stained a bright crimson. It’s wrapped around both arms now. This new being brushes a hand along their white and black horns with a menacing grin.

“We haven’t gotten much stronger,” the man’s voice echoes in the tone of Byouki and Uirusu, “but we can sure scare you to peeing, can’t we? Are you afraid of us, or what we’ve done? Are you afraid for yourself or us? Will you fall into a deep slumber on your own, or should we assist you?” Shaneko wipes the blood from her face from her nose bleeding. She flings one arm out to her side and stands straight up. This overwhelming fear… she would overcome it! Shaneko charges towards this new being in an attempt to overwhelm them with her speed. They simply stand where they are and don’t move. Shaneko prepares to strike when she notices this being spit something at her. She dodges and sees that it is a bit of flesh. The Dattoumaru’s stomach turns. Her opponent brings up a knee to kick her but she flickers back. He does manage to kick something, that being the Soul Edge that she’d been fighting with up until now. Great! The minor anti-theft portion of her Charm Bracelet was malfunctioning, so she couldn’t force the return of the item in any other way than brute force. But soon the full force of the beings strike causes Shaneko’s arm to make a horrible snapping noise.

She hadn’t guarded because she could dodge, but how could she imagine he’s strength to be that great? Shankeko’s full doujutsu for both the Ryuugan Eye and the Craftman’s Eye are activated. Before she can grab another weapon from her bracelet, her opponent has changed the type of weapon he is using. She is only able to use a quick Ex-Quip before a huge hammer comes crashing down on her with extraordinary force. The Earth quakes angrily and causes buildings to shake and light poles to fall. People scream and run around but some are struck by the poles. Buildings begin to have structure issues and bits of buildings also come down. People are met with those obstacles as well. No one seems to be dead, so others try to rescue who they can before growing overcome with sadness. “Tell your maker that Shujouteki Munashii sent you!” Shujouteki Munashii laughs loudly and raises his head to the sky. He raises the hammer soon after to see that Shaneko is standing there perfectly fine. She seems to be wearing little more than the Mugen Kougai armor from Hidden Craftsman that covers her body. A helmet, a breast plate, armored bottoms, and boots all complete the outfit.

As well, she seemed to be holding another weapon other than the Soul Edge that Shujouteki Munashii took. Both arms are raised over her head and would have taken the brunt of the attack. The dark being looks to her before a wave of pain would rack his body. He shrieks out and seems to wiggle his body oddly. But just when Shaneko thinks she’s won, the being begins laughing darkly. “It was a nice try, Shaneko. But we do not feel pain. Our arms arm mangled, so you win your little stick back. But our legs still work.”

“I don’t want to keep fighting,” Shaneko exclaims. Shujouteki Munashii drops the Soul Edge and begins laughing.

“You don’t, do you? We like this fight. Is it fair to stop just for you when there’s two of us?” Shaneko grits her teeth as the two as one being kicks the hammer over to Shaneko. It isn’t in a hostile manner and doesn’t intend to cause her any harm. “We prefer fighting Takai Jouten more than you. You give up too easy. We’ll let you live if you leave. You’ve seen more to us and our Golden Ribbon than you needed to. Leave now or we’ll pick things up where we stopped just now.” Shaneko makes to protest but shakes her head.

“And what about your wounds? I should take you to a medic.” Shujouteki Munashii glowers down at Shaneko a moment. He wasn’t growing impatient; he just supposed that giving her that look would force her to make a decision. She’d seen enough of this person to assess the capabilities of their item, the Golden Ribbon. And that seemed like the only trick up their sleeve that she could discern. If she found the courage, she would just come back. She returns the Soul Edge and the Doomgiver of the Legion of Swords set and then draws out the Woundhealer. She flickers out of the giant crater and raises her sword to the sky.


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Warabe [Dattoumaru], Shaneko {Word Count::--/Chakra Surge::145,600}
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Munashii ‘Byouki’, Shujouteki ‘Uiurusu’ {Word Count::--/Chakra Surge::--}

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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2012 7:16 am


Hidden Volcano: The Docks to the Doku Home
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xxxxAll those within the village would be healed and refreshed, including Shujouteki Munashii and Shaneko. “There,” she mutters before vanishing from her current location. That fight was terribly frightening… nauseating… nightmare inducing… It was such a terrible time she may not return there for a lo~ng time. To make matters worse, she hadn’t gotten a meal or rest. So now it was on to another location; Hidden Volcano. Shaneko appears at the docks and decides to boat ride over there instead of Water Walking.


Shaneko is covered head to toe in armor as she enters into Hidden Volcano. She couldn’t take the intense fumes coming off of the village, so this was all she could do to remedy it. The boatman warned it might come off offensive, so Shaneko prepares to be interrogated. Instead, she is greeted warmly after coming from the docks. A man with grayish black hair pulled into a ponytail grins as he stands in front of her. “You’re a very pretty suit of armor girl,” he states. What a smooth talker. He fans a hand and grins wider as he pats something beside him. “I heard from a neighboring village that you were running around making trouble.” Shaneko’s face grows sweaty as the man goes on. “Saying that you’re after special items to copy? Oh, right. My name’s Doku and I’m of the Doku clan. What can I say? My parents weren’t very creative.” He raises his arms into a shrug. He then steps around someone and crouches down. Shaneko looks down at the young boy that seemed to be standing with a sucker stick in his mouth. “This little guy here is named Doke. He’s my little scamp,” Doku states with a warm look on his face and a fake teardrop. He pats the lad on the head which makes Doke groan. “You seem like an upstanding young woman dressed in armor. Would you feel comfortable knowing that this young boy is drinking and doing hard drugs?”

“I do hard drinking too! It’s no big deal because I don’t get high or intoxicated. The toxins from such things get neutralized inside of my body. So it causes no damage. So what’s the big deal? Tell that old man to stop killing the things I’ve done since I could hold my bottle.” Shaneko found this a very terrible thing. A boy that looks no older than maybe eight years old is smoking and drinking… hard? Where was the world going with this? But was it her place to say?

“I’m sorry. I’m just here to get a meal and some rest. Then I need to really get started on my quest again. I can’t involve myself in family matters, it’s not proper.” Doke frowns and fans his hand at her. He knew where she was going with that. She agreed with his old man. As he walks away Shaneko thinks she’s said something wrong. Doku nudges her happily and then hops back from her.

“You’re free to stay at our place. Doku homes like ours are best to stay in if you are trying not to inhale the fumes. We’ve neutralized everything within the home so junior doesn’t get any funny ideas. Besides, since our body neutralizes toxins, our homes have developed a sort of barrier. Do you eat meat?” Shaneko nods and Doku seems to do a backflip standing up. He gives her a cheerful thumbs up before turning around and walking off. Doku seems to have some form of Japanese heritage or understanding based on how he wears those purple robes of his. Shaneko follows close behind Doku as he quickly catches up to Doke. The young boy is dressed in casual overalls without a shirt due to the heat. Yet the both of them are wearing manly straw sandals. Doke is much more serious seeming than Doku who acts like a big kid with morals. “She never said she agreed with me. But most people do, so I guess it’s fine to assume,” Doku comments. Were they talking about what she’d said? So they both figured out her standing. “You should only smoke cigarettes and drink wine coolers or beer.” What? Shaneko’s eyes widen at the mention of this. They certainly are an odd family.


“Make yourself feel welcome,” Doke mutters. Shaneko looks up from the 70’s sofa at the young boy staring down at her. His fists are shoved into his pockets and he’s got an unlit cigarette in his mouth. Shaneko smiles, her armor down and wearing her usual under armor, only for the boy not to give one in return. Doku comes up behind Doke and pulls on his cheeks. The boy drops his cig and grumbles.

“She’s a girl. You’re supposed to smile and play nice with her. You’ll never get married at this rate.” Doku shrugs his shoulders after releasing his son. Doke dives down and scrapes up his cigarette. He frowns and quickly walks over to the door and exits. Once the door closes shut, Doku takes a seat next to Shaneko heavily. “Kids. I’m lecturing him and yet I’m bumming around as a single parent.”

“You’re a single parent?” Doku nods. “Is it wrong for me to ask what happened to the mother?” Doku makes a confused sound and tilts his head to look at her. “I just… I mean, you don’t have to talk about it. I’m sure it’s a delicate subject for you. I’m sorry.”

“I don’t know Doke’s mother. I don’t remember ever sleeping with a woman and not seeing her again for years. I just come to Hidden Aviation to chill with a friend and there he is.” Shaneko was surprised that someone who lives in a village near or on a volcano would be okay in a village high on a summit. “If it weren’t for my good friend James, I wouldn’t have ever gone there. Then again… neither of us really remember how we met. We were just sitting next to each other one day and there we were. Felt betrayed when he sprung Doke on me.” Shaneko thinks on how he sounds a bit selfish in feeling sorry for himself, but realizes he is just being sarcastic. “I don’t know anything about his mom. He just insisted he was my son and had nowhere else to go. So I decided to take him in. It wouldn’t hurt any to have him live with me. He’s actually pretty good at being on his own.” Really? Doku is either such the kidder or a very questionable parent. “Whenever I have to run an errand, I leave him here or take him with me. Either way, he does fine. Aside from him wanting to take after me with my smoking and drinking, he’s a good kid.”


Shaneko found Doku to be an all right guy. She sleeps soundly in a guest room with Kitsuna guarding the door instead of keeping watch from afar. “Oh, what? You old fart, stop kidding around!” Shaneko bolts up in bed the moment that Kitsuna disappears from the room. Shaneko Ex-Quips into her normal attire and shifts out of bed. Kitsuna is soon back inside the room by way of the window.

“It appears Doke has lost a bet.” Shaneko sighs at her summon. That was all? “It also involves you, Lady Warabe.” Shaneko raises both eyebrows at the mention of this. She walks over to the door and pulls it open as Doku and Doke are seen in the butterfly position on the floor. They turn from facing each other to look at the curious Dattoumaru and then to her friend. “Hello,” Kitsuna says with a delicate curtsey, “my name is Kitsuna. I am Lady Warabe’s summon.” Doke blushes a little as he averts his gaze. Kitsuna had stepped out in front of Shaneko wearing only a sports bra and tight fitting boxer shorts. “I apologize,” she concludes before stepping behind Shaneko. She goes to clothe herself as Shaneko steps farther into the living area.

“Kitsuna mentioned that Doke lost a bet and it involves me?” Doku looks at Shaneko with a smug look.

“Don’t get so serious. It benefits you too.” Doku shifts until on his knees and points a finger at his other palm horizontal to the ground. “Doke actually owns an armor that I no longer need to use. I’m kind of retired. So he has to dress up like a girl and investigate something for me in Mirage Island. Apparently it got a name change and is Hidden Whirlpool now, but this and that. And he needs protection during the bet so that nothing bad happens to him.” Shaneko makes a face as if to ask where she comes in at and Doku grins. “If you and Doke finish this bet in one piece with you as his body guard and him as a girl, then Doke owes you the liberty of observing his armor on him or me. Got it, Shaneko?”


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Warabe [Dattoumaru], Shaneko {Word Count::--/Chakra Surge::145,600}
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'Doke' [Doku] {Word Count::--/Chakra Surge::--}
PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2012 2:14 pm


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Waiting for GeininX to answer, Noze spent a few moments tuning out the various noises that she could hear. Metal falling on concrete, breaking, scraping, discordant tunes that failed utterly in any form of music. No, whatever was happening in there was either accidental or unimportant. Putting it out of her mind, her gaze returned to Kawari. They hadn't traveled together for very long at all. Even so, she had the distinct feeling that there was something very different about her, something had changed. She was about to ask, inquire as to whether the odd girl was feeling alright or not, when GeininX appeared in the doorway of the building. whatever he had been doing, it must be finished now. He invited them in, warning them to be careful.

As she listened and stepped inside after him, it was easy to see why he had warned them. Large piles of metal scrap, live wires, glass, and all sorts of other detritus were inside, as well. Picking her way along the path, she was able to avoid the sparking wires and sparkling shards. "I take it that a housekeeper is out of the question?" This was really just an idle comment, not a real question. Even if she didn't particularly understand where she was, she could tell it wasn't very accessible. That meant that the odds of a cleaning service being willing to make the trip was pretty low. No matter, the piles weren't impossible to walk around. A moment later, it became easier yet, as GeininX struck an exposed wire to get the room's lighting to kick on. Now that she could see, making her way more than a few feet into the room became possible.

Noze could hear Kawari behind her, the other girl staying silent as she followed. Looking back, she saw Kawari staring right back at her. Shrugging, she turned her attention to the front again, only to pause in mid-step as another emotionless stare fixed itself on her. She realized it was just a doll soon enough, but the sheer similarity in it's features and Kawari's was disturbing. Looking around, she saw even more dolls and stuffed animals. This place was only getting weirder and more unusual with every passing moment. She wouldn't speak of it, but she was actually a little nervous. If the place was already this unusual, after just a few moments and only having entered one building, what then if they were to try to go exploring? She didn't want to know the answer to that.

Moments later, GeininX's voice breaks the silence as he begins a real explanation of just where they are, as they enter a small clearing in the midst of the piles of perilously placed parts. Taking a seat, Noze isn't too surprised to see Kawari remain standing. Turning back, she thinks she must have misheard what he had said. "Wait, we're in another world? This 'The World', it's another dimension or something? And travel between this place and our world is possible? Why hasn't such a place become common knowledge? Not necessarily this 'Net Slum' specifically, but the rest of it, at least?" It seemed that Noze had finally glimpsed the truth, even if she was having trouble accepting it. She'd adjust soon enough, whether or not Geininx answered her questions. He'd already said that he didn't really care for explaining things, so hopefully she could piece the rest of it together from what she had already been told.

Kawari, on the other hand, seemed to take it all in without any reaction. She stood upright, eyes locked on GeininX. Only after Noze had had a chance to speak her piece did Kawari add her own question to the list. Her voice seemed just as corrupted as before, if not more so. "Query. Subject GeininX stated their presence is neces5ary t0 leave this location. Does this statement imply b4rtering will be needed to procure subject's wi//ingness to do such?" It might take a moment to figure out just what she was asking, but in the end it was a reasonable question. All she wanted to know was, would GeininX ask anything of them when it came time to help them leave, in return for his assistance.
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Joker laughed his hideous laugh as he felt the chord of the batclaw start pulling him towards The Batman. He was being reeled in and looked upwards while the smoke was starting to clear before seeing a familiar shadow. Not much time he could react to getting away but instead threw an open palm towards Batman. Hopefully batman would let the palm hit him so that the silly shocker on Joker's hand would send hundreds of volts into Batman's body. A little present for an old friend.

Harley felt the bat hit her on the side of her head as she tried to jump towards the side, she hit the ground after the jump and slid for a bit before reaching under a nearby table and pulled out a rocket launcher, aiming it towards the general direction of Bat Girl because the world was starting to spin on her before pulling the trigger, firing at the ground where Bat Girl hopefully stood.

JJ saw the daggers coming at him and started to do back flips to avoid getting hit but felt one of the dull blades smacked him in the back hard. JJ lost his footing during a mid back flip and flopped to the ground, grimacing in pain but still laughing it off in the creepy laugh he was taught. He laid there, thinking on what else he could do while laughing softly under his breath.

Bane felt the blade go through his abdomen but he shifted to the side as best as he could to avoid getting stabbed through the foot. But this was something he was waiting for. Bane immediately grabbed at Azreal's wrist that held the blade that stabbed him while his other hand went for the man's throat. If he were to grab Azreal, Bane was going to try to rip him apart.

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                Entering The Hidden Federation, he sighed, he didn’t exactly hate Hidden Fedaration… He just hated Hidden Volcano. “Oh I am so sure Suzaku will be mad at me for wanting to kill my own Clan and everyone in that Village,” He said maniacally ((Oh and Here are two links to show you how my character laughs and a little insight on his fighting Laugh Fight…. Ok if your curious about my characters clothes here Clothes plus the trench coat on the fight video That but without the thing on the legs… I know I’m ripping off Iori but hey! I think he’s an awesome character (After I found out he was insane) Ok the battle was a little too much fine but it’s just an insight… Overkill… The Speed… Claw like attacks… Violence that’s how Rikiya fights)). He showed no care for the great phoenix that his land worshipped, if the deity made him stronger if it was killed sure maybe Rikiya might think of targeting the god for once but no, although he heard stories that some were able to control it as if it was a pet but that’s just myths. He said and he looked at the large volcano, “I could use that very thing to destroy my own village but if the stories weren’t true Suzaku hides there… Maybe put a hole in the volcano and kill anyone who isn’t immune to lava.” He said and smirked. He walked the path to his damned Village.

                He walked but stopped, he wanted to train his Magma walking… Well that was something that could help him get out of going inside the clans, he was independent he didn’t need anyone’s help to train and he did read books about the techniques his clan used all he had to do was to test and fail and keep on doing that until he mastered the technique, he walked around the Volcano, “Come on a hint to where a lava lake is…” He muttered and it actually did exist some lava escaped from the volcano and flowed through cracks that led to used to be water lakes now it was where the devil took a bath… Murderously Hot that normal people could get hurt, so pretty much it’s a good idea to learn some immunity to the fire, and that was what he planned after thinking about it.

                He followed a crack and ended up near an actual Lava Lake that bubbled and popped, causing some small lava spark thingy to jump at Rikiya, “I better take off my clothes I can’t have them getting burned…” He said and removed his shirt folded it and placed it far away from the lake and did the same with his weapons, his body sure young and ect but it was athletic enough to impress some men and many women… The men were probably gay but who the hell knew? “I’m losing it… I will walk the damn lake… Naked with only my underwear… I am really, really hoping I do not fall down to my death,” He said to himself and scowled. He was getting ready so for a start slowly placed a toe in the lava; he fell on his back and screamed, “My toe!!!” He shouted and thank god only a small part was burned, he wanted to kiss it like what he did to his finger on his Dummy Training but hell that was a finger and this was a toe… Completely different things and besides he didn’t want to taste his own flesh! He sat up, “Lave if you don’t ******** let me walk on you and finish my damn immunity training plus my walking on lava crap without burning to my death I will make sure that I won’t… Uh…. Um- Er…. Eh Drain you?” Rikiya shouted at the Lava Lake and It actually made him look crazier than he already was, by some unknown but teasing reason everything turned quiet. “Jesus or God! Put the god damn background music back on!” He shouted up in the sky and it was true that Rikiya Suzaku has finally lost it… “I hope no children would see me in my underwear walking in a lava lake… They might think I’m a crazy nudist rapist…” He said and let chakra transfer in his feet, it was a long shot; he never learned water walking 101 but what’s the difference between a water and tree? He then ran forward his feet splashing but doing less damage on his feet though, he ran around the large lava Lake until he felt the chakra in his feet diminish. “Oh s**t.” He muttered but instead of going in a panic fit, he himself calm down and instead of running he walked on lava, he walked and by god he tried not to panic and kept his cool. Maybe it was his insanity that just went worse or maybe it was a disturbed kid behind a typewriter… Who the hell knew? He walked and walked and walked, it was continued walking, it was truly boring but hey to become stronger and eliminate a few number of people in a whole clan and village anyone would do everything well except for eating some other guy’s flesh or have some mechanical parts. He walked and walked but that was when he felt that he wasn’t thinking that much. He looked at his feet and saw that half his feet was in the Lava and he felt the very heat the lava let out yet it wasn’t painful nor was it hot… It felt like a normal warm water and the bubbles made the like it was a oversized Bathtub/Pool (If that exist in this world), he let himself drop and he smiled, no burn and no pain, simply like taking a swim on a normal water but instead of water it was lava. He looked up and his hair actually had some lava which dripped from his head to the water, He has become immune. So he swam back to the ground and started to slowly take one step forward into the lava, it was like he levitated but no his feet was in the lava just not all of it and instead of his feet burning like what happened to his poor toe a warm sensation was what he felt… Maybe it was just because he was a Suzaku, a clan that worshipped the Great Phoenix Suzaku and stayed near the lava way too much. "No there’s more to i-" He wasn’t able to finish his sentence when he fell to the lava and swam up again. “I was right, clear your mind and make sure not to talk or even think instead of just walking on the water… That’s it… That’s the secret of Magma Walking and so now I know but I still need more results...” He said simply, when he came back up it was probably over 10 minutes since he’s been walking around the whole Lava Lake and it actually tire him out. Although he got the results he wanted, staying focus was an important he had to do anyway but that will be gone in an hour, or so… “Yes I need more training,” He muttered and climbed out of the lake. “And now to put on some clothes fi- Wait… I can’t do that… My skin might be impervious to burning but not my dear clothes… This is a bad technique!” He shouted and so he started to walk again trying to get himself to just see this lava as a normal ground.

                "Just a little more…" He muttered calmly, Rikiya was back to his calm and yet intimidating face. That was just how this young man was, his hatred for his village was unmistakable, Nor was his sadness for the lack of kindness he had received from his village but sadly that hint of sadness slowly got eaten away by darkness and replaced by hatred. [b[“Hatred is what powers me… Hatred is the very nature of Magma…” He muttered as he stepped on the Lava, the hour’s maybe? Of training has finally paid off, and that thought of what Lava was actually helped, “That’s my understanding of fire… Maybe it’s really the user who must teach himself… Oh well.” He said and he smirked, He walked around thinking of many possible moves he could steal or learn that could help him destroy his village sadly only fire popped up. He walked out of the lava and looked at his underwear and noticed something just now, “Wait… I been swimming on this thing and my underwear never got burned… Meaning I can put on some clothes.” He said and he smiled, grabbing his pants and placed it on. “But who the hell swims with their shirt? So let’s just leave the top off.” He muttered to himself and he walked back a little bit. He had an idea and so, he ran to the Lava and jumped up as high as possible and went in a fetus position dropping down hard on the lava. Some Splashed on the earth burning it a little, He saw his pants was still intact, “So the immunity affects clothes? Wow” He said and yet didn’t bother to swim while looking in the lava, earlier he did that and his eyes were literally burning so it means eyeballs are not safe. He had more to learn and so he smiled. This lava was a perfect candidate to summon up Lava easier. He continued to swim to get his immunity to the lava stronger, and the more he felt immune the warmer the lava came, no it wasn’t getting hotter it was his skin absorbing it… Atleast that’s what he thought it did. Oh he knew only his clan could master such technique yes that was the reason for the feeling he felt, He continued to swim and would go deep under as far as he could go. What he saw were nothingness just simply earth, the ground was warm and he felt some hot air coming out of it. He also checked what came out of the crack and he found out it was also Lava, the water might have made the lava slightly colder before but that cold water was beaten by Lava’s power to remove what was unneeded.

                He got out of the Lava and picked up his shirt and coat and placed them on. His Coat had a Large M and the words were Magma. He smirked and took a deep breath, time for a little sparing match, “Magma Clones!” He shouted and two Magma Clones got out of the Lava Lake. Both looked like they were magma instead of humans but their head did have a hair that looked like Rikiya’s but hell he was the only one around this lake, so pretty much they were him well kind of him since they didn’t look like his clones…. He rolled his eyes and thought of pulling out his Katana but his Katana was just a normal blade and so he couldn’t use it against these clones, and so he sighed, “I guess I fight with my hands… I really have to start learning Taijutsu moves… As I hate it but I need it.” He sighed and when the Clone #1 Attacked followed by Clone #2. A Smirk Appeared on Rikiya’s face, yup they were him, attack first and take the first blood, he laughed his insane laugh and strikes for the Magma #2’s stomach, the heat was hotter than the Lava Lake so it somewhat hurt also, the growing heat made it worse aswell! “This Technique is quite useful after all.” Clone #2 Took he chance and slammed both fist in a hammer like way on Rikiya’s back, Rikiya nearly screamed in pain at the force and fell to the ground. These Clones were serious and it was time to get serious also, he grabbed the Clone’s ankle and pulled it as the clone fell, Rikiya jumped up and crashed his knuckles on Clone #1’s face, he laughed and didn’t notice Clone #2 Standing up and regaining his footing, he kicked Rikiya on the gut. He groaned in pain and yet he stood up and ran at them like a wild sabertooth and a wolf combined, tackling both Magma to the ground and rolled with them until they made it to the Lake, The Magma disappeared and Rikiya smirked climbed out of the Lava Lake and felt 4 hands pulled him down the lake again by his ankle. “s**t their Lava not real normal clones!” He shouted and he felt the Clone’s actually attempt to drown him. By god these clones had a mind of its own, and with a growl, Rikiya tried to open his pouch but he forgot he took off his Weapon. He felt himself losing the ability to breathe as the Clone continued to choke him, he started to punch and kick the damned Clones but it didn’t work. After a few second, Rikiya slammed his fingers on Clone #1’s Neck that he was decapitated, he had a minute of wind left and so he flipped the ‘Living’ Clone on its back and Rikiya kicked it on the stomach to swim up higher, when he was able to get out of the water, he took a lot of deep breath and let out a few curses that consisted of ********, Damn and Dumbass Clones.

                "I never knew a Clone can mimic a person’s personality… That’s the very first time this happened to me and it’s an exhilarating feeling." He muttered and he saw the Last Clone come out of the water and try to pull Rikiya down deep in the Lava and he kicked the clones head causing it to finally become defeated… “I got to make sure never to ever let them go near Lava again… Or maybe it’s because I wanted a challenge.” He muttered and stood up thinking of the next technique to learn, as he knew he mastered Magma Clone. No the next time he sparred with them to train his strength… Never ever try to have them be a little stronger, it added to the pain in the butt thing and it made things harder and even though interesting… It was harder. "No more tough or too much Lava Clones…" He said making sure that he wasn’t just becoming a very weak human being.

                "Magma Clone!" He shouted and a clone came out of the lake and Rikiya ran towards it. Tackling it and started to slash his fingers on the Clone’s face. "Die!" Rikiya Shouted and the Clone slashed Rikiya by the ear leaving a little cut there, “Crazy Clone!” He shouted and the Clone let out a short but loud insane laughter, Rikiya sighed and slammed his fist on the clone’s face whose body disappeared into the earth.

                Rikiya sat on the side of a tree resting his tired bones and closed his eyes; no he didn’t plan on sleeping… Sleeping was something he feared sometimes. Dreaming of your parents was bad enough but having spiders in there was worse, who wanted to have two worse nightmares in your life appear in a freaking dream?!? Rikiya just smirked and opened his eyes and looked at the Lava Lake. The Lake Looked so beautiful from the view of the tree and while Rikiya watched he placed the strap of the pouches on his left and right hip, the katana resting on his shoulder, “One day our bond will be gone my dear blade.” He muttered and he sighed. He loved this Katana but it will surely lose its usefulness to Rikiya one day, that day slowly came closer every minute.


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The young girl had just came from a fight. Something she didn't want to look back upon. She had won that battle, she lost the fight against herself. The fight had been against this huge monster, also known as Chaos, something that had been warping life. The entire fight had dragged on, but finally, Xio had lost it and she had let loose. Her insanity had gotten the better of it. It seemed the more stronger she got, the more tight the hold the insanity had on her. It was something she loathed, something she wish had never happened. The girl was silently making her way up the volcano, intending to find the small village inside the volcano and learn how to manipulate one of the most hottest substance on earth. Her green eyes glared down at her feet, her necklace swayed with the movement. Her raven black curls bounce in front of her face, and rocked from side to side. Xio felt resentment towards the odd looking Chaos creature. It had said she was chaos, and it was with her all the time. She was insane, not psycho. The creature was dead wrong, she was nothing like that repulsive green ugly eye sore. Her black dress flowed in the wind being blown up the volcano, as the bottoms of her black caparis pants. A white weapon was attached to her black belt, it was shining in the darkness, the moonlight reflected off it in a wonderful glow. She had gained it after she had killed the boy who had sworn to kill her. She had given him a reason to come back and try again. She wasn't sure how he felt towards their odd relationship, nor did she understand it, but all she knew was that he was to come back and find her, just so he can kill her. She wasn't easy prey, she would fight back against anyone who threaten her life. It was her instincts that fought for her. She wasn't someone anyone would want to meet in a dark alley. The girl always let off this odd aura of insanity, but that was to be expected. She didn't choose to be this way, it was something that decided to latch onto her and keep her from being a normal girl. The girl's hands swayed at her sides, as she had no problem climbing the mountain. Xio looked up, and saw a small village on the out skirts of the Volcano, and wondered what it was. Ether way, she needed to go through it to get to her destination. The girl was quiet and didn't say a thing as she got to the first house. Upon hearing a few voices, she decided it wasn't too much chatter, and therefore must be late. She wasn't afraid to be out here at this time of night, nor did it matter really. She was the reason people told their children to be in doors after sunset, she was just gave off the aura of death. She may look like a harmless beautiful young girl, but she was far from it. Engage her in a fight, and you would leave the fight with more than just a nasty scratch on your cheek. Unfortunately, Chaos had to learn that the hard way. He had gone and upset the girl. Not only that, but he had trespassed on her planet, and expected them to play nice. That just wasn't in her nature. The girl quickly looked around the small village, as saw a few people standing around and talking, none of them so much as bat an eyelash at her. Was she that invisible to these people? Did they really see no hard in the way the shadows seem to dance at her feet? Did they not find it odd how the young girl had the aura of death around her? Did it not occur to them that she was here to kill them and their families? Or did they just not care about what happened to them? Giving out a sigh, Xio continued on her way. It was clear these people were a lost cause. The girl stood at the edge of the village, as well as the edge of the Volcano. The glow of the lava sent heat to embrace Xio's face, and she didn't so much as flinch. Her body was naturally cold, being from a village always cloaked in darkness could have that affect on people, and the heat felt a bit nice on her cold skin. She some times thought about getting a sweater to wear on cold nights, but she had decided against it. Looking down upon the village, she saw some people were still awake and moving throughout the village. The girl raised an eyebrow, and blinked. She heard someone begin to whisper something about a young girl going to get killed. She only glanced over her shoulder, and saw three women standing in a circle, more like a triangle, and saw their attention was on her. It would seem as if they were worried about what happened to her, but Xio knew better. People only worried about other people if they had something they wanted. So she wondered what these people wanted from her. It wasn't like she was about to ask. Rather, she stood at the edge of the volcano and looked down at the lava flowing around the rock. It was a long way way, but Xio was positive she could make it. Upon walking closer, she let herself fall forward, and fall down into the volcano. She heard the women behind her gasp, before rushing to the side to see if she was Okay. She smirked, maybe if they were skilled enough, they would have the guts to come down here with her. But it would seem not everyone was insane like her. The young Zoto looked forward, and saw she was nearing the ground. The young girl raised an eyebrow, before pushing off the wall by her feet, and tucked her head in. Her back met the ground first, but by rolling, she spread the area of impact throughout her body, and therefore, it didn't hurt. The girl stood up from the ground and began to dust off her clothing. She sighed, and began to look around. The people she had seen not too log ago was walking around, and didn't so much as glance as her. This place was sort of lazy, or didn't care it their village was wiped out. She found it funny that she, of all people, would be able to walk in, learn their jutsus easily, and walk right back out. It was kind of pitiful, really. The girl looked around, and finally found out where she was. The thing was, she didn't want to train and learn their jutsus just yet. She wanted to get use to her knew weapon. It's keychain is a golden star with a small silver star in the center. The girl took it off her belt and looked at it. It was certainly a weapon she never seen before. It sort of looked like a... key of some sort. The girl tipped her head to the side, wondering if that was what it was. She could see the resemblance. She held it firmly in her hand, and then began to walk around the village. The few people who were walking around not too long ago were heading back inside their houses. It was strange, it was almost like they expected something to come and kill them, almost like Xio was a sacrifice. The girl shifted her glowing green eyes across the village, and saw it's life was beginning to die down. It was almost like the village was going to sleep. But the constant light from the magma was keeping them all up. The girl was puzzled, but didn't ask any further. Instead, she began to look for a peaceful place to train. Upon find no other place, she went to the side of the village, and looked into the large pit of lava the village sat on top of. It wasn't like a small river, or stream, it was just a large pit of lava. Maybe Xio should try walking on it? As soon as that thought crossed her mind, she shook her head. How could she think something so stupid and reckless? The girl turned and began to walk away from it, her weapon still clenched in her hand. She stopped walking after she took three steps, and looked over her shoulder at the glowing hot substance. If she was able to pull this off, she could have the advantage in a fight. The girl smirked, before looking at her hands. She walked back to the edge, and sat on the side. The rocks were hot, but not hot enough to burn her. Xio's green eyes narrowed at her, and she wondered if she should take off her shoes. If she fell in, she was as good as dead, so it wouldn't matter much. The girl began to center her chakra to a single point in her body, the center of her stomach. She closed her eyes, and quickly made her handsigns. The hand signs were almost like the tree climbing jutsus she had learned from the Academy, but her hand signs had been altered to fit what she was doing. The girl began to focus her chakra into a spot on each of her feet, and then began to feel the rock under her. She was ready for anything. The girl sighed, and relaxed her body, and breathed out all her thoughts so she was completely focused. She didn't want to die, but this was the price to pay when it comes to risky moves like this. The girl closed her eyes tighter, and reached her foot out. She pictured the lava much like water, and hoped for the best. Xio wasn't about to let some lava show her up, but if this was where she died, then she died here. End of story. But after a few moments, she realized she was still there, still thinking of dying. She relaxed her body more, and opened her eyes to see her foot was resting on top of the lava. Her eyes widened in surprise, and she reached out her other foot. The girl had always been a quick study, learning jutsus rather quickly, but mastering them was entirely different. She finally stood up, on the shifting surface of the lava. She smiled to herself, she was able to do this. She could use lava. The girl sighed, and looked down. She took a few careful steps, being rather cautious about being on the surface of the lava. The girl began to familiarize herself with the feel of being on top of the lava, and soon was able to move almost freely around on it. After around an hour and a half, she was satisfied with the results of her training, and decided to find a less dangerous place to train with her new weapon. The girl walked back to the side of the village, before something caught her eye. A crack in the wall near the edge of the village. The girl tipped her head to the side, it would seem that lead to a small river of lava. Xio didn't bother looking around, she simply looked at the river of lava. Xio was a bit curious as to why it was there, but she didn't question any further. She simply wanted to get on with her training. Her dress flowed out behind her, along with her hair. She moved silently across the ground, unaware of her small audience at the moment. She grabbed onto her new weapon, and walked to the side of the lava river. At first it would look like she was going to walk across the surface of the lava, but instead, she placed the top of the weapon to the ground, and used it to push off from the ground and flipped over to the other side. She was fairly good at taijutsu, it was one of her strong points. She sighed, and looked around. She wondered what she should do, she should work on perfecting her other jutsus, but she wanted to get in tune with this weapon first. The girl flung the weapon high in the air, and caught it, before spinning it around her finger. She was already familiar with one handed weapons, but this one was odd. It didn't seem to have anything special about it, so she was a bit curious as to what it could do. As her levels of curiosity rose, so did the deadly shadows. The shadows at her feet began to sway and become more and more violent, as they began to crawl up her body. It almost looked like hands were wrapping themselves around her legs and feet. She could feel their growing need to kill, hurt even, but she was going to keep them at bay for as long as it took. Her back was facing the trees, and it would seem like she was distracted. From someone's point of view, she would seem like some weak, frail girl, but she was everything but that. People were often deceived by her appearance, as she had a skinny built. And when they attacked her, they were in for a surprise. She wasn't easy prey...


How wrong they were"


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                Darkness covered his eyes that would be because, he felt like sleeping since no way in hell was he going to sleep in his uncles house… Or in his village, hell his village was a messed up place in some ways anyway, he started to see his parents again, they kind and happy smile. Shaking his head, he sighed, “Why must I be haunted by their damned faces?!?” He asked himself and closed his eyes again to see if he can take a nap or not. For a good few moments he saw nothing in his dreams. Later he was down the memory lane again, he was a spectator of his complete stupidity of spacing out while you’re doing a few handsigns, he watched as he saw his young self kill his parents like they were shot to death. Rikiya ran to his parent’s body but instead that view vanished and he appeared as he was tormented and called names by the kids in his clan, “I really got to kill those guys when I become stronger.” He said/thought as he watched his younger self have fruits thrown at him and was called a monster. “This sounds familiar but well whatever.” He said and he growled, he actually pulled out a Kunai and tried to stab the kid who called him a monster but the blade instead of killing him just went through his body. And the image vanished like earlier and now it was Rikiya in his uncle’s funeral, not a tear fell from his face or a sad look, he was calm as stone like the real Rikiya, “Well why I should cry for someone who I didn’t exactly love… Besides he just thought me things, he didn’t love me; he just pitied a kid who had no parents.” Both Rikiya though and the real one laughed and waited for this image to disappear, he woke and rolled his eyes, “Oh wow I feel so sad for the bad things I did, I wanna change now, I want to become a good helpful person!” He shouted and he laughed, how It was pitiful for them to think that Rikiya will ever change and not even a memory will help them, whoever them is that is. “There’s no changing me.”

                He continued to lay on the tree and watched as a girl showed up. "What the-" He thought and raised an eyebrow. The girl had some sort of item but hell he was too far to even know what the hell she had in her hand. He watched, the girl didn’t look like she was from around Hidden Volcano… Maybe from another Village? Hidden Flame maybe? Was she a ninja? No, no she looked far too weak. “And what must a girl be doing near a Lava Lake?” He asked, if a fight did come all he had was his academy moves and two other. He picked up his Katana and went near her.


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...I'm the monsters they become xxxxxx
...I'm the nightmare in your skull xxxxxxxxx



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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 4:22 am


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▂▂ ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ Xio Zoto █ ▇ ▆ ▅ ▄ ▃ ▂▂


"They said shadow couldn't kill you...



Xio want having a rather frustrating time with the weapon she held. It looked like a key, and it had a rather sharp blade. A key and a sharp blade? A keyblade? The girl shrugged her shoulders, before going back to examining it. It seemed like something from a whole other world. The girl shook her head, before looking over the surface of the lava. What was she going to learn here, what was she going to do? She had no idea, nor did she think she could learn something useful. She only came here to learn how to use lava to her advantage, and wondered what jutsu she could use. It would seem that Xio was a weak girl at first, but there was an aura of insanity that hung in the air around the girl. She was far from being weak, she was far from being useless and defenseless. Xio walked to the edge of the lava river, and looked into it. The heat warmed her face, and began to illuminate her form. But soon, she felt a presence in the air, which made her turn around. A boy was making his way to her. Upon instincts, she jumped backwards and over the lava river, just o put some space between them. She held her weapon close to her body, ready to defend if needed to.

“What do we have here?“ She whispered to herself. She looked him over, wondering if he could be strong, or even stronger than her, and began to formulate a plan. If he attacked, she would defend and attack. But then again, they were alone here, so no one would notice if there was one less villager. She stayed quiet, and watched his every move, trying not to miss a thing.


How wrong they were"
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