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 Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:25 pm
Kodama of the Red Mist onixdragon Rathmostofar66 ---I'm still looking over the Forums trying to find where I can put the application for the Village Hidden in the Mist. There's so much stuff around here I kinda got lost...anyway, here is my RP piece...--- "Rain...it has been too long..." Zabudo quietly spoke to himself as he walked through his village in the rain...
A crack of lightning shot through the sky, illuminating the empty streets around him that were being poured on by the relentless storm. He loved to take walks like this in the rain. It calmed his thoughts and calmed his body, usually sore from his training. His clothes were soaked down to his bones and his long, silvery hair had turned gray from the on-pouring clouds...
His feet sloshed through the ankle deep water as he came to the edge of the district, coming to the large lake bed that surrounded the village. He smiled lightly as he slowly removed his shirt and jeans, letting them rest on the bank as his crimson eyes gazed over the pool, wearing nothing more then his boxers now as he slipped off his shoes...
He turned his head to see a young girl, about his age with a yellow, rain suit on and an umbrella above her head. Her body was slightly muddy from the bank as she slowly turned her head to him, looking at him through her crystalline eyes that were marked by dark bags under them...
He could sense a deep sorrow from her. A gaping may of pain in her expression that told him that she was longing for someone at her side...longing for a friend...
Realizing this, he slowly made his way to her and gently sat on the muddy bank beside her. Her lips lightly parted as she breathed, speaking in a quiet voice, "You'll....catch a cold...if you continue like this..."
Zabudo blinked a few times as he was caught off guard by her statement. She was in no better condition then he was...she was the one who seemed sick. Without realizing it, he placed his hand on her knee as she looked up at him, her eyes needing someone to care...
"You will be the one ill if you stay...do not worry about me..."
She lightly smiled as she held his hand, her cold hands feeling deathly and bony. Her eyes then slowly turned away as she looked out to the lake, her hand lightly gripping his hand tighter as she chanted, "Then before I become more ill...let me swim out there again...take me with you..."
He grinned more as she turned her face towards him, still looking at him through a pool of sorrow and instantly he knew that he needed to oblige. He slowly helped her up as she dropped her umbrella, letting it roll to the edge of the bank as she then unbuttoned her rain jacket and revealed her skimpy swim suit of plain white and a blue flower pattern.
In the center of her cleavage lay a necklace, a simple metal chain was put through a beautiful, multi-colored conch shell about the size of his thumb, its spirally surface as smooth as her skin and glowed dully with multi-colored light.
She held his hand tighter as they then ran down the bank and broke into the water, its ice cold claws digging into them, snapping them awake as they began to swim through it. The surface gleamed like hundreds of jewels as they swam deeper, taking in all that was around them as they examined the lake floor and watched the many creatures swim by and around them...
For a slow hour, they swam and played together, occasionally going back to the surface for air as they enjoyed this leisurely time. The longer time that passed, the more happier the woman became until she was ecstatic, more alive then she ever seemed as they swam gracefully through the waters before they soon became tired and swam back to the bank...
But something was wrong...her youthful energy was slowly fading as he had to carry her a few steps on the bank, her body feeling limp and frail against his. His eyes were wide with worry as she looked up at him, a small smile across her face as her eyes were half open...
She slowly fumbled her hands on her neck and took off her beautiful conch necklace and placed it around his neck as he held her close. Surprisingly then, she lightly kissed him, soft and wet it was and brief as she then looked up into his eyes...
"Thank you..." She barely whispered, her hand holding his cheek weakly, "Do not....forget...the love of the....water....we.....s-shared...."
Her head then slumped back as her eyes closed, her body like slush against him, weak and unmoving. His heart curled up in his throat as he began to sob, slowly standing as he carried her in his arms. He could not speak, he could not howl in pain. He barely knew her yet he felt as if he has lost a dear lover to him...he did not even know her name...
As he slowly carried her away, his cheeks flared with red as his eyes clamped shut with the tears that flowed down his cheeks...but no one would ever know that he cried...for the rain erased it all...
The Sorrowful Tears of the Water Maiden...cried upon him now...and forever...pass. not bad Not bad??? Are you kidding me!? burning_eyes Unless I took a chapter out of the book I am trying to write there's no way I could use a sample that big... length isnt always good. its a good post but the length isnt necessary. i only need a few lines to see how good you are. im not here to grade essays.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:27 pm
chiller0550 I'm from Belguim so i can't speak English very well but i will try. My RP: 'Homaru Mikachi': Said a man that was standing in front of a group. A young strong boy came out of the group with a dog next to his side. The boy had long hair and green eyes and the dog had silver fur. The big man took a headband that was lying on a bench and gave it to the boy. 'congratulations Homaru.': Said the man while the rest of the croud was clapping in there hands. 'Thank you sensei.': Said the young boy he turned around and walked back in the croud togheter with his dog. pass. trust me if your here for long enough you will master the language lol.
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 8:43 pm
Moriko and her ninja pup, Yumi, where one a C ranked mission to retrieve information on a neighboring village. Her mission almost complete as he was heading back to her village. Jumping through the trees, an unfamiliar sent arose in the air. Moriko's instinct kicked in. She started to move faster until her follower caught up to her. Moriko landed on the ground as did the stranger. "What do you want?" She demanded. "I want the infromation you just got from my village, scum like you don't deserve it," the man demanded right back. "What did you say? Tch,I'll make you eat those words!"
Moriko flashed the appropiate handsigns and yelled "Shikyaku no Jutsu!" Her claws got longer along with her fangs, her voice got huskier as well as her speed incressed. "Alright lets go!" the man said when they both dashed at eatchother. Moriko clashed with the shinobi, He attempted a punch and she blocked it, she attpemted a punch and he blocked it. After a feww seconds of struggling, she got tired of this. Moriko let go and quickly pulled her leg straight up, kicking the shinobi to force back. She jumped back, away from her apponent.
"Yumi, you ready?" she asked, Yumi barked in agreement. "Go then, Dynamic marking," Moriko said as Yumi jumped high up into the air and started to spin. Yumi's sent hit the shinobi, there was no point for him to hide now. Yumi came back and before Moriko could feed Yumi a soilder pill, the shinobi came at Moriko saying "Bushin No Jutsu!" A clone appeared and they both charged at Her. Punches and kicks were thrown at her and not one hit her until the shinobi made the clone dissappear and threw a smoke bomb which messed up Moriko's senses up. She couldn't smell Yumi's sent anymore. She covered her nose, she felt shuriken pearse her skin. Moriko could feel her chakara getting low and she figured that the mission isn't worth this. She jumped up into the trees and out of the smoke, Moriko took a deepbreath, clearing her senses. She sniffed around for Yumi, it was hard with the smoke but she eventually found her and held her breath and she went back into the smoke. Moriko grabbed Yumi and got away from the shinobi and finally reached her village. Moriko realesed the Shikyaku no Jutsu and ran to give the Kage the information she gathered.
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:33 pm
Keitaro breathed in and out slowly, blocking out the sounds of the forest in an attempt to concentrate solely on the target his sensei had carved into the tree for him. His pointer finger and his thumb rested lightly on the tip of a shuriken that he had become all too familiar with. He had been out here for hours, and the chunks missing in the trunk of the tree clearly showed that. His sensei had been long gone, off to go eat or some sort of excuse of why he couldn't stay. But Keitaro was still in the same spot, trying to hit the small circle. So far, he hadn't had any success. He lost a few in a tree, and others missed the target tree entirely. But he refused to give up.
Focus, kid. His sensei said with a mouthful of rice. You always rush. Take it easy for once. Just let it flow. No big equations with factoring in wind and stuff, just let it fly.
"I swear he's a wacko..." Keitaro sighed, but decided to give his teacher's advice a try before he took a break. "1...2...3." He counted, then let the shuriken fly. Sure enough, it hit it's mark perfectly. "W-wha? That's gotta be a fluke." Keitaro was completely shocked, and plucked the tiny ninja star from it's resting place in the tree to attempt it again. He followed his sensei's instructions and once again, and it ended up in the exact same place. "No way..." He whispered. "That old coot was right. I should probably apologize or something to him later." He slid the shuriken into his pocket with a sorrowful sigh and made his way back to the village, planning out his speech to say sorry.
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:24 am
k0oKi3z1016 Moriko and her ninja pup, Yumi, where one a C ranked mission to retrieve information on a neighboring village. Her mission almost complete as he was heading back to her village. Jumping through the trees, an unfamiliar sent arose in the air. Moriko's instinct kicked in. She started to move faster until her follower caught up to her. Moriko landed on the ground as did the stranger. "What do you want?" She demanded. "I want the infromation you just got from my village, scum like you don't deserve it," the man demanded right back. "What did you say? Tch,I'll make you eat those words!"
Moriko flashed the appropiate handsigns and yelled "Shikyaku no Jutsu!" Her claws got longer along with her fangs, her voice got huskier as well as her speed incressed. "Alright lets go!" the man said when they both dashed at eatchother. Moriko clashed with the shinobi, He attempted a punch and she blocked it, she attpemted a punch and he blocked it. After a feww seconds of struggling, she got tired of this. Moriko let go and quickly pulled her leg straight up, kicking the shinobi to force back. She jumped back, away from her apponent.
"Yumi, you ready?" she asked, Yumi barked in agreement. "Go then, Dynamic marking," Moriko said as Yumi jumped high up into the air and started to spin. Yumi's sent hit the shinobi, there was no point for him to hide now. Yumi came back and before Moriko could feed Yumi a soilder pill, the shinobi came at Moriko saying "Bushin No Jutsu!" A clone appeared and they both charged at Her. Punches and kicks were thrown at her and not one hit her until the shinobi made the clone dissappear and threw a smoke bomb which messed up Moriko's senses up. She couldn't smell Yumi's sent anymore. She covered her nose, she felt shuriken pearse her skin. Moriko could feel her chakara getting low and she figured that the mission isn't worth this. She jumped up into the trees and out of the smoke, Moriko took a deepbreath, clearing her senses. She sniffed around for Yumi, it was hard with the smoke but she eventually found her and held her breath and she went back into the smoke. Moriko grabbed Yumi and got away from the shinobi and finally reached her village. Moriko realesed the Shikyaku no Jutsu and ran to give the Kage the information she gathered. pass.
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:25 am
Alex-Keitaro05 Keitaro breathed in and out slowly, blocking out the sounds of the forest in an attempt to concentrate solely on the target his sensei had carved into the tree for him. His pointer finger and his thumb rested lightly on the tip of a shuriken that he had become all too familiar with. He had been out here for hours, and the chunks missing in the trunk of the tree clearly showed that. His sensei had been long gone, off to go eat or some sort of excuse of why he couldn't stay. But Keitaro was still in the same spot, trying to hit the small circle. So far, he hadn't had any success. He lost a few in a tree, and others missed the target tree entirely. But he refused to give up.
Focus, kid. His sensei said with a mouthful of rice. You always rush. Take it easy for once. Just let it flow. No big equations with factoring in wind and stuff, just let it fly.
"I swear he's a wacko..." Keitaro sighed, but decided to give his teacher's advice a try before he took a break. "1...2...3." He counted, then let the shuriken fly. Sure enough, it hit it's mark perfectly. "W-wha? That's gotta be a fluke." Keitaro was completely shocked, and plucked the tiny ninja star from it's resting place in the tree to attempt it again. He followed his sensei's instructions and once again, and it ended up in the exact same place. "No way..." He whispered. "That old coot was right. I should probably apologize or something to him later." He slid the shuriken into his pocket with a sorrowful sigh and made his way back to the village, planning out his speech to say sorry. pass. i love love hina XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:15 am
i havent made a profile yet but his is just my example sweatdrop
yea, but this is my minimum for an RP post, sorry that its not much
My RP sample:
Haru walked along the beach with his blade in his hand as he felt the gentle breeze from he ocean brush against his face, "i wonder if he'll show" he mumbled to him self as h continued walked along the shore. as he continued to walk he noted a pair of soft foot step crossing the sand behind him and in one swift movement his blade was drawn and pushed against the attackers throat. he looked up only to see that it was Elie fro his squad. the young female with brunet hair smiled as he lowered his blade, "your always ready for an attacker arnt you?" she scolded him as he sheathed his blade sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:48 pm
I haven't made a profile yet either but my character's name and personality will be the same as the following post.
Ariku slowly moved between the bushes trying to cause as little commotion as possible. He had his prey in sight, a lone red gecko. Not just any kind of red gecko, it was a rare gecko and it had caught his eye as he was walking home after his first day at the academy. The gecko also had it's eye on prey of its own, a lone beetle perched on the side of a tree which coincidentally was right beside the bush Ariku was hidden in. The gecko pounced forward and in that very instance so did Ariku. In that split second Ariku had caught the gecko in the palms of his hands. "I did it! Now I have another red gecko! I wonder if I can breed them?" he said to himself as he began heading back to the trail with his trophy from the hunt, the rare red gecko.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:05 am
Ok...so here's me entry:
The sun had barely emerged into the sky when Chihiro left her house to sit in a nearby tree. The sky was and explosion of colors like red and orange. Chihiro sat in a tree by herself. I wonder what the world is like beyond this place, she thought excitedly. She stood up and jumped down,"Well, for now, I'll be stuck with C ranked missions." She went over to a rock and started kicking it around.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:56 pm
RP Example
Captain Marku looked over the rocky hill rise that was his command post to the outlying plains. A rustling behind him caught his attention and he turned to see his aside, Oto stumbling forward. catching his brath, Oto began to wheeze out the words.
"Marku, we've lost contact with Feral squad on the Rabb Plains. Their last message said that all was clear and they were heading back. They expected to reach here in five minutes. That was two hours ago."
Marku ran his fingers through his short white hair, looking once more over the expance of grass before him. Feral squad was his finest tracking group, not something that could be cast aside. Picking up his sword from where it lay beside him, he started down the slope, calling back to Oto.
"Im going down to look for them, send me two Jonin and keep on the radio."
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:00 pm
Niceril I haven't made a profile yet either but my character's name and personality will be the same as the following post.
Ariku slowly moved between the bushes trying to cause as little commotion as possible. He had his prey in sight, a lone red gecko. Not just any kind of red gecko, it was a rare gecko and it had caught his eye as he was walking home after his first day at the academy. The gecko also had it's eye on prey of its own, a lone beetle perched on the side of a tree which coincidentally was right beside the bush Ariku was hidden in. The gecko pounced forward and in that very instance so did Ariku. In that split second Ariku had caught the gecko in the palms of his hands. "I did it! Now I have another red gecko! I wonder if I can breed them?" he said to himself as he began heading back to the trail with his trophy from the hunt, the rare red gecko.
xD
Passed little buddy, head over to the villages and mail the kage of the one you like the most to join!
We're in the middle of a new time-skip and system update, xp, so don't be intimidated by all the confusion.
PM if you get lost and need help for anything.
Glad to have you on board.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:03 pm
xo Angelic Cookehz ox Ok...so here's me entry: The sun had barely emerged into the sky when Chihiro left her house to sit in a nearby tree. The sky was and explosion of colors like red and orange. Chihiro sat in a tree by herself. I wonder what the world is like beyond this place, she thought excitedly. She stood up and jumped down,"Well, for now, I'll be stuck with C ranked missions." She went over to a rock and started kicking it around.
I'll go ahead an pass you instead of wasting both of our times! xD
Just remember though! Detail is love. <3
Passed~
Mail your favorite village's Kage to see if you can join them! <3
Need help? PM me, alright? Glad to have you.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:04 pm
Takami- the ghost RP ExampleCaptain Marku looked over the rocky hill rise that was his command post to the outlying plains. A rustling behind him caught his attention and he turned to see his aside, Oto stumbling forward. catching his brath, Oto began to wheeze out the words. "Marku, we've lost contact with Feral squad on the Rabb Plains. Their last message said that all was clear and they were heading back. They expected to reach here in five minutes. That was two hours ago."Marku ran his fingers through his short white hair, looking once more over the expance of grass before him. Feral squad was his finest tracking group, not something that could be cast aside. Picking up his sword from where it lay beside him, he started down the slope, calling back to Oto. "Im going down to look for them, send me two Jonin and keep on the radio."
Passed. (:
Glad to have you on board~
Mail your favorite village's kage to see if you can join!
Have any question, feel free to PM me. <3
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:05 pm
Ezio Al-Saladin xo Angelic Cookehz ox Ok...so here's me entry: The sun had barely emerged into the sky when Chihiro left her house to sit in a nearby tree. The sky was and explosion of colors like red and orange. Chihiro sat in a tree by herself. I wonder what the world is like beyond this place, she thought excitedly. She stood up and jumped down,"Well, for now, I'll be stuck with C ranked missions." She went over to a rock and started kicking it around.
I'll go ahead an pass you instead of wasting both of our times! xD
Just remember though! Detail is love. <3
Passed~
Mail your favorite village's Kage to see if you can join them! <3
Need help? PM me, alright? Glad to have you. *Bows head* Thank you. I will remember that! ^^
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:06 pm
Zamaku i havent made a profile yet but his is just my example sweatdrop yea, but this is my minimum for an RP post, sorry that its not much My RP sample: Haru walked along the beach with his blade in his hand as he felt the gentle breeze from he ocean brush against his face, "i wonder if he'll show" he mumbled to him self as h continued walked along the shore. as he continued to walk he noted a pair of soft foot step crossing the sand behind him and in one swift movement his blade was drawn and pushed against the attackers throat. he looked up only to see that it was Elie fro his squad. the young female with brunet hair smiled as he lowered his blade, "your always ready for an attacker arnt you?" she scolded him as he sheathed his blade sweatdrop
Passed.
From here, mail your favorite village's kage to see if you can join em!
If you get lost or need questions... PM meh! <3
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