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 Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:29 pm
Oh oh OH! xd Okay I get it now. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:33 pm
*revises*
Chef is having affair with someone's wife and jealous Hubby comes down to the restaurant to confront Chef. Chef kills Hubby in self defense with meat tenderizer (that hammer shaped thing you pound steaks and pork chops with) and then panics and stuffs dead!Hubby in the walk-in refrigerator. XD Chef rushes out to sink to wash little bit of blood off of the meat tenderizer and while he's busy, Assistant Chef goes to the 'fridge to get the cheesecakes out so they have time to thaw out a little bit but trips over dead!Hubby instead. Assistant Chef runs screaming out of the kitchen (too quickly and suddenly for Chef to stop him) and through the dining hall where he's stopped by some detectives. He's screaming "Murder!" so of course everyone goes to the kitchen out of morbid (and professional) curiosity. Chef by now has realized that he's in major trouble so he shoots out the side door and runs off. The detectives deduce from the unique impact trauma that the weapon was a meat tenderizer and then they find the murder weapon in the sink. Unfortunately Chef managed to wash off all his prints, but hey...there's no one else in the kitchen. Hunt Chef down, question him, find out from waitress that "oh yeah, Chef had a girlfriend," track down girlfriend, turns out she's dead!Hubby's wife...voila, motive. Break Chef down in the interrogation room. Case closed.
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:36 pm
Well, that works XD *shall do some improvising too*
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:48 pm
Emi ~Princess_Lila~ Ehhh...
Detective Peter, had always been jealous of the great work of Detective Neil; but no one knew about it, beacause Peter was a good actor. During the party, the detectives had the bad luck, of running out of ice, and Peter offered to get some more, knowing that Neil, would offer to take his place, and go for it. Kindly, Peter let Neil go for the ice, knowing that he'd find something else...
Detective Neil went to the kitchen and asked the chef where the ice was (what he didn't know, was that Peter had already planned his murder, and the chef, would aid him). With a slight smirk on his face the chef pointed toward the open door of the walk in freezer, where the ice bags laid (it almost seem, as if it was welcoming him into the it). He walked inside, took some ice, and when he turned around he saw the door closed. He started to panic. He was soon going to run out of oxygen, and it was very cold inside there...(random babbling description, of a slow and torturing death here)...and eventually he died That works well too @-@ I can figure out how he was found, but the thing you are missing is: 1. Why would the chef aid him? 2. What about the assistant chef? Wouldn't they notice something?3 3. Okay, it's obivous how he died, but how would the other detectives figure out who killed him and why? A week ago before the party's staff meeting, the original chef for the meeting had been murdered by the "chef" that was taking care of this party. In consequence, the assistant chefs were introduced to this one, and believe he was the "real chef". He's trus identity was, a hired assasin, who worked for Peter.
The assistant chefs, would all be serving the first course for the meal, while the murder took place. And well, they still had a long time to go until the dessert(ice cream) was served.
Hmm...I guess they would find out of the body before the party was over, and start questioning the chefs.. Eventually they'd find out that the only one there at the time of the murder was the assasin, and they would ask him questions. He'd probably just blame Peter for everything, and then you can add whatever you want 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:09 pm
And I think I may have an idea ^___^
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:12 pm
ninja **has been lurking silently for a while** **glomps everyone and runs off to play Animal Crossing** xd
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:14 pm
Emi And I think I may have an idea ^___^
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:16 pm
Well, it's a mix using yours and Meriko's ideas along with alittle of my own stuff :3
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:24 pm
Sounds good smile
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Meriko!, I have a small question for you...It's about the thankyou edits. Could I send you a base, but ask you to put a wig from your shop on it? sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:30 pm
~Princess_Lila~ Sounds good smile
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Meriko!, I have a small question for you...It's about the thankyou edits. Could I send you a base, but ask you to put a wig from your shop on it? sweatdrop You can do that. Other people have before.
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:32 pm
ohhh, ok thanks (I was just wondering though...)
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:40 pm
I just got out of the pool! whee
But I have something stuck in my eye. O.<
-tries to blink it out-
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:47 pm
.Aoi. I just got out of the pool! whee
But I have something stuck in my eye. O.<
-tries to blink it out- Oy....that can be SO annoying!
Good luck getting it out!
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:53 pm
Thanks. It feels like there''s a thorn from a rose in my eye. >.<
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 2:55 pm
Emi: If you really wanna mystery-ize it, add in a few twists, like (these are based off Meriko's idea):
1. It's A Setup. Yes, the clues point to the Chef, but maybe it was actually the assistant who did it, framing the chef. He knew Hubby and hated him for some other reason, so arranged for him to find out about the affair between Chef and Missus. Hubby and Chef yell for a few minutes, but "take it outside" because everyone stops to watch. Assistant sneaks out, meat tenderizer in hand. Hubby scares Chef sufficiently that he agrees to keep his mitts off Missus, Chef returns inside, Hubby starts to leave. Assistant kills him in the alley, drags him into the trash area, then pretends to have discovered him while taking out the trash. Detectives realize after some sleuthing that chefs don't usually handle the trash, looking into it and discovering Assistant's secret motive. He breaks down in interrogation, case closed.
2. It's Not What It Looks Like. Swap out meat-tenderizer for the frying pan. Hubby's body has an impact mark on the head, frying pan has Chef's fingerprints on it, traces of blood are in the sink, and yet... some young brilliant detective thinks to do an autopsy just in case, and finds out that Hubby actually died of a drug overdose, and would have survived the head wound. Witnesses saw Chef hit Hubby over the head -- heck, even Chef thinks he did it, but at the time they all thought Hubby was just knocked out cold (and he was). They stuck him out in the garbage room to wait until he revived, but later on discovered he was dead. What really happened, though -- the Assistant went out to check on him, hoping Chef had done his dirty-work for him, and he was reviving. So he gave him a lethal injection of some drug to finish him off. Detectives find the drug in Hubby's system, and search nearby pharmacy records to find that Assistant had purchased that drug recently. They discover his motive, confront him, he confesses, case closed.
Note to self: you watch too much Law & Order.
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